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nightskiesfading
05-22-2008, 04:02 PM
Please keep everything PG-13 or less and remember to stay on topic.

Also: This is for Jate SCENES, they should be relatively short and simple, this is not for fanfiction. If your "scene" turns into prose or has multiple parts, chances are, it is a better fit in the fanfiction section. :)

Pontmercy
05-22-2008, 06:49 PM
This is super-short so excuse me... but I had to get it off my chest!!!!


Jack and Kate are at the airport, Kate has stopped her car, crying, and gotten out. She walks back to him and he stumbles towards her, his eyes shining. She holds out her hand, and as he tries to wrap his arms around her, she stops him, her palm on his chest.
Kate (closes her eyes for a moment): Jack, this has to stop.
Jack: Kate, you need to believe me -
Kate: No, this is going to stop. (her eyes are filling with tears, and he suddenly looks terrified, as if he's guessed what she's going to say) You can't... you can't see me and Aaron anymore.
Jack: What do you -
Kate: I mean you need to stay away from me and my son. (it's killing her and we can tell, but she turns around, tears streaming down her face, strings swelling in the soundtrack. She doesn't turn around as Jack says, voice breaking,)
Jack: Kate! Kate, I love you. I love both of you.
Kate's face crumples, and she stops, but she doesn't turn around. Jack sucks in a deep breath.
Jack: Please... please just tell him.
Kate almost turns around, her cheeks tilting, but she can't.
Jack (near tears now, but he needs to get this off his chest): tell him his Daddy loves him.
Kate turns now, tears dripping off her cheeks, and suddenly we realize this is what she's been waiting for - he's never been comfortable being Aaron's daddy, even though she's mommy.
Kate: I - (tries to wipe her cheeks quickly) I'll tell him.
Jack: And tell her, too.
Kate (voice cracks): what?
Jack: Tell Kate that I love her.
They stare at each other for a long moment, and then Kate nods, slowly, over and over, steps closer to him, puts her palms on either side of his neck, and kisses the corner of his mouth very softly. He's almost afraid to kiss back, but he tastes her tears.
Kate: I meant what I said, when I told you that you can't see us anymore. (takes a deep breath, Jack turns away, hand coming up to cup his mouth as he reacts) But... if you see Jack, tell him - tell him... (she smiles, remembering that day on the island so long ago) if he needs us, he knows where to find us.
Jack nods, torn but relieved. As she walks away, she turns back one more time, and adds
Kate: Let him know... let him know Kate has something she needs to tell him.
Jack watches her get in her car and drive away.
A WEEK LATER:
Kate opens her front door, and sees a clean shaven Jack - and it really is him, the him she was waiting for. They look at each other for a long time, and then
Jack: What did Kate need to tell me (emotional)
Kate breaks into a teary smile.
Kate: That she loves you. (Deep breath, this is a big deal) I - I love you.
Jack steps closer to her, nervously: i've been waiting a long time to hear that.
Kate slides her arms around his neck, whispering, just before they kiss as if it's their very first kiss: I've been waiting a long time for you to come home.

hilly
05-22-2008, 08:47 PM
^^ so incredibly awesome.. as always!

Count2Five
05-22-2008, 09:27 PM
:thud: Pontmercy that was amazing!!! :love:

Truefate21
05-22-2008, 10:10 PM
HOly Crap... I mean holy....crap. :thud: :thud::thud::thud::thud::thud::thud::thud::thud:

Pontmercy wow that was very very well done. Thank you for getting that off your chest. IF THE FINALE WOULD GO LIKE THAT...... I would omg but higher than jater heaven...if that was possible. If we in season 6 get a scene like that... i would yell and squeel in delight for weeks. :cloud9: :love: :cloud9: :love::cloud9: :love::cloud9: :love::cloud9: :love::cloud9: :love:

JateIsJexy
05-23-2008, 10:21 AM
That was amazing :thud:
You are a great writer, I've been reading your fanfics and they are just great :w00t:

xxFlight815xx
05-23-2008, 10:23 AM
wow ! :thud:
Pontmercy that was awsome ! im glad you decided to get it off your chest

jate4eva&eva
05-23-2008, 11:05 AM
Guh! :thud: Amazing Pontmercy! :bawl: :love:

Heinzy
05-26-2008, 06:00 AM
Hey guys, maaan have i missed this thread, everytime i come in here and read scenes i just go 'ah jate' :love:

anyway, here's alittle something something that i think occured between eggtown and SNBH


Changing Jack's mind

Jack walked along the corridor of his dusky apartment building, he kept remembering Kate's disappointed expression when he turned her down after the trial.
He unlocked his apartment door, and headed inside. Kate had looked stunning, as usual, she always did leave him breathless. He felt a familiar sensation of sadness filling his heart, he was in love with her, despite everything that had happened, despite her having Aaron...he was still in love with her. It was crazy, it didn't make any sense, he frowned as he pulled off his jacket and settled down onto the couch.
Running his hands over his head, Jack closed his eyes, trying to figure out what he really wanted.
Did he want a simple life...? or did he want...he paused, mid-thought. this wasn't a matter of what he wanted, this had become a matter of what he needed, and he knew what he needed. He needed Kate.
He sat in silence, it had never seemed more obvious to him, no matter what he would do in life, he would always be in love with her and it was infuriating beyond belief for a man who was so used to being in control of his emotions. Kate Austen. He furrowed his brow, suddenly, his fear of becoming a father figure didn't seem as terrifying when compared to the idea of his life without Kate.
He jumped to his feet and headed into the bathroom, he stopped opposite the sink as he peered into the mirror. He stared into his own eyes, trying to find himself, trying to recognise who he had become. Trying to understand, what the island had made him. The island seemed to have achieved the unachievable, it had made a man of science fall in love. It wasn't just any just any kind of love, it was the kind of love that changed him, the kind of love that circumstances could never come between, the kind of love that filled his heart and mind, almost making them one. His heart and mind never agreed on anything, they were always opposing eachother, until the revelation that hit him and left him so powerless when he put down his guns for Kate. He was in love with her, with both his heart and soul, as he stared at the reflection of the changed man who stared back at him through the mirror, he decided, that it was the kind of love that was worth fighting for...
TBC


hope you liked it guys :uberglomp:

keep smilin
JIF

Peppy
05-26-2008, 08:16 AM
Love it Heinzy!

Heinzy
05-26-2008, 08:31 AM
:o thanks Peppy,
heres the Kate P.O.V

Kate sat on the sofa, Aaron was fast asleep upstairs. Despite feeling happy with Aaron, she wasn't content. Something was still missing and she knew exactly who it was.
It was Jack.
She found herself wishing he'd change his mind, wishing he'd still love her enough to put up with having a child and all of Kate's baggage. But who was she kidding? she had broken his heart once already, she didn't deserve to be loved so unconditionally. It wasn't fair of her to expect more from Jack. He had saved her, he had even lied in court for her. He was a good man, a good man who may never be hers.
Her heart sank alittle, she climbed to her feet, suddenly feeling restless and afraid of what she might feel if she dwelled on the idea of living her life without him any longer. Heading over to the fridge she pressed her forehead against the cold metallic door before pulling it open.
Heartache was a feeling she was getting used to, it seemed to follow her wherever life took her. Maybe this was the way it was meant to be. As much as it scared her, maybe Jack wasn't destined to be in her life any longer. She tried to think about something else, fearing that if she reminded herself she needed him, she wouldn't be able to move on. She had put her heart on the line today and asked him to come over...but he had backtracke,d she had seen it his eyes, his reluctance to be with her, because she had Aaron and possibly because of everything she had put him through already.
But night after night, she found herself wishing he was besides her.
Somethings in life just weren't meant to be, she wasn't meant for him and he wasn't meant for her.

A knock at the door got her attention...

TBC

xxFlight815xx
05-26-2008, 11:04 AM
Heinzy i loved both POV's
hopefully something like this will happen in the show ! can't wait to see the other part

RedRobin
05-27-2008, 07:41 AM
Great scenes Heinzy and Pontmercy :love: :love:

Tinkletoes
05-27-2008, 11:06 AM
Wow!!! :thud: just amazing keep up the great work guys :love:

Truefate21
05-30-2008, 02:56 PM
OK so I have had this very small dyojs in my head ever since the finale last night SO i figured Id write it for ya guys lol ya know share with my jaters :grouphug:

NO SPOILERS UNLESS YOU HAVE NOT SEEN THE SEASON 4 FINALE!!
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Ok so in my head this is like an alternate/extended version of the Jack and Kate flash-forward, everything happened like in the episode up until the part where she says "How dare you ask me to go back...." my dyojs picks up right after that....:shifty: JATE ANGST AHEAD

*FlashForward continuation…*

Jacks emotions in turmoil he once again watched the retreating footsteps of the last person he ever wanted to hurt. He swore to himself he would never hurt her….he had no right of asking anything of her he knew that but a question was burning in his heart and he had to know an answer.

“I have one last question, and if you say no I will never bother you again…” He yelled in anguish to her as she got near her car door. “….please Kate, I just… I need you to understand….” He said his voice getting softer with every word

For the second time in one night Kate had walked away from the person whom she thought would never break her heart and for the second time in one night her fury got ahold of her.

Kate turned once again from her car and came up to face Jack. “UNDERSTAND? You need me to UNDERSTAND?

“yes…” Jack replied meekly as he looked away from her intense gaze

“UNDERSTAND WHAT… how you…you of all people have hurt me? Understand how after 2 years of living in hell replaying memories from that hellish day I had some sense of normalcy WITH YOU until YOU stole it away…”

As Kate started saying all this she unconsciously started pounding Jacks chest unable to control herself any longer. Jack just stood there limp, head down tears falling from his eyes.

“UNDERSTAND how Aaron EVERY NIGHT does not want me to read him stories because he thinks you are coming back home?! “ Kate said as she stopped pounding on his chest, her hands now lying still.

Tears streaming down her face she looked up at what Jack had become. “Understand that after all we have fought through you gave up… you just gave up and turned to drugs and alcohol.” Kate closed her eyes and turned once again to walk away… she couldn’t do this anymore, she couldn’t live like this. She needed her Jack in her life like fish need oxygen but this was not her jack…not anymore.

“Kate….” Jack said softly as Kate opened her car door.
“What….Jack. What was the question…” She replied exhausted emotionally and physically.

“…Do you….after everything…do you still …I mean…do you still love me?” Jack said his every word laced with anguish.

Kate smiled a sad smile and shook her head softly, “…I never stopped. I never will.” She said as she licked her lips, got in her car and drove away.

At hearing those words, Jack lifted his head a glimmer of hope filled his body.
She never will....

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:w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolle yes:

Count2Five
05-30-2008, 09:35 PM
Awww :love: Awesome job Nadia!!! :w00t:

RedRobin
05-31-2008, 04:37 AM
Amazing scene Nadia :love:

livin_4_foxy
05-31-2008, 08:12 AM
Nadia that was amazing:faint::love:

*Shining Fairy
05-31-2008, 09:15 AM
:thud: Nadia that's all i can do know...:love:

Heinzy
05-31-2008, 09:27 AM
:love:

Only read if you've seen the finale...

its really short, but i needed to get it outta my system...

For s5:

Kate parked the car and quickly headed inside, closing the door firmly behind her, she pressed her back against the door and began to sob, reaching her feet as she cried with all her heart. Her heart was aching in her chest, she had just slapped Jack, but she was really angry at herself. She was angry at herself for letting herself fall in love with him, and letting herself need him. If she hadn't given him her heart, she wouldn't be in so much pain right now.
She hated that she loved him even when he was such a mess. She was disappointed in him for doing this to her, but she was furious at herself for feeling for him. It simply wasn't fair.
She squinted as the lights switched on, Kate looked up to see Aaron standing in the stairs, clutching his dolphin teddy, she took in a tortured breath as she composed herself, 'hey sweetie,' he looked so sad, 'mommy, what's wrong?'
Kate smiled through her tears, 'nothing honey, come here,' she said brokenly, Aaron ran down the stairs and buried himself in her arms, she kissed his forehead.
'Where's Jack?'
Kate felt her heart writhe in her chest, 'He's gone away sweetie.'
'Will he come back?'
'Yes, yes, yes he will.' she said with complete faith,he would be back... she just didn't know when or how...
She held her son in her arms, as he fell asleep in the warmth of her embrace.

Mevie fan
05-31-2008, 09:40 AM
Hey! Both scenes were awesome!
So much anger Nadia! :thud: so much passion! awesome! She is never going to stop loving him :love:

Hina. Even if it's short it was great! I know that deep inside Kate loves him and belives he'll ome back, eventually. :thud: :thud:
Would you mind writing a continuation? pls? :please:

*Shining Fairy
05-31-2008, 09:41 AM
:love:

Only read if you've seen the finale...

its really short, but i needed to get it outta my system...

For s5:

Kate parked the car and quickly headed inside, closing the door firmly behind her, she pressed her back against the door and began to sob, reaching her feet as she cried with all her heart. Her heart was aching in her chest, she had just slapped Jack, but she was really angry at herself. She was angry at herself for letting herself fall in love with him, and letting herself need him. If she hadn't given him her heart, she wouldn't be in so much pain right now.
She hated that she loved him even when he was such a mess. She was disappointed in him for doing this to her, but she was furious at herself for feeling for him. It simply wasn't fair.
She squinted as the lights switched on, Kate looked up to see Aaron standing in the stairs, clutching his dolphin teddy, she took in a tortured breath as she composed herself, 'hey sweetie,' he looked so sad, 'mommy, what's wrong?'
Kate smiled through her tears, 'nothing honey, come here,' she said brokenly, Aaron ran down the stairs and buried himself in her arms, she kissed his forehead.
'Where's Jack?'
Kate felt her heart writhe in her chest, 'He's gone away sweetie.'
'Will he come back?'
'Yes, yes, yes he will.' she said with complete faith,he would be back... she just didn't know when or how...
She held her son in her arms, as he fell asleep in the warmth of her embrace.

:bawl: that. is. so. BEAUTIFUL :love:

Heinzy
05-31-2008, 09:44 AM
:glomp: aww thanks guys, i'll do a continuation tonight for you:glomp:

Truefate21
05-31-2008, 10:53 AM
Thanks a lot guys lol I had that scene running around in my head forever lol after that FF scene :love: :hug2: :hug:

Heinzy Brilliant, very nice!!! soooo sad and so sweet! :heart:

Count2Five
05-31-2008, 11:33 AM
You rock Heinz!!! :D

xxFlight815xx
05-31-2008, 11:36 AM
For s5:

Kate parked the car and quickly headed inside, closing the door firmly behind her, she pressed her back against the door and began to sob, reaching her feet as she cried with all her heart. Her heart was aching in her chest, she had just slapped Jack, but she was really angry at herself. She was angry at herself for letting herself fall in love with him, and letting herself need him. If she hadn't given him her heart, she wouldn't be in so much pain right now.
She hated that she loved him even when he was such a mess. She was disappointed in him for doing this to her, but she was furious at herself for feeling for him. It simply wasn't fair.
She squinted as the lights switched on, Kate looked up to see Aaron standing in the stairs, clutching his dolphin teddy, she took in a tortured breath as she composed herself, 'hey sweetie,' he looked so sad, 'mommy, what's wrong?'
Kate smiled through her tears, 'nothing honey, come here,' she said brokenly, Aaron ran down the stairs and buried himself in her arms, she kissed his forehead.
'Where's Jack?'
Kate felt her heart writhe in her chest, 'He's gone away sweetie.'
'Will he come back?'
'Yes, yes, yes he will.' she said with complete faith,he would be back... she just didn't know when or how...
She held her son in her arms, as he fell asleep in the warmth of her embrace.

great scene Heinzy, beautifully sad

Mevie fan
05-31-2008, 01:25 PM
:glomp: aww thanks guys, i'll do a continuation tonight for you:glomp:

Thank you :glomp: :glomp:

~Karollini~
05-31-2008, 03:49 PM
Heinzy, it' s great as always! I love your dyojs! :)

Heinzy
05-31-2008, 04:27 PM
:o thanks for the kind comments guys, here's the continuation as promised...

Jack entered his apartment, his head throbbed from the hangover he earned. He froze as he was met by Ben holding Aaron in his arms.
'What are you doing here?' He demanded, 'why have you got Aaron, where's Kate?'
Ben smiled, 'I'm going away for some time Jack...and I'm taking Aaron with me,' Jack stared at Ben in disbelief, Ben smiled slightly, 'Kate will turn to you for help in finding Aaron Jack. Tell her I took him back to his real mother.'
Jack shook his head, this would destroy Kate, 'No, No-'
Ben glared at Jack, his cold eyes hardened as he spoke. 'This is how it has to happen Jack. Losing Aaron will bring the remaining oceanic6 together. Trust me.'
Jack frowned at Ben, he shook his head, 'Ben-'
Ben brushed past Jack, Jack stumbled slightly, 'I'll see you later Jack.'
Jack stared at Ben as Ben calmly walked out of his apartment.
Jack settled down onto the couch, his head was sore, his heart was broken and things just got complicated.
To Be Continued...

Mevie fan
06-01-2008, 03:37 AM
:thud: :shock::shock::shock: :thud:
Ben is taking Aaron? OMG:shock::shock:

*Shining Fairy
06-01-2008, 09:10 AM
:o thanks for the kind comments guys, here's the continuation as promised...

Jack entered his apartment, his head throbbed from the hangover he earned. He froze as he was met by Ben holding Aaron in his arms.
'What are you doing here?' He demanded, 'why have you got Aaron, where's Kate?'
Ben smiled, 'I'm going away for some time Jack...and I'm taking Aaron with me,' Jack stared at Ben in disbelief, Ben smiled slightly, 'Kate will turn to you for help in finding Aaron Jack. Tell her I took him back to his real mother.'
Jack shook his head, this would destroy Kate, 'No, No-'
Ben glared at Jack, his cold eyes hardened as he spoke. 'This is how it has to happen Jack. Losing Aaron will bring the remaining oceanic6 together. Trust me.'
Jack frowned at Ben, he shook his head, 'Ben-'
Ben brushed past Jack, Jack stumbled slightly, 'I'll see you later Jack.'
Jack stared at Ben as Ben calmly walked out of his apartment.
Jack settled down onto the couch, his head was sore, his heart was broken and things just got complicated.
To Be Continued...

OMG!!! AARON!!:shock: BEN!!:eek:
again Heinz BEAUTIFUL:love:

Foxy<3
06-01-2008, 09:53 AM
I'd really love a scene where Jack plays the piano for Kate. An intimate scene between the two where Kate is just amazed by him 'cause he is pretty amazing...and hot and can play the piano which is just
She looked like she fell in love with him all over again when she was watching him last time he played.

This should be in here right? :giggle:



Heinzy I love your scenes!:D:clap:

Count2Five
06-01-2008, 11:32 AM
:o thanks for the kind comments guys, here's the continuation as promised...

Jack entered his apartment, his head throbbed from the hangover he earned. He froze as he was met by Ben holding Aaron in his arms.
'What are you doing here?' He demanded, 'why have you got Aaron, where's Kate?'
Ben smiled, 'I'm going away for some time Jack...and I'm taking Aaron with me,' Jack stared at Ben in disbelief, Ben smiled slightly, 'Kate will turn to you for help in finding Aaron Jack. Tell her I took him back to his real mother.'
Jack shook his head, this would destroy Kate, 'No, No-'
Ben glared at Jack, his cold eyes hardened as he spoke. 'This is how it has to happen Jack. Losing Aaron will bring the remaining oceanic6 together. Trust me.'
Jack frowned at Ben, he shook his head, 'Ben-'
Ben brushed past Jack, Jack stumbled slightly, 'I'll see you later Jack.'
Jack stared at Ben as Ben calmly walked out of his apartment.
Jack settled down onto the couch, his head was sore, his heart was broken and things just got complicated.
To Be Continued...

:shock: Dude, you should seriously write for the show! Awesome!!! :D

~Karollini~
06-01-2008, 03:04 PM
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:flowers2::cookie::eyes:eeeei nzy, update?

Nadia- it was great! You know, I didn't see it before, I don't know why, I think it' s because I was too happy that I finnaly registered on LF and I didn't see any new dyojs. :shock::rolleyes::crackup:

meggie
06-01-2008, 08:35 PM
So I've never done this before and don't post often but I've got this scene floating around in my head and this seems like the right place for it.....
It happens a few weeks or so after Jack's meeting with Ben in the funeral parlor.

Scene opens with Kate in her living room. The lights are low and it looks like it's pretty late at night.
She's reading a paper, a mug of tea by her side.
Someone knocks at the door.
Kate gets up and answers it.
It's Jack.

Jack: Hey.

Kate: Jack???What are you doing here? I thought I
made it clear that---

Kate goes to slam the door but Jack puts an arm in to keep it open.

Jack: I know you don't want to see me and I know you're angry and but I just wanted to see you one last time and say goodbye.

Kate: What are you talking about Jack?

Jack: I'm leaving tomorrow. Going back to the Island.

Kate: What?? How can you still be---You know that's not possible...Dammit Jack, What's happened to you??

Jack: Well....For one thing, I've shaved...(he smiles).
And I'm sober.
I'm so sorry I put you through all of this.
The island-- It's been calling me, haunting me for months.
I have to go back or.... I just have to go back.
Hurley's coming too and Sun and Sayid, so I won't be alone. I wish you'd come Kate but you won't so I...I... just wanted to say goodbye.

Kate: I don't understand this. The Island disappeared. It's gone. And how could Hurley and Sayid be ready to risk their lives to get back to that hell hole?? And Sun has a baby, Jack!!! She'd never--How do you know this isn't all in your mind?

Jack: It's all real, Kate. As real as we were.
We are all being called back. You are too. You're just to stubborn to listen.

Kate: So what, there's an Oceanic flight that'll drop you right over the Island with a bunch of tarps and guns and all you have to do to get a ticket is click your heels together three times and say "there's no one like smokey"?

Jack: (laughs) No. Ben has a plan.

Kate: Ben? That murderer? You're trusting him, now?!!!

Jack: He can get us back. So yeah, I'm trusting him.
Kate?
Can...Can I see Aaron one last time? I know he's asleep by now but I just want to see his face again before I go.

Kate: Okay.

They go up to see the sleeping Aaron. Jack strokes Aaron's face briefly as Kate watches, visibly tearing up. They head back downstairs and to the front door. Jack opens it and stands in the open doorway.

Kate: So, you're going now?

Jack turns.

Jack: Almost.
One last thing.
I love you Kate, with all my heart.
From the moment you offered me a thread choice you had me.
If I could undue all the hurt between us, I would.
Kate, please come with me.

Kate : I can't.

Kate starts crying and Jack leans in.

Jack: (whispers) Don't cry, Kate.

They kiss for a very long moment. The moment stretches. They continue kissing. Finally Jack pulls away and gazes into Kate's eyes. From behind Jack a voice booms out.

"Don't you think it's time for a proper introduction, Jack?"

It's Christian.

Count2Five
06-01-2008, 08:51 PM
meggie- that was amazing! I loved it! :love:

hilly
06-01-2008, 08:55 PM
that was really good! hope something similar happens on the show. you should write more!

meggie
06-01-2008, 09:07 PM
thanks for the positive feedback!!!:)

RedRobin
06-02-2008, 03:40 AM
Heinzy and Meggie awesome scenes!!!! :love: :love:

Heinzy
06-02-2008, 06:21 AM
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:flowers2::cookie::eyes:eeeei nzy, update?



Flowers? for me? why thankyou...seeing as u got me flowers, i'll see what i can pull outta my overworked brain :eyebrows:

Reunion


Jack heard a knock at the door, he glanced in the mirror one last time. He had showered and shaved, his heart pounded in his chest, his need to see Kate again outweighed the guilt he felt for constructing the circumstances that were to follow. Ben had taken Aaron, Kate would be a mess and she would turn to Jack.

Jack opened the door, Kate stared up at him, she looked devestated as she hugged him tightly, 'what's wrong? hey, hey...' he knew the answer and felt sick for manipulating her like this, but Ben had said it was the only way.
Kate pulled away after a moment, Jack watched her aching infront of him, 'It's Aaron...he's gone...Ben took him, he spiked my water and walked out with Aaron in his arms...and there was nothnig I could do jack,' she sobbed, how could she have let this happen?
Jack pulled her into his arms, 'its okay, we'll figure this out...'
Kate shook her head, pulling away, 'no, you didn't see the way Aaron was looking at me, he was so scared-and I just lay there, I swear, when I find Ben-I will KILL him.'
Jack paused, 'Maybe he took Aaron to the island...'
Kate stared at Jack, 'no, no, Claire told me not to bring Aaron back to the island-'
Jack straightened, suddenly feeling uneasy, 'she said that?'
Kate nodded, looking pained, she had let Claire down, she had let Aaron down. She had screwed this up.
'What was I thinking Jack? I'm not mother material, how could have let this even happen-'
'Why did Claire tell you not to bring Aaron back to the island?'
Kate frowned at Jack, 'she didn't say-she just-she told me not to bring him back-i think the island would put him in danger-oh god, I feel sick...'
Jack stared at her for a moment, what had he done? Was Ben conning him into coming back to the island? Maybe agreeing to let Ben ''help'' him persuade Kate to come back with him was a bad idea.
'What's wrong?'
Jack gulped as he looked at Kate, her expression changed, turning from sadness to dread, 'what did you do?'
Jack winced, 'Ben said, taking Aaron would make you change your mind about coming ba-'
Kate cut him off by slapping hard, Jack closed his eyes, his cheek stung, he deserved this one. Just like the last one.
'How could you?!' she demanded, Jack looked away, 'no, no, you look at me-look at what you're donig to me Jack-' she cupped his face, not letting him look away, he stared into the heartbroken eyes of the woman he loved. She looked disgusted at him, 'Where has he taken Aaron?' she asked.
'I don't know,' Kate looked infuriated at his answer, she pushed him away as she walked past him, she stopped at the door. It would be so easy to stay angry at him, it would be so easy to hate herself for loving him, and to blame herself for letting this happen. It would be too easy to run, she turned around after a moment.
'We're gonna go back to the island.'
Jack studied her, there was a determination in her eyes, 'once we fix your mess, then we're gonna find Aaron, and we're gonna Kill Ben. I owe Claire that much. That child will NOT stay on the island.'
Jack studied her, he looked down, 'okay...' his sounded as weak as he felt.
When had this happened? When had Kate become the better person? when had he become so selfish?

Count2Five
06-02-2008, 10:19 AM
Wow Heinzy- you're on a roll! Awesome work!!! :w00t:

xxFlight815xx
06-02-2008, 10:50 AM
that was great Heinzy


'We're gonna go back to the island.'
Jack studied her, there was a determination in her eyes, 'once we fix your mess, then we're gonna find Aaron, and we're gonna Kill Ben. I owe Claire that much. That child will NOT stay on the island.'
Jack studied her, he looked down, 'okay...' his sounded as weak as he felt.
When had this happened? When had Kate become the better person? when had he become so selfish?

i love this part ^^^^^:shifty:shame on Jack ! how could he of just let him take him to begin with

Foxy<3
06-02-2008, 11:45 AM
Great scenes guys :)

Meggie i thought up a scene in my head that was almost identical to that except without christian shephard. Thats so weird lol

Truefate21
06-02-2008, 12:03 PM
Flowers? for me? why thankyou...seeing as u got me flowers, i'll see what i can pull outta my overworked brain :eyebrows:

Reunion


Jack studied her, he looked down, 'okay...' his sounded as weak as he felt.
When had this happened? When had Kate become the better person? when had he become so selfish?

Awwww breaks my heart lol... :rolleyes::rolleyes::w00t::w00t:

*Shining Fairy
06-02-2008, 12:48 PM
Flowers? for me? why thankyou...seeing as u got me flowers, i'll see what i can pull outta my overworked brain :eyebrows:

Reunion


Jack heard a knock at the door, he glanced in the mirror one last time. He had showered and shaved, his heart pounded in his chest, his need to see Kate again outweighed the guilt he felt for constructing the circumstances that were to follow. Ben had taken Aaron, Kate would be a mess and she would turn to Jack.

Jack opened the door, Kate stared up at him, she looked devestated as she hugged him tightly, 'what's wrong? hey, hey...' he knew the answer and felt sick for manipulating her like this, but Ben had said it was the only way.
Kate pulled away after a moment, Jack watched her aching infront of him, 'It's Aaron...he's gone...Ben took him, he spiked my water and walked out with Aaron in his arms...and there was nothnig I could do jack,' she sobbed, how could she have let this happen?
Jack pulled her into his arms, 'its okay, we'll figure this out...'
Kate shook her head, pulling away, 'no, you didn't see the way Aaron was looking at me, he was so scared-and I just lay there, I swear, when I find Ben-I will KILL him.'
Jack paused, 'Maybe he took Aaron to the island...'
Kate stared at Jack, 'no, no, Claire told me not to bring Aaron back to the island-'
Jack straightened, suddenly feeling uneasy, 'she said that?'
Kate nodded, looking pained, she had let Claire down, she had let Aaron down. She had screwed this up.
'What was I thinking Jack? I'm not mother material, how could have let this even happen-'
'Why did Claire tell you not to bring Aaron back to the island?'
Kate frowned at Jack, 'she didn't say-she just-she told me not to bring him back-i think the island would put him in danger-oh god, I feel sick...'
Jack stared at her for a moment, what had he done? Was Ben conning him into coming back to the island? Maybe agreeing to let Ben ''help'' him persuade Kate to come back with him was a bad idea.
'What's wrong?'
Jack gulped as he looked at Kate, her expression changed, turning from sadness to dread, 'what did you do?'
Jack winced, 'Ben said, taking Aaron would make you change your mind about coming ba-'
Kate cut him off by slapping hard, Jack closed his eyes, his cheek stung, he deserved this one. Just like the last one.
'How could you?!' she demanded, Jack looked away, 'no, no, you look at me-look at what you're donig to me Jack-' she cupped his face, not letting him look away, he stared into the heartbroken eyes of the woman he loved. She looked disgusted at him, 'Where has he taken Aaron?' she asked.
'I don't know,' Kate looked infuriated at his answer, she pushed him away as she walked past him, she stopped at the door. It would be so easy to stay angry at him, it would be so easy to hate herself for loving him, and to blame herself for letting this happen. It would be too easy to run, she turned around after a moment.
'We're gonna go back to the island.'
Jack studied her, there was a determination in her eyes, 'once we fix your mess, then we're gonna find Aaron, and we're gonna Kill Ben. I owe Claire that much. That child will NOT stay on the island.'
Jack studied her, he looked down, 'okay...' his sounded as weak as he felt.
When had this happened? When had Kate become the better person? when had he become so selfish?

I love you:giggle: great story:flowers2: for you:D

and I almost finched reading the first chapter of Aftermath and it's really good:D soo i'm gonna try to read more tomorrow

MissGiggles
06-03-2008, 10:47 AM
I've never been on this thread before but i wrote a little something and a jater friend told me to post it here..so i hope you guys like it....let me know what you think:D

when i met you, it was fine.
then you kissed me, and you instantly gained complete control over me.
i couldn’t get you of my mind, all i wanted to do was talk to you, look at you, and simply be near you. you were always there for me.
you always had that same smile on your face that had me falling head over heals. Everyone says you can only fall in love once. But that’s not true, cause everytime I see you smile... i fall in love all over again.
you did everything right, and it lead straight to my heart.
You are my everything, my dreams, my future. my hero. you picked me up when i was down, you believed in me, you talked to me, you protected me. you were everything i ever wanted.
you made me the happiest girl on earth.
then as the days went on, you were still everything i thought about.
right from the start, i knew you were going to be hard to forget.
you made your self, my number one thought. with just one kiss.
this isnt just some little 'crush.' Everything i did, some how led back to you.
Most girls would have given up on you by now, but im not most girls.
i've had quite a bit of time to think about stuff. and yes, i am confused. but theres one thing i know for sure. If nothing else in this world turns out. I wanna be with you. you're my world, Your the reason I haven't given up. Love isn't even strong enough to tell you how I feel about you!! You make me feel better then anyone has ever made me feel before! Anyone could look into your eyes a million time and still never see what I do. When another girl hugs you, I get jealous..Because for that moment there holding my entire world in thier arms. I wanna spend the rest of my life with you through thick and thin I wanna be able to look up at you...And hear you tell me everything will be okay with a big smile.
your the best thing that ever happen and I want the world to know it.


P.S. im stil not over you!

Truefate21
06-03-2008, 10:50 AM
ok guys HELP! :giggle::giggle: THERE WAS A DYOJS...by Lostbeth... I wanna say maybe not...but it was about right BEFORE the rescue and Kate went to see jack and he showed her his scar from their first meeting and kate kissed it and said whenever you thin of this scar ill be there..soemthing like that... lol anyone know what I am talking about... I wanna find that dyojs! :giggle::giggle:

Kayla so cute! loved it!

RedRobin
06-03-2008, 11:00 AM
Awesome scenes Kayla and Heinzy!! :love: :love:

hilly
06-03-2008, 11:53 AM
I've never been on this thread before but i wrote a little something and a jater friend told me to post it here..so i hope you guys like it....let me know what you think:D

when i met you, it was fine.
then you kissed me, and you instantly gained complete control over me.
i couldn’t get you of my mind, all i wanted to do was talk to you, look at you, and simply be near you. you were always there for me.
you always had that same smile on your face that had me falling head over heals. Everyone says you can only fall in love once. But that’s not true, cause everytime I see you smile... i fall in love all over again.
you did everything right, and it lead straight to my heart.
You are my everything, my dreams, my future. my hero. you picked me up when i was down, you believed in me, you talked to me, you protected me. you were everything i ever wanted.
you made me the happiest girl on earth.
then as the days went on, you were still everything i thought about.
right from the start, i knew you were going to be hard to forget.
you made your self, my number one thought. with just one kiss.
this isnt just some little 'crush.' Everything i did, some how led back to you.
Most girls would have given up on you by now, but im not most girls.
i've had quite a bit of time to think about stuff. and yes, i am confused. but theres one thing i know for sure. If nothing else in this world turns out. I wanna be with you. you're my world, Your the reason I haven't given up. Love isn't even strong enough to tell you how I feel about you!! You make me feel better then anyone has ever made me feel before! Anyone could look into your eyes a million time and still never see what I do. When another girl hugs you, I get jealous..Because for that moment there holding my entire world in thier arms. I wanna spend the rest of my life with you through thick and thin I wanna be able to look up at you...And hear you tell me everything will be okay with a big smile.
your the best thing that ever happen and I want the world to know it.


P.S. im stil not over you!

heh, i thought that was jack's pov until "girl". lol- guess it goes to show you how alike they can think of each other :heart:

~Karollini~
06-03-2008, 12:22 PM
Nadia, yeah yeah, it was something :D:nod: I think it was in last dyojs theard... I cried when I was reading it was sooooooo beautiful :cloud9:.

Miss Giggles- it was awsoooooooooooooooooooooooome :w00t: I really, really liked it! You should post in here more often :)

Liesbeth, please update soon :please::eyes:!!!! I am dying to see what will happen...

MissGiggles
06-03-2008, 02:31 PM
Nadia, yeah yeah, it was something :D:nod: I think it was in last dyojs theard... I cried when I was reading it was sooooooo beautiful :cloud9:.

Miss Giggles- it was awsoooooooooooooooooooooooome :w00t: I really, really liked it! You should post in here more often :)

Liesbeth, please update soon :please::eyes:!!!! I am dying to see what will happen...

Well Thanks:D
Maybe I Will:p

Ella.
06-03-2008, 04:53 PM
Heinzy i loved the last update, although i cant stand kate being mad at jack, i hope they sort it out....wait what am i on about they always make up :giggle: Cant wait for the next part :D

Kayla that was amazing i loved the way it was written, in not saying their names. It was really fluffy jate. :love: it!

MissGiggles
06-03-2008, 05:03 PM
Heinzy i loved the last update, although i cant stand kate being mad at jack, i hope they sort it out....wait what am i on about they always make up :giggle: Cant wait for the next part :D

Kayla that was amazing i loved the way it was written, in not saying their names. It was really fluffy jate. :love: it!

Thanks im glad you guys liked it.....i didnt know it was that good:giggle::D:p

*Shining Fairy
06-04-2008, 12:38 PM
I've never been on this thread before but i wrote a little something and a jater friend told me to post it here..so i hope you guys like it....let me know what you think:D

when i met you, it was fine.
then you kissed me, and you instantly gained complete control over me.
i couldn’t get you of my mind, all i wanted to do was talk to you, look at you, and simply be near you. you were always there for me.
you always had that same smile on your face that had me falling head over heals. Everyone says you can only fall in love once. But that’s not true, cause everytime I see you smile... i fall in love all over again.
you did everything right, and it lead straight to my heart.
You are my everything, my dreams, my future. my hero. you picked me up when i was down, you believed in me, you talked to me, you protected me. you were everything i ever wanted.
you made me the happiest girl on earth.
then as the days went on, you were still everything i thought about.
right from the start, i knew you were going to be hard to forget.
you made your self, my number one thought. with just one kiss.
this isnt just some little 'crush.' Everything i did, some how led back to you.
Most girls would have given up on you by now, but im not most girls.
i've had quite a bit of time to think about stuff. and yes, i am confused. but theres one thing i know for sure. If nothing else in this world turns out. I wanna be with you. you're my world, Your the reason I haven't given up. Love isn't even strong enough to tell you how I feel about you!! You make me feel better then anyone has ever made me feel before! Anyone could look into your eyes a million time and still never see what I do. When another girl hugs you, I get jealous..Because for that moment there holding my entire world in thier arms. I wanna spend the rest of my life with you through thick and thin I wanna be able to look up at you...And hear you tell me everything will be okay with a big smile.
your the best thing that ever happen and I want the world to know it.


P.S. im stil not over you!

OMG Kayla that's soo sweet:love:
B-E-A-Utiful (sorry wached Bruce Almighty yesterday and can't get that line outta my head:giggle:)

Truefate21
06-06-2008, 11:48 AM
I have so much fun writing these small dyojs lol

Random Dyojs
BASED TO BE SET IN SEASON 6….MIDDLE PART OF THE SEASON…:cool:

****The Oceanic 6 + Ben + Dead Locke have found the island again….****

Jack gathered the needed supplies from the raft and walked back up the beach. Everything had changed, it was all so different… million of years seemed to have past since he was last here.

“Jack!” Kate yelled as she caught up Jack, “This is going to feel like Déjà vu…” she said as she grabbed his hand and squeezed, “Locke…Lockes gone…”

All Jack could do was laugh at the irony, laugh at how the island was definitely a place where miracles happened…. he would no longer deny that... “Let him be, he is home now,” Jack replied after a minute shaking his head and continuing to walk up the beach.

Kate got in front of him and playfully pushed him by the shoulders.
“You have been avoiding me ever since we got back here!” She said mockingly not angry just amused.

Jack rolled his eyes, “I wanted to give you some space…to reunite with those we left here…whoever is still left.” He replied as he took a deep breathe smiling sadly at her. After finally dealing with his demons Jack felt like a new man….with old feelings for one particular person. Through it all, Kate had been his constant…and he needed her more than he needed oxygen. But like all the best things in his life…he had to let them go.

***** ***** *****

He still couldn’t accept it Kate thought. She knew he loved her, she knew she loved him…he just couldn’t grasp how much. He had fought through so much and now on the most trivial of matters he was having a hard time…Kate bit her lip and lay her hands on Jacks chest.

“Yes, I did see him; I gave him a tight hug. I was so excited to see him after all these years…” Kate began

Jacks smile faded, why did she have to tell him this…his eyes filling with hurt and loss…somehow he thought she loved him but he should have figured after everything that had happened…he had lost his chance…this was exactly why for so long he couldn’t believe in miracles…because they never happened to him.

“Kate…” Jack began as he tried to casually escape her burning touch and intense gaze.

“Listen to me.” Kate said softly as her hands seem to grasp onto him “I was really excited to see him…but these last years has changed us both…we have become different people…We talked for a bit, quickly catching up… and then… he kissed me.”

Jack took a long deep breath and put his hand around the one on his chest holding on to his heart for dear life…

“When we broke apart he sadly smiled and asked me how long I had been in love for?”

Jacks eyebrows rose in confusion as Kate continued, “I told him I had been in love ever since that day in the caves when you came out alive and I hugged you…. I told him I never fully accepted that love until I realized I could have lost you…If Juliet had not performed that emergency surgery.”

Jack opened his mouth to reply a few times but nothing seemed to be able to come out.

“Then I showed him this, he told me it was about freaking time…and as they say the rest is history.” Kate said as she started fiddling around with the ring on her left hand.

A tear of shear happiness escaped Jacks eyes as he broke into a grin and laughed. “When did you put that back on…” he asked as he caressed her hand and stared at the engagement ring glistening in the sun.

Kate just grinned and leaned up kissing him passionately on the lips.
“Jack…” she said eyes still closed, forehead touching his, she let her nose graze his and she kissed him softly once more.

“Yea…?” He replied huskily

“I love you” Kate said softly as if it was the easiest three words to ever fall from her lips

Jack caressed Kate’s check and lifted her into his arms. “I love you too.” He replied as he carried her all the way to his tent relishing the moment when both realized miracles could happen…to them.

:love::love::love::love::love::love::love: :thud: :thud:

Ella.
06-06-2008, 03:22 PM
Nadia guh :thud: that was just :love: amazing. I hope something like that happens actually, that jack could come to terms with himself. :)

BlueDream
06-07-2008, 07:59 AM
Wow, it seems like ages since I´d been in this thread :thud: Stupid college! :shakefist:

MissGiggles, that was so amazingly adorable! :thud: :heart:

Everyone says you can only fall in love once. But that’s not true, cause everytime I see you smile... i fall in love all over again.

:love: :love: :love:

i've had quite a bit of time to think about stuff. and yes, i am confused. but theres one thing i know for sure. If nothing else in this world turns out. I wanna be with you.

:bawl: :thud: :bawl:

Nadia, I´m so glad you cant stop writing those small dyojs :w00t: - they are :love:.

“Jack!” Kate yelled as she caught up Jack, “This is going to feel like Déjà vu…” she said as she grabbed his hand and squeezed, “Locke…Lockes gone…”

:rotflol: :giggle:

But this was my fave part:

A tear of shear happiness escaped Jacks eyes as he broke into a grin and laughed. “When did you put that back on…” he asked as he caressed her hand and stared at the engagement ring glistening in the sun.

:thud: :heart: :love: *whispers* Engagement ring.... It still feels like a dream, doesnt it? :cloud9:

___

Anyway, before I fall into the good old ˝JACK PROPOSED, SHE SAID YES!˝ chanting (:o), I think I should better post this :giggle: It´s been a while since I had time to write anything, but I hope I´ll return to normal soon. This is dedicated to Rach (trivia) and Amy (fallingslowly) :glomp:


Family Flu


Jack stirred in the bed. He frowned, his mind yearning for a nice long sleep. Aaron´d been sick for the last couple of days, the flu reaching its peak the day before, making Kate and him spend the whole night looking after the boy, trying to get his fever down and exchanging turns in kneeling down besides him on the bathroom floor, as wave after wave of nausea hit his little body, that was shaking from sobs and exhaustion. The situation calmed down only late in the morning, his fever returning still not to completely normal, but normal when compared to how it had been before. Jack was about to drift into sleep again, but then his mind registered the thing that had awoken him in the first place. It was hot. Unusually hot. He slowly opened his eyes, bringing his arm to cover his face to shield them from the sudden rush of light. He blinked a couple of times and then looked down, his lips stretching into a loving smile as he saw Kate lying there, upper part of her body spread across his chest. It was her favorite sleeping position: no matter how she fell asleep, she´d always finish using him as a pillow. Not that he minded, of course.

The smile disappeared from his face soon though, as he realized that she was the source of that unbearable heat. Slowly, trying not to wake her up yet, he slipped his hand underneath the light green top she was wearing; his hand almost flinching when it came in contact with the back of her waist. She wasn’t hot – she was burning. He carefully pulled out his hand and maneuvered it in front of her, gently pressing the back of his palm against her forehead. Her temperature had to be at least 38,5 °C. He looked at the clock, wondering how in the world he hadn’t felt it before. It was a bit past 4 pm, which meant that they had been sleeping for the past 5 hours. He put the clock down, and then smiled as he heard the little voice coming from the baby monitor that was placed on the night stand. ˝Com´on, Chal´lie, op´n youl mouth, I haft to see if you´ll fick. ˝Jack chuckled. Charlie was Aaron´s favorite teddy bear, the one he never parted from. The boy had picked the name himself, and Jack often wondered if the boy maybe somehow remembered something, though he knew it wasn’t scientifically possible. The again, he wasn’t exactly 100-percently the man of science anymore. Getting to share his life with Kate, to hear her say his name in ecstasy as they made love and to wake up next to her every morning…there had to be something more in it. Whether he called it luck or heaven or fate, it didn’t matter, but it definitely didn’t have to do anything with science. ˝That´s light, op´n it…Dood boy. ˝Jack smiled again. Aaron´d always been good in self-pacifying. He´d never been one of those kids who would start their day with screaming their lungs out until someone picked them up. No. Aaron would just sit quietly in his little bed and play with his toys, until either Kate or Jack came to wish him good morning.

Jack turned off the baby monitor and turned his attention back to Kate.

˝Kate…Kate, wake up. ˝he said quietly, tracing his fingers across her bare shoulder.

She stirred and mumbled something; then went silent again.

˝Kate…baby, you gotta wake up. ˝he whispered silently, nudging her gently with his chin.

She stirred again, this time raising her head a bit, her eyes still groggy from sleep. ˝What´s wrong? Aaron? ˝she asked, suddenly on alert, her motherly instincts immediately kicking in.

˝Aaron´s fine. ˝Jack hurried, assuring her. ˝He´s trying to get ´Chal´lie´ into opening his mouth so that he could check him. ˝he explained and they both laughed. Ever since Jack´d got back, Aaron had been obsessed with him, pretending to be a doctor and begging Jack and Kate to play his patients. ˝It´s you. ˝Jack said. Kate looked up, confused. ˝You´re burning up. ˝he explained.

Kate frowned, opening her eyes a bit more. ˝You sure? ˝she asked him pleadingly.

Jack put his palm on her forehead once again. ˝Yep, I´m sure. ˝he said, matter-o-factly.

˝Damn! ´Kate sighed, burying her head into his chest again.

˝Heeey, brighten up – not everything´s that black. ˝Jack said, moving her gently back on the bed so that he could sit up.

˝It´s not? ˝Kate asked, still in sulky mood. She hated being sick.

˝No, it isn’t. For one thing…˝he started, pulling on his jeans. ˝you get to take a nice, long shower as your hubby makes something for breakfast. Second, you get to lie around and snuggle to that adorable little boy, while I go around the house, cleaning up after you two and doing all the housework. ˝he continued, putting on the T-shirt. ˝And third…you get to pick up the TV channel for the whole day. ˝he finished, giving her a quick peck.

Kate smiled, turning on her back and stretching her arms. ˝Mmmmmm…that doesn’t sound bad at all. ˝

˝See? ˝Jack agreed, leaning above her for a final kiss. He pressed his lips gently on hers, slowly nibbling on her lower lip, teasing her, until he felt her lips stretching into grin. She wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him a little bit more closer and kissing him gently, before pulling away. ˝Thank you.˝

~ Couple of minutes later ~

˝Hey, buddy. ˝ Jack said as he entered the children’s room.

Aaron was sitting in his bed, surrounded by numerous plush toys. His face immediately lightened up at the sound of Jack´s voice. ˝Hey, Daddy. ˝

Jack approached the bed, accepting the touch of two little arms lifted to hug him. ˝Are you feeling better? ˝he asked, checking his forehead. He was still warm, but the temperature fortunately wasn’t the one to be worried about.

˝Yeah. ˝Aaron replied, playing with Jack´s earlobe. ˝But…Chal´lie´s not feelin´ dood. ˝he said, making a sad face.

˝He´s not, huh? ˝Jack asked, taking the teddy from Aaron. ˝Hmmm….Okay, Charlie…can you tell me what hurts? ˝he said, changing his voice to match one from cartoons. ˝Can you repeat that, I didn’t hear you? ˝he asked, bringing the toy to his ear and pretending to listen to him. ˝Oh, I see…your head is hurting. Hmmm…I might know what could help. How about…a big portion of double-chocolate pancakes for breakfast? What do you say, Charlie? ˝Jack asked, turning the teddy to face him, but it was Aaron who replied – Yeeeeeeeey!, waving excitedly with his little hands. Jack laughed. ˝Ok, buddy. I´m going to make some pancakes now, and you go up and kiss Mummy good morning, ok? ˝ Aaron nodded excitedly. ˝And now give me a big nice smooch. ˝Jack said, and the boy threw his arms around his neck, pulling him closer and kissing him tightly.

Aaron pulled away, smiling. ˝Daddy hot too. ˝he said, caressing Jack´s cheek with his little hand. Jack frowned. He brought his hand to his forehead and almost let out a loud ´Damn!´, but remembered in the last moment that he wasn’t allowed to curse in front of the boy. Instead, he scooped the boy up, took Charlie and the little blue blanket in the other hand and left the room, closing the door behind him.

˝Uhm…Kate? ˝he said as he entered their room, with Aaron on his hip.

˝Yeah? ˝she asked, drying her hair with a towel. She was wearing one of Jack´s shirts and her eyes were still foggy from the sickness.

˝Remember how I talked about cleaning up and doing the housework all day? ˝he asked sheepishly.

˝Yeah? ˝

˝Well…apparently - not going to happen. ˝he said, handing her the thermometer.

Kate looked down at it, confused. It pointed 38°C. ˝You´ve got to be kidding me. ˝she said, chuckling. ˝You too? ˝

˝Yep. ˝Jack said, the idea not amusing to him at all. ˝I guess the immunity in this family isn’t the highest value. ˝he said, rolling his eyes.

~ An hour later… ~

The camera pans to reveal Jack and Kate sitting on the couch, looking groggily; her head resting on his shoulder and his arm thrown around her. Aaron is sitting in between them, curled up into his little blanket, one hand playing with the hem of Jack´s shirt; the other lifted up in the air, playing with Kate´s curls. On the TV screen, Anya and Dimitri are finishing their song, as the family trio slowly drifts to sleep. I´ll be there when the world stops turning/ I´ll be there when the storm is through/ In the end I wanna be standing/ At the beginning with you…
__

p.s. I´ve never been good in the whole °C/F´s converting:o, so...for all of you who use F´s scale - deal with me, ´cause I love our good old °C´s scale. :p Oh and...ignore the grammar mistakes - as I said, it´s been a while since I´d written anything in english :o Oh and, the song is from Disney´s Anastasia. :love:

~Karollini~
06-07-2008, 08:02 AM
Nadia- It was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I love Soya in this dyojs. " How long have you been in love? " :thud::thud::thud::yourock: :giggle:. And Kate put her ring on :boogie::nod::coolguy:

livin_4_foxy
06-07-2008, 08:14 AM
ok guys HELP! :giggle::giggle: THERE WAS A DYOJS...by Lostbeth... I wanna say maybe not...but it was about right BEFORE the rescue and Kate went to see jack and he showed her his scar from their first meeting and kate kissed it and said whenever you thin of this scar ill be there..soemthing like that... lol anyone know what I am talking about... I wanna find that dyojs! :giggle::giggle:

Kayla so cute! loved it!

Its in the jex thread :nod:

Nadia guh :thud: that was just :love: amazing. I hope something like that happens actually, that jack could come to terms with himself. :)

ITA nadia brilliant:clap:

Marina- that was adorablleeee:love::)

MissGiggles
06-07-2008, 08:26 AM
Thanks BlueDream:D

trivia
06-07-2008, 09:54 AM
Hey hun! :hug2:

I'm here! :boogie:

:w00t: You finally posted a Dyojs again! I missed those a lot! And your dreams about a jamily are (almost) coming true! :giggle:

I was also wondering if you are going to continue with the Paris fic?! :eyes:

It was hot. Unusually hot. He slowly opened his eyes, bringing his arm to cover his face to shield them from the sudden rush of light. He blinked a couple of times and then looked down, his lips stretching into a loving smile as he saw Kate lying there, upper part of her body spread across his chest. It was her favorite sleeping position: no matter how she fell asleep, she´d always finish using him as a pillow. Not that he minded, of course.

ehhh.... aren't they always?! :D

˝Com´on, Chal´lie, op´n youl mouth, I haft to see if you´ll fick. ˝Jack chuckled. Charlie was Aaron´s favorite teddy bear, the one he never parted from. :giggle: ahhh... that's sweet

His face immediately lightened up at the sound of Jack´s voice. ˝Hey, Daddy. ˝

So he's daddy now too! I love that! Altough I think Charlie was a great dad too! :bawl:

˝But…Chal´lie´s not feelin´ dood. ˝he said, making a sad face.


'dood' is the Dutch word for dead. :o:giggle:
So I was thinking that Aaron was going to say: "i see dead people"
(Yeah, sorry, the Sixth sense was on Dutch tv last night:giggle:)

How about…a big portion of double-chocolate pancakes for breakfast? What do you say, Charlie? ˝Jack asked, turning the teddy to face him, but it was Aaron who replied – Yeeeeeeeey!,
That's so cute! :love:
Jack can wake me up in the middle of the night for chocolate pancakes too! :p

˝Remember how I talked about cleaning up and doing the housework all day? ˝he asked sheepishly.

˝Yeah? ˝

˝Well…apparently - not going to happen. ˝he said, handing her the thermometer.

:rotflol: That guy is very lucky!

That was great sweetie!!

Truefate21
06-07-2008, 11:39 AM
MARINA awwwwwww!! :love: :love:

The camera pans to reveal Jack and Kate sitting on the couch, looking groggily; her head resting on his shoulder and his arm thrown around her. Aaron is sitting in between them, curled up into his little blanket, one hand playing with the hem of Jack´s shirt; the other lifted up in the air, playing with Kate´s curls. On the TV screen, Anya and Dimitri are finishing their song, as the family trio slowly drifts to sleep. I´ll be there when the world stops turning/ I´ll be there when the storm is through/ In the end I wanna be standing/ At the beginning with you…

AWWWWWWW!! I SO WISH THIS WOULD HAPPEN! Its so simple yet so so so perfect :cloud9: :cloud9:

BlueDream
06-08-2008, 08:45 AM
Me again :shy: :giggle:

I know that I only posted like…yesterday (thank you for the nice comments, btw :glomp:), but I´ve had this idea for a while now and I´ve been keeping it for this particular date. As most of you know, Euro 2008 has started yesterday and this one will be different than my usual dyojses, because it will be centered on – football. :p Originally, I planned to do it about American football, but, it turned out that, no matter how many movies about it I watched (We are Marshall didn’t help either :sigh:), I just…don’t get that sport. :o So I decided to go with the good old ´normal´ football. :love:

This dyojs is dedicated to all European Jaters here (except the ones whose countries play against mine :shifty: Kidding, of course :p ) :grouphug: My team is playing this afternoon, so… wish us luck! :hyper:

Football Fever http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o296/nikond2h/clip%20art/soccersmile.gif


Team A:

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r150/BlueDream_03/carolines/Image3-2.png

Team B:

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r150/BlueDream_03/carolines/Image2-2.png

Referee: Sayid



Kate wakes up, stretching her arms, small yawn escaping her lips. She rubs her eyes, her gaze wandering towards the little opening in the fabric of the tent that served as a window. The sun was slowly starting to ease, indicating that it was middle afternoon, probably around 4 or 5 pm. Kate´s eyebrows frown. She has never been the type of person to oversleep till late in the afternoon, but they stayed up late last night and the combination of partying and drinking a couple cans of beer apparently knocked her down. She hears the sound of Jack laughing outside and, quickly throwing a T-shirt over her head, leaves the tent; but her face immediately falls down as she sees in whose company he is.

Jack (noticing her): Hey.
Kate (smiling, her eyes all on him; completely ignoring Juliet standing by his side): Hey, yourself. *catching up with him* So…where are you going?
Jack: Oh, just down the hill…
Juliet (joining the conversation to Kate´s obvious dislike): Yeah, we´re going to play football a bit.

Kate looks her up and down, as if asking who the hell asked her anything; then turns towards Jack again, folding her arms.

Kate: We?
Jack (oblivious at her furor at first): Yeah, me and Juliet…*noticing the vain on her forehead starting to pulsate*…a-and a bunch of other guys, of-of course.

Kate puts her hands down, the fact calming her down a bit.

Kate: I see… Just one more thing: why did no one ask me to join?
Jack (uncomfortable): Uhm…
Juliet (finishing): Because everyone thought you didn’t like football.
Kate (turning to face her for the first time): Oh, really? And why would you think that?
Juliet (smug): Because you said it yourself.
Kate (fuming): Oh, yeah?! And when exactly did I say that?!
Juliet (immediately): Last night, during the Truth & Dare game.

Kate opens her mouth to say something, but closes them as the flash of the last night comes into her memory.

Juliet (still smug): If I remember correctly, it was something about how it was a stupid game, with nothing but 22 stupid men and 1 stupid ball, running and chasing each other to please even greater bunch of stupid fans.

Kate (blushing a bit, but determined not to let Juliet win): No, I don’t think I said that.
Juliet: Well, you did.
Kate (stepping closer): No, I didn’t.
Hurley (taking a step forward): Actually, Kate, I clearly remember you…

Kate glares at him, her eyes narrowing

Hurley (taking a quick step backwards): …n-not saying it.
Juliet: Well, it doesn’t matter anyway, ´cause we already have complete number of players on both sides, so…there´s no place for you.

Juliet looks at Kate, smug; Kate glares at her, fuming; Jack is standing next to them, looking awkward.

*from the background*

Rose (approaching the group with Bernard following close): Actually, there is one free place. *they all turn towards her* You see, Bernard here hurt his leg, so he wont be able to play.
Bernard (confused, to Rose): I…I didn’t hurt my…
Rose (cutting him off, her voice threatening): You will if you don’t play along.
Bernard (straightening up): Oh, yeah, yeah, I…I tripped over a branch.
Jack (stepping out) You okay? Do you want me to check it, see if it´s broken?
Bernard: Oh, no, no, it´s…it´s fine, it´s just…
Rose (firm): …nothing a bit of ice couldn’t fix.
Jack: Okay then. *he turns to Kate, big smile across his face* I guess you´re in.

He smiles to her; she smiles back.

Jack: We´re meeting down the hill, in the old golf field, for around an hour and a half. Okay?
Kate: Okay. Anything else?
Jack: Oh yeah. We already divided the roles and…uhm…I was supposed to be covering Bernard, but, seeing that he wont play now, I guess I´ll be covering you.

Kate smiles, unable to hold back the grin. The sight of Juliet fuming next to her only makes it bigger.

Kate: Okay. See you soon then.
Jack (leaving): Yeah, see you.

Other Losties start leaving too; Kate waits until they´re far away; then approaches Charlie and Hurley, who are standing a couple of meters behind the rest of the group.

Kate (throwing her arms around their shoulders; happily): Soooo, guys…what can you tell me about football? :D

............................

*half an hour later*

Kate (delighted): So, basically…you´re telling me that all I have to do is run around the field a bit, while Jack is there around me constantly AND I get to knock the witch down if the opportunity presents?

Hurley: Uhm, Kate…you´re forgetting the most important part.
Kate (her eyebrows frowning in confusion): I am? Which one?
Charlie: To actually score a goal.
Kate (indifferent): Oh, that.
Charlie&Hurley (burying their heads in hands): Women.

__________

The game is in the fool speed; Jin is dribbling the ball, he moves past Boone, passes it to Sun, who shoots aaaaaaand – scooooores! 1:0. Team A cheers.

Charlie (screaming): Goooo, England!!!
Redshirt (stops, confused): Who said we were England? :confused:

But the luck changes quickly, now it´s Kate the one in offense, she´s rushing towards the goalpost; suddenly, Jack blocks her way, thwarting her every move; she´s slowly getting frustrated, deciding to go with another tactic: she dimples him, Jack gets lost in her smile, she passes around him easily, scores; Hurley mutters his Dude-s, shaking his head; Jack looks stunned, wondering what the hell happened, Kate just looks back and smiles at him.

40 minutes into the game and we have corner assigned to Team A. Charlie goes into the position, he shoots, but Desmond´s ready at the goal post, cradling the ball safely in his arms.

Hurley (from the other side of the field): Not fair! *to Sayid* How can they have psychic on their side?! Isnt that supposed to be against rules or something?

Desmond kicks the ball far in front, but Juliet blocks it; she passes it to Claire, who gives it to Sun; Sun passes it to Jin, Jin shoots, but Boone sends it out of the field. Another corner for Team A. Only 4 minutes left till the end of the first half.

This time it seems that Jack is going to be the one to try his luck. Team A players cheer for their captain as he approaches the position. He places the ball on the ground, adjusts it; he looks up at where Kate´s standing; he remembers how she conned him, he decides he wouldn’t let her this time; he concentrates hard, kicking the ball aaaaand – gooooaaaal!!!

He starts running across the field, celebrating his score. Juliet jumps in his lap, hugging him - two minutes later, Kate knocks her on the ground, her face finishing in the muddy pool. Charlie woots, grinning; Losties look at him.

Charlie (realizing he´s in the opposite team): Uhm...I meant – bad, bad Kate. :no:

Juliet gets up, fuming, demanding faul, but Sayid ignores it, calling the end of the first half instead. Kate smiles at him, grateful. She passes next to Ana Lucia, who gives her thumbs up. Kate looks at her, in wonder.

Ana Lucia (whispering): I could never stand that woman.

Kate laughs, happy. This game wasnt that bad after all.
______________________

~ Second half ~


The players are returning on the field. Charlie and Hurley are encouraging Jack to stay tough on Kate´s advances...

Hurley: Yeah, you can do it, just ignore her, close your ey...wait, dude...no, definitely dont close your eyes.
Charlie: You´re a man, you can do it, mate.
Jack (determinately): Yeah! I can do it! YEAH!

15 minutes into the game and Kate is in occasion again; but Jack isnt letting her; constantly blocking her; they´re on the right edge of the field, their bodies almost pressed against each other, Jack grins smugly, happy that he´s managing in preventing her; she frowns, having had enough of his smug smile. She decides to play the female card again.

Kate (placing her hand on his biceps and giving it a little squeeze): Wow, Jack, have you been working out?

Jack´s mouth fall open, Kate passes him easily, scores! 2:2.

Sawyer (highfiving her): Well done, Freckles!

Charlie (on the other side): Oh, come on, mate!
Hurley (to Sayid): Come on, it should´ve been a faul!
Sayid (calmly): What for?
Hurley: S-seduction or something.:shifty:

Sayid laughs, tapping him on the shoulders.

The game continues; the ball´s at Sawyer, he passes it to Michael, who tries to lead it, but Jack suddenly skates in, knocking him down hard. Michael falls on the ground, cursing slightly; Jack bends down.

Jack (in low voice, so that only Michael can hear him): This is for interrupting Kate and me.

He gets up, running to take his position as the opposite team prepares to do a penalty kick. Michael stays on the ground, confused. Sawyer shoots the ball, but, by some miracle, Hurley manages to save it.

Sawyer: Son of a bitch!

Team B starts withdrawing as Hurley kicks the ball in the field. Juliet catches it and she tries to advance forward, but Shannon stops her, kicking the ball to Sawyer, who passes it to Kate. She´s about to kick it, but Jack lunches himself on the ball, picking Kate with it too. As they fly towards the ground, he quickly turns them around so that his back take the thump, and the next second, they’re both of the ground, breathing hard.

Jack: You okay?
Kate (lying on top of him): Y-yeah, you?
Jack: Yeah.

Suddenly, they both become aware of their position. Kate blushes.

Jack (grinning): Brings out… nice memories, huh?

Kate starts laughing, burying her head in his chest. Jack is laughing too. The two are interrupted as Juliet storms in.

Juliet: Jack, come on, you should come into the defense wall, they´re having a corner.

Jack (reaching up to remove a curl that was dangling from Kate´s face; his attention only on her): Actually, I think… you guys should continue without us…*his eyes locked on Kate´s, his breathing ragged* right, Kate?
Kate (staring at him, breathing heavily, but this time not from the fall): Yeah, we´re… *they start leaning towards each other*…we´re quite…*they lean some more, their nose almost touching*…comfortable here.

And the next moment they´re already kissing, his hand moving up and down her back while she holds his face between her hands, the whole world mattering nothing to them in that moment in time. The Losties start to cheer, Charlie jumps up on Hurley, hugging him tight; Sawyer takes the $10 from Shannon, with a mocking: Told you so. while Sayid kicks the ball out of the field, calling the end of the game, because everyone are more interested in what is going on between Jack and Kate than in the game. Juliet marches off, fuming.

The End
________

GOOOOOOOOO, CROOOAAAATIA!!!! :hyper: http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t316/wistfulvista/icons/smiley_party.gif :w00t: :boogie: :banana: http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l109/anniecatt/special%20days/thcheerleaderdone.gif

trivia
06-08-2008, 09:12 AM
This dyojs is dedicated to all European Jaters here (except the ones whose countries play against mine :shifty: Kidding, of course :p ) :grouphug: My team is playing this afternoon, so… wish us luck! :hyper:
:giggle: See ya in the finale, hun! :p



Team A:

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r150/BlueDream_03/carolines/Image3-2.png

OMG! The red shirt!
:giggle:

Team B:

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r150/BlueDream_03/carolines/Image2-2.png


Kate looks her up and down, as if asking who the hell asked her anything; then turns towards Jack again, folding her arms.
:giggle: This is going to be nice!


Kate (blushing a bit, but determined not to let Juliet win): No, I don’t think I said that.
Juliet: Well, you did.
Kate (stepping closer): No, I didn’t.
Hurley (taking a step forward): Actually, Kate, I clearly remember you…

Kate glares at him, her eyes narrowing

Hurley (taking a quick step backwards): …n-not saying it.

:crackup::crackup:

Rose (approaching the group with Bernard following close): Actually, there is one free place. *they all turn towards her* You see, Bernard here hurt his leg, so he wont be able to play.
Bernard (confused, to Rose): I…I didn’t hurt my…
Rose (cutting him off, her voice threatening): You will if you don’t play along.


:p I love Rose! Jater big time! And to be honest: I think Kate would be way better than Bernard....;)


Jack (stepping out) You okay? Do you want me to check it, see if it´s broken?
Bernard: Oh, no, no, it´s…it´s fine, it´s just…
Rose (firm): …nothing a bit of ice couldn’t fix.
Jack: Okay then. *he turns to Kate, big smile across his face* I guess you´re in.

:w00t:

Jack: Oh yeah. We already divided the roles and…uhm…I was supposed to be covering Bernard, but, seeing that he wont play now, I guess I´ll be covering you.
Covering you....:rolleyes: :angel:
I totally had some other images here than football...

Kate (throwing her arms around their shoulders; happily): Soooo, guys…what can you tell me about football? :D
:crackup::crackup::crackup::crackup::rotflol:
Best line ever! I can see that happen!

Kate (delighted): So, basically…you´re telling me that all I have to do is run around the field a bit, while Jack is there around me constantly AND I get to knock the witch down if the opportunity presents?
Who said football can't be fun?!:p

Hurley: Uhm, Kate…you´re forgetting the most important part.
Kate (her eyebrows frowning in confusion): I am? Which one?
Charlie: To actually score a goal.
Kate (indifferent): Oh, that.
Charlie&Hurley (burying their heads in hands): Women.
:rotflol:

Charlie (screaming): Goooo, England!!!
Redshirt (stops, confused): Who said we were England? :confused:
This is soooooo funny! :crackup:

But the luck changes quickly, now it´s Kate the one in offense, she´s rushing towards the goalpost; suddenly, Jack blocks her way, thwarting her every move; she´s slowly getting frustrated, deciding to go with another tactic: she dimples him, Jack gets lost in her smile, she passes around him easily, scores; Hurley mutters his Dude-s, shaking his head; Jack looks stunned, wondering what the hell happened, Kate just looks back and smiles at him.

:giggle: good tactic!

Hurley (from the other side of the field): Not fair! *to Sayid* How can they have psychic on their side?! Isnt that supposed to be against rules or something?
:nod: I gree with Hurley!

He starts running across the field, celebrating his score. Juliet jumps in his lap, hugging him - two minutes later, Kate knocks her on the ground, her face finishing in the muddy pool. Charlie woots, grinning; Losties look at him.

Charlie (realizing he´s in the opposite team): Uhm...I meant – bad, bad Kate. :no:
Oh Charlie! :bawl:
I remember that scene with Charlie and Hurley boogie dance with thewir golf clubs :giggle:


Charlie (on the other side): Oh, come on, mate!
Hurley (to Sayid): Come on, it should´ve been a faul!
Sayid (calmly): What for?
Hurley: S-seduction or something.:shifty:
:giggle:

The game continues; the ball´s at Sawyer, he passes it to Michael, who tries to lead it, but Jack suddenly skates in, knocking him down hard. Michael falls on the ground, cursing slightly; Jack bends down.

Jack (in low voice, so that only Michael can hear him): This is for interrupting Kate and me.
Finally! :boogie:

Jack: You okay?
Kate (lying on top of him): Y-yeah, you?
Jack: Yeah.

Suddenly, they both become aware of their position. Kate blushes.

Jack (grinning): Brings out… nice memories, huh?
It totally does! :D

And the next moment they´re already kissing, his hand moving up and down her back while she holds his face between her hands, the whole world mattering nothing to them in that moment in time. The Losties start to cheer, Charlie jumps up on Hurley, hugging him tight; Sawyer takes the $10 from Shannon, with a mocking: Told you so. while Sayid kicks the ball out of the field, calling the end of the game, because everyone are more interested in what is going on between Jack and Kate than in the game. Juliet marches off, fuming.
great ending!

One of the most funny Dyojs I've read lately!

GOOOOOOOOO, CROOOAAAATIA!!!! :hyper: http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t316/wistfulvista/icons/smiley_party.gif :w00t: :boogie: :banana: http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l109/anniecatt/special%20days/thcheerleaderdone.gif

[/QUOTE]

*joins Marina in boogie dance with face painted red/blue*

livin_4_foxy
06-08-2008, 09:28 AM
MARINAAA! -
thats exactly what i needed im in the EURO 2008 fever mode too:w00t::boogie:
that was one of my favorite dyojses ever I LOVED the fluff:love: seriously you did it perfectly:smooch:

Everything rachel quoted i agree with:p also i looooved the ending:thud: and "Jack (in low voice, so that only Michael can hear him): This is for interrupting Kate and me." FINALLLLLLLLLY!:beatup:

more? swimming perhaps;)?

Anyone?

Ella.
06-08-2008, 11:11 AM
Marina :faint: it was great, so cute. I loved it.:love:. I agree ^ please write more, swimming one would be good. jate in the sea, with very little on :thud:
Good luck for the game, im happy England arent in it :nod:, they would only embarass themselves. Couldn't even qualify *ashamed to be English* :rolleyes:

Truefate21
06-08-2008, 11:21 AM
MARINA that was the most ADORABLE THING EVER!!!

WHOOO!!! YEAHH baby :letsparty: :hyper: Oh I loved that soooo freaking cute!!!

Arctic Fox
06-08-2008, 11:39 AM
Charlie (on the other side): Oh, come on, mate!
Hurley (to Sayid): Come on, it should´ve been a faul!
Sayid (calmly): What for?
Hurley: S-seduction or something.:shifty:


:rotflol:

Loved this dyojs! :D Football and Lost are like my favourite things ever, so it was great to see them combined! :D

Mevie fan
06-08-2008, 02:22 PM
Marina :crackup: This was awesome :crackup: :crackup: aww..I miss those kind of dyojss..with everyone alivee...soo cheerful :love: :love:
btw. Congratulations for winning! :glomp:
now We are laying :shifty: We're loosing 1:0 to germany right now..I wonder how will it end :shifty:

~Karollini~
06-08-2008, 02:28 PM
Maaaaaaaaaarina, it was sooooooooooooooo gooooooood! :w00t: The best player- red shirt ofc :giggle::cloud9::yourock:

Charlie (on the other side): Oh, come on, mate!
Hurley (to Sayid): Come on, it should´ve been a faul!
Sayid (calmly): What for?
Hurley: S-seduction or something.
Yea, seduction :crackup:

Jack (reaching up to remove a curl that was dangling from Kate´s face; his attention only on her): Actually, I think… you guys cshould continue without us…*his eyes locked on Kate´s, his breathing ragged* right, Kate?
Kate (staring at him, breathing heavily, but this time not from the fall): Yeah, we´re… *they start leaning towards each other*…we´re quite…*they lean some more, their nose almost touching*…comfortable here.

And the next moment they´re already kissing, his hand moving up and down her back while she holds his face between her hands, the whole world mattering nothing to them in that moment in time. The Losties start to cheer, Charlie jumps up on Hurley, hugging him tight; Sawyer takes the $10 from Shannon, with a mocking: Told you so. while Sayid kicks the ball out of the field, calling the end of the game, because everyone are more interested in what is going on between Jack and Kate than in the game. Juliet marches off, fuming.
Kissssssssssssssssssssssssss, kisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss :w00t: It was sooooooooooooooooooooo cute, and that " We' re quite confortable here " :thud::thud::thud::thud: And Sawyer- " Told you so " sooo good :rotflol:

And I am wondering how it will end too :shifty:

Mevie fan
06-08-2008, 03:39 PM
Nevermind..we lost 2:0 :(

eww..screw the football :P
I've just read Flu Family :love: and I have to tell you it's awesome :love: soo :giggle: cute!
I get it as if it was AFTER TTLG and TNPLH ? :D
aww <333 cuteness :love:

BlueDream
06-11-2008, 01:34 PM
Just thought I should throw in a couple of thank-you-s, seeing how supporting you all have been :glomp:

Rach, tnx so much for both of the reviews :hug2: I knew you´d catch the ´Unusually hot´ hint. :rotflol: As I said, Jater minds think alike :high5: As for the ´covering you´ line - bad, bad girl :no: I didnt even think of that until you mentioned it. :giggle: And yeah, I will continue the Paris fic, once the whole college thing settles down. ;)

Nadia, tnx for both comments too :glomp: :smooch: And yeah, I wish we could see more of Jate family moments.:( I mean, Jack reading him story was cute :love: , but...I need more :crazy: :bawl:

Yazzi, glad you liked it :hug: As for that hitting Michael part - that was more my subconscious than Jack´s - I needed that punch :o :giggle:

Ella. - tnx so much for the review :smooch: And tnx for the nice words - I´m sorry you guys didnt make it on Euro, but I´m glad that my team won. :shy: It would definitely be more exciting if you guys were on it too :(

Manda, glad you liked it :hug: And as for combining Lost and football, well...let´s just say I have another one in mind soon :eyebrows:

Gosia & ~Karollini~, sorry that you guys lost :( :hug: Tnx for the comments, though :smooch: Oh and, yeah, I also miss the ones with everyone still alive :love:


Oh and...because you guys have been so amazing (:grouphug:) , I decided to go with the swimming one. ;) I already wrote it, but I´m gonna wait till tomorrow to post it – I posted the football one on Sunday – and Croatia won:w00t:; so I figured – I could post this one tomorrow and, who knows, maybe it´ll bring us luck? :please: If it works tomorrow, I might even consider doing one for every Croatia game…though don’t take that 100%-ly sure, because it might be hard to do one every 4 days or so. :shifty:

BlueDream
06-12-2008, 10:04 AM
Sorry for the double posting :o :eyes:

I would wait a bit more, but I wont be able to stay much longer on my PC, and I want this be posted before the beginning of our game, so....

It´s dedicated to Yazzi and all you girls who wanted the swimming one. :grouphug: (although there isnt too much of ´swimming´ included :giggle: ) The song is Let´s make love by Faith Hill. ;)


The Pool of Fun and Romance


http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r150/BlueDream_03/Image3-2.png




˝Ssssssh....we´re almost there...just a bit more....˝ Jack whispered, slowly sneaking behind the edge of the pool, with Aaron in his arms. The boy was glowing, desperately trying to hold the giggles; tightly clutching a bright, multi-colored water gun that Jack and Kate had bought him for his 3rd birthday. ˝Okay, you ready? ˝Jack asked quietly as they approached the part of the terrain where Kate was lying, on her stomach, eyes closed, hair smoothly moved on the side so that she could catch tan on the back side of her neck too.

The boy nodded excitedly, pressing the gun more tightly to his chest.

˝Fiiiiiiire!˝ Jack shouted and the water flew from the gun, soaking Kate as she woke up, startled; but irritation quickly turning into laughter as she listened to Aaron´s giggles.

˝You little…˝she said as she got up on her feet; then reached for Aaron; but Jack was quicker – stepping aside, smooching the boy quickly and then putting him on the floor, with a quick: ˝Run, save yourself! ˝And the next second, Aaron was already running, his little feet tapping loudly on the pavement; with Kate chasing after him, both of them laughing.

Finally, she caught up with him, lifting him from behind and carrying him on the nearby beach lounge; laying him down and starting to tickle him; the sound of the boy´s giggles echoing in the bright summer´s afternoon.

˝Mummy, stop! Mummy, stooooop! ˝Aaron yelled, his body shaking from laughter. ˝Daddy maked me do it. ˝he squeeled and Kate straightened him up, sitting him on her lap. ¨

˝Daddy made you do it, huh? ˝she asked, glaring at Jack who smiled sheepishly.

˝Tnx, buddy. ˝

The boy, who still didn’t understand the concept of sarcasm, politely replied: ˝It was my pleasule. ˝

Jack and Kate looked at each other and laughed. ˝Okay, buddy, it´s time for a little nap. ˝Kate said, placing him on her hip and getting up.

˝Do you want me to put him to sleep? ˝Jack asked, knowing that she needed all the rest she could get.

˝No, it´s okay, I´ll do it. ˝Kate replied, leaning down and giving him a quick peck. Jack nodded and smiled, knowing that she loved those peaceful moments when she got to snuggle up next to the boy.

˝See you soon. ˝Kate said, winking at him and then turning all her attention on the boy again, giggling with him as they walked towards the house.

…………………

It´d been an hour and a half since Kate had left and Jack figured she probably fell asleep together with the boy, so he decided to be useful in the meantime. He washed the dishes; made some sandwiches and mixed a couple of margaritas and then went back on the terrace. The sun was slowly starting to go down; giving beautiful golden reflection that flickered on the surface of the water. He placed the plate with sandwiches and margaritas on the ground next to the pool; then went to lit up some torches, to give the space even more romantic touch. Satisfied, he looked around; and decided to take a couple of swims. He jumped in, letting a sigh of relief as the cool water encircled his body. He managed to make a couple of rounds before he heard footsteps coming from the house. He straightened up, watching her as she approached him. She was beautiful. Her hair was a bit messy; curls reaching down below her shoulders; her eyes still a bit groggy. He smiled. She did fall asleep with the boy after all.

˝Did you have a nice sleep? ˝he teased, smiling.

Kate blushed a bit. ˝Yeah. It took me a while to get him to sleep, because he wanted me to read him Peter Pan twice; and by the time Peter and Wendy got to Captain Cook the second time, I was already dozing off myself. ˝

Jack gave her an affectionate smile and tapped his hand on the edge of the pool, inviting her to sit down. She smiled and placed herself down, her legs dangling from the edge of the pool. He leaned forward, pressing his forehead against hers.

˝Hey. ˝he said softly, his lips gently covering hers in a sweet, affectionate kiss.

˝Hey. ˝she replied back, her fingers lightly caressing her cheek.

They both had their eyes closed, enjoying peace and quiet for a while.

Jack´s hands moved to her stomach. ˝Hey to you too, little one. ˝he said as he placed a gentle kiss there. ˝I know I didn’t talk to you at all today, but I want you to know that Daddy´s always thinking about you, ok? ˝he whispered and kissed Kate´s belly again, making her giggle because the light stubble was giving her tickling sensations. ˝Mummy can laugh as much as she wants…˝ Jack said, looking up at Kate and giving her a small smile. ˝…but I know that you hear me down there, right, sweetie? ˝

Kate laughed and pulled him up into another kiss. She spread her legs and he moved in closer, his hands wrapping around the back of her waist as hers rested around the base of his neck. They kissed slowly at first, tasting, enjoying each other, savoring each moment as if it was the last one. Without breaking the contact, he detached his hands from her waist, wetting them and then bringing them back on her body, gently spreading the water across her arms, working on making her body get used to the temperature of the pool. She wrapped her legs around his waist and he pulled her down in the pool, his body supporting hers as she shivered a bit. He continued to kiss her, his arms gently going up and down her back, trying to warm her up with a friction. Their kisses slowly turned from slow to passionate, both of them having their eyes closed, moving gently in the circle as the song continued to echo in the darkness of the evening.

˝Love me, Jack. ˝Kate moaned quietly in his mouth, her fingers moving up and down his neck.

˝I plan to, baby, I plan to…all night long. ˝Jack whispered hoarsely, gently sucking on her neck become moving his attention back to her lips again.

And so they kissed, again and again, as the evening turned into night... I want to feel you in my soul/ Until the sun comes up/ Let's make love….

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Too much fluff, huh? :shy: I should probably try with some angst the next time. :p But I cant help myself - SNBH turned me into a fluff-addict even more :sigh: :love:

Anyway..... wish us luck in the game. Goooooooooo, Croatia! :w00t: :boogie:

MissGiggles
06-12-2008, 11:14 AM
Ok so their is a song that i can see it the scene in my head so im gonna use the lyrics for this....:p

After Kate & Jacks fight Jack drives around till he see's the light of a little bar, so he pulled up

Their was no one there but the old barkeeper at the end and he looked half asleep.

He walked up and asked what will it be..Jack said "the good stuff"

He didn't reach around for the whiskey , he didn't poor Jack a beer,he's blue went misty and he said "you can find that here"

Jack just looked at the barkeeper confused

He told Jack it's the first long kiss on a second date It's droppin' the ring in the spagetti plate,Cause your hands are shakin' so much.
And it's the way she looks with the rice in her hair.
Eating burnt suppers the whole first year & askin' for seconds to keep her from tearin' up.
Yeah, man, that's The Good Stuff.

Then the barkeeper grabbed a carton of milk and poured a glass , Jack smiled and said i'll have some that:)

They sat there and talk for hours like old friends

Jack saw a black and white picture, it was a pretty girl with bouffant hair.

The man said "That's my Bonnie" taking about a year after we had wed.

He told Jack he spent 5 years in the bottle when the cancer took her away
but hes been sober for 3 years now because the one thing stronger than the whiskey

.....Was the sight of her holdin my baby girl, The way she adored that string of pearls, I gave her the day that our youngest boy, Earl, Married his high school love.
And it's a new t-shirt saying, "I'm a Grandpa!"
Being right there as our time got small, &holding her hand when the good Lord called her up.
Yeah, man, that's the good stuff

Jack looked up at the man and smiled as he thought of Kate and Aaron

The man could tell Jack was thinking about his family so he put his hand on Jack's shoulder and said

When you get home, she'll start to cry.
When she says 'I'm sorry' say 'So am I' &look into those eyes so deep in love,
And drink it up.
Because that's the good stuff.

Jack got up and walked out , got into his car and drove off as fast as he could to get home.

He ran up the driveway into the house....

Kate saw him and ran to him and jumped in his arms.....................

.................................................T O BE CONTINUED......................................... .

Truefate21
06-12-2008, 12:41 PM
very nice MissGiggles :)

Marina :thud: OMG A JABY....:thud: :love: SO CUTE!! so sexy wow.

Jack gave her an affectionate smiled and tapped his hand on the edge of the pool, inviting her to sit down. She smiled and placed herself down, her legs dangling from the edge of the pool. He leaned forward, pressing his forehead against hers.

:boom: loved it so simply so jate. HOPE YOUR TEAM WINS lol I loved this dyojs and thank you for more "stories" about a jamily!! :w00t::w00t:

livin_4_foxy
06-12-2008, 05:56 PM
Marina- awww:glomp: i loved it seriously! it was adorable amount of fluff:love:
aww and a jaby too! I was liek LITTLE ONE AW! :smooch: you right amazingly,

AussieLostie
06-14-2008, 01:20 AM
I love this thread :love:

BlueDream
06-15-2008, 11:32 PM
Tnx for the comments, guys :grouphug: you make me very, very happy :smooch:

As I promised...a third installment in the Dyojs-on-the-Croatian-game-day series:giggle: I´m posting it a bit early because I have an exam and dont know when I´ll be back home, so....:shrug: Oh and...I´m very proud of myself when it comes to this one - I managed to write something positive about jacket :shock: :bow: :p

It takes place after Jack´s surgery...

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˝I know that you´re awake. ˝

Jack opened his eyes and looked at the woman standing next to him. He met her eyes and suddenly felt guilty: guilty for deceiving her, for using her…for hurting her. ´Cause she was hurting, that much was obvious.

˝Juliet, I…I don’t know what to say, I…˝ he started, but she interrupted him, placing a hand on his chest.

˝You don’t have to say anything, Jack, it´s not your fault. I´ve known it since the beginning…known that you would never be able to love me as much as you love her. ˝she said and they both went silent for a moment. ˝That´s the fact. Everything else was just illusions…my illusions. ˝she finished, smiling sadly.

Jack looked at her. ˝I am sorry. ˝

Juliet smiled. ˝I know you are. I´m sorry too. ˝she said, placing the pills down on the improvised night stand. ˝I should go get some sleep. ˝she said, getting up. ˝Do you need anything else? ˝

˝I…˝ just started, but cut himself off, realizing it would be too much to ask from her. ˝It doesn’t matter. ˝he said quickly and looked away.

Juliet smiled. ˝I´m not that fragile, Jack. I´ve been through worse. ˝she said, and then added, letting him know that she understood what he wanted to ask her. ˝I´ll tell Kate you want to see her. ˝

Jack looked at her. ˝Thank you, Juliet. For everything. ˝

˝You´re welcome. See ya. ˝she said and left the tent.

………..

˝…and Kate…˝Juliet started and Kate turned around. ˝…don’t waste time anymore, you saw how deceptive it is. ˝she told her, and then walked away, leaving Kate to stand there, pensive.

………..

˝Knock, knock. ˝

˝Who is it? ˝Jack said, smiling.

˝It´s…˝ Kate started, peeking in through the tarp. ˝If I told you that I have never been good with these knock-knock jokes, would I still be allowed to go in? ˝

Jack chuckled; regretting it immediately because the pain shot through his body. Okay, no laughing. – he said to himself.

Kate entered the tent. ˝Hey. ˝she said shyly.

˝Hey. ˝Jack replied back. They both smiled.

˝How are you feeling? ˝Kate asked, approaching his bed and placing herself on one of the suitcases that served as chair.

˝Like I just had my appendix got out on a deserted island with barely any medical equipment whatsoever. ˝Jack chuckled.

Kate giggled. Jack looked at her, smiling too. He loved seeing her laugh. He loved just…seeing her too. Which reminded him on the reason why he wanted her here in the first place.

˝We need to talk, Kate. ˝he said, taking a deep breath. ˝And I think you know about what. ˝

Her head shot up. Their eyes met, but she quickly glanced away.

˝Jack, I don’t know what y…˝she started, but he cut her off:

˝I heard your talk with Juliet. ˝he said slowly; then, seeing the surprise on her face, explained: ˝I was awake. And I think there was more to your Thank you. than you just being grateful to her for saving my life. ˝

The silence fell across the tent. Jack waited for a couple of seconds for her to say something, but realized that it wouldn’t happen any time soon, so he took a deep breath and continued, telling himself that he had to be patient with her.

˝Kate…˝ he started, but she cut him off.

˝Jack, I´ve had a terrible night and I just can’t… I can’t….˝she struggled to find the right words.

˝Kate, just listen to me! ˝he said, his voice calm, but firm; and she stopped mumbling, finally bringing herself to look at him. ˝The rescue’s on its way. Chances are that in the next couple of days we´ll be home again. And when that happens, considering your…your situation. ˝he said delicately. ˝…it wont be…it wont be nice. ˝he whispered and she flinched.

Of course. How could she have forgotten it? Back…´home´, as Jack phrased it, she wasn’t Kate, she wasn’t someone´s friend or even…love. No. She was Katherine Austen, fugitive and criminal, number 961136.

He watched her expression changing from panicked to sad, and he continued, trying to make an eye contact, to let her know that he was there for her. ˝I don’t mean to flee away, Kate. I don’t mean to just turn away and return to my so-called perfect life. I plan to stay by, Kate. I plan to stand by you and fight, even if it took years. ˝he said and she finally looked up, their eyes locking. ˝But I need to know that I won’t be fighting for nothing. I need to know that I won’t be waiting for nothing. I need to know that I won’t wake up one day and find you not there. I need to know that I won’t end up broken-hearted again. I need to know that you love me. I need to hear it. Hear it from your lips. Hear it from you. ˝

She kept the eye contact, unable to look away. She could see that his eyes were moist, and she felt a tear escaping her eye too. She turned her head on the left, wiping it away with the edge of her sleeve; then turned back to face him. ˝Jack, I…I can’t. ˝she said, and the tears started flowing again, blurring her sight. ˝That´s the one thing I can’t do. ˝

She watched his face changing from shock, through heartache and disbelief, to finally settle on anger. ˝What the hell is wrong with you, Kate? Huh? I just don’t get it anymore. It´s like constantly dealing with the unbreakable wall. You crash down one part, but after every crushed part there’s another new one, thicker and stronger than the previous one. ˝

˝Jack…˝ she sobbed, but he continued, not caring for anything anymore: for her sobs, for the pain that´s ripping his guts, for… anything.

˝What is it, Kate? Is the thought of you and me as a couple that disgusting to you that you can’t even bear to admit what both I and the rest of the beach here knows for a while now? Am I that…˝

˝Can you please let me finish?! ˝she screamed, and it wasn’t her words, but the tone of her voice that made him shut up in an instant. She was on the edge of breaking down. He looked at her and nodded slowly, encouraging her to continue. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath; then started: ˝When I… when I said that it was the only thing I couldn’t do, I didn’t mean…I didn’t mean that I hadn’t been feeling like that. ˝she said and looked him straight in the eyes. ˝I meant that I couldn’t say it. ˝She noticed the confused expression on his face and she quickened up, wiping her face with her hands and straightening up. ˝I´ve had a pretty much screwed up life, Jack. So screwed up that they could probably write a move about it. ˝she said, chuckling sadly, and Jack kept silent, afraid even to breathe to not ruin the moment. She was finally opening up to him. ˝And the only bright sides of it were Tom, Kevin and my dad. ˝she said, waiting for him to say something, to interrupt her or ask for the explanation; but he did none of it, so she continued. ˝They were the only persons I´ve ever said those three words to; well, if you don’t count my mum, but that´s another story. ˝she said and went pensive again; shaking it off after a while and continuing. ˝Anyway, all three of them…all three of the persons I´ve said the ILY have either died or forced to leave me or abandoned me. ˝she said, and the new tears flew from her eyes, but she ignored them, determined to get everything off of her chest now that she finally started. ˝For that reason, I can’t… I can’t bring myself to say those words again. Not to you. Not yet. ˝she said, looking him straight in the eyes.

Jack opened his mouth to say something, but Kate interrupted him. ˝But if I told you that, a couple of hours ago, while you were lying here…screaming in agony, if I told you that I would have given anything, anything to save you from pain; if I told you that, later this night, while I was sitting outside, not knowing if you were dead or alive; if I told you that I was cursing myself for not coming out with my feelings earlier, but at the same time being grateful that I hadn’t because it meant that there might still be a chance for you, chance that you wouldn’t become another victim of my curse…If I told you all of that, could it be enough for you? At least for now? For a while? ˝she asked pleadingly and then finally broke down, all the stress and the pain of the long day, but not just day, but also of so many years of hiding and blaming herself crushing down into one as she buried her head in her hands.

Jack clutched his teeth and used all of his strength to shift a bit on the side of the bed, so that there was space for another person. ˝Come here. ˝he said as he reached his hand around her back, helping her on the bed and then pulling her closer to him. Her head rested on his arm; her back pressing against his chest; his hand wrapped around her waist. And then they just lay like that, him holding her as her body shook in sobs; staying there for her until she cried out everything that she had to cry out. He remained still until he heard her breathing returning to normal. ˝I´m gonna say it for both of us then. ˝he said, brushing the curls out of her forehead. ˝I love you. ˝he whispered, placing the small kiss on the back of her neck. ˝And now let´s sleep. We both need it. ˝

And with that said, he returned his hand on the place where it so naturally belonged, around her waist; and they closed their eyes; both as tired and exhausted as they had never been in life; but also as satisfied. Everything would be alright.


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Gooooooooooooo, Croatia! :boogie: :hyper: :boogie:

Truefate21
06-15-2008, 11:55 PM
˝They were the only persons I´ve ever said those three words to; well, if you don’t count my mum, but that´s another story. ˝she said and went pensive again; shaking it off after a while and continuing. ˝Anyway, all three of them…all three of the persons I´ve said the ILY have either died or forced to leave me or abandoned me. ˝she said, and the new tears flew from her eyes, but she ignored them, determined to get everything off of her chest now that she finally started. ˝For that reason, I can’t… I can’t bring myself to say those words again. Not to you. Not yet. ˝she said, looking him straight in the eyes.

:thud: :thud: :thud: :love: :bawl: :heart: OMG MARINA!! This fits KATE TO THE T!! I Mean this is exactly what I think KATE NEEDS TO SAY TO JACK!!
E.X.A.C.T.L.Y.

He remained still until he heard her breathing returning to normal. ˝I´m gonna say it for both of us then. ˝he said, brushing the curls out of her forehead. ˝I love you. ˝he whispered, placing the small kiss on the back of her neck. ˝And now let´s sleep. We both need it. ˝


:cloud9::cloud9::cloud9::cloud9::bowdown::bowdown: :bowdown:
:heart::heart: WOW!! So good.. so freaking good so wow woow woow

I LOVED THIS THANK YOU!! I have always wanted a post-surgery JATE SCENE

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Gooooooooooooo, Croatia! :boogie: :hyper: :boogie:

IF THAT IS ALL IT TAKES FOR MANY MORE OF THESE FANTASTIC DYOJS WHOOOO!!! GO CROATIA!! :giggle::giggle::giggle::giggle:

Ella.
06-16-2008, 09:59 AM
Marina That was so :faint:. Really it was good, i loved their reactions to each other and Kate's explaination was amazing. :thud: Hope Croatia do well :nod:

Mevie fan
06-16-2008, 12:15 PM
Marinaa :thud: :thud: That was awesome!
That´s the one thing I can’t do. ˝

She watched his face changing from shock, through heartache and disbelief, to finally settle on anger. ˝What the hell is wrong with you, Kate? Huh? I just don’t get it anymore. It´s like constantly dealing with the unbreakable wall. You crash down one part, but after every crushed part there’s another new one, thicker and stronger than the previous one. ˝

˝Jack…˝ she sobbed, but he continued, not caring for anything anymore: for her sobs, for the pain that´s ripping his guts, for… anything.

˝What is it, Kate? Is the thought of you and me as a couple that disgusting to you that you can’t even bear to admit what both I and the rest of the beach here knows for a while now? Am I that…˝
amazing! :thud:

Can you please let me finish?! ˝she screamed, and it wasn’t her words, but the tone of her voice that made him shut up in an instant. She was on the edge of breaking down. He looked at her and nodded slowly, encouraging her to continue. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath; then started: ˝When I… when I said that it was the only thing I couldn’t do, I didn’t mean…I didn’t mean that I hadn’t been feeling like that. ˝she said and looked him straight in the eyes. ˝I meant that I couldn’t say it. ˝She noticed the confused expression on his face and she quickened up, wiping her face with her hands and straightening up. ˝I´ve had a pretty much screwed up life, Jack. So screwed up that they could probably write a move about it. ˝she said, chuckling sadly, and Jack kept silent, afraid even to breathe to not ruin the moment. She was finally opening up to him. ˝And the only bright sides of it were Tom, Kevin and my dad. ˝she said, waiting for him to say something, to interrupt her or ask for the explanation; but he did none of it, so she continued. ˝They were the only persons I´ve ever said those three words to; well, if you don’t count my mum, but that´s another story. ˝she said and went pensive again; shaking it off after a while and continuing. ˝Anyway, all three of them…all three of the persons I´ve said the ILY have either died or forced to leave me or abandoned me. ˝she said, and the new tears flew from her eyes, but she ignored them, determined to get everything off of her chest now that she finally started. ˝For that reason, I can’t… I can’t bring myself to say those words again. Not to you. Not yet. ˝she said, looking him straight in the eyes.
:bawl: :bawl: :bawl: that was great part! I love how she'd opened up to him

Jack clutched his teeth and used all of his strength to shift a bit on the side of the bed, so that there was space for another person. ˝Come here. ˝he said as he reached his hand around her back, helping her on the bed and then pulling her closer to him. Her head rested on his arm; her back pressing against his chest; his hand wrapped around her waist. And then they just lay like that, him holding her as her body shook in sobs; staying there for her until she cried out everything that she had to cry out. He remained still until he heard her breathing returning to normal. ˝I´m gonna say it for both of us then. ˝he said, brushing the curls out of her forehead. ˝I love you. ˝he whispered, placing the small kiss on the back of her neck. ˝And now let´s sleep. We both need it. ˝

And with that said, he returned his hand on the place where it so naturally belonged, around her waist; and they closed their eyes; both as tired and exhausted as they had never been in life; but also as satisfied. Everything would be alright
aww :heart: :love: :thud:

Go CROATIA? ...well...today we play against each other...but...ohh..well...
Go CROLAAAND! :D :D IS that okay?
well..we're gonna lose anyway...
GO CROATIA! :P :glomp:
:shifty: :sigh: :(

BlueDream
06-19-2008, 07:20 AM
Nadia, Ella. and Gosia - thanks so much for the revies :uberglomp: You guys are the best :flowers2: I felt it was a nice change to write a bit angst again - I never realized how much I missed writing angst :love:

Anyway...I have a little problem: I´ve been too occupied with studying and making graphics that I completely forgot that I was supposed to have a dyojs till tomorrow :shock:

So... does anyone have any idea or request (a bit more ´detailedly´ elabored, if that´s possible :eyes: ), because I have no idea what to write about. :shrug: I thought about a Losties-socializing-watching-some-movies-or-a-game scene, but I dont have many ideas for developments, so if anyone has any suggestion on that one, I would be extremely grateful. :please: If not, any other idea is fine. (unless it´s about post TTLG/this finale scene, because a) I still havent seen the finale :o b) it takes a bit time to get into the mood for writing those a bit...darker scenes, and...I dont have much time :giggle: )

foreveritsyou
06-19-2008, 07:53 AM
OMG Marina... that was amazing!! :thud:

BlueDream
06-20-2008, 01:34 PM
^Tnx, Claire :smooch: :flowers2: Love your banner, btw :thud:

Okay, first of all... *lets out a deep sigh of relief* The game is starting in less than 10 minutes (:shock:) and I finished the dyojs like - just this second :faint: I really thought I wasnt gonna make it, and I didnt want to jinx us in any way, so I hurried and managed :w00t:

This one is a post SNBH-fight scene and I decided to dedicate it to Nadia (Truefate21) - for being nice and always reviewing my fics :glomp: :smooch:

Okay, I´ll stop blabbing:o


Everyone Deserves a Second Chance

Kate stirred in her sleep as she heard the sound of the doorbell. Her head was pounding and she could feel the pain in the back of her neck too. The doorbell rang again. Groaning, she slowly opened her eyes, confusion evident in her expression as she looked around. Armchair, shelves, TV… - she was in her living room. On the couch, to be more precise. Her eyebrows frowned in confusion, but the confusion was quickly replaced with sadness as she realized that the events of the previous night weren’t a product of a nightmare, but of reality. It all came back to her: the sharpness of his voice when he told her she weren’t even related to Aaron, the ache of her heart breaking as she watched the door closing behind him, the hours she spent comforting Aaron, telling him that everything would be alright and that ´daddy´ would be back, when even she doubted that statement. She finally managed to get him to sleep around midnight, and then she just crushed on the couch, crying helplessly until the sleep finally overtook her too, in the early hours of morning.

She remembered that there was someone waiting for her behind the door, and she quickly got up, glancing at the clock as she passed the living room into the hallway. It was 7am. She quickly tucked a couple of curls behind her ear, knowing that it was in vain, because her hair probably looked like wreck.

˝Who is it? ˝she asked as she finally reached the door.

Silence. She already thought about repeating the question, but then she heard a familiar voice coming from the other side of the door.

˝It´s me. ˝he said silently.

Kate sighed, her fingers clutching the door handle tighter. She wasn’t sure if she had the strenght to deal with this. Last night he broke her and she wondered if she could handle another heartache. She wouldn’t bet on it.

Jack apparently guessed her internal fight, because she felt him leaning against the door. ˝Kate, open the door. We have to talk. Please. ˝he whispered pleadingly, and Kate felt a tear sliding down her cheek.

She could fool herself as much as she wanted, but she knew deep down that she wasn’t able to let go of him that easily – he meant too much to her. She closed her eyes and leaned against the door too; as another tear strolled down her face.

˝Kate, please. ˝he repeated. It doesn't matter, Kate, who we were - what we did before this, before the crash. It doesn't really. Three days ago we all died. We should all be able to start over. The words suddenly flashed in her mind and she stepped aside, slowly unlocking the door.

His head shot up as he heard the sound of the door cracking. His eyes met hers and he found himself wondering once again how exactly he could have been so stupid to doubt in her. Her hair was messy, her eyes swollen and he noticed immediately two fresh traces of tears that were glistening on her cheek, somehow making her even more beautiful, if that was even possible. He smiled insecurely and pointed towards the door, as if asking if he could come in, and she slowly stepped aside.

˝Tnx. ˝he said politely as he followed her into the hallway. ˝Here. ˝he said, handing her a bouquet that consisted of 5 tulips and 4 lilies. Kate raised her eyebrow in confusion, but let it pass for now, taking the flowers from him and going into the kitchen to find the vase. She didn’t know what would happen next, but at least he looked sober, and that was definitely something she hadn’t expected, not after last night.

Jack, in the meantime, placed himself in one of the armchairs. He looked across the room and spotted a couple of used tissues lying on the floor. He sighed, putting his head in his hands – he felt like the biggest jerk in the world. Hearing the sound of her footsteps, he quickly straightened up.

˝Kate…˝

˝Jack, I cant do this anymore. I cant…˝ she started, but he cut her off:

˝Can I talk? Please? ˝ She nodded and he took a deep breath. He had to do this right; because he didn’t even want to think of the consequences if he screwed up again. ˝Last night, when I left the house, I planned to go to the first bar and stay there until I was so drunk to barely be able to sit straight, let alone stand. ˝he said and noticed her wincing at his words; but he continued. ˝I sat in the jeep and drove to Mo´s. Went to the bar and told the bartender to give me the bottle of the strongest he had. I took out my wallet and went to pull out a hundred…and then I saw it. That photo of you and Aaron at the merry-go-round. ˝he said and Kate shifted a bit, looking at him more intensely. He stayed quiet for a while, as if re-living the moment. ˝I looked at you two smiling back at me – your face shining and him wearing that adorable smile that can get him everything he wants – and I realized that I couldn’t do it. ˝he said and looked up at her, his eyes piercing hers. ˝I realized that I couldn’t let you down. That you both meant to me so much that I couldn’t let myself to turn into my old man. So I put the walled back in my pocket, told the bartender that I changed my mind and drove back here. ˝he finished, looking up at her.

She looked deep in his eyes, trying to find any trace of lie or doubt, but all she saw was honesty. And tiredness. Suddenly, something caught her attention.

˝How long have you been standing out there? ˝she asked.

˝Since 2, 2:30 am. ˝he said and then added. ˝I drove back here straight from the bar.˝

˝Why…˝Kate started, confused, but he cut her off:

˝I came back and I wanted to come in, but I saw you curled up on the couch, sleeping and I didn’t want to wake you up, so I decided to hang out with the porch for a while until the morning came. ˝

Kate looked at him incredulously. He had spent the whole night out in the cold just so he wouldn’t wake her up? She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Why did he have to be like that? Why did he have to make this to her even more difficult? One moment he was yelling at her and the next one he was again the sweet, kind guy she fell in love with?

˝Kate…˝he said, taking hold of her hands and pulling her a bit closer, so that she was now standing in front of him; his hands around her waist. ˝I know that I hurt you last night and I´m sorry for that; trust me, if I could find a way to go back in time, I´d do anything to take it back, I really would. Especially that Aaron comment. ˝he said, not missing the flash of pain that appeared in her eyes at the mention of it. ˝You´ve been a great Mum to him and I´m proud of you at how good you´ve been handling the whole situation, ever since we were rescued. ˝he said and continued. ˝I know that I screwed up and I really am sorry. But if I learned anything from yesterday´s experience and especially from the way I´ve been feeling for the past couple of hours….it´s that I couldn’t live without you; you and the little one upstairs. ˝

Kate remained quiet, saying nothing, but playing with the edges of his collar.

˝All I´m asking you is to give me another chance. To prove you that I really meant what I just said. Please? ˝he said, looking up at her.

Kate watched him. The man she fell in love with was back with her again. She said nothing, but slowly leaned down until her forehead was resting against his. She closed her eyes and sighed in satisfaction: it was so good to be able to feel the scent of his skin again, to be able to touch him again. Jack brushed his nose gently against hers. ˝So, what do you say? ˝he said quietly, barely above a whisper – he was afraid even to breath – to not ruin the moment.

Silence.

˝Where did you get the flowers from? ˝she finally spoke and Jack opened his eyes, looking up at her; his eyebrows frowned in confusion.

˝What? ˝

˝The flowers…where did you get them? The florist´s shops don’t usually work past midnight. ˝she explained.

Jack chuckled. Typical of her – to think of such a trivial question in a serious situation. ˝I, uhm:o…you might want to stay away from Mrs Gardner for a while. ˝he admitted sheepishly and Kate cracked up, closing her lips over his and lowering herself down until she was sitting on him. They kissed slowly and sensually, savoring the taste of each other as their tongues dueled for attention; finally connecting after being apart for only a couple of hours, but what seemed as eternity. When the need for breathing became too big to ignore, they slowly pulled apart, their eyes closed, foreheads resting against each other.

˝I love you, Jack and I´m willing to spend the rest of my life with you, but I need you to trust me. I need you to promise me that I wont fall asleep ever again wondering if I´d ever seen you again. ˝she said quietly, her hands wrapped around his neck.

Jack leaned forward and found her mouth again, the kiss sweet and gentle this time.

˝I promise. ˝

_____

Hope you liked it. Plese R&R. :eyes:

p.s. Oh and, I almost forgot:

GOOOOOOOOOOOO, CROOOOAAAATIA!!! http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg311/ddhockey/smilies/smiley_cheerleader.gif


It´s probably the most important game for us so far :panic: , so...keep fingers crossed for me, ´k? :eyes:


EDIT: :bawl: :bawl: :bawl: :bawl: :(

~Karollini~
06-20-2008, 02:17 PM
I love it! :thud:

˝I came back and I wanted to come in, but I saw you curled up on the couch, sleeping and I didn’t want to wake you up, so I decided to hang out with the porch for a while until the morning came. ˝

Kate looked at him incredulously. He had spent the whole night out in the cold just so he wouldn’t wake her up? She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Why did he have to be like that? Why did he have to make this to her even more difficult? One moment he was yelling at her and the next one he was again the sweet, kind guy she fell in love with?
It was sooooooooooo cool and sweet :panic: Jack is soooo adorable :love:

Kate stirred in her sleep as she heard the sound of the doorbell. Her head was pounding and she could feel the pain in the back of her neck too. The doorbell rang again. Groaning, she slowly opened her eyes, confusion evident in her expression as she looked around. Armchair, shelves, TV… - she was in her living room. On the couch, to be more precise. Her eyebrows frowned in confusion, but the confusion was quickly replaced with sadness as she realized that the events of the previous night weren’t a product of a nightmare, but of reality. It all came back to her: the sharpness of his voice when he told her she weren’t even related to Aaron, the ache of her heart breaking as she watched the door closing behind him, the hours she spent comforting Aaron, telling him that everything would be alright and that ´daddy´ would be back, when even she doubted that statement. She finally managed to get him to sleep around midnight, and then she just crushed on the couch, crying helplessly until the sleep finally overtook her too, in the early hours of morning.
Ooooo, poor Kate :( I felt bad for her and Aaron :(

:thud::flowers2:

MissGiggles
06-20-2008, 02:31 PM
^Tnx, Claire :smooch: :flowers2: Love your banner, btw :thud:

Okay, first of all... *lets out a deep sigh of relief* The game is starting in less than 10 minutes (:shock:) and I finished the dyojs like - just this second :faint: I really thought I wasnt gonna make it, and I didnt want to jinx us in any way, so I hurried and managed :w00t:

This one is a post SNBH-fight scene and I decided to dedicate it to Nadia (Truefate21) - for being nice and always reviewing my fics :glomp: :smooch:

Okay, I´ll stop blabbing:o


Everyone Deserves a Second Chance

Kate stirred in her sleep as she heard the sound of the doorbell. Her head was pounding and she could feel the pain in the back of her neck too. The doorbell rang again. Groaning, she slowly opened her eyes, confusion evident in her expression as she looked around. Armchair, shelves, TV… - she was in her living room. On the couch, to be more precise. Her eyebrows frowned in confusion, but the confusion was quickly replaced with sadness as she realized that the events of the previous night weren’t a product of a nightmare, but of reality. It all came back to her: the sharpness of his voice when he told her she weren’t even related to Aaron, the ache of her heart breaking as she watched the door closing behind him, the hours she spent comforting Aaron, telling him that everything would be alright and that ´daddy´ would be back, when even she doubted that statement. She finally managed to get him to sleep around midnight, and then she just crushed on the couch, crying helplessly until the sleep finally overtook her too, in the early hours of morning.

She remembered that there was someone waiting for her behind the door, and she quickly got up, glancing at the clock as she passed the living room into the hallway. It was 7am. She quickly tucked a couple of curls behind her ear, knowing that it was in vain, because her hair probably looked like wreck.

˝Who is it? ˝she asked as she finally reached the door.

Silence. She already thought about repeating the question, but then she heard a familiar voice coming from the other side of the door.

˝It´s me. ˝he said silently.

Kate sighed, her fingers clutching the door handle tighter. She wasn’t sure if she had the strenght to deal with this. Last night he broke her and she wondered if she could handle another heartache. She wouldn’t bet on it.

Jack apparently guessed her internal fight, because she felt him leaning against the door. ˝Kate, open the door. We have to talk. Please. ˝he whispered pleadingly, and Kate felt a tear sliding down her cheek.

She could fool herself as much as she wanted, but she knew deep down that she wasn’t able to let go of him that easily – he meant too much to her. She closed her eyes and leaned against the door too; as another tear strolled down her face.

˝Kate, please. ˝he repeated. It doesn't matter, Kate, who we were - what we did before this, before the crash. It doesn't really. Three days ago we all died. We should all be able to start over. The words suddenly flashed in her mind and she stepped aside, slowly unlocking the door.

His head shot up as he heard the sound of the door cracking. His eyes met hers and he found himself wondering once again how exactly he could have been so stupid to doubt in her. Her hair was messy, her eyes swollen and he noticed immediately two fresh traces of tears that were glistening on her cheek, somehow making her even more beautiful, if that was even possible. He smiled insecurely and pointed towards the door, as if asking if he could come in, and she slowly stepped aside.

˝Tnx. ˝he said politely as he followed her into the hallway. ˝Here. ˝he said, handing her a bouquet that consisted of 5 tulips and 4 lilies. Kate raised her eyebrow in confusion, but let it pass for now, taking the flowers from him and going into the kitchen to find the vase. She didn’t know what would happen next, but at least he looked sober, and that was definitely something she hadn’t expected, not after last night.

Jack, in the meantime, placed himself in one of the armchairs. He looked across the room and spotted a couple of used tissues lying on the floor. He sighed, putting his head in his hands – he felt like the biggest jerk in the world. Hearing the sound of her footsteps, he quickly straightened up.

˝Kate…˝

˝Jack, I cant do this anymore. I cant…˝ she started, but he cut her off:

˝Can I talk? Please? ˝ She nodded and he took a deep breath. He had to do this right; because he didn’t even want to think of the consequences if he screwed up again. ˝Last night, when I left the house, I planned to go to the first bar and stay there until I was so drunk to barely be able to sit straight, let alone stand. ˝he said and noticed her wincing at his words; but he continued. ˝I sat in the jeep and drove to Mo´s. Went to the bar and told the bartender to give me the bottle of the strongest he had. I took out my wallet and went to pull out a hundred…and then I saw it. That photo of you and Aaron at the merry-go-round. ˝he said and Kate shifted a bit, looking at him more intensely. He stayed quiet for a while, as if re-living the moment. ˝I looked at you two smiling back at me – your face shining and him wearing that adorable smile that can get him everything he wants – and I realized that I couldn’t do it. ˝he said and looked up at her, his eyes piercing hers. ˝I realized that I couldn’t let you down. That you both meant to me so much that I couldn’t let myself to turn into my old man. So I put the walled back in my pocket, told the bartender that I changed my mind and drove back here. ˝he finished, looking up at her.

She looked deep in his eyes, trying to find any trace of lie or doubt, but all she saw was honesty. And tiredness. Suddenly, something caught her attention.

˝How long have you been standing out there? ˝she asked.

˝Since 2, 2:30 am. ˝he said and then added. ˝I drove back here straight from the bar.˝

˝Why…˝Kate started, confused, but he cut her off:

˝I came back and I wanted to come in, but I saw you curled up on the couch, sleeping and I didn’t want to wake you up, so I decided to hang out with the porch for a while until the morning came. ˝

Kate looked at him incredulously. He had spent the whole night out in the cold just so he wouldn’t wake her up? She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Why did he have to be like that? Why did he have to make this to her even more difficult? One moment he was yelling at her and the next one he was again the sweet, kind guy she fell in love with?

˝Kate…˝he said, taking hold of her hands and pulling her a bit closer, so that she was now standing in front of him; his hands around her waist. ˝I know that I hurt you last night and I´m sorry for that; trust me, if I could find a way to go back in time, I´d do anything to take it back, I really would. Especially that Aaron comment. ˝he said, not missing the flash of pain that appeared in her eyes at the mention of it. ˝You´ve been a great Mum to him and I´m proud of you at how good you´ve been handling the whole situation, ever since we were rescued. ˝he said and continued. ˝I know that I screwed up and I really am sorry. But if I learned anything from yesterday´s experience and especially from the way I´ve been feeling for the past couple of hours….it´s that I couldn’t live without you; you and the little one upstairs. ˝

Kate remained quiet, saying nothing, but playing with the edges of his collar.

˝All I´m asking you is to give me another chance. To prove you that I really meant what I just said. Please? ˝he said, looking up at her.

Kate watched him. The man she fell in love with was back with her again. She said nothing, but slowly leaned down until her forehead was resting against his. She closed her eyes and sighed in satisfaction: it was so good to be able to feel the scent of his skin again, to be able to touch him again. Jack brushed his nose gently against hers. ˝So, what do you say? ˝he said quietly, barely above a whisper – he was afraid even to breath – to not ruin the moment.

Silence.

˝Where did you get the flowers from? ˝she finally spoke and Jack opened his eyes, looking up at her; his eyebrows frowned in confusion.

˝What? ˝

˝The flowers…where did you get them? The florist´s shops don’t usually work past midnight. ˝she explained.

Jack chuckled. Typical of her – to think of such a trivial question in a serious situation. ˝I, uhm:o…you might want to stay away from Mrs Gardner for a while. ˝he admitted sheepishly and Kate cracked up, closing her lips over his and lowering herself down until she was sitting on him. They kissed slowly and sensually, savoring the taste of each other as their tongues dueled for attention; finally connecting after being apart for only a couple of hours, but what seemed as eternity. When the need for breathing became too big to ignore, they slowly pulled apart, their eyes closed, foreheads resting against each other.

˝I love you, Jack and I´m willing to spend the rest of my life with you, but I need you to trust me. I need you to promise me that I wont fall asleep ever again wondering if I´d ever seen you again. ˝she said quietly, her hands wrapped around his neck.

Jack leaned forward and found her mouth again, the kiss sweet and gentle this time.

˝I promise. ˝



That Was So Sweet;)

Some Parts Kinda Reminded Me Of The Song....What Beautiful Is-Aaron Rothe:p

BlueDream
06-20-2008, 07:44 PM
Tnx, Karolina & kayla. :flowers2:

Guys...I need a favor :eyes: could someone please write a happy dyojs? I´m really down because we lost the game and Euro is finished for us:(, so I could really use some cheering up? :please: *is practically begging*

Count2Five
06-21-2008, 12:16 AM
Marina- I read the Jack post-op one. :thud: Loved it!!! :love:

BlueDream
06-22-2008, 06:13 AM
Thank you, Laura! :glomp: :flowers2:


Okay, this is the last one from me for a while. Writing these football-series dyojses was very fun, but unfortunately we lost on Friday and we wont be playing anymore. :( As much as it was fun, I have to admit that it was a bit tiring to write new dyojses every four days or so, so I need a little break. This one is dedicated to me (as strange as it may sound :o :p) and Rach, because both of our teams lost :bawl: I hope it´ll make you feel a bit better, hun, I know it made me. :smooch: :glomp:



McLarren passes to Robinson; Robinson avoids Warren, passes to Avery; Avery shoots aaaaaand....

˝GOOOOOAAAAALLLLL!!! ˝it echoed from the stands. The whole stadium went into delirium. It was the finale minute of the additional time and it was literally just a matter of seconds for the USA team to enter into semi-finals, something that hadn’t happened ever since the far away 1968. Both Jack and Kate were on their feet among the maddening crowd, but the one who was screaming the most was the little boy jumping up and down between them. Aaron was 4,5 years old and completely obsessed with soccer and everything related to soccer. They had soccer-designed sheets, kids bandages, socks,… and the boy´s main hobby was collecting the pics for the soccer album that was very popular among the kids his age. He hated cereals and it would usually take them ages to talk him into eating some; but it all changed when this soccer madness started and the company began to put small soccer-players figurines in the cereals´ boxes; for which Kate had sworn to eternal gratefulness to them. Of course, there was also Barney, a plush teddy bear mascot of their team, from which Aaron rarely parted and that was, naturally, with them even now, bouncing up and down in Aaron´s hand as the boy cheered with the rest of the fans.

And then everything changed. The fans´ arms were still in the air when the opposite team scored the goal; quickly followed by another one. Shock replaced happiness, tears replaced joy and for a moment it seemed as if the time had frozen. And then the sound of the referee’s whistle filled the air and everything was over. The USA, the team that was ranging the highest in its group and that was basically option number 1 to win this match, was suddenly defeated, done, thrown out from this Cup.

The shock on the field equaled the one on the stands. Many were crying, but the majority was still standing there, silent and immobile, not sure if all of that really happened or if it was some kind of a bad joke or something. Jack was among the silent ones, still trying to grasp with the sudden turn of events. How…How could this happen? Just…How? But he was soon startled from his thoughts as he felt a small movement close to him. He looked down and saw Aaron pulling him for his shirt, looking up at him; his eyes puffy and wide, as if begging him to tell him this hadn’t happened. He could literally follow the trace of the boy´ thoughts as the reality finally sunk in and the initial shock got replaced with disappointment and sadness; the big blue eyes quickly filling with tears. And the next second he was crying, his small body shaking with sobs as he tried to deal with probably the biggest disappointment in his small life. Jack and Kate exchanged glances before kneeling down next to the boy.

˝Hey, buddy, it´s okay, dont cry. ˝

˝Come on, sweetie…it´s gonna be alright. ˝

They both tried, but the boy was inconsolable. He threw his arms around both of them and continued crying. Jack and Kate looked at each other again. They were both sad too, but they were adults, both having gone through so much in their lives, having dealt with disappointments and bad sides of the magical thing called life; but to Aaron those concepts were still unknown, and for that reason the most it was that hard for him to face this failure.

They let him cry, holding him close and whispering comforting words to him, agreeing that it was probably the best to let him get it out of his chest. They waited until he had no more tears to cry; then Jack slowly pulled away. ˝Okay, buddy, come here. ˝he said and lifted him so that the boy was now sitting on the fence, facing them; Jack´s arms protectively wrapped around the boy´s back so that he wouldn’t fall down.

˝You okay? ˝Jack asked gently and then boy slowly nodded.

˝Yeah. I´m just sad. ˝

Jack gently kissed him on the forehead. ˝I know you´re sad. I´m sad too. But…you know what? Not everything is in winning. ˝he said and Aaron looked up at him, wanting so much to believe him, but not knowing how.

Jack looked around, trying to think of a way to explain it to him better. ˝For example, you know when you play playstation with Ryan…˝ The boy nodded and Jack continued. ˝Well, you know how you feel sad when Ryan wins? ˝he asked and Aaron nodded again. ˝And yet, you´re not sorry for playing with him, right? ˝

˝Nope. ˝Aaron replied, playing with top buttons of Jack´s shirt.

˝Well, it´s the same thing with soccer. We didn’t win, but we played very good and our guys gave their best on their field, so we shouldn’t be sad, but proud of them, don’t you think? ˝

Kate watched Jack interacting with the boy and couldn’t hold back the grin. She knew that Jack hadn’t had a good relationship with his dad and that he was afraid of failing when it came to this role of being a dad, just like his old man. But she really meant what she said that night in the hallway – he really was a natural. She watched as Aaron crooked his head a bit, looking as if he was seriously considering Jack´s words; then straightening up, concluding that Daddy was probably right.

˝Yeah. ˝he said.

˝What? I didn’t hear you. ˝Jack pretended, and Aaron repeated his words, this time more loudly.

˝That´s my boy! And now I wanna hear that smile of yours. ˝Jack said and started tickling him; the boy bursting into giggles and repeating ´Stop, Daddy, stop! ´

Jack lifted him, kissed him once more and then put him on the ground. ˝Now…how about some ice-cream?! ˝he said and the boy squealed in delight, encouraging Kate to hurry up. Jack smiled as he watched the two of them. He remembered how close he´d almost got to losing them both and swore to himself that he would never be that stupid again to risk what they had, because now he was more convinced than ever that he couldn’t live without either of them.

With that thought in mind, he picked up their things and set out to follow them.


~ A couple of hours later…~


It´s night, the light of the street lamps are illuminating the city. Jack and Kate are walking down the street, holding hands. Aaron is supported by Jack´s arm, fast asleep; his head resting on Jack´s shoulder and his fingers tightly intertwined around the edge of Jack´s collar. Barney´s at Kate.

˝You were amazing today, you know? With him. ˝Kate started, looking up at him. ˝I know you didn’t get along very well with your dad, but you´re doing a great job here, Jack. You´re a great Dad. ˝she said and Jack looked down at her; his eyes flickering in the night.

He leaned down and gently closed his lips over hers. ˝Thank you. ˝he said, pulling apart; then throwing his arm around her waist and pulling her closer. ˝Come on, let´s go home. ˝
___

Nille815
06-22-2008, 08:52 AM
Marina - :thud:

that was very squeee worthy! :love:

trivia
06-22-2008, 09:03 AM
This one is dedicated to me (as strange as it may sound :o :p) and Rach, because both of our teams lost :bawl: I hope it´ll make you feel a bit better, hun, I know it made me. :smooch: :glomp:
Ahh, thanks hun!!! :hug2::smooch:
i think I needed it more last night, I'm quite okay now.


Both Jack and Kate were on their feet among the maddening crowd, but the one who was screaming the most was the little boy jumping up and down between them.
:giggle: That's kinda like me last night when we scored the 1-1 in the last minutes!!


And then everything changed. The fans´ arms were still in the air when the opposite team scored the goal; quickly followed by another one. Shock replaced happiness, tears replaced joy and for a moment it seemed as if the time had frozen.
:bawl::bawl: That was the exact scenario of last night!

And then the sound of the referee’s whistle filled the air and everything was over. The USA, the team that was ranging the highest in its group and that was basically option number 1 to win this match, was suddenly defeated, done, thrown out from this Cup.
:(

Many were crying, but the majority was still standing there, silent and immobile,
Ehh, I think that was the atmoshere in our cafe last night


They let him cry, holding him close and whispering comforting words to him, agreeing that it was probably the best to let him get it out of his chest. They waited until he had no more tears to cry; then Jack slowly pulled away. ˝Okay, buddy, come here. ˝he said and lifted him so that the boy was now sitting on the fence, facing them; Jack´s arms protectively wrapped around the boy´s back so that he wouldn’t fall down.

Oh great scene! I can totally picture it!! :love:



˝Yeah. ˝he said.

˝What? I didn’t hear you. ˝Jack pretended, and Aaron repeated his words, this time more loudly.

˝That´s my boy! And now I wanna hear that smile of yours. ˝Jack said and started tickling him; the boy bursting into giggles and repeating ´Stop, Daddy, stop! ´
:thud::love: that's so sweet! Unfortunately there was no Jack last night to comfort me though! :giggle:

But this Dyojs totally cheered me up!

:smooch::smooch::hug: Thanks hun!!

shannon14
06-24-2008, 09:44 AM
I just suddenly thought of this conversation. Its not so good. :)

The setting would be on the island and before season 4. Maybe towards the end of season 3. With Juliet. Pretend they are all at the beach and that Jack and Juliet are a couple.


Jack: Hey Rose. (Rose smacks jack on the side of his head)

Jack: Rose, are you ok?

Rose: I’m perfectly well.

Jack: Then why’d you hit me?

Rose: Oh, I was trying to smack some sense into you.

Jack: People generally take the “smack some sense” into someone figuratively.

Rose (ignoring Jack): Why are you with her? (Rose tilts her head in the direction of Juliet)

Jack: She’s nice.

Rose: She’s not Kate.

Jack: Yes and she’s not Kate.

Rose: The “She” you are with should be Kate.

Jack: Rose, I really don’t feel up to this conversation.

Rose: Well, one of you needs to realize that you belong together.

Jack: By one of us you mean me or Kate?

Rose: You sure you are a doctor? I thought they were supposed to be intelligent? Yes you or Kate.

Jack: I’m happy with Juliet.

Rose: You aren’t happy with Juliet, being with Juliet is easy. You don’t want to have to fight. Which is just plain sad because, if you fought for Kate, you’d realize that she makes you happy and that the fight for her would make you happy. Wake you up from this coma you seem to be in.

Jack: What makes you so certain that Kate is what I need?

Rose: It’s the way you look at her.

Jack: And how’s that?

Rose: Like you could spend the rest of your life with her. It’s this look that says you’ll never get tired of seeing her of being with her.

Jack (sighs): You’re talking about a look which says; I fall in love with you every time you smile at me. That I hate it when you fight with me but love it at the same time because it shows me I’m still in your heart, that you care enough to bother with me. You’re talking about a sort of epic look that doesn’t exist in the real world.

Rose: Look around you Jack, we aren’t in the real world and Kate is your fairytale.

Jack (laughs): Right… Rose why are we having this conversation again?

Rose: Because sometimes people need a push.

Jack: A push?

Rose: To realize something they are trying to ignore.

Jack: So, you think I’m ignoring the fact that I’m in love with Kate.

Rose: Yes, and I think you are ignoring the fact that Kate is in love with you. You think she isn’t so you are removing yourself from her.

Jack: That just doesn’t make sense.

Rose: If you acknowledged Kate’s feelings you couldn’t hide anymore you two would become a “we”. In a matter of speaking.

Jack: You’re wrong.

Rose: Tell me why then.

Jack: No-

Rose: Come on, Jack.

Jack (getting annoyed): No-

Rose: Jack-

Jack: Damn it Rose. If I let myself realize that we both have feelings for each other I’d be opening up this door, where I’d be scared that she’d leave me that I’d loose her and I don’t want to loose her. I wouldn’t recover. Its better like this I’m protecting her and myself.

Rose: Here’s the thing Jack. She always comes back to you. You aren’t protecting yourself you are running away from yourself.

Rose gets up to leave.

Rose: You are with the wrong women and will eventually cause heart ache to both. You should be with the one you love.

Jack: Who’s to say I won’t love Juliet.

Rose: Fairytales don’t provide a second best option, Jack. They show you your princess put objects in front of you to prevent you from her, and then leave it to you to pave the way to the one you love. Kate’s your epic love.

Jack (grunts): What a love more enchanting than anything you could possibly experience?

Rose: Exactly. Go chase that love, Jack.

Rose walks away. Jack gets up and walks over to Kate.

Jack: Kate.

Kate turns around and smiles at him.

Kate: Yes, Jack?

Jack: Are you my fairytale?

Kate: What?

Jack doesn’t answer instead he pulls her towards him and kisses her softly on the lips. He pulls away and then leans in to kiss her one more time. His hands tangle up in her hair. Finally he pulls away and looks at Kate. His silent and eventually gives her a soft smile before walking away.

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:D

MissGiggles
06-24-2008, 10:43 AM
Jack: She’s nice.

Rose: She’s not Kate.

Jack: Yes and she’s not Kate.

Rose: The “She” you are with should be Kate.

i made a banner like that;)

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn211/kaylastorms/Untitled-26.jpg


Rose: Fairytales don’t provide a second best option, Jack. They show you your princess put objects in front of you to prevent you from her, and then leave it to you to pave the way to the one you love. Kate’s your epic love.


That reminds me of the quotes from greys anatomy....


"At some point, you have to make a decision. Boundaries don't keep other people out. They fence you in. Life is messy. That's how we're made. So, you can waste your lives drawing lines. Or you can live your life crossing them. "

and..

"It’s like one day you realize that the fairy tale is slightly different than your dream. The castle, well it may not be a castle. And it’s not so important that it’s happily ever after – just that it’s happy right now. See, once in a while, once in a blue moon, people will surprise you. And once in a while, people may even take your breath away."


GREAT JOB!:w00t::w00t:


"

Truefate21
06-24-2008, 06:17 PM
First of all sorry I am reviewing this late lol I went on vacation and vacation had NO INTERNET!! I know crazy!! hehe :sigh:

^Tnx,

This one is a post SNBH-fight scene and I decided to dedicate it to Nadia (Truefate21) - for being nice and always reviewing my fics :glomp: :smooch:

Okay, I´ll stop blabbing:o

TO ME???? :shock::shock::banana::clap::yourock::hug: :lotsalove: :boogie: AWWW!! :heart: THANKS MARINA!! of course I love all your writings lol


Everyone Deserves a Second Chance

˝All I´m asking you is to give me another chance. To prove you that I really meant what I just said. Please? ˝he said, looking up at her.

GORGEOUS...just wow just :jawdrop: :faint:



˝I love you, Jack and I´m willing to spend the rest of my life with you, but I need you to trust me. I need you to promise me that I wont fall asleep ever again wondering if I´d ever seen you again. ˝she said quietly, her hands wrapped around his neck.

YESS!!! YES!!! :giggle::giggle::boogie::boogie::thud::thud::thud: :smooch::love::love:
so perfect!! wow....so good sooo soo good lol

Sorry your team didnt win :hug: but your dyojs are lovely!!!


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livin_4_foxy
07-05-2008, 05:57 AM
IM WAKING THIS THREAD UP:D

its the hiatus people can we get some dyojses:)
any of our talented writers want to write a reaaally fluffy S1 like scene with jack and kate flirting and it'll be really squeeful? on the beach?

:love: :eyes: :please:

BlueDream
07-05-2008, 06:29 AM
IM WAKING THIS THREAD UP:D

its the hiatus people can we get some dyojses:)
any of our talented writers want to write a reaaally fluffy S1 like scene with jack and kate flirting and it'll be really squeeful? on the beach?

:love: :eyes: :please:

:sigh: I really need to toughen up :rolleyes: Fine, fine...beach one it is. It probably wont be done today, but...I´ll try to squeeze it in tomorrow or on Monday, ´k? :smooch:

livin_4_foxy
07-05-2008, 06:42 AM
:sigh: I really need to toughen up :rolleyes: Fine, fine...beach one it is. It probably wont be done today, but...I´ll try to squeeze it in tomorrow or on Monday, ´k? :smooch:

i really hope you dont toughen up:smooch:
thank yooooou:smooch: your amazing as usual!

take your timee thank you:)

Truefate21
07-07-2008, 08:35 AM
:sigh: I really need to toughen up :rolleyes: Fine, fine...beach one it is. It probably wont be done today, but...I´ll try to squeeze it in tomorrow or on Monday, ´k? :smooch:

ITS MONDAY! ITS MONDAY!!! :hyper: :hyper:

kate n jack
07-07-2008, 02:50 PM
i neeeeeeeed a dyojs!!!!!!!:shock: plleeeeeaaaassseee!!!! :giggle:

ne1?:w00t:

xxx

BlueDream
07-09-2008, 08:28 AM
If my memory serves me correctly, today is ´someone´s b-daaay :boogie: Happy birthday, Ozge! :birthday: :smooch: You´re a great person and I´m happy to know you :hug2: Sorry this is just a short one:o, but...me and my inspiration arent exactly in a great relationship lately :shifty:, so... :shrug: I tried to make it a bit special, just for you, so i hope you´ll like it :hug:


http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii272/Cherokee1peke2/375456g4p8yvuqtu.gif



Kate yawned as they walked side by side across the crowded airport aisle.

˝You tired? ˝Jack asked, turning to face her.

˝Yeah, it´s been a long flight. ˝

˝Don’t worry, ˝he said, pulling her closer and placing a gentle kiss on her forehead. ˝We just have to meet with the board and after that we´ll have the hotel room just for ourselves. ˝he said reassuringly.

˝And that should cure me tiredness how exactly? ˝Kate asked, raising her eyebrows and winking at him. Jack shook his head and smiled; then pulled her in for a kiss; his arms wrapping around her waist as she deepened the kiss, closing her hands around his neck.

˝Hm hm. ˝an uncomfortable cough could be heard from behind them. ˝Jack and Kate Shephard? ˝

Kate and Jack broke apart, sheepishly looking at the tall woman in front of them. She had long dark hair, big chocolate eyes and a kind smile. She was wearing cute, but professional navy-colored suit and a pair of black high heals.

˝I´m Ozge Gunerken and I´ll be your host for the next couple of days. ˝she said with a smile, offering him a hand.

˝Jack Shephard, nice to meet you. ˝Jack said, shaking hands with the young woman.

˝The pleasure’s all mine, Dr Shephard. ˝

˝It´s Jack. ˝Jack said, smiling kindly.

˝Jack, then. ˝Ozge smiled back; then turned to Kate. ˝And you must be Kate?

Kate smiled and shook hands with her. ˝Nice to meet you. ˝

They all smiled to each other, and for a moment silence fell between them; but not the bad kind of one. Then, Ozge straightened up a bit and added: So…Jack, Kate…I´d like to introduce you to our neurologist, Dr. Nail Akin and Emir Güney, who´ll be your driver for the following week.

The two men approached and shook their hands with Jack and Kate; then took a step back again.

˝The medical congress is starting tomorrow at 11am, ˝Ozge continued, ˝so you should have enough time to get some rest, ´cause the flight must have been quite long. ˝she smiled at Kate sympathetically and pointed towards the driver. ˝Emir is going to drive you to your hotel now and we´re going to meet in the lobby tomorrow at 10.30, if that´s okay with you?˝

˝That sounds great, thank you. ˝Jack replied,.

˝Okay, then; see you tomorrow. ˝Ozge nodded, watching as Jack and Kate headed towards the exit together with Emir.


*******

˝So…how do you like it here so far? ˝Ozge asked Kate as she reached for her glass of Martini.

They were sitting on a terrace of a beautifully equipped restaurant with torches and live band. It was night; around 10 o’clock, the mild summer breeze causing refreshing feeling on their skin; the sound of the waves crashing alongside short making the atmosphere even more peaceful and beautiful.

˝Yeah, it´s beautiful. Izmir is such a fascinating town and everyone is just so kind. ˝Kate replied, smiling at her new friend. Jack´s been having lots of conferences during the afternoons (mornings and evenings were reserved just for her though), so Kate´s been spending lots of that time in with Ozge, who turned out to be a great tour guide, showing her the most famous attractions of the seaside town and going on shopping tours with her. The two women got really close in the meantime and were already planning for Ozge to come visit them in LA the following spring.

˝I´m glad you´re enjoying your stay. ˝Ozge said; then raised her eyebrows as the door of the restaurant opened. ˝Oh, here come our guys. ˝she said and Kate turned around to see Jack and Nail coming in, Jack asking something to a waiter standing nearby, who pointed in their direction.

˝Sorry we´re late. ˝the men apologized as they approached them.

˝The conference lasted a bit longer than we expected. ˝Nail explained as he greeted first Kate than Ozge. Jack gave a little peck on the cheek to Ozge; then turned around to gently brush his lips against Kate´s. ˝Hey, babe. ˝ She smiled and gently traced her fingers across his cheek. ˝Hey. I missed you. ˝

˝I missed you too. ˝he said as he held a chair to her. They all sat down.

˝Shall we order? ˝Ozge asked.

˝We will, but first of all we have a little surprise. ˝Nail said and winked at her.

Ozge looked confusedly first at him; then at Jack and Kate, who were both smiling mysteriously. Before she had a chance to elaborate on the reason of their behavior, the lights went off, leaving their part of the restaurant illuminated only by the torches. The next moment, 2 waiters came out, carrying a chocolate frosted cake with a candle in its middle.

Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday, dear Ozge! Happy birthday to you! – they sang as they approached the table and placed down the cake, in front of her.

˝Happy birthday, Miss Gunerken. Enjoy the evening. ˝they both said before leaving them alone.

Nail kissed Ozge on the cheek, giving her a small, nicely wrapped up box. Jack and Kate got up too.

˝Happy birthday, Ozge. ˝Kate said, giving her a plastic bag with their present and kissing her too. She stepped away and Jack approached. ˝Doğum günün kutlu olsun, Ozge! ˝he said, checking his hand. Ozge raised her eyebrows, looking at 4 words that were written across his palm. ˝Hey, it´s a long phrase, I wanted to do it correctly. ˝he explained with a smile; then leaned down to place a kiss on her cheek. ˝Happy birthday. ˝

Ozge looked at the them, awestruck. ˝How…how did you know? ˝

The three of them smiled.

˝Nail told us about your birthday, so we wanted to give you a little surprise. ˝Jack said, smiling.

˝Yeah, you´ve been so good to us, so we wanted to do something nice for you too.˝ Kate explained.

˝Plus, practically it´s our fault that you have to work on your birthday, so…˝Jack added, shrugging his shoulders.

˝Thank you, really. You´re all amazing. ˝she said and they all smiled.

˝So…how about you start that cake, I´m starving. ˝Nail said and the room was filled with their laughs…as they all enjoyed their last evening together…

___

p.s. you wont kill me because I made you a Jiss interrupter :o .....right? :eyes:

Truefate21
07-09-2008, 09:22 AM
:love: :love: hehe awwww how cute!!! BDAY DYOJS FOR OZGE!! :w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t:

gunerken
07-09-2008, 01:37 PM
If my memory serves me correctly, today is ´someone´s b-daaay :boogie: Happy birthday, Ozge! :birthday: :smooch: You´re a great person and I´m happy to know you :hug2: Sorry this is just a short one:o, but...me and my inspiration arent exactly in a great relationship lately :shifty:, so... :shrug: I tried to make it a bit special, just for you, so i hope you´ll like it :hug:


http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii272/Cherokee1peke2/375456g4p8yvuqtu.gif



you're soo amazing, you know that dont you?

Thank you so much huni you're so sweet :hug: :hug2:
i feel so lucky i met you guys here coz you all are so great :grouphug:



˝Hm hm. ˝an uncomfortable cough could be heard from behind them. ˝Jack and Kate Shephard? ˝

OMG!!!! i am Micheal!!! i am a jate interrupter!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


kidding :p

:smooch:

Kate and Jack broke apart, sheepishly looking at the tall woman in front of them. She had long dark hair, big chocolate eyes and a kind smile. She was wearing cute, but professional navy-colored suit and a pair of black high heals.

hahaha i guess i look tall from my pictures... but im a tiny person... not a tall one....
but who said i wasnt wearing high heeled shoes in that scene? :rolleyes:

˝I´m Ozge Gunerken and I´ll be your host for the next couple of days. ˝she said with a smile, offering him a hand.

˝Jack Shephard, nice to meet you. ˝Jack said, shaking hands with the young woman.

˝The pleasure’s all mine, Dr Shephard. ˝

˝It´s Jack. ˝Jack said, smiling kindly.

˝Jack, then. ˝Ozge smiled back; then turned to Kate. ˝And you must be Kate?

Kate smiled and shook hands with her. ˝Nice to meet you. ˝

now if that was real life i would be passed out in the first second i saw Jack but in this fiction i gotta tell you that im loving myself... look how cool and professional i look... :rotflol:
im proud of my new self... :rotflol:
and i still havent thrown myself at Jack which is a good sign :shifty:



˝So…have do you like it here so far? ˝Ozge asked Kate as she reached for her glass of Martini.

OMG!!! im drinking martini with Kate :boogie:



˝Yeah, it´s beautiful. Izmir is such a fascinating town and everyone is just so kind. ˝Kate replied, smiling at her new friend. Jack´s been having lots of conferences during the afternoons (mornings and evenings were reserved just for her though), so Kate´s been spending lots of that time in with Ozge, who turned out to be a great tour guide, showing her the most famous attractions of the seaside town and going on shopping tours with her. The two women got really close in the meantime and were already planning for Ozge to come visit them in LA the following spring.

OMG!!! im gonna see TEH HOUSE... the holy jex place :thud:

i promise i will take pics :D




Ozge looked confusedly first at him; then at Jack and Kate, who were both smiling mysteriously. Before she had a chance to elaborate on the reason of their behavior, the lights went off, leaving their part of the restaurant illuminated only by the torches. The next moment, 2 waiters came out, carrying a chocolate frosted cake with a candle in its middle.

Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday, dear Ozge! Happy birthday to you! – they sang as they approached the table and placed down the cake, in front of her.

˝Happy birthday, Miss Gunerken. Enjoy the evening. ˝they both said before leaving them alone.

aww now that was sooo cool :w00t:

Nail kissed Ozge on the cheek, giving her a small, nicely wrapped up box.

ok now tell me how close i am with this Nail guy? :eyebrows:



p.s. you wont kill me because I made you a Jiss interrupter :o .....right? :eyes:

how can i kill you when you wrote me this amazingly cute djoys :hug:

you are soooo sweet Marina... thank you so much for the great present :flowers2: :smooch:

xxFlight815xx
07-09-2008, 02:45 PM
great dyojs. oh sweet Jate :love:
:birthday: Ozge :D

BlueDream
07-10-2008, 11:34 AM
Glad you liked it, Ozge. :smooch: And I´m glad you liked your ´cool´ self too :giggle: I thought about doing it a bit more realistic :p, but I realized that having a scene with you :drool: / :cloud9: / :D and squeeing every time Jate make an eye/hand/lips contact and begging them to jex right then and there and them looking at you with a :blank:/:eh:/:confused: expressions on their faces wouldnt be too good for your reputation, so I decided to make you one :cool: girl.

OMG!!! im gonna see TEH HOUSE... the holy jex place :thud: i promise i will take pics :D

:rotflol: Make sure to take one of the panties too. And to talk them into posing in front of every surfaces they´ve ever made love on - tell them you need it for a Jex thread and that hundreds of squeeing Jaters are in desperate need for them. :drool: Sure, you might get a restraining order after that, but... the pics would be worth of a sacrifice :p

And tnx Nadia and Rebekah for the comments too :flowers2: :smooch:

___

Okay, not to dragging it out any longer... here´s the promised BEACH dyojs. ;) To Yazzi, who requested it. ;) And to Nadia, who´s waited so (im)patiently for it :p :smooch:


Sand Confessions


http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r150/BlueDream_03/Kosti/dyojs.png


He was sitting on the beach; the very same one he´d sat on the day of the crash: the day that would change his life forever - the day that he´d met her. He still wasn't sure if that change had been for good or for bad. On one hand, he´d fallen in love: truly, really, deeply in love, something he had experienced probably for the first and only time in his life; on the other, he´d never suffered as much in his life, precisely because of that love. He looked down at his feet, that were buried deep down in the golden marbles of sand. What was it that she said that day? ´Water goes out, takes the sand with it and - you sink.´ He shook his head and smiled. Maybe he really should try it someday too.

He was so occupied with his thoughts that he hadn’t even heard her coming until she gave a little cough, announcing her arrival.

˝Excuse me! ˝she started, in a mock imitation of his voice that day.

Jack smiled, letting her know that she wasn’t interrupting anything and that she could join him. She stepped out of the bushes; hands in pockets, her hair tied up loosely, messy curls cascading down her shoulders; a small smile playing on her lips; the one he noticed she often wore in his presence.

He realized he must have been staring and quickly tore his gaze off of her. ˝Please tell me you´re not going to ask me to stitch you up. ˝he tried with a joke to cover his embarrassment; and it apparently worked, ´cause her lips stretched into a grin.

˝No, but I do have some jeans down there in the tent that wouldn’t mind some stitching, ˝she started teasingly; using his shoulder as a support as she placed herself down next to him. ˝so if you´re offering…˝

Jack laughed. ˝I´d rather pass, tnx. ˝he said and they both smiled, catching each other´s gazes for a quick second; then turning forwards again.

Silence fell upon them as they both thought about the same thing: how this all would be over soon. The rescue was on its way and it was a matter of hours until another chapter of their lives would be closed. They stayed quiet, looking at the rhythmical crushing of the waves in front of them; the natural melody working as a lullaby on them. Then suddenly Kate spoke, her voice barely above a whisper, but loud enough for him to notice it.

˝It´s funny, isn’t it? ˝

He looked at her, brows frowning in confusion. ˝What? ˝he asked quietly, looking at this woman next to him that would always remain a mystery to him, no matter how much he tried to understand her. But, maybe precisely that was the beauty of it.

˝About not having gone swimming. ˝she said and continued quickly: We´ve been here for… how much? 4 months, right? We´ve dealt with monsters, diseases, fights; we´ve explored the inside of the island, gone on treks…and yet… we´ve never stopped ourselves enough to appreciate what we´d been given: clean, fresh, clear ocean. ˝

Jack looked at her long before he talked: ˝Yeah, I guess you´re right. But then again…˝he started, but was interrupted as she suddenly got up, kicking her shoes.

˝Come on, let´s go! ˝she said, grabbing the hems of her T-shirt and lifting it up above her head.

˝K-Kate, what are you doing? ˝he asked nervously, forcing his eyes to keep contact with the level of her face, not couple of inches souther.

˝Come on, Jack, let´s race! ˝she said, tossing the shirt on the sand; the green top perfectly delineating the curves of her body. Jack swallowed deeply; but she didn’t notice, continuing to babble. ˝The first one to reach that rock is the…˝she continued, leaning down and starting to take off her jeans.


˝Kate, I don’t think that´s such a…˝Jack started, trying his best not to look in her direction, but not able to stop his eyes accidentally coming across her perfectly tanned body.

Kate turned around and looked at him, flashing him a grin. ˝What – you´re afraid to lose…Shephard? ˝she smirked as she stepped out of her jeans; then turned around and headed towards the ocean; the mischievous grin still playing on her lips.

Jack shook his head and smiled. If that was what she wanted… -he thought; then got up, taking off his shirt too and running to catch up with her.


*****

They collapsed on the sand, turning on their backs; then sank down again, both breathing heavily.

˝That…was totally…a NOT fair-play, Kate. ˝Jack mumbled as soon as he managed to catch enough breath to be able to actually pronounce something.

˝It was completely…a fair play…Jack. ˝she replied in between breaths. ˝I passed you…I was faster…I won. ˝

˝Strangling you opponent with your hands…wrapped around…his neck…until he sinks down…so that you could…pass him…doesn’t really equal you being... ´faster´, Kate. ˝

˝I would really call it…strangling. ˝she defended, still breathless.

Jack opened his mouth to say something, but then closed them again. He turned on his side, elbow supporting his weight, and looked at her: eyes closed, chest moving up and down, hair spread across the sand. ˝I´ll never win this argument, will I? ˝he asked instead, smiling; watching her as she opened her eyes and flashed him with a smile.

˝Nope. ˝she grinned, showing him a tongue and making him laugh. She turned on her side too, smiling. She loved to watch him laugh. He seemed so…at ease in those moments.

The laugh gradually died, and they fell in the silence again.

˝Are you sorry? ˝she asked him, breaking the silence. ˝That we crashed here, I mean. ˝she added as she saw him raising his eyebrows.

Jack looked pensive for a couple of minutes, as if searching for the answer himself. Then he spoke silently: ˝No, I don’t think so. ˝he said; then added, more quietly than the first time, but more firmly too: ˝If we hadn’t crashed here, I wouldn’t have met you. ˝

Kate looked up at him and their eyes met. Emerald and chocolate collided and in that moment, everything they´d gone through together during the past 4 months suddenly flashed in front of their eyes: their first meeting, I´m Kate./Jack., the counting to five, second chances, playful bickering, the cave in, secrets revealing, guavas, food sharing, golf teasing, kiss, fights, worry, pain, separation, relief, reunion heartache, THEwords… Jack felt himself leaning in, and this time, his heart’s desires overcame the rules of his mind. In that one moment, he wasn’t the Man of the Science anymore. It was as thousands of invisible ropes were dragging them towards each other, and neither of them had strength (or wish) to fight them. Their faces were coming nearer and nearer, until their lips finally connected; both of them closing their eyes instantly as the wave of pleasure hit them both: they were right where they needed to be at least. They were home.

Their tongues danced slowly, circling around each other; enjoying and savoring the taste, the feeling. It had been so long, and, at the same time, it seemed that neither a minute passed from their first one – it felt so natural, so…familiar. His hand nested on the curve of her waist; her fingers, on the other side, were gently caressing the light stubble of his cheek.

They continued to duel with their tongues until there was no breath left in their lungs, and they were forced to separate; neither of them having the courage to open their eyes first, afraid of what this might mean and what consequences it might have. Jack´s head was spinning with questions: How could I let this happen? What now? Will she run again?... He remembered the awkward tension that followed the days after their first kiss, and he decided to be the first one to stop it from happening again. He slowly opened his eyes and looked at her. She was still having hers closed.

˝Kate, I´m sorry, I shouldn’t have…˝he started all in one breath, afraid that he wouldn’t be able to say the lie; but he was cut off as she opened her eyes.

˝Jack?˝

˝Yeah? ˝he replied breathlessly, losing himself in the green of hey eyes once again.

˝Shut up. ˝she said, quickly turning around so that now she was sitting on top of him, straddling him as she leaned down and closed her lips over his again. She was stupid enough to run away the first time – she wasn’t going to do the same mistake again. And she wouldn’t let him do it too.

The end

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p.s. The ones of you who are assuming that jex followed – you´re assuming correctly ;) :p

livin_4_foxy
07-10-2008, 11:44 AM
MARINA-:thud::love::thud::clap:

that was spectacular i loooved it so much it was EXACTLY what i wanted, oh my god that was amazing you write everything so perfectly
i miss jate so much:( and you totally gave me an amazing fix

:smooch:

Truefate21
07-10-2008, 01:03 PM
To Yazzi, who requested it. ;) And to Nadia, who´s waited so (im)patiently for it :p :smooch:

Thank you I know I was very (im)patient hehehe :giggle::giggle::giggle::giggle: WHOOO BEACH DYOJS!! BEFORE FRIDAY!!:w00t:



˝About not having gone swimming. ˝she said and continued quickly:
˝Are you sorry? ˝she asked him, breaking the silence. ˝That we crashed here, I mean. ˝she added as she saw him raising his eyebrows.

Jack looked pensive for a couple of minutes, as if searching for the answer himself. ˝If we hadn’t crashed here, I wouldn’t have met you. ˝

:thud: :thud: perfect 5 words.....lol:thud: :thud:


Their tongues danced slowly, circling around each other; enjoying and savoring the taste, the feeling. It had been so long, and, at the same time, it seemed that neither a minute passed from their first one – it felt so natural, so…familiar. His hand nested on the curve of her waist; her fingers, on the other side, were gently caressing the light stubble of his cheek.

:boom: :boom: :boom: :heart: S..II....GGG..HH...heaven lol


˝Shut up. ˝she said, quickly turning around so that now she was sitting on top of him, straddling him as she leaned down and closed her lips over his again.

yeah Jack lol SHUTUP AND KISS HER!! :giggle::giggle::giggle::giggle:

She was stupid enough to run away the first time – she wasn’t going to do the same mistake again. And she wouldn’t let him do it too.
The end

FINALLY!! :faint: :faint: LOL YEAHH FOR JEX!!! lol MARINA this was such a gooood dyojs lol TOTALLY WORTH THE 3 OR SO DAY WAIT lol very nice loved it!! :w00t::w00t:

~Karollini~
07-10-2008, 01:04 PM
Wow, great story! :w00t: Wonderful Jack, amazing Kate :o I love it! :clap::yourock::thud:

Best part ever:
˝If we hadn’t crashed here, I wouldn’t have met you. ˝

:thud::love:

Brightlights
07-10-2008, 04:08 PM
Oh Marina, that was great!:lotsaloveI really missed dyojs!!:(

BlueDream
07-13-2008, 03:32 PM
Tnx so much for the comments, girls :grouphug: :smooch:

Now...anyone has ideas for some angsty dyojses? :eyes: I´m in mood for writing jangst, but I dont have any inspiration for ideas right now :( One condition: I´d prefer it to be on-island.;)

Truefate21
07-13-2008, 07:41 PM
Tnx so much for the comments, girls :grouphug: :smooch:

Now...anyone has ideas for some angsty dyojses? :eyes: I´m in mood for writing jangst, but I dont have any inspiration for ideas right now :( One condition: I´d prefer it to be on-island.;)

Got it. Idea I mean.

On-island. Before Something Nice Back Home happens.

Juliet/Jack/Kate/Sawyer (siiigh can never escape it on island)

Kate/Jack have an argument over something stupid as usual.

Juliet tells Jack that she has fallen in love with him like literally tells him that :giggle: Jack stares at Kate talking talking to sawyer heart tears a bit more :bawl: He kisses Juliet :rant: Rain (of course) Kate finds jack in forest...yelll... fight...jack asks her why she follwerd him...she yells because....because then tries to run but he grabs her shoulders and forces her to face him and Kate goes... I LOVE YOU DAMNIT....ultimate kiss...:thud:

....Something like that Marina hehehe?? Hope that is a good idea to start ya off...if it sucks lol just let me know!!

BlueDream
07-14-2008, 12:08 AM
Got it. Idea I mean.

On-island. Before Something Nice Back Home happens.

Juliet/Jack/Kate/Sawyer (siiigh can never escape it on island)

Kate/Jack have an argument over something stupid as usual.

Juliet tells Jack that she has fallen in love with him like literally tells him that :giggle: Jack stares at Kate talking talking to sawyer heart tears a bit more :bawl: He kisses Juliet :rant: Rain (of course) Kate finds jack in forest...yelll... fight...jack asks her why she follwerd him...she yells because....because then tries to run but he grabs her shoulders and forces her to face him and Kate goes... I LOVE YOU DAMNIT....ultimate kiss...:thud:

....Something like that Marina hehehe?? Hope that is a good idea to start ya off...if it sucks lol just let me know!!

Hmmm... :ponder: I really like the idea. :thud: Especially the ´grabs her shoulders etc´ - it´s definitely been a while since we had some pinning :hyper: :p I´ll have to change one detail though - Juliet will kiss Jack, not the other way around.:shifty: Sorry, but the though of Jacket and Jack initiating the kiss still makes me go all :sick:

:o

Brightlights
07-14-2008, 06:53 AM
I would love an on-island post TNPLH one.
I mean, when they go back to the island...a fight in the jungle...the moment of their reconciliation...when they let it all out...and of course, there should be pinning, rain and stuff like that!:giggle::banana:;)

Truefate21
07-14-2008, 10:00 PM
Hmmm... :ponder: I really like the idea. :thud: Especially the ´grabs her shoulders etc´ - it´s definitely been a while since we had some pinning :hyper: :p I´ll have to change one detail though - Juliet will kiss Jack, not the other way around.:shifty: Sorry, but the though of Jacket and Jack initiating the kiss still makes me go all :sick:

:o

OH YES! THAT IS WHAT I MEANT! I hate seeing Jack initiate it too lol JULIET will kiss Jack MUCH BETTER!! hehehe hope you write it soon!! Glad I COULD HELP! and yes pinning is quite fun to read:giggle::giggle::w00t::w00t:

TheNomad
07-16-2008, 03:00 PM
Hi there, here's something small i was playing around with. It's set After their return to the island and after they fix all the problems, Jack remains on the island, thinking he saved everyone at his expense. Little does he realise, his soulmate didn't leave him alone.

Jack watched the ship sail away, the first wave of emotion reached his heart. It sent a wave of tears to his eyes, that stung beyond reason. He had saved them all. That was his destiny. As much as it pained him, the possibility that being the Hero was all that was written for him broke his heart. He had the girl, he saved the girl. But he didn't get the girl.
He reached the ground, seated on the soft sand that supported his weight, his arms casually swung over his knees, he stared out at the ocean. Much to his surprise, the need to cry was being battled by his need to feel relieved.
His wish that Kate had stayed was rebutted by the aching fact that she had chosen to leave.
He had saved everyone, and ironically, there was nobody left to save him.
He felt a numbness spread over him. Something was about to happen, he didn't know what, but he knew there must be more to this. He had given his all in saving everyone, and in the process he had lost all he had, Kate. She was safe, with Aaron, Claire, Sawyer and Locke...
Jack closed his eyes for a moment, trying to remember the feeling of being besides her.
The slight pressure on his shoulder as she'd nudge against him, his heart skipped a beat as he felt the familiar warmth, that strange sensation of butterflies and trepedition in his chest. That slight change in pressure as a shoulder pressed against his. He opened his eyes after counting to five. Words could not describe the wave of emotions he felt as his eyes landed on hers. Her emerald green eyes were laced with tears.
'Kate?' he whispered, unable to speak since his heart had stopped beating for a moment.
The tragic beauty smiled as tears streamed down her cheeks, he didn't know whether they were tears of joy or sadness, he guessed they were a combination of both.
'Did you really think I'd leave you?'
Jack stared at her in a stunned silence. Words refused to leave him, for the first time in his seemingly meaningless life, he didn't want his eyes to land on anything else but her.
'I got your back, remember?' she whispered gently, she pressed her head against his shoulder, accpeting that it wasn't a dream, Jack Shepherd closed his eyes and pressed his lips against her forehead.
'I love you,' she whispered. Those three words that he had been dying to hear from her seemed so familiar as they left her lips. She may not have ever said it before, but he had felt them, everytime she would look him in the eye, or make a small gesture, like touching his shoulder with her hand, he had felt it. Love.
The island had been his hell, and in due time, it had become his only paradise. An unlikely match, in an unlikely world.

The island had returned the favor, it had restored the balance, every great sacrifice deserved a reward. It deserved hope.

Peaceout.

Backpack
07-17-2008, 09:49 AM
He had saved everyone, and ironically, there was nobody left to save him.
_____

She may not have ever said it before, but he had felt them, everytime she would look him in the eye, or make a small gesture, like touching his shoulder with her hand, he had felt it. Love.
The island had been his hell, and in due time, it had become his only paradise. An unlikely match, in an unlikely world.

The island had returned the favor, it had restored the balance, every great sacrifice deserved a reward. It deserved hope.


:faint: :faint: :faint:

:bowdown: Oh, absolutely wonderful! You are a fabulous, fabulous writer! I hope it plays out just the way you described... :D

*Shining Fairy
07-17-2008, 10:46 AM
wwooow great story:D

Words could not describe the wave of emotions he felt as his eyes landed on hers. Her emerald green eyes were laced with tears.
'Kate?' he whispered, unable to speak since his heart had stopped beating for a moment.
:faint:

'Did you really think I'd leave you?'
no:love::D

'I got your back, remember?' she whispered gently
aah I love it when people do that:love:
put lines from the show in their stories


'I love you,' she whispered. Those three words that he had been dying to hear from her seemed so familiar as they left her lips. She may not have ever said it before, but he had felt them, everytime she would look him in the eye, or make a small gesture, like touching his shoulder with her hand, he had felt it. Love.
The island had been his hell, and in due time, it had become his only paradise. An unlikely match, in an unlikely world.
oow we all feel it too:giggle:
this part is so beautifuly written

you're a great writer you really are:hug:
would like to read more of you:D

ETA
you guys I was just in the shipper fiction thread and there're a lot of Jate stories:boogie:
just wanted to say that:giggle::D

hilly
07-21-2008, 08:41 PM
TheNomad, I thought that was really quite nice!

BlueDream
07-26-2008, 01:27 PM
*knock, knock* :waves:

still remember me? :o *cant believe she hasnt been in this thread for almost 2 weeks :shock: :o* I missed you, girl! *hugs the Dyojs thread* :glomp:

TheNomad, that was SO cute :lotsalove: Love the re-mentioning of the I´ve got you´re back, but this part simply made me go all :faint:

The island had been his hell, and in due time, it had become his only paradise. An unlikely match, in an unlikely world.

:thud: :faint: :thud:

You should definitely write more of those :nod: :eyes:
___

I know I promised to someone (*cough, Nadia, cough*) to do a jangsty/pinning one, but I´ve been really busy lately and simply didnt have time. But I promise I´ll start working on it as soon as my schedule goes back to normal again, ´k? :eyes:

Anyway, in case anyone´s interested, I started a new series of dyojswa, but since they´ll be updated regularely and have more chapters, I decided to post them in the fics thread, but they´re still basically dyojses ;) They´re dedicated to Rach (trivia) who´s coming to visit me :flail: :hyper: Here´s the linky:

Little Pieces of Paradise Far Away (http://lost-forum.com/showthread.php?p=2807973)

BlueDream
08-01-2008, 02:48 AM
Hey, guys, me again :shy:

The dedication of this dyojs is split three-ways:

- to Sofia (soyblakia), for her b-day. :glomp: Happy (belated) birthday, hun! :birthday: I know it was yesterday, but I couldn’t post it then because it was the last day of the month and I had to stay away from spending more KBs. ;) Hope you´ll like it nevertheless :hug:

- to Caroo, sort of a welcome-back present. Hope you had a great time on your vacation, hun. :smooch: We missed you here :hug2:

- to Nadia (Truefate21) – I know it´s not the promised pinning one:o, but I hope you´ll like this one instead. :smooch:

___

Things you need to know: it´s set somewhere in early S4, on island; the hatch is still alive :p



Confessions


˝You love Jack. ˝Claire said. ˝

Kate looked up at her. It was a statement, not question. She looked down again, playing with the hem of her sleeve. She closed her eyes; then opened them again. ˝Yeah. ˝She let out a deep breath. It felt so good to finally admit it; not only to Claire, but to herself too. She´d known it for quite a while now, but this was the first time she actually said it, spoke it aloud and it felt…liberating. As if a huge burden was suddenly lifted off of her shoulders.

˝When did you realize it? ˝Claire asked softly, knowing that what she was doing was wrong in so many levels, but rationalizing it that it was for the greater good, because neither of them could continue like this for very long anymore – it would destroy them both eventually.

Kate said nothing for a while, absent-mindedly twirling the little brown button that was hanging from the edge of her sleeve. Then, she finally spoke, still lost in her thoughts. ˝When I returned back for him. ˝

She paused and Claire waited too. She was eager for her to continue, but she didn’t want to rush her, especially now that she was finally opening to someone; now that so much depended on this reply.

Kate took a deep breath and then continued, a bit more loudly this time. ˝I guess I´ve always known it, somewhere deep down, but when he told me they were letting him go; when I was faced with the possibility of losing him, of never seeing him again…that´s when I finally let it sink in. ˝

Claire nodded. ˝And Sawyer? ˝ she asked carefully.

Kate´s head shot up. ˝What about him? ˝she said, unsure.

Claire looked away, uncomfortably; then forced herself to look up again. ˝Kate, I don’t want to pry, but… it´s obvious that something happened back there, when you were in captivity. ˝she said, blushing; then added quickly. ˝I know it´s not my business, but…˝

˝I slept with him. ˝

˝What? ˝

˝I slept with him. With Sawyer. ˝Kate repeated, looking down.

˝Oh. ˝Claire mumbled, not really knowing what to say to that.

˝Jack saw it. ˝Kate continued. ˝They had cameras. ˝

˝How…how do you…˝

˝Juliet told me. ˝Kate replied before Claire even finished the line. A small tear escaped her eye, finding its way down her cheek and onto her chin. ˝The day we were handcuffed together. ˝

Claire looked at her friend. She didn’t know what to say.

˝Oh, is that why her arm was in strange position when she got here? ˝she said, in an attempt to cheer Kate up.

It worked. Kate smiled through tears. ˝No, that was actually before that. ˝ She grinned as she remember how good it felt to do it, to let the anger out; but it lasted only shortly though; ´cause the next moment she returned serious again. ˝I can’t even describe how awful it was. To know I was the one that hurt him that much. That broke his heart. ˝she said, fresh tears forming in the corners of her eyes. ˝

Claire nodded sympathetically as Kate tried to dry her face, but the tears just wouldn’t stop flowing. ˝And Sawyer? ˝Claire asked again, knowing the answer already, but also knowing that it was crucial to clear that one out too.

˝Sawyer. ˝Kate repeated, breathing deeply as she tried to calm down. ˝I… I love him too, but…˝

˝…but you´re not in love with him. ˝Claire finished slowly and Kate nodded.

˝No. ˝

They sat in silence for a while; then Claire gently put her hand on Kate´s thigh. ˝Kate…˝she started, her voice apologetic. ˝…please don’t hate me for what I´ll do now; I know it was wrong and that I should have put a stop on it long before, but I did it because I care about you…both of you…and I really think it´s for the best. ˝

Kate looked up at her, confused. ˝What are you…? ˝she started, but Claire turned towards the door and called:

˝Jack, you can come in now. ˝

Kate´s head shot up towards the door, and, soon enough, she saw him stepping out slowly, clearly feeling uncomfortable.

˝I saw him when he entered. ˝Claire started, ˝… and I wanted to tell you, I really did; but then you started talking and…and I thought the time had come for this conversation to happen. I really am sorry, Kate. ˝she said and gave Kate´s leg a light squeeze; then got up. ˝I´ll give you two some privacy. ˝

Kate felt the room spinning around her. She had never felt this helpless, this trapped before. But at the same time, it was also relief, relief to have things finally out; ´cause keeping them inside was starting to drive her crazy. She sank back into the couch; her head in her hands.

˝You gonna be okay? ˝Claire asked Jack as she stopped herself next to him.

˝Yeah. ˝he said; nodding slowly.

˝Okay, see you later then. ˝she said and passed through the door, taking hold of the handle.

˝And Claire…? ˝Jack called and Claire turned around. ˝Thanks. ˝he said; barely audible; but Claire caught it and smiled at him.

˝You´re welcome. ˝

And with that, she was out, closing the door behind.

____

Jack took a deep breath; then turned towards the living room again; his steps slow, guided. His mind was still spinning from everything he’d heard, and his thoughts were speeding 100 miles per hour. What did it all mean? Was she honest? How to act from now on?

He returned in the room, closing the door behind him. She was sitting on the couch, still in the same position he’d left her in. He slowly made his way towards the couch, stopping when he reached its side. She sighed, removing her hands from her eyes and leaning back against the soft fabric.

˝I guess there is no much sense in asking you how much you’ve heard. ˝she said quietly, wiping the tears away with the back of her sleeves.

Jack glanced sideways at her. The shirt she was wearing once probably belonged to someone much taller than she was, as the sleeves were reaching far beyond her wrists, making her seem even more fragile than that day in the jungle; when he first saw her with all of her defensive walls down, if only for a moment. It made him want to hug her and cradle her in his arms, tell her that everything would be alright; but he knew that wasn’t the right approach and that they had to clear up some things before anything else happened.

˝No. ˝he said softly as he went around the couch.

She felt the weight shift as he sat down next to her and another tear escaped her eye; but this time she didn’t bother, she just let it fall.

˝Why didn’t you tell me? ˝he asked, looking sideways at her. ˝I don’t understand. Why didn’t you tell me anything? ˝he repeated, this time more gently. ˝Back in the game room, or when you found me lying there? When I told it to you? ˝

˝I… I’m not so good in these things, Jack. ˝she started. ˝I’ve been through a lot and…˝she paused, struggling to find the words. ˝…and every time I’d let myself feel something, be happy…it would all disappear soon. Turn into a dust. So I decided to give up on it. I made my peace with my destiny and I was able to be happy again; or at least seem happy. And then I met you. ˝she paused.

Jack kept looking at her, waiting for her to go on.

˝I was a fugitive, you were a doctor; and I knew it wasn’t right, but I couldn’t help it – I fell for you. Every day more and more. And I felt like we were really going somewhere, even though both of us were too stubborn to admit it. ˝she said and smiled a bit; but then turned serious again. ˝Then they caught us. They separated me from you, they played mind games with me and when you refused to do that surgery and left, I… I lost hope. And that’s when everything started to go downhill. ˝

Jack opened his mouth to say something, but she interrupted him. ˝You asked why I hadn’t told you. Back in the game room. ˝she said, closing her eyes, transporting herself mentally in that day. ˝I wanted to say it to you, my whole insides screamed for me to say it to you, but I couldn’t. I wouldn’t. As much as it pained me to deal with the fact that you were leaving, I had no right to ask from you to stay. To keep you away from your home. From your friends. Your family. Especially after I hurt you so much. Then, that time when I found you in that house, you were already distant. You wouldn’t talk to me; you wouldn’t even look at me… ˝

Jack was about to say something again, but she was faster this time too. ˝And then, the day you told me you loved me… Ten minutes before that I saw you kissing Juliet! I didn’t know if anything happened between the two of you, I didn’t know if you were just trying to let go of me…and I’ve had my own problems as well. And after that, we just fell into a routine, flipping back and forth between growing closer and growing apart, and I decided that my original decision, to stay away from these kinds of things, was for the best, ´cause that way at least I wouldn’t hurt people I love. So I kept silent. ˝she finished.

No one moved or said anything for a while. They were both looking down, trying to grasp the reality of what had been said between them this day. Then Jack finally shifted:

˝Kate, I… I don’t know if I can do this. Not this way. Not like this. ˝he said, shaking his head; and she looked up at him, confused. Jack took a deep break. ˝You… you have no idea how…how much it…hurt…to see you that day. To see you with him. ˝he said quietly and made a paused. ˝It felt as someone had stabbed my heart with a knife, and then continued to chop it into little pieces, one by one. ˝he said, his eyebrows frowning in concentration as he tried to explain.

Kate looked up at him and she felt her heart breaking for him. Two more tears slide down her cheeks.

˝And I can’t let myself go through it again, Kate. I just can’t, I’m not that strong. ˝he said, looking straight in front of himself. ˝So I need to know it, Kate. I need to know that I won’t be putting my heart on a plate again. I need to know that you mean it, Kate, really mean it. I need to hear it, Kate. Hear it from you. ˝he finished, looking up at her.

She stared at his pleading eyes and in them she finally found the courage. She would do it. He deserved to hear it and, if she was completely honest with herself, she yearned to say it to him too.

˝Jack… ˝she said, taking his hand in hers. ˝I…I love you. ˝she paused; then added more firmly. ˝I´m in love with you. ˝

Jack looked at her. Tears were streaming down her eyes, but she’d never seemed more beautiful to him than in that precise moment. He brought his right hand to her chin, lifting it up a bit and forcing her to look at him. Their eyes locked and the next moment he was leaning in; neither of them breaking the eye contact until their mouth touched. He saw her closing her eyes and the next moment he had his closed too; their lips starting to move, reviving the feeling of that day in the jungle long ago when they crossed that line of no return…

*****

They had no idea how long had they been kissing: it could have been hours or only a quarter of the hour; but it didn’t matter anyway; ´cause it meant nothing in the world in which they were currently in; the world in which time or space didn’t exist; only the two of them, and the way they made each other feel. She was straddling him now, her arms wrapped around his neck as his hands skimmed up and down her back; his tongue invading her mouth; slow and gentle one minute; fast and passionate the other. She felt him going hard and she kissed him more urgently, the heath between them becoming more and more unbearable with every second passed. Her fingers found the buttons of his shirt and were now impatiently working on removing them, as his hands continued to explore her body; but they were interrupted by the sound of alarm going off. They broke apart.

˝Aargh…˝Jack groaned, letting his head fall backwards on the back of the couch.

Kate followed, her head resting against his forehead, their lips still connected.

˝There’s always something, isn’t there? ˝she said, and he felt her smiling against his lips.

He nodded, his mouth stretching into a smile too. The alarm kept beeping, more and more urgently.

˝Aren’t you going to get it? ˝she asked confused, her brows frowning.

˝I am. ˝Jack replied, still breathing hard. ˝I just need a second. ˝he replied sheepishly, looking down; and Kate broke into a laugh. ´Think about Mum, think about Mum. ´he repeated to himself; his eyes closed, the alarm going crazy in the next room.

It worked. He gave her a small peck; then gently rushed her off of him, making her slip back into the couch again. ˝Don’t. move. ˝he said, before rushing to enter the code. She heard a loud bang, followed by the sound of furniture falling and a painful ´Dammit! ˝, out of which she concluded he collided with the chair inside. She shook her head and giggled, leaning back against the couch and closing her eyes; happy smile playing of her lips. Everything would be fine. :love:

Caroo
08-01-2008, 04:19 AM
Hey, guys, me again :shy:

The dedication of this dyojs is split three-ways:

- to Sofia (soyblakia), for her b-day. :glomp: Happy (belated) birthday, hun! :birthday: I know it was yesterday, but I couldn’t post it then because it was the last day of the month and I had to stay away from spending more KBs. ;) Hope you´ll like it nevertheless :hug:

- to Caroo, sort of a welcome-back present. Hope you had a great time on your vacation, hun. :smooch: We missed you here :hug2:

- to Nadia (Truefate21) – I know it´s not the promised pinning one:o, but I hope you´ll like this one instead. :smooch:



That's so sweet! Thank you huni :smooch:

Things you need to know: it´s set somewhere in early S4, on island; the hatch is still alive :p

[/QUOTE]



˝You love Jack. ˝Claire said. ˝

Kate looked up at her. It was a statement, not question. She looked down again, playing with the hem of her sleeve. She closed her eyes; then opened them again. ˝Yeah. ˝She let out a deep breath. It felt so good to finally admit it; not only to Claire, but to herself too. She´d known it for quite a while now, but this was the first time she actually said it, spoke it aloud and it felt…liberating. As if a huge burden was suddenly lifted off of her shoulders.



Wow! Way to jump in :hyper: The way she looks up and then down again is so Kate! :love:



Kate took a deep breath and then continued, a bit more loudly this time. ˝I guess I´ve always known it, somewhere deep down, but when he told me they were letting him go; when I was faced with the possibility of losing him, of never seeing him again…that´s when I finally let it sink in. ˝



*sings* you don't know what you got till it's gone. There is no truer statement. Well maybe the statement that Jack loves Kate and that their lovemaking is way hotter then Sawyer and Kate's.



˝Juliet told me. ˝Kate replied before Claire even finished the line. A small tear escaped her eye, finding its way down her cheek and onto her chin. ˝The day we were handcuffed together. ˝

She feels so guilty :(



˝Oh, is that why her arm was in strange position when she got here? ˝she said, in an attempt to cheer Kate up.


Muwahahaaha... those are some great memories :mwaha:


They sat in silence for a while; then Claire gently put her hand on Kate´s thigh. ˝Kate…˝she started, her voice apologetic. ˝…please don’t hate me for what I´ll do now; I know it was wrong and that I should have put a stop on it long before, but I did it because I care about you…both of you…and I really think it´s for the best. ˝

Damn I love Claire :hyper: :heart:

Jack took a deep breath; then turned towards the living room again; his steps slow, guided. His mind was still spinning from everything he’d heard, and his thoughts were speeding 100 miles per hour. What did it all mean? Was she honest? How to act from now on?

That's so typical him!


He returned in the room, closing the door behind him. She was sitting on the couch, still in the same position he’d left her in. He slowly made his way towards the couch, stopping when he reached its side. She sighed, removing her hands from her eyes and leaning back against the soft fabric.

:giggle: My mum came to ask me something and then when I looked back at the screen I saw the word 'fabric' and I was like 'is he removing her clothes ALREADY? :giggle:

˝I guess there is no much sense in asking you how much you’ve heard. ˝she said quietly, wiping the tears away with the back of her sleeves.

Jack glanced sideways at her. The shirt she was wearing once probably belonged to someone much taller than she was, as the sleeves were reaching far beyond her wrists, making her seem even more fragile than that day in the jungle; when he first saw her with all of her defensive walls down, if only for a moment. It made him want to hug her and cradle her in his arms, tell her that everything would be alright; but he knew that wasn’t the right approach and that they had to clear up some things before anything else happened.

˝No. ˝he said softly as he went around the couch.

Aw, that's just one beautiful piece of writing :love: :heart: :thud:

˝Why didn’t you tell me? ˝he asked, looking sideways at her. ˝I don’t understand. Why didn’t you tell me anything? ˝he repeated, this time more gently. ˝Back in the game room, or when you found me lying there? When I told it to you? ˝


:heart: :hyper:

˝I… I’m not so good in these things, Jack. ˝she started. ˝I’ve been through a lot and…˝she paused, struggling to find the words. ˝…and every time I’d let myself feel something, be happy…it would all disappear soon. Turn into a dust. So I decided to give up on it. I made my peace with my destiny and I was able to be happy again; or at least seem happy. And then I met you. ˝she paused.

Jack kept looking at her, waiting for her to go on.

˝I was a fugitive, you were a doctor; and I knew it wasn’t right, but I couldn’t help it – I fell for you. Every day more and more. And I felt like we were really going somewhere, even though both of us were too stubborn to admit it. ˝she said and smiled a bit; but then turned serious again. ˝Then they caught us. They separated me from you, they played mind games with me and when you refused to do that surgery and left, I… I lost hope. And that’s when everything started to go downhill. ˝


This is so perfect :thud: :thud:


Kate looked up at him and she felt her heart breaking for him. Two more tears slide down her cheeks.


Mine and Kate's heart are breaking for him!


˝Jack… ˝she said, taking his hand in hers. ˝I…I love you. ˝she paused; then added more firmly. ˝I´m in love with you. ˝

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :heart:

Jack looked at her. Tears were streaming down her eyes, but she’d never seemed more beautiful to him than in that precise moment. He brought his right hand to her chin, lifting it up a bit and forcing her to look at him. Their eyes locked and the next moment he was leaning in; neither of them breaking the eye contact until their mouth touched. He saw her closing her eyes and the next moment he had his closed too; their lips starting to move, reviving the feeling of that day in the jungle long ago when they crossed that line of no return…


Oh my gosh :thud:


They had no idea how long had they been kissing: it could have been hours or only a quarter of the hour; but it didn’t matter anyway; ´cause it meant nothing in the world in which they were currently in; the world in which time or space didn’t exist; only the two of them, and the way they made each other feel. She was straddling him now, her arms wrapped around his neck as his hands skimmed up and down her back; his tongue invading her mouth; slow and gentle one minute; fast and passionate the other. She felt him going hard and she kissed him more urgently, the heath between them becoming more and more unbearable with every second passed. Her fingers found the buttons of his shirt and were now impatiently working on removing them, as his hands continued to explore her body; but they were interrupted by the sound of alarm going off. They broke apart.

˝Aargh…˝Jack groaned, letting his head fall backwards on the back of the couch.

Kate followed, her head resting against his forehead, their lips still connected.

˝There’s always something, isn’t there? ˝she said, and he felt her smiling against his lips.

He nodded, his mouth stretching into a smile too. The alarm kept beeping, more and more urgently.

˝Aren’t you going to get it? ˝she asked confused, her brows frowning.

˝I am. ˝Jack replied, still breathing hard. ˝I just need a second. ˝he replied sheepishly, looking down; and Kate broke into a laugh. ´Think about Mum, think about Mum. ´he repeated to himself; his eyes closed, the alarm going crazy in the next room.

It worked. He gave her a small peck; then gently rushed her off of him, making her slip back into the couch again. ˝Don’t. move. ˝he said, before rushing to enter the code. She heard a loud bang, followed by the sound of furniture falling and a painful ´Dammit! ˝, out of which she concluded he collided with the chair inside. She shook her head and giggled, leaning back against the couch and closing her eyes; happy smile playing of her lips. Everything would be fine. :love:


Perfect ending! Hot and funny :love: LMAO at "think about mum" and him so busy with her on his mind so that he can't even walk 10 feet without bumping into something :giggle:


Thanks so much hunni :hug:

Backpack
08-01-2008, 11:55 AM
Great stories everyone! :nod: It's so much fun to visit this thread.

I'm new to this thread, so I have a Quick Question - Is there a maximum length to the DYOJS?

I recently wrote a 3 page (letter size) story that I'm happy to share, but I don't want to break any rules by posting something that's too long. Any advise would be appreciated.

Have a great day! :p

Truefate21
08-01-2008, 03:51 PM
Great stories everyone! :nod: It's so much fun to visit this thread.

I'm new to this thread, so I have a Quick Question - Is there a maximum length to the DYOJS?

I recently wrote a 3 page (letter size) story that I'm happy to share, but I don't want to break any rules by posting something that's too long. Any advise would be appreciated.

Have a great day! :p

:giggle: A dyojs is suppose to be a short mini fic but I have posted dyojs that have been almost 3 pages so I think your good...post away!!:giggle:


to Nadia (Truefate21) – I know it´s not the promised pinning one, but I hope you´ll like this one instead.
MARINA I :heart: your dedication and even if its not a pinning one it was gorgeous soo soo beautiful!! :love: :love:

˝Jack, you can come in now. ˝

:thud: :thud: :thud: :thud:


˝Jack… ˝she said, taking his hand in hers. ˝I…I love you. ˝she paused; then added more firmly. ˝I´m in love with you. ˝

I want this to happen on the show SO FREAKING BADLY!! :boom: :love:

She was straddling him now, her arms wrapped around his neck as his hands skimmed up and down her back; his tongue invading her mouth; slow and gentle one minute; fast and passionate the other.

:eyebrows: :eyebrows: :drool: :drool: HELL YEAH BABY!! :giggle:

She shook her head and giggled, leaning back against the couch and closing her eyes; happy smile playing of her lips. Everything would be fine.

Yes Kate. Yes it would be :) :hug: :hug:

Caroo
08-01-2008, 03:54 PM
Great stories everyone! :nod: It's so much fun to visit this thread.

I'm new to this thread, so I have a Quick Question - Is there a maximum length to the DYOJS?

I recently wrote a 3 page (letter size) story that I'm happy to share, but I don't want to break any rules by posting something that's too long. Any advise would be appreciated.

Have a great day! :p

I think that as long as your story is only 1 chapter, you can post it, but to be sure, I'd PM nightskiesfading

livin_4_foxy
08-12-2008, 03:38 PM
Okay Jabies:)

I have a lot of time on my hands. and feel like writing dyojses sooo lay your requests on me! (And i kind of feel like writing lots and lots of fluff)

:D

Kekschen
08-12-2008, 03:45 PM
Okay Jabies:)

I have a lot of time on my hands. and feel like writing dyojses sooo lay your requests on me! (And i kind of feel like writing lots and lots of fluff)

:D

yay yazi! I'd love to read a romantic scene with Jack and Kate at the beach! I really miss all these season 1 beach scenes :(

livin_4_foxy
08-12-2008, 04:18 PM
yay yazi! I'd love to read a romantic scene with Jack and Kate at the beach! I really miss all these season 1 beach scenes :(

okay i'll get started tomorrow:)

livin_4_foxy
08-13-2008, 06:28 AM
Okay this is dedicated to
Alisa- because you recomended it , and your a sweetie:smooch::heart:
and
Bec- because we've talked 4 times in 4 days, damn seriously my CJCer we're on a roll. And your just plain awesome:glomp::heart:

Time: Season 4 after the first episode. Jack and Kate (and some of the other Team Jackers) go back to the beach to get some things. note-they still are fairly ignorant and think they'll be on the boat to safety in a few hours.

Jack was sitting on the sand, his hands on his knees watching the waves rhythmically hitting the shore. He just needed this time for himself, to enjoy the ocean for the last time.. and to clear his head.. but of course that wasn't working because all he could think about was a gorgeous woman with green eyes and goreous brown curly hair...

"Hey"

Jack turned a bit shocked, but then smiled when he saw who was there.

"Hey"

Kate smiled back, sitting next to him.

"It's weird.. this is probably the last time were going to be able to do this" commented Kate.

"I know." Jack agreed nodding slightly.

"I remember the day we were both sitting here, and you told me we could all start over" said Kate grinning.

"Me too," Jack grinned back "It feels like ages ago."

There was silence while they both thought about that moment.

"So Sheppard are you going to miss the island?" smiled Kate.

"Well Austen, I know I'm going to miss some people." Jack winked slightly.

"I like it when you say my last name" said Kate laughing slightly.

"Me too," agreed Jack "Wait what's Sawyers last name?"

"Ford, I think"

"FORD!" they both said at the same time, then they burst out laughing. (A/N: Ford as in the car Ford (like BMW). I actually have laughed over that haha)

After the laughter died down and a few minutes of comfortable silence passed...

"I can't believe were leaving... When theres so many things about this place that we still don't know" mused Kate

"I'm okay with that! This is abit too much of a mysterious island for me!"

Kate laughed, but then a mischevous grin starting playing on her lips. "I know one mystery we can solve right now!"

"Is that right, Austen and what is that?" joked Jack playfully, looking straight into his eyes.

For a second Kate was hypnotized by Jack's warm brown eyes. but then she remembered "Well you know that day when we were walking back from the caves.. and I bent down.. Were you checking me out?"

"Kaaaate... I alre-"

Kate shook her head "Jaaaack, we've been through alot together on this island have we not?"

"Yeah we have" agreed Jack.

"And do I mean anything to you?"

"Yes of course you do!" said Jack warmly, putting his hand on her shoulder.

Kate smiled a shiver ran down her back, even though Jack had touched countless times it still felt so amazing, so electrifying, so perfect.

"Well then if I mean anything at ALL to you, then you can at least give me the little respect I deserve and answer my question" Kate stared firmly at Jack one eyebrowed cocked upwards.. somehow challenging him.

"Fine, but if I answer this question.. truthfully then will you answer my question?"

Kate nodded still waiting for her answer.

Jack let out a defeated sigh "Yes! I was checking you out that day... and might I add you have a very nice backside."

"YES I KNEW IT!" Kate cried loudly and put one fist in the air, "and thanks."

"Holddd on now were not done... You still have my question." said Jack holding Kates arms down facing her straight.

"Lay it on me" a huge grin spread across Kate's face.

"Were you ever jelous of me and Juliet?" Jack asked.

"Always" nodded Kate not missing a beat. Jack sat there shocked at her answer.

"But you have nothing to be jelous about" Jack said quickly. Kate blushed, "Well it doesn't matter whoever touches you or kisses" Kate cocked her eyebrow again "....you then I will get jelous, because you don't belong to some blonde other who is too calm its not even human!"

Jack burst out laughing "Your so right, she doesn't have any other facial expression." Kate nodded and then started laughing.

Kate felt warmness surge through her, she had never laughed so much or talked so easily with Jack. It felt so great to do this.

"So" Jack interrupted her thoughts "Who do I belong to then?"

Kate smiled and blushed then she looked up at Jack
"You belong to me Jack... from the day I stitched you up!"

Jack smiled geniunely happy with Kates answer.
Out of no where tears started flowing down Kate's cheeks, she hated feeling this vunerable knowing that she was about to loose someone so close to her again. And this time it felt a million times worse because it was Jack Sheppard, she had never felt like this with anyone in her entire life.

"Hey hey its okay" said Jack wiping away Kates tears with his thumb "You know why?"

Kate shook her head, she was too chocked up to speak.

"Because I belong to you and no one else."

With that Kate fell into Jack's arms her face on his chest. Jack's strong arms protectively wrapped around her small body.

The rescue boats would arrive in a few hours. And of course that would change everything, but for now he was hers and she was his and thats all that mattered.




END:)

BlueDream
08-13-2008, 06:49 AM
Yeeeey, a new dyojs to read! :w00t:


Jack and Kate (and some of the other Team Jackers)...

when i first read it, I thought it said ´and some of the other Team Jacketers´ and I was like: Okay....who among you Losties is a Jacketer?! :beatup: :giggle:

"I like it when you say my last name" said Kate laughing slightly.
"Me too," agreed Jack

Me three :love:

Kate laughed, but then a mischevous grin starting playing on her lips. "I know one mystery we can solve right now!"

"Is that right, Austen and what is that?" joked Jack playfully, looking straight into his eyes.

For a second Kate was hypnotized by Jack's warm brown eyes. but then she remembered "Well you know that day when we were walking back from the caves.. and I bent down.. Were you checking me out?"

Ha! :rotflol: I knew that she would ask that one. :giggle:

Jack let out a defeated sigh "Yes! I was checking you out that day... and might I add you have a very nice backside."
"YES I KNEW IT!" Kate cried loudly and put one fist in the air, "and thanks."

:rotflol: that was so adorable :giggle: And yes - he was soooooo checking her out that day! :nod:

...because you don't belong to some blonde other who is too calm its not even human!"

:rotflol::giggle:

The rescue boats would arrive in a few hours. And of course that would change everything, but for now he was hers and she was his and thats all that mattered.

awwwwwww... :heart:

livin_4_foxy
08-13-2008, 06:56 AM
Marina- thanks for your reviewww:glomp::smooch:
which is really weird cause i was just on fanfiction.net and i was reading all your "Endless Chest of Jate Stories" :giggle: jate minds!

Kekschen
08-13-2008, 07:13 AM
First of all ...... Yaziiiii! :glomp: amazing djoys, thank you so much for writing it. These beach moments are the best :heart:




"It's weird.. this is probably the last time were going to be able to do this" commented Kate.

:eyes: i want season 1 back :(


"Me too," Jack grinned back "It feels like ages ago."

awww this just reminded me of the scene where kate and jack are standing in front of the plane, thinking of charlie's death :bawl:


"FORD!" they both said at the same time, then they burst out laughing. (A/N: Ford as in the car Ford (like BMW). I actually have laughed over that haha)

:crackup: Seriously, that just made my day :D



"YES I KNEW IT!" Kate cried loudly and put one fist in the air, "and thanks."


haha we all know from the scripts that kate really wanted him to check her out :D


"So" Jack interrupted her thoughts "Who do I belong to then?"

Kate smiled and blushed then she looked up at Jack
"You belong to me Jack... from the day I stitched you up!"

Jack smiled geniunely happy with Kates answer.
Out of no where tears started flowing down Kate's cheeks, she hated feeling this vunerable knowing that she was about to loose someone so close to her again. And this time it felt a million times worse because it was Jack Sheppard, she had never felt like this with anyone in her entire life.

"Hey hey its okay" said Jack wiping away Kates tears with his thumb "You know why?"

Kate shook her head, she was too chocked up to speak.

"Because I belong to you and no one else."

With that Kate fell into Jack's arms her face on his chest. Jack's strong arms protectively wrapped around her small body.

The rescue boats would arrive in a few hours. And of course that would change everything, but for now he was hers and she was his and thats all that mattered.


That part was the best :heart: :eyes: just a simple beautiful moment! :glomp:

--thefox--
08-13-2008, 07:36 AM
AWWWWWW wow Yazatron!!! :D

Thats so cute! I haven't read a DYOJS in ages but that one was sooooo sweet :love:
Its very Jate like and I miss reading JATEY things :D

Perfectoooooooo!!! :glomp:

xxxxx

livin_4_foxy
08-13-2008, 07:42 AM
Bec&Alisa- thank yooou for the reviews:glomp:
im glad my dedicaters like my dyojs :D

Truefate21
08-13-2008, 12:20 PM
YAZZI! :love: :love: :love:

THAT WAS ADORABLE!! awww Jack will always be Kates and Kate will always be his!! SO FREAKING CUTE! oooh I miss happy carefree jate :giggle::p

BlueDream
08-16-2008, 02:33 PM
Hey, guys! :waves: Me again :o :p I know I´m usually more for the on-island or AU Jate fluff stuff, but today I was in the mood for some post-TTLG scene, although it´s not entirely missing the AU fluff :giggle: Translated: it´s situated 3 months after the TTLG FF and it´s around Xmas time :tree: :love:

I´m dedicating it to my ˝old˝ Jaters, especially the ones with whom I shared the pre and post-I do and the mini-arc-from-hell period - I´ll never forget how supportive we were towards each other and how we kept each other´s spirits up. That´s when I truly realized to how amazing group of people I belong :grouphug:


Is there hope for us?

They were sitting in his apartment, on the couch, facing each other. The music was playing silently in the distance; and sound of the children laughing and people chatting were coming from the outside.

˝I´ve been sober for three months, Kate. I´ve been going to AA meetings three times a week and my mentor tells me I´m doing quite well at it. I´ve got my job back and my life is finally going back to normal. ˝he said; then paused a bit before adding. ˝The only thing that misses is you. You and Aaron. ˝

˝Jack…˝she started, her voice trembling, but he cut her off.

˝Do you wanna know what changed me, Kate? What made me realize how stupid I was? How stupid I was for losing two things that mattered to me the most? ˝he said, and she nodded silently, too afraid to talk because she wasn’t sure if she would be able to keep her emotions in check for much longer. ˝After you left that day, after you slapped me and told me that Aaron had been asking about me every day…˝he started, and they both winced at the memory. ˝I went to a bar. I sat down and I planned to drink and drink and drink – until all feelings disappeared. I ordered my round of Jack Daniels and I was about to start drinking it – when I felt someone watching me. I looked down and there was a boy – 6, 7 years old the most. His mum needed to use the lady´s room, so they stopped by. He asked me why I looked so sad. I don’t know why I started to talk to him, I guess I had nothing better to do, but I did start. He wore cute little Spiderman shirt. I told him that I had a boy who loved Spiderman too. He asked me where my boy was. I told him he was with his mum. And then…˝Jack smiled sadly as he shook his head. ˝And then he asked me something that only kids, with their innocence, can ask. He asked me why I wasn’t with you guys then. ˝Jack said, and Kate looked up. ˝And I didn’t know what to reply to him. ˝Jack continued. ˝And then I realized that the boy was right. That I should be with you two. That´s when I decided to change my life. To stop drinking. To clean myself so I could be worth of being in your lives again. I paid to the bartender, thanked the boy – and went straight home. The next day, I called my friend, asked him for the best rehabilitation center and, two days later, I was in. ˝

Kate looked at him. He looked better, everyone could see that. His place was tidy, his clothes clean, and he got rid of that dead-animal-looking beard on his face. But still…could she trust him…after everything?

˝Do you remember what you told me? That day, when I asked you to back me up. ˝he said, and she looked up at him. ˝You told me that you had got my back. ˝And from that day, from that moment, I’ve known that, no matter what happened, no matter how bad the things might become…I’ve known that you’d always be there for me. That you would back me up. That you would be by my side even when no one else is. So I´m asking you again, Kate. ˝he said, and his eyes locked with hers. ˝Do you have my back? ˝

She kept the eye contact, but she didn’t reply, ´cause another memory crossed her mind. It doesn't matter, Kate, who we were... what we did before this, before the crash. It doesn't really... 3 days ago we all died. We should all be able to start over.

We should all be able to start over. She looked at him. The man she had once known was standing in front of her. The man she had fallen in love with. The man she still loved. Her mind returned to that scene. She wondered how it must have been for him. He, a world-wide known spinal surgeon, a doctor, a man who had generously taken the role of their protector, their leader… had decided to put his trust in her. To trust a criminal, without need to know the reasons behind her past. For all he´d know, she could have been a serial killer or something. But he had still decided to put his faith in her. To give her a second chance. He deserved one too. She owned him that. But another thing crossed her mind.

˝What about the island, Jack? ˝she said, lump forming in her throat. He opened his mouth to reply; but she continued: ˝What can guarantee me that…that one day I won’t come home and…and find you surrounded by bottles again, going on about how we have to go back and stuff? ˝she asked; and he could hear her voice cracking. ˝How can I trust you that you changed your mind about going back, Jack? ˝

Jack sighed. He could see that she was trying hard to be brave, to be strong; but he knew her enough to know that she was on the edge of breaking down. He hated himself for being the one to cause her pain, but he knew that he had to go through that, because the alternative was losing her forever. And he couldn’t live with that option. So he decided to be completely honest, ´cause she deserved it.

˝You can´t, Kate. You can´t trust me that I´d changed my mind – because I haven’t. ˝he said. He saw pain flashing in her eyes at his words; but he continued before she had a chance to interfere: ˝I haven’t changed my mind. But I realized that going back on the island without you isn’t worth of it. Losing you isn’t worth of it. So…I still believe that we should go back. But…˝he said, his voice slowing down. ˝…if I have to choose between going back, but losing you; or staying here, but having you. – I choose the second one. I choose you. I choose us. ˝

He looked at her. She wanted to believe him, she really did. He could see it in her eyes. But the wound was still too deep.

He straightened up and took her hands in his. ˝Kate, I know that I messed up. I know that I´ve hurt you, hurt you deeply…˝ he rushed when he saw her opening her mouth to say something. ˝And I know that it’s hard for you to believe me. ´Cause you have two lives now to look after: yours and that little boy’s one. But I promise you, Kate…˝he said, kneeling down in front of her. She closed her eyes for a moment, letting a tear sliding down her cheek; the scene painfully reminding her of the day of that fight that had changed their lives forever. ˝I promise you that I won’t hurt you again. You or Aaron. I won’t do it, Kate.˝

She finally opened her eyes. His eyes were digging into hers, pleading, begging for the understanding. Another tear escaped her eye; but before she had a chance to react, his thumb was already on her face, gently wiping it away. She smiled through tears. He seemed sincere. No, ´seemed´ wasn’t the right word. He was sincere. She knew him that well. But she couldn’t afford herself to make the same mistake again. She had a boy who was counting on her. Counting on her never to fail him. And she was determined to fulfill that mission.

˝I…I want to believe you, Jack. ˝she started, hating that she had to hurt him, but seeing no other way. ˝But, as you said, I have a responsibility now. Responsibility towards that innocent little boy waiting for me at home. I need time. Can I…can I think about it? ˝she asked and looked at him, her eyes pleading. ˝

Jack nodded. He understood. ˝Of course. ˝he said and smiled. ˝Tell you what – I´ll leave you alone, give you time to think about it, and then, if the answer is ´yes´, why don’t Aaron and you come over on a Christmas dinner? I´ll be the chief. ˝he said and flashed her a grin. But then his face turned serious again. ˝If the answer is ´no´, then…then I´ll deal with it when the time comes. ˝he said sadly; but shrugged it off quickly. This was positive. She was giving him a chance.

˝Deal. ˝Kate said and smiled too. She looked at the clock. ˝I, uhm…I should get going. ˝she said and started to get up. ˝I promised the nanny I would be back till 8, so… ˝

Jack got up, too. He passed her the coat and the purse and she accepted with a smile. ˝Always a gentleman, huh? ˝

He smiled too. There was a moment of awkward silence as they both stood next to the door.

˝Well, I guess this is it then. ˝Jack said and Kate smiled, blushing a bit. He leaned in and placed a small peck on her cheek, his lips lingering there just a bit too long before he slowly pulled away. ˝Bye, Kate. ˝

She opened her eyes and smiled at him. ˝Bye, Jack. ˝

She smiled once again; and crossed the doorway. He watched after her until her figure disappeared behind the stairs; then took a deep breath and closed the door behind. He did everything in his power. Now, it was all up to her.

:smooch:

DoctorsPatient
08-16-2008, 02:47 PM
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW thats too cute Marina I loved it! Jatey Angst!

Truefate21
08-16-2008, 08:14 PM
MARINA GORGEOUS!!! HOPE YOU DO A EPILOGUE heheh and we find out what Kate decides@! I LOVED IT HUN! VERY VERY NICE!!! :):w00t::w00t::w00t:

BlueDream
08-22-2008, 05:03 PM
Tnx, girls :glomp: and, nadia, of course i did the sequel - you didnt really think I would miss the chance for a fluff after all the ansgst? :p :giggle:


This one´s dedicated to Rach and Nadia :uberglomp:


Second Chance


She looked down at the note again. I won’t fail you again, Kate. She closed her eyes, clutching the paper tighter in her hand. But, she´d already made her decision. No, I don’t think that´s true. You´re not running now… Three days ago we all died. We should all be able to start over… If I didn't know any better, I'd say you have a problem staying in one place for very long, Kate… and I have to know that you've got my back… It's okay. It's alright. It's alright….Kate, dammit, run!... But I will come back here for you… Because I love you… what I said in there...I didn't mean it… Will you marry me?

˝Aaron? ˝The boy looked up at her. ˝How do you feel about us visiting Jack today? ˝

______

She pressed the doorbell again, glancing down at the little boy who was bouncing up and down excitedly. A loud thud came from the inside, followed by a loud ´Dammit!´ and a muffled ´comin´! ´ Kate felt her heart sink. He couldn’t… She glanced down at Aaron again, who looked up at her, smiling.

˝He´s here, Mummy! ˝he said, grinning happily; and Kate had to look away to stop the tears welling in.

Aaron was still looking at her, so she forced herself to smile, wondering how she would explain it to him when they find Jack drunk again.

˝Aaron, come here. ˝she told him as she took him by the hand, pulling him a few steps backwards.

She heard the sound of the footsteps approaching; followed by the unlocking of the door; and she intertwined her fingers with Aaron´s; taking a deep breath as she mentally prepared herself for what was waiting for her on the other side of the door, -

Jack opened the door, his eyes lightening up as his gaze fell on the two persons standing in front of it. He was freshly shaved; dressed in simple jumper and jeans. Kate had barely enough time to notice a piece of cloth he was clutching in his hand before a loud squeal echoed through the corridor.

˝Jaaack!!! ˝Aaron screamed, freeing himself from Kate´s hand and launching himself toward Jack; tightly wrapping his little arms around Jack´s neck. Jack laughed, steadying himself as he crouched down, the boy´s leap so strong that it nearly knocking him down.

˝Heeey, buddy! ˝he replied, realizing in that moment exactly how much he´d missed having him near.

˝I mwissed you so mwuch, Jack. ˝the boy said and Jack felt tears welling in his eyes.

He hugged him tighter and pressed a small kiss on the boy´s hair as he replied: ˝I missed you too, buddy. ˝

Kate watched the touching exchange with tears in her eyes; smiling slightly as Jack whispered something in Aaron´s ear, causing the boy´s eyes to lit with excitement as he kissed Jack on the cheek before running inside. Jack´s eyes followed him too, and his lips stretched into a smile. He watched the boy until he disappeared into the living room; then stood up and turned towards Kate again.

She was still standing in the corridor, and he noticed a tear sliding down her cheek.

˝Uhm…hey. ˝he said awkwardly, smiling. She said nothing and he noticed her looking at the cloth in his hand, her eyebrow raised in confusion. ˝Oh, I cut my finger. ˝he explained. ˝The doorbell. I was making a dinner when you…˝

But he never got to finish the line because the next moment she was already in his arms; her hands tightly wrapped around his neck as her chin rested on his shoulder. Her reaction took him off guard; but he recovered quite quickly; burying his head in her hair; inhaling the familiar scent again. Guava´s scent. It felt so good to have her in his arms again, to feel the warmth of her body pressed to his again; the warmth he´d missed so much in the past couple of months.

He started to pull away, to give her some space; but her arms were still clinging tightly to him. With surprise, he felt her shoulders shaking, and he realized that she was sobbing.

˝Hey…what´s wrong? ˝he asked gently; but she just shook her head, hugging his closer.

He wasn’t drunk…he wasn’t drunk… - the words kept repeating in her mind. She couldn’t remember the last time she felt so happy. ˝I missed you so much. ˝she sobbed quietly in his neck; and he smiled, kissing her softly on the cheek before burying his noce in her hair again.

He understood her reaction now, realizing how all that noise and cluttering must have sounded to her. His lips found her earlobe and he whispered silently: ˝I promised I wouldn’t fail you again, Kate.˝ He felt her nodding and kissed her hair again.

˝Mummy, mummy, look what Jack buyed m…! ˝the boy squealed as he ran back into the hallway, but stopped in his tracks as he reached them.

Kate pulled away quickly, turning around so that Aaron wouldn’t see her tears. Jack stepped up towards Aaron, giving her time to compose herself. ˝´Bought´, Aaron, not ´buyed…´ he started , but the boy wasn’t looking at him anymore.

˝Mummy…mummy, are you crying? ˝he asked, the bright blue eyes turning sad.

Kate smiled, wiping away the tears as she turned to face him. ˝It´s nothing, sweetie. ˝she assured him, kneeling down in front of him. ˝Mummy´s just…happy to see Jack again. ˝she smiled through tears and glanced up at Jack, who smiled back at her. ˝Now, show me what Jack gave you. ˝she said; and Jack had to smile as he listened to the boy explaining to Kate all wonders of his new XMan 2007 action figure. He could bet she didn’t understand half of the phrases the boy used; but, as every Mum, she patiently listened as Aaron listed the super-powers with enthusiasm in his voice.

Jack smiled again and kneeled down next to the boy too. ˝Come on, buddy, why don’t you help me with the dinner while Mummy goes to the bathroom to refresh herself a bit? ˝he said and Kate smiled at him gratefully, getting up.

˝Can I get a piggy-back ride? ˝Aaron pleaded and Jack grinned.

˝Of course you can. Come on, up you go! ˝he said as he helped Aaron climb onto his back. ˝Are you holding tightly? ˝

˝Yep. ˝

˝And your bear? ˝Jack asked, referring to the plush toy tucked afely under Aaron´s armpit.

˝His name´s Jack. Mummy buyed it to me to keep me company until you come back. ˝the boy explained matter-of-factly; missing the painful exchange Jack and Kate shared as their eyes locked. Jack´s lips formed a silent ´Thank you.´ and Kate nodded, smiling.

Jack stared at her for a bit more, grateful that she tried to keep him present in Aaron´s life while he was missing. He felt the boy tugging on his shirt, startling him from his thoughts. He turned his head sideways to look at Aaron. ˝Okay. And XMan? ˝

˝Him too. ˝Aaron giggled, clutching Jack´s neck tighter.

˝Okay, here we go then…˝Jack said, lifting himself from the ground.

Kate smiled as she watched them heading towards the kitchen; Aaron´s giggles filling the room as Jack run with him on his back. It´d been a while since she´d seen him that happy. Both of them. She smiled again; then headed towards the bathroom…

_____

˝I had a great time, Jack. ˝she said, flashing him that smile of hers he loved the most. ˝Both of us did. ˝she added as she glanced at the sleeping boy curled up on the couch, clutching his old friend, ´Jack´, and his new one, XMan, tightly in his arms. And she didn’t lie. They had had a dinner together - roast turkey with mashed potatoes - that Jack himself made; followed by apple pie and gingerbread as a dessert; then watched some Xmas-y movies on DVDs; just hanging out until the boy finally surrendered to the tiredness he was feeling, falling asleep on the floor until they carried him on the couch.

˝I had a great time, too, Kate. ˝Jack replied softly. She looked up at him and their eyes locked; the familiar feeling they both usually felt in the situations like these not missing this time too. She felt herself leaning in, and, before she knew, his lips were on hers; kissing her gently first; savoring the familiar taste in his mind; then more and more passionately; her fingers intertwining around his neck as she pulled him closer, deepening the kiss, wanting him, needing him.

Breathless, they slowly pulled away, their eyes closed, foreheads resting against each other´s.

˝I…I should go. ˝Kate whispered quietly; and he nodded.

˝Y-yeah. ˝he said, placing another soft kiss on her lips; then getting up. ˝I´ll give you a ride. ˝he said, opening the drawer to get his car keys.

˝No, you don’t have to, we can…˝she started, but he shushed her.

˝Kate, it´s freezing out there. Plus, he´s asleep. ˝he said, pointing to the boy who was still sleeping peacefully on the couch.

˝Okay. ˝she accepted, flashing him a shy grin.

He held her winter coat for her; then helped her with Aaron. He was way too into sleep for them to be able to put his jacket on without waking him up; so they tucked him into a blanket; and he wrapped his hands around Kate´s neck, stirring a bit; but quickly returning back to sleep. Jack held the door open for Kate; then grabbed his jacket and left his apartment, closing the door behind.

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He helped her getting the boy out of the car; then, when Aaron was safely tucked in her arms; returned to take her purse and coat. She smiled at the gesture and waited for him to lock his car and walk her toward the door. Once they got there, she turned around to face him.

˝So, uhm…˝he mumbled awkwardly, rubbing his head with his head. He felt like a school boy. ˝Can I call you tomor…˝he started, but was interrupted by Aaron mumbling something in his sleep.

Kate shifted, smiling at Jack apologetically. ˝I should get him to bed. If he wakes up, he´ll wanna stay up and wait for Santa, so… ˝

˝Of course. ˝Jack said, smiling; then moved to open the door for her. He let her in; then leaned in, placing a gentle kiss on her lips before pulling back again. ˝See you tomorrow, Kate. ˝he said and stepped outside, about to head towards the car

˝You can stay too, Jack. ˝Kate suddenly said, making him turn in surprise, confusion evident on his face. ˝After all, it´s Christmas and Aaron…˝she paused; then corrected herself. ˝Aaron and I would love to have you here in the morning. ˝she said, blush creeping in her cheeks. She looked down, avoiding his gaze. ˝Of course, there won’t be any, uhm…you know….but…˝she mumbled, lovely shade of pink decorating her cheeks; making him laugh.

He reached his hand and put his finger under her chin, gently nudging it up and making her look at him. ˝I´ve always thought you´re cute when you´re blushing. ˝he said teasingly, earning a shy smile from her. He leaned forward and gently pressed his lips on hers; then pulled back. ˝Thank you, Kate. For doing this. For giving me second chance. It means a lot. ˝he finished, chocolate eyes digging into hers.

˝You´re welcome. ˝she nodded and smiled. Aaron stirred in her lap. ˝Uhm…I should better get him upstairs. ˝

Jack nodded. ˝I´ll get us something to drink. ˝

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Half an hour later, they were stretched on the couch in the living room, Kate´s back leaned against Jack´s chest; his arms wrapped up around her waist, his chin resting on her shoulder as they watched ˝It´s a wonderful life˝ together. Two glasses of coke were lying on the night stand next to the couch – Kate was glad to see that he hadn’t reached for any alcoholic drinks instead.

˝Jack, can I ask you something? ˝Kate suddenly asked, her fingers tracing invisible lines across his hands.

˝Sure. ˝he said; but she stalled; so he encouraged her, placing a small kiss on the side of her neck. ˝Go on. ˝

˝Don’t get me wrong, but… I was wondering…what would you have done if…if Aaron and I hadn’t showed up today? If you had ended up alone with all that food, presents…˝

Jack took a couple of seconds before replying. He knew the real question behind: Would you have gone to a bar to drink yourself into oblivion? And he couldn’t blame her for asking it, either. Would he? But, he knew in his heart the answer to that one.

˝Well… it would have been too much food just for myself; so I would have probably taken it to the hospital, to share it with the others. And then I would’ve probably stayed there with them, entertaining the little ones and stuff. ˝he said, smiling as he remembered the Christmas party they had organized two years ago for the kids at the oncology ward.

˝You…you wouldn’t have considered…˝Kate started, but he interrupted her, finishing her though:

˝…going to the bar and drinking my sadness away? ˝he said, and he felt her wince at his words. ˝No, Kate, I wouldn’t. ˝he said, taking her hand in his before continuing: ˝I let the alcohol ruin my life and everything I cared about once and I don’t plan to let it do it again. ˝he said, and Kate sighed in relief. ˝Plus, I knew you would come. ˝he added.

The little hint of mischief in his voice got Kate intrigued. ˝Oh, yeah? And how could you know that? ˝she asked, turning her head sideways so that she could see his face.

˝Simple. ˝he said, kissing the tip of her nose before turning serious again and replying, looking her straight into eyes: ˝´because I knew you’d got my back. ˝

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The End :love:

MissGiggles
08-22-2008, 06:02 PM
˝Simple. ˝he said, kissing the tip of her nose before turning serious again and replying, looking her straight into eyes: ˝´because I knew you’d got my back. ˝

Awww So Cute:)
That was awsome ..i loved it...smiled the whole time:D

*Shining Fairy
08-23-2008, 03:42 AM
She looked down at the note again. I won’t fail you again, Kate. She closed her eyes, clutching the paper tighter in her hand. But, she´d already made her decision. No, I don’t think that´s true. You´re not running now… Three days ago we all died. We should all be able to start over… If I didn't know any better, I'd say you have a problem staying in one place for very long, Kate… and I have to know that you've got my back… It's okay. It's alright. It's alright….Kate, dammit, run!... But I will come back here for you… Because I love you… what I said in there...I didn't mean it… Will you marry me?

awwn all those sweet quotes :love:
I love it when people use lines that were used in the show in their fics..:D


˝Jaaack!!! ˝Aaron screamed, freeing himself from Kate´s hand and launching himself toward Jack; tightly wrapping his little arms around Jack´s neck.
:giggle: he's such a sweet boy...

Her reaction took him off guard; but he recovered quite quickly; burying his head in her hair; inhaling the familiar scent again. Guava´s scent.
guava :love:
you think they have guava shampoo..? :giggle:
I would love that :D and totaly buy it :giggle:


He held her winter coat for her; then helped her with Aaron. He was way too into sleep for them to be able to put his jacket on without waking him up; so they tucked him into a blanket; and he wrapped his hands around Kate´s neck, stirring a bit; but quickly returning back to sleep. Jack held the door open for Kate; then grabbed his jacket and left his apartment, closing the door behind.
I can totaly picture that it's sooo sweet :lotsalove:

˝You can stay too, Jack. ˝Kate suddenly said, making him turn in surprise, confusion evident on his face. ˝After all, it´s Christmas and Aaron…˝she paused; then corrected herself. ˝Aaron and I would love to have you here in the morning. ˝she said, blush creeping in her cheeks.
go Kate go Kate :boogie: :giggle:

˝Well… it would have been too much food just for myself; so I would have probably taken it to the hospital, to share it with the others. And then I would’ve probably stayed there with them, entertaining the little ones and stuff. ˝he said, smiling as he remembered the Christmas party they had organized two years ago for the kids at the oncology ward.
I can see Jack totaly do that you know..:D
he's so sweet :hug:

˝Simple. ˝he said, kissing the tip of her nose before turning serious again and replying, looking her straight into eyes: ˝´because I knew you’d got my back. ˝
:love:


AMAZING story Marina I LOVED it :hug:
keep them coming :D

Truefate21
09-03-2008, 12:50 AM
awwwww MARINA!! I cannot believe the cuteness!! its so adorable!! very very nice sooo so cute!

Arctic Fox
09-03-2008, 04:07 PM
Ok, here's something I wrote recently! I wrote it with the idea I'd attempt a fic, but I don't think I'll ever get round to that, so I thought I'd just post this as a DYOJS! :D

I also decided to dedicate it- which I havn't done before :p- three ways :D
Firstly, to Jodie DoctorsPatient, even though she might not read it, because of her being so awesome and making me the most gorgeous LJ header :love: :hug:
Secondly, to BlueDream, for writing so many fantastic DJOJS during this looong hiatus to keep all us Jaters going! Your last one was just made of awesome, by the way! :D So thanks sweetie :glomp:
And thirdly, to allll the Jaters out there suffering from withdrawal symptoms from our favourite show and our favourite ship! :uberglomp:

So here we go. It's supposed to be set after they get off the island, during the time Jack's trying to persuade Kate to return. The time period's abit vague, because like I said, it was going to be part of a fic but I hadn't planned out the timeline yet! Anyhows, on we go! I hope you all like it! ^^
(And by the way, Jack would be clean shaven here :p. Trying to clear his life up abit, if you get me.)

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Jack let her shout, scream, and hurl accusation after accusation at him for over a minute.

"And Aaron... how could you do that to him? He still asks, every day... he asks about you; he asks when you’re coming home... and it's... it's heartbreaking, Jack."

The moment that she said his name was when she broke. Her voice cracked when she spoke that last word; Jack could see her defences crumbling in front of him. A tear escaped her eye and trickled down her cheek, glinting against the moonlight that was shining down on them from above. As if on instinct, Jack moved forward and brought his hand up to Kate’s cheek. When his thumb softly caressed her skin, she felt like the tip of a hot poker had been pressed to her cheek. The heat spread through her body quickly, engulfing her. She took a deep breath. When she looked up into his burning brown eyes, she felt her heart break in two on the spot. It had been so long since she’d been this close to him. She wanted to feel angry at him- she wanted to shout some more, to step away and take her self back home to Aaron. But she couldn’t tear her gaze away; she wanted just as much to throw herself into his arms and sob into his shoulder and tell him how much she still loved him, despite everything.

“Kate...” he whispered, dropping his fingers from her cheek and angling his head slightly. “I’m so sorry...”

She blinked back more tears, and clenched her teeth together. “What for, exactly?” she managed to choke out.

“Everything,” Jack replied simply, his voice quieter than just a whisper now. He spoke in a low tone, as though fighting back tears himself. And as Kate gazed up into his deep brown eyes, she understood him- she understood what he was feeling, what he himself was going through- she understood that he truly was sorry...

“And for this,” he murmured in a husky, velvety voice. Before she knew it, Kate felt Jack’s lips on hers, and although she knew that second that it was wrong, that it wasn’t the right thing to do, that she would more than likely regret it later, she couldn’t help but respond. She hadn’t felt him in this way for over a month- she had been around him when he was angry, when he was drunk, when he was depressed- but this was different. She felt like every single emotion inside her had erupted overhead, crackling and sparkling above them as they stood together under the light of the moon, freeing them for just a moment from all the complications between them. Jack’s lips moved slowly against Kate’s, and hers replied almost immediately, wet with the tears that had managed to spill their way down her face. As they pulled apart, and looked into one another’s eyes, taking in what had just happened between them, Kate noticed there was a tear running slowly down Jack’s cheek as well.

“I... I’m sorry...” Jack breathed, closing his eyes, his breath hot on Kate’s skin, contrasting largely to the chilly night air. She leaned her head forwards, so her forehead was resting against his.

“I’m not,” she whispered back.

Jack opened his eyes and looked down into Kate’s as he remembered that moment in the dark jungle. A smile burst through his lips and lit up his face; it appeared to be contagious as it spread to Kate, a small laugh escaping her mouth.

“I love you, Jack,” she breathed.

“I love you too, Kate,” he replied, still smiling. Somehow, he knew, everything was going to be ok.

:hug:

hilly
09-03-2008, 04:12 PM
aww, i love when they repeat the "i'm not" in fics! :D short and sweet, and really cute!

Arctic Fox
09-04-2008, 02:44 PM
Aww thanks hilly! :D :glomp:

Nille815
09-04-2008, 04:37 PM
woooooow Manda! :thud: that was awesome! :w00t:


Okay.. First of all this is my very first attempt at writing Jate ever, so I'm kinda nervous about posting it
It's set in the beginning of season two, I'm thinking somewhere between 2.3 and 2.4... Because it's my first time writing Jate, they might be a little OOC, but I hope you'll enjoy it anyway please tell me what you think about it!
Okay.. here we go :shifty:

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You Have Me

Not for the first time this week, Jack badly wanted to break something. He felt like he was suffocating down in that damn hatch. Locke was being impossible to reason with, everybody wanted answers that he couldn’t give and he hadn’t slept at all the past two days because of that infuriating beeping, he even heard it in his dreams. He was exhausted and in serious need of a break from all the madness, gone was the optimism from a few days ago. So he was trudging along the path to the caves, which had been abandoned in the days following the opening of the hatch. The snap of a twig behind him broke the silence and he instantly froze, his hand going to his back pocket for his gun. He slowly turned and scanned the tree line, but saw nothing except the leafy green of the jungle. Jack shook his head at himself and lowered his gun. Great, now I’m getting paranoid too… He slid his pack off his shoulders and sat down on a fallen tree trunk. This place was driving him insane, he’d never wanted off this rock as badly as he did now. He didn’t know what to make of that damn button or Locke’s beliefs, and meeting Desmond again here of all places… nothing was making any sense and he had no idea what to believe in any more. Another snap interrupted him from his reverie, but even before he had a chance to turn his head, she spoke.

“It’s just me.” her voice soft, almost apologetic as she emerged from the trees with a sheepish look on her face. As always she took his breath away. Her chocolate curls were loose about her shoulders, a slight blush tinged her cheeks and her green eyes sparkled in the sunlight.

“Kate… what are you doing here?” he asked, slightly breathless, as she made her way across the path towards him. He couldn’t help his smile at the sight of her.

“I could ask you the same thing” she answered with a grin in place as she sat down next to him, their shoulders slightly touching. A comfortable silence enveloped them as she pulled a water bottle from her pack and handed it to him. He took a long pull and handed it back to her with a smile.

“I couldn’t find you at the beach or the hatch, Locke said you’d stormed off so I just figured you might be at the caves.” Kate gave as an explanation for following him. She looked at him expectantly, waiting to hear his reasons for storming off. He averted his eyes from her face and studied the leafy ground instead. He couldn’t help the sigh that escaped him. Her gaze turned concerned and she nudged him softly to get him to look at her.

“Hey… You okay?” her voice had again turned soft, as she studied his face. Was he okay? Honestly he had no idea. Everything was such a mess, and he just wanted to go home. But he had no hope of rescue, not in the near future anyway. It didn’t matter; they’d probably all get killed before that day arrived anyway; if not by the monster in the jungle then maybe the wild “others” or even each other.

“I don’t know” Jack answered truthfully, his voice low. “I’m just…” he trailed off. He didn’t know how to explain it to her and he didn’t want to burden her with his doubt, when he was pretty sure Kate at least still had some hope of rescue.

“Just sick of all the mystery?” she tried with a smile, sensing his sombre mood and was pleased when she got a chuckle in response.

“Yeah… Something like that” he answered her and tried a smile. For a few moments they didn’t speak and they let the silence envelop them again. It was nice to be silent with Kate, not that he didn’t like talking with her or loved hearing her laugh, he had just felt from day one that there was always something being said between them in their silences. Like they had a silent understanding or something, they didn’t always need words.

“I’m just tired… you know? This place, the hatch, everything… It’s driving me nuts” he admitted while raking a hand through his short cropped hair. He felt a bit uncomfortable telling her this, and he could tell by her look she was surprised by his admission. But her hand on his arm told him that she understood. A warmth spread though his body at her touch, as if he had been cold, but never noticed. It was always like that when they touched, and he felt the familiar tingle up his spine as well.

“I know” Kate told him, giving his arm a gentle squeeze, but not letting go. “I know everything is crazy… And I know that you’re exhausted Jack” she continued. He could see her struggling for words for a moment, but she settled her gaze on him and continued, “But we have to keep hoping that we’ll be rescued one day… we can’t give up” her voice was still soft but there was an edge to it now, “You can’t give up Jack, we all need you…I-“ she stopped herself, as if regretting her words. She studied the ground for a moment or two before she returned her eyes to his, “I believe everything’s going to be okay… and we will get rescued” she told him, her voice strong and confident. He raised his head to look at her, and when he saw the look in her eyes, he did believe her. He managed a small smile and nodded at her.

“Besides… it’s not all bad, the hatch I mean” she told him with a grin. He gave her a dubious look and waited for an explanation. “Well… I mean, there’s real food down there Jack, and you have no idea how excited I am about the prospect of taking a real shower” she explained with the biggest grin he’d ever seen on her face and he couldn’t help but join in her laughter. She leaned in a little closer and lowered her voice to a whisper and her hand, which was still resting lightly on his arm, slid down to grip his hand in hers. “And there’s chocolate, Jack… Chocolate”

Despite the lightness of the situation, Jack felt his heart rate pick up at the nearness of her. Her beautiful smile and laughter stirred feelings in him that he was tired of denying. He had realized long ago that he was falling for her. She was still laughing but sobered when she realised she was still holding his hand, but instead of letting go as he had expected she would, Kate laced her fingers through his and looked at him with a timid smile. The urge to kiss her had never been stronger.

“And… I mean… being stranded here, it’s not the worst thing in the world” she whispered, and searched his face, her eyes warm and inviting, and whatever she found there made her go on, “If it hadn’t been for the crash we never would’ve…” she trailed off, a pretty blush appearing on her cheeks. Their gazes locked and held for a minute or two, before she averted her eyes to the ground. And Jack realised she was right. Sure it was hell sometimes, but he would give his right arm for a moment like this with her. Whenever she was near, all the stress and chaos faded to the background, and all he could see was her. Jack would do anything for her, she was his pillar of strength in this place; she made him keep going. And if they hadn’t crashed, he never would have met her. Just the mere notion made him shiver.

He gave her hand a gentle squeeze and pulled her a little closer to him. Kate looked at him in surprise, but gave him a warm smile and scooted even closer and settled her head on his shoulder. It was overwhelming having her this close, and Jack felt a weight lift from his shoulders, everything was going to be okay. And as Jack slowly settled his head on hers, he heard loud and clear what she was trying to tell him.

And you have me…

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So... what did you think? :o

Foxy's_Lady
09-04-2008, 05:11 PM
As I said,I LOVE it hun!!It's very very good :love:

hilly
09-04-2008, 05:24 PM
great stuff!!

*Shining Fairy
09-05-2008, 11:51 AM
You Have Me
ok just the title made me shiver :D

“It’s just me.” her voice soft, almost apologetic as she emerged from the trees with a sheepish look on her face. As always she took his breath away. Her chocolate curls were loose about her shoulders, a slight blush tinged her cheeks and her green eyes sparkled in the sunlight.
awwwwwwwwww:love:

He couldn’t help his smile at the sight of her.
yeah neither could I :D

A warmth spread though his body at her touch, as if he had been cold, but never noticed. It was always like that when they touched, and he felt the familiar tingle up his spine as well.
gaga :giggle: sorry no words :D

She leaned in a little closer and lowered her voice to a whisper and her hand, which was still resting lightly on his arm, slid down to grip his hand in hers. “And there’s chocolate, Jack… Chocolate”
Chocolate...:drool: I love chocolate :D

And Jack realised she was right. Sure it was hell sometimes, but he would give his right arm for a moment like this with her. Whenever she was near, all the stress and chaos faded to the background, and all he could see was her. Jack would do anything for her, she was his pillar of strength in this place; she made him keep going. And if they hadn’t crashed, he never would have met her. Just the mere notion made him shiver.
ok first made me shiver too :D
and 2nd I just LOVE how you wrote this :love:


awwn Pernille you're just amazing aren't you..?
you make amazingly beautiful art (BTW how's your computer doing..?)
and now you write amazingly beautiful fanfic too :D
I just love you :hug:
well it's a beautiful story
and you should definitley keep writing fics cause you're good at it :D
Byebye sweetie :glomp:

Flave
09-05-2008, 09:36 PM
“It’s just me.” her voice soft, almost apologetic as she emerged from the trees with a sheepish look on her face. As always she took his breath away. Her chocolate curls were loose about her shoulders, a slight blush tinged her cheeks and her green eyes sparkled in the sunlight.

“Kate… what are you doing here?” he asked, slightly breathless, as she made her way across the path towards him. He couldn’t help his smile at the sight of her.

“Hey… You okay?” her voice had again turned soft, as she studied his face. Was he okay? Honestly he had no idea. Everything was such a mess, and he just wanted to go home. But he had no hope of rescue, not in the near future anyway. It didn’t matter; they’d probably all get killed before that day arrived anyway; if not by the monster in the jungle then maybe the wild “others” or even each other.

He gave her hand a gentle squeeze and pulled her a little closer to him. Kate looked at him in surprise, but gave him a warm smile and scooted even closer and settled her head on his shoulder. It was overwhelming having her this close, and Jack felt a weight lift from his shoulders, everything was going to be okay. And as Jack slowly settled his head on hers, he heard loud and clear what she was trying to tell him.

And you have me…

Awww Nille, it's adorable, i love it, specially the parts i quoted. You wrote Jate just like Darlton would, all the shyness and subtle gesture, the cuteness... it's really great! You did great and you should post more scenes :w00t:!

ETA - My first time here! *reading some stories*

Ella.
09-06-2008, 02:13 PM
Great Dyojs everyone :)
Thanks to you all for writing such great stories to keep us all going :nod: Please keep up the good work :D

BlueDream
09-12-2008, 02:01 AM
Wow, long time no see, huh? :o First of all, I wanna say ´thank you´ to:

Secondly, to BlueDream, for writing so many fantastic DJOJS during this looong hiatus to keep all us Jaters going! Your last one was just made of awesome, by the way! :D So thanks sweetie :glomp:

Awwwww, tnx so much, Manda :hug: It really meant a lot. :glomp: I had a pretty crappy week last week, with studying for my last exam and all, and then I saw this and felt immediately better. :glomp: I didnt want to review it before, because I had to try to force myself to un-focus from jate (:giggle:) and I wanted to have enough time, but...you really cheered me up immensly that day :flowers2:

(And by the way, Jack would be clean shaven here :p.

THANK you! :bowdown: Already loving it :giggle: (should we start a petition for getting Jack rid of the chipmunk on his face for S5? :plotting:)

Jack let her shout, scream, and hurl accusation after accusation at him for over a minute.

"And Aaron... how could you do that to him? He still asks, every day... he asks about you; he asks when you’re coming home... and it's... it's heartbreaking, Jack."

The moment that she said his name was when she broke. Her voice cracked when she spoke that last word; Jack could see her defences crumbling in front of him. A tear escaped her eye and trickled down her cheek, glinting against the moonlight that was shining down on them from above. As if on instinct, Jack moved forward and brought his hand up to Kate’s cheek. When his thumb softly caressed her skin, she felt like the tip of a hot poker had been pressed to her cheek. The heat spread through her body quickly, engulfing her. She took a deep breath. When she looked up into his burning brown eyes, she felt her heart break in two on the spot. It had been so long since she’d been this close to him. She wanted to feel angry at him- she wanted to shout some more, to step away and take her self back home to Aaron. But she couldn’t tear her gaze away; she wanted just as much to throw herself into his arms and sob into his shoulder and tell him how much she still loved him, despite everything.

“Kate...” he whispered, dropping his fingers from her cheek and angling his head slightly. “I’m so sorry...”

She blinked back more tears, and clenched her teeth together. “What for, exactly?” she managed to choke out.

“Everything,” Jack replied simply, his voice quieter than just a whisper now. He spoke in a low tone, as though fighting back tears himself. And as Kate gazed up into his deep brown eyes, she understood him- she understood what he was feeling, what he himself was going through- she understood that he truly was sorry...

:thud: Wow, that was just...wow! :thud: I loved how it started angsty, and then proceeded to gentle and heartbreaking. These two love each other soooooo much :bawl:

“And for this,” he murmured in a husky, velvety voice.

:thud: he´s gonna kiss her! :hyper: My faaaaaave part! :thud: it sounded so... sexy :drool:

Before she knew it, Kate felt Jack’s lips on hers, and although she knew that second that it was wrong, that it wasn’t the right thing to do, that she would more than likely regret it later, she couldn’t help but respond. She hadn’t felt him in this way for over a month- she had been around him when he was angry, when he was drunk, when he was depressed- but this was different. She felt like every single emotion inside her had erupted overhead, crackling and sparkling above them as they stood together under the light of the moon, freeing them for just a moment from all the complications between them. Jack’s lips moved slowly against Kate’s, and hers replied almost immediately, wet with the tears that had managed to spill their way down her face.
^that was described soooo beautifully! :thud: :bawl:

“I... I’m sorry...” Jack breathed, closing his eyes, his breath hot on Kate’s skin, contrasting largely to the chilly night air. She leaned her head forwards, so her forehead was resting against his.

“I’m not,” she whispered back.

awwwwwww, you included the I´m not talk in :love: ADORE that scene :heart:

Thank you so much once again :glomp: and, p.s. why dont you write more often? :eyes:

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Nille, are you sure this was your first attempt at writing Jate ever? :shock:´cause, if it is - you´re hired! :w00t: :D

Not for the first time this week, Jack badly wanted to break something. He felt like he was suffocating down in that damn hatch. Locke was being impossible to reason with, everybody wanted answers that he couldn’t give and he hadn’t slept at all the past two days because of that infuriating beeping, he even heard it in his dreams. He was exhausted and in serious need of a break from all the madness, gone was the optimism from a few days ago. So he was trudging along the path to the caves, which had been abandoned in the days following the opening of the hatch.

Wow, I loved the introduction :thud

“It’s just me.” her voice soft, almost apologetic as she emerged from the trees with a sheepish look on her face.

squee :love:

“Kate… what are you doing here?” he asked, slightly breathless, as she made her way across the path towards him. He couldn’t help his smile at the sight of her.

“I could ask you the same thing” she answered with a grin in place as she sat down next to him, their shoulders slightly touching. A comfortable silence enveloped them as she pulled a water bottle from her pack and handed it to him. He took a long pull and handed it back to her with a smile.

:heart: you really write them SO good :heart: All the small & cute details and all... :love

“Just sick of all the mystery?”

:giggle:

It was nice to be silent with Kate, not that he didn’t like talking with her or loved hearing her laugh, he had just felt from day one that there was always something being said between them in their silences. Like they had a silent understanding or something, they didn’t always need words.

:heart: loooooved this part :thud:

“Besides… it’s not all bad, the hatch I mean” she told him with a grin. He gave her a dubious look and waited for an explanation. “Well… I mean, there’s real food down there Jack, and you have no idea how excited I am about the prospect of taking a real shower”

squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :hyper: :drool: :hyper: (sorry, i´ll calm down, i promise :o, it´s just... seeing ´Jate´ and ´the shower´ in the same part brought back some (very) nice memories of a certain scene :giggle:)

She leaned in a little closer and lowered her voice to a whisper and her hand, which was still resting lightly on his arm, slid down to grip his hand in hers. “And there’s chocolate, Jack… Chocolate”

:rotflol: She´s adorable :love: I can totally understand her, though - chocolate=:heart:

Despite the lightness of the situation, Jack felt his heart rate pick up at the nearness of her. Her beautiful smile and laughter stirred feelings in him that he was tired of denying. He had realized long ago that he was falling for her. She was still laughing but sobered when she realised she was still holding his hand, but instead of letting go as he had expected she would, Kate laced her fingers through his and looked at him with a timid smile.

:thud: :faint: :thud:

The urge to kiss her had never been stronger.

then why dont you bloody do it?! :rant: :shakefist: :crazy:

:p

And as Jack slowly settled his head on hers, he heard loud and clear what she was trying to tell him.

And you have me…

great ending :heart:

p.s. just as I told to Manda... why dont you write more often? :eyes:
_____

So... my exams finished and... I´m ready to write again :hyper: So...anyone has any request? :eyes: ´cause I would really, really like to write something, but... I dont have any inspirations for a plot :sigh:

Arctic Fox
09-12-2008, 10:01 AM
Awwwww, tnx so much, Manda :hug: It really meant a lot. :glomp: I had a pretty crappy week last week, with studying for my last exam and all, and then I saw this and felt immediately better. :glomp: I didnt want to review it before, because I had to try to force myself to un-focus from jate (:giggle:) and I wanted to have enough time, but...you really cheered me up immensly that day :flowers2:


Awww thanks, I'm glad I cheered you up! :) :hug:

(And yes, that petition sounds like a good idea!) :giggle:

Thank you so much once again :glomp: and, p.s. why dont you write more often? :eyes:

:glomp:
And, well, I never have that much inspiration, but I often start one of these are never manage to actually finish it :giggle:
Looking forward to yours! :D

:hug:

MissGiggles
09-13-2008, 12:36 PM
Hey Guys, I Wrote A Little Something:)


Kate Austen and Jack Sephard were good friends,but if you asked anyone around them they'd say that they were in love with each other and they were the only ones that didnt know it yet.

Jack and Kate were sitting in a bar in Vegas drinking to freedom,happiness and pretty much anything else they could think of. The music was blasting...

"Lets Dance" Kate yelled over top of the noise

"I Dont Dance" Jack laughed

Kate grabbed his hand and dragged him onto the dance floor.
She placed her hands on his waist " Just Move" She wispherd

They danced a couple more songs than went back to the bar.They both went threw a break-up and were drinking to forget it.The funny thing was that neither of them knew that the reason for both break-ups was each other.

About 4 am and a paycheck worth of drinks later.They decided to leave.

"Lets Get A Cab" Jack said and Kate shook her head

"Nah, It's A Nice Night Let's Walk" Kate answered ,Jack nodded and the walked down the street.

Half way back to their hotel they both saw a flashing light,The light had a wedding ring and read "24 Hours Of Love".The both looked at the sign than back at each other and walked in.



The next morning Kate woke up to a warmth beside her,her eyes shot open but she couldnt bring herself to turn around to face what she'd done last night ' what happen last night,who is this guy' She thought.She convinced herself to look beside her,To her surprise she knew the guy,the guy was her friend ' oh its only Jack thank god' She thought adn layed back down than she jolted up again ' WAIT!, why the hell am i in Jack's bed'. Just than Jack woke up too he turned to look at Kate,She looked like she'd just seen a alien.Jack looked at her confused.

"Kate?" he asked

"Do You Remember Last Night?" Kate asked

Jack shook his head "Nothing" He replied

"How Did I End Up In Your Bed?"

"OMG Do You Think We...."

They both looked ateach other scared to know the answer.Kate pulled up the blanket and found her answer , she looked back up at Jack and nodded

" Yup I Think We Did" She told him

A silence fell over them as they just layed there together.Than Kate reached out to check the time and she noticed something on her finger " Jack?" Kate yelled

"Jack Let Me See Your Hand" She told him and he looked at her like she was from another planet. "Why?" he asked

She just showed him her hand,with her finger and a very nice looking ring.His mouth fell open a little bit." We?...Were? Married? He said unable to form a sentence.

Once they figured what went on the night before.They got outta bed and went downstairs.
Kate was cooking something and it smelt really good and Jack felt this erge to kiss her 'Kate kiss Kate' He thought,But than he walked up behind her thinking 'We already had sex and got married right? ' He grabbed her by the hips and kissed her,it took a minute before she got over the shock and she kissed him back,and it wasnt weird or anything it was natural and good.

Later that day they were sitting on the couch not speaking when Jack decided this silence was crazy and spoke

"You Were So Weak In The Knees" He said teasingly and Kate giggled and played along

"Yeah Right You Were The One Weak In The Knees Mister" She stated

They both laughed and Kate asked Jack if he wanted to take a walk,he agreed and the went to the peak of a hill where they could see the hole city all the lights were bright it was beautiful.

"So What Are We Gonna Do About Our Little Problem?" Kate asked

"Would It Be So Bad" Jack asked Kate giggled and replied

"No, I Mean We Are Together All The Time Anyway"

A few minutes past and Kate asked again not really getting a answer the first time
"What Are We Gonna Do?"

Jack turned to look into her eyes and took her hand in his " Well I Could Kiss The Bride" He said
Kate smiled up at him and they shared the most amazing kiss,you know the ones you only see in the movies with the princess and the prince and the lights of the city beneath them and in the movies thats when the voice would come and say they lived happily ever after,But This Was No Movie.They pulled away but didnt let go of each other.

"Weak In The Knees" Jack whispered

Kate smiled and said " Yeah Weak In The Knees Jack"

But It Was Pretty Darn Close.


That Is It,I Hope You Liked It;)

poche'
09-13-2008, 02:17 PM
:w00t::w00t: loooved it quite like what happened in vegas very good. want to see more were in shortage of any dyojs lately well done :D

Nille815
09-14-2008, 05:31 AM
As I said,I LOVE it hun!!It's very very good :love:
Thank you sweetie! :D it means the world to me and thank you so much for reading it before :smooch: Love you :heart: :glomp:


awwn Pernille you're just amazing aren't you..?
you make amazingly beautiful art (BTW how's your computer doing..?)
and now you write amazingly beautiful fanfic too :D
I just love you :hug:
well it's a beautiful story
and you should definitley keep writing fics cause you're good at it :D
Byebye sweetie :glomp:

:o:o
Thank you Dorethy! :glomp: that was such an awesome review :w00t::w00t:
I've got my computer back.. but I don't have photoshop on it anymore.. :bawl:
Thank you thank you thank you sooo much! I LOVE YOU! :smooch: And I'll definatly write a new one.. maybe even today? (I just got home from my big brothers wedding :heart: and I'm in a very romancy mood :giggle:)
I hope we'll talk soon! :hug:

Awww Nille, it's adorable, i love it, specially the parts i quoted. You wrote Jate just like Darlton would, all the shyness and subtle gesture, the cuteness... it's really great! You did great and you should post more scenes :w00t:!


:smooch: thank you Mr. cool :cool: and thank you for finally coming to the DYOJS thread! :giggle:


Nille, are you sure this was your first attempt at writing Jate ever? :shock:´cause, if it is - you´re hired! :w00t: :D
p.s. just as I told to Manda... why dont you write more often? :eyes:


Marina I cannot even begin to describe what your review means to me - cause you're like the DYOJS queen in my world! You ROCK so freaking much! :w00t: so thank you sooooooooo much for your time and sweet words! :heart:


I know I've said this like a million times before in my art thread - but the jaters on here - are seriously the best bunch of people anyone could find! I've just had the week from hell :( I've been sick and school has been really rough (I did have a really nice weekend though - My brother got married :love:)
but then I come on here and you wonderful people just make the world seem right again!
:uberglomp: I love you guys! And thank you all so muvh for encouraging me to write more - I def. will! :D

trivia
09-14-2008, 06:20 AM
Great work, ladies!! :love:

Manda, Pernille and Kayla, love your Dyojs's!! It was angsty, cute, sad, funny, just as they are supposed to be!


Marina,
So... my exams finished and... I´m ready to write again So...anyone has any request? ´cause I would really, really like to write something, but... I dont have any inspirations for a plot
I do. :p
Can you write about angsty Jate and then Kate finds out that she's pregnant and she realises she wants to raise the baby with Jack? (may be a few weeks after TTLG?)
I don't know if you want to write angsty, but the story should have a pregnant Kate in it. (you knw why ;))

BlueDream
09-14-2008, 06:37 AM
Marina I cannot even begin to describe what your review means to me - cause you're like the DYOJS queen in my world! You ROCK so freaking much! :w00t: so thank you sooooooooo much for your time and sweet words! :heart:

Dang! Now you almost made me cry :bawl: tnx for the nice words :hug2: And I totally agree with what you said - the people here are just made of awesome. :grouphug: Sorry you had a week from hell. :hug: and, congrats to your brother! :w00t:

trivia: Can you write about angsty Jate and then Kate finds out that she's pregnant and she realises she wants to raise the baby with Jack? (may be a few weeks after TTLG?)

hmmm, as a matter of fact - i already have in store something similar to that :ponder: Started writing it like a few days before you came, actually. :smooch: I´ll see if I can find it. ;)

I don't know if you want to write angsty, but the story should have a pregnant Kate in it. (you knw why ;) )

Can I name this one Jax then? :eyes: :p

trivia
09-14-2008, 06:52 AM
hmmm, as a matter of fact - i already have in store something similar to that :ponder: Started writing it like a few days before you came, actually. :smooch: I´ll see if I can find it. ;)



Can I name this one Jax then? :eyes: :p

mwww :shifty:

You're gonna follow me everywhere with that?! :p

Okay you can name him Jax, but if you want other Jaters to like your Dyojs I think you should reconsider... :raspberry

But thanks for writing sweets! :smooch:

Nille815
09-14-2008, 06:09 PM
Marina - I agree with Rachel- write a DYOJS with a Jaby :love: Pweasee?

Wow - Ok! Í actually wrote another one :) This is set in 2.19 S.O.S it's a continuation of the scene where they're walking in the rain and Kate admits to the whole jungle adventure with claire :D I've been to my brother's wedding this weekend so it's kinda pink-marshmellows-butterflies-fluffy.. I haven't tried my hand at some real angst yet, but maybe I'll do that the next time :) also this scenario has been done a 1000 times before, but I figured we could all use a a little Jissing in the rain during the hiatus :w00t:
Hope you enjoy it and please let me know what you thought! :smooch: constructive critisism is very welcome :D


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Confessions in the Rain

“What?... You can keep one of them locked up in the hatch for like a week and say nothing, but then when I decide-“ Kate came to an abrupt stop when Jack turned towards her again with a not so foreign look in his eyes. It was the same look he had given her on the way back to camp after they had met the Others for the first time.

“I just didn’t want you anywhere near him, okay?” his voice almost rising to a shout over the noise of the pounding rain. His eyes settled on hers and Kate could sense he was frustrated with her, maybe even angry. Kate knew she had made mistakes, she was paying for them everyday, but Jack had made his mistakes too. She had thought they we’re returning to normal, regaining some of that connection they shared. The thought of Jack still not confiding in her, not trusting her anymore, pissed Kate off and her voice rose to match his.

“What? You don’t trust me?” At her words Jack’s gaze softened, and she instantly knew, she had mistaken his words. He looked at the ground for a moment, his lower lip between his teeth. He opened his mouth to speak but instead just continued to stare hard at the soggy ground beneath them. When he raised his eyes to her again, there was a sense of determination about him and the way he was looking at her made Kate lean a little closer to him. And the anger slowly disappeared as she focused on hearing what he was trying to tell her.

“I’m sorry, I should have told you… and I do trust you it’s just-” here his strong voice faltered for a moment as if he was lost for words. He searched her face as if looking for a sign to finish what he was trying to tell her. And at that moment Kate realised just how profoundly she had missed him the last couple of weeks. He hadn’t looked at her or spoken to her as he was now, and it hurt. Without him this place wasn’t bearable, he was just across the beach but it had felt like he was miles away. She didn’t feel right not knowing where he was or if he was really okay. It was frustrating watching him with Ana-Lucia and only be granted a strained smile once in a while. She never felt safe at night not having heard his reassuring voice or not having received a warm smile from him during the day.

Whatever Jack found in her eyes made him continue, “I wanted to protect you… they took you once before and I… I can’t risk losing you” his soft voice was almost drowned out by the hammering of the rain, Kate had heard him but she wasn’t sure if he had just really admitted what he had The way he was looking at her made her heart hammer away in her chest and she was sure he could hear it. He was smiling slightly almost looking sheepish but his warm sincere eyes were focused entirely on her, holding her captive. He had done the whole protective thing before, and she knew that he cared about her, but never before had he been this open about his feelings for her. Kate wasn’t blind, she knew there was a physical attraction between them, but she also felt a deep connection to him. She had felt bound to Jack from day one and she was done denying the fact that she falling head over heels in love with him. She had realised that when she kissed him and it had scared her. She had run from him. And now she realised, that that had hurt him as much as it had hurt her. But the little voice in her head that usually began to scream at her to run when Jack got too close was unusually quiet.

Instead Kate took a small step forward, closing the distance between and timidly placed her hand over his heart on his chest. Its pace matched hers and it made her smile at him. He was watching her every move intently but remained silent. The rain was still pounding down around them, but all Kate could focus on was the soothing feeling of his steady heartbeat and his gaze that was slowly turning darker as she came closer to him. Her other hand settled on his chest too as she opened her mouth to speak.

“I miss you…” she whispered feeling like there wasn’t enough words to tell him exactly how much. There was so much she wanted to say, so many things he needed to hear, but all the right words were escaping her and all she could get out was that. She had forgotten her anger and forgiven him for his. Who had done what or why didn’t matter anymore. Only they mattered. Him and her. And before she had time to think another thought Jack closed the gap between them and closed his lips over hers.

It was gentle and familiar. It was as if they had never broken their first kiss. She had longed for the feeling of his hands the last time and a satisfied sigh escaped her as she finally experienced the feeling of Jack wrapping his strong arms around her, pulling her closer to him. Her own hands roamed across his muscular chest and she ached to feel his skin against her fingertips. They parted only for the need of oxygen, and when Kate opened her eyes she nearly melted at the look in Jack’s eyes and she could feel her own lips stretching into a wide smile. Again the voice that usually told her to run was quiet and all Kate could hear was her heart telling her to hold on like never before. She wasn’t scared anymore.

She pulled his head back down to hers and moved her lips over his. And as his warm hands found the naked skin of her back, she gasped and that allowed Jack to slip his tongue between her lips. A shiver went up her spine when their tongues finally met and she couldn’t help responding to his urging touch. His hands moved to her shoulders and slipped underneath the straps of her backpack, she got the message and untangled her arms from him so he could slip it off her shoulders. And when Kate had done the same for him she wrapped her arms around his neck and delved deeper into his mouth. She didn’t hear the rain, the camp at the beach didn’t exist and for the life of her she couldn’t remember her past. All that was clear was Jack; the feeling of his hands trailing through her hair, the sweet taste of his lips on hers, the warmth that was spreading from the centre of her chest all the way out to her toes. Jack moved his lips and breathed out her name against her neck and placed the sweetest kiss just below her ear. He’d taken her breath away and a moan of pleasure escaped her at the tingling feeling of his stubble and she whispered his name into his neck. He found her mouth again and kissed her fast and furiously, then slow and sensually. With her hands wrapped possessively around him, her body as close to his as humanly possible, she snaked her hands underneath his shirt to feel his skin and met him kiss for kiss.

They parted again as the rain drizzled to a stop, their breathing ragged and chests heaving. Jack settled his forehead against hers and pecked her once then twice. With the most beautiful smile on his face he whispered her name again with such want and love, it nearly made her whimper. She had never felt this at home and never wanted to leave his protective embrace. She leaned back slightly to look him in the eyes, her left hand rising to trace over his perfect nose, soft lips and strong jaw.

“I’m sorry I ran from you” she whispered, her voice slightly choked. He only smiled and nodded at her and the emotion in his eyes assured Kate that as long as she stayed now, it didn’t matter anymore. And Kate had every intention of doing just that. She never wanted to be without him again. And when Jack captured her lips again in a toe-curling kiss it was clear that he felt the same way.

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So? :shifty::o

Truefate21
09-14-2008, 08:45 PM
His hands moved to her shoulders and slipped underneath the straps of her backpack, she got the message and untangled her arms from him so he could slip it off her shoulders. And when Kate had done the same for him she wrapped her arms around his neck and delved deeper into his mouth. She didn’t hear the rain, the camp at the beach didn’t exist and for the life of her she couldn’t remember her past. All that was clear was Jack;

OMG........:thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: :thud:

THAT WAS GORGEOUS THAT WAS.............:boom: very nice!!

MARINA!!
DIDNT I REQUEST something like long long ago....:giggle::giggle::giggle: Im never getting it am i....:eh::eh::p

BlueDream
09-15-2008, 02:36 AM
MissGiggles, awwwww, that was such a cute fic :love: I was all :giggle: thinking about Jate getting married in Vegas without actually remembering it :rotflol: And, it´s really been a while since we had those types of the dyojses - I remember back in my first days here, we had the morning-afters dyojses almost every day, and they were all so cute. :love:

Kate Austen and Jack Sephard were good friends,but if you asked anyone around them they'd say that they were in love with each other and they were the only ones that didnt know it yet.

^loved the beginning - SO true :rolleyes: :sigh:

"OMG Do You Think We...."
They both looked ateach other scared to know the answer.Kate pulled up the blanket and found her answer , she looked back up at Jack and nodded
" Yup I Think We Did" She told him

:rotflol: they´re so cute :giggle:

Btw, just out of curiosity...do you always write in that style - with capitalizing every word of the dialoug? It was quite funny because, half through reading the dyojs, I was like: Wait...did she use different song titles as the dialouges, ´cause song titles are usually written like that, so I went back and started reading it again, trying to figure out if I knew any of the song :o :giggle:

_____


Nille, WOW, that was AMAZING! :thud: First of all, it was in the jungle. Second, it was in the jungle during rain. :thud: Could never fail with that combo. :giggle:

He looked at the ground for a moment, his lower lip between his teeth. He opened his mouth to speak but instead just continued to stare hard at the soggy ground beneath them
^that was sooooo Jack :bowdown:

Without him this place wasn’t bearable, he was just across the beach but it had felt like he was miles away.
^that was beautiful and so sad :(

But the little voice in her head that usually began to scream at her to run when Jack got too close was unusually quiet.
^ :thud: probably my favorite line of the whole story :thud:

Instead Kate took a small step forward, closing the distance between and timidly placed her hand over his heart on his chest. Its pace matched hers and it made her smile at him. He was watching her every move intently but remained silent. The rain was still pounding down around them, but all Kate could focus on was the soothing feeling of his steady heartbeat and his gaze that was slowly turning darker as she came closer to him. Her other hand settled on his chest too as she opened her mouth to speak.

“I miss you…” she whispered feeling like there wasn’t enough words to tell him exactly how much. There was so much she wanted to say, so many things he needed to hear, but all the right words were escaping her and all she could get out was that. She had forgotten her anger and forgiven him for his. Who had done what or why didn’t matter anymore. Only they mattered. Him and her. And before she had time to think another thought Jack closed the gap between them and closed his lips over hers.

:thud: :faint: :thud: :faint: :thud: :faint: <all I can say right now :faint:

It was gentle and familiar. It was as if they had never broken their first kiss.
^my second favorite line :thud: :heart: :cloud9:

She pulled his head back down to hers and moved her lips over his. And as his warm hands found the naked skin of her back, she gasped and that allowed Jack to slip his tongue between her lips. A shiver went up her spine when their tongues finally met and she couldn’t help responding to his urging touch. His hands moved to her shoulders and slipped underneath the straps of her backpack, she got the message and untangled her arms from him so he could slip it off her shoulders. And when Kate had done the same for him she wrapped her arms around his neck and delved deeper into his mouth.

*looks around* is it getting hot in here :sweat: :drool: Seriously now, the way you wrote their kiss - AMAZING! :thud:

She didn’t hear the rain, the camp at the beach didn’t exist and for the life of her she couldn’t remember her past. All that was clear was Jack; the feeling of his hands trailing through her hair, the sweet taste of his lips on hers, the warmth that was spreading from the centre of her chest all the way out to her toes.

That´s it - *dies* :thud:

I think I´m becoming addicted to your dyojses :love: so...more? :eyes:

Oh and...

Marina - I agree with Rachel- write a DYOJS with a Jaby Pweasee?

Well, tecnically, Rach demanded just a pregnant-Kate one, and I have something in mind - I already have it started somewhere, but couldnt find the paper yesterday, so it´ll have to wait for next week. :o But, I have plenty of time this week, so...how about this: I´ll write a pregnant Kate one for Rach, and I´ll write a Jaby one for you. :D I already have something in mind, just 2 questions: Jaby boy or Jaby girl? :love: And...with or without Aaron?

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MARINA!!
DIDNT I REQUEST something like long long ago....:giggle::giggle::giggle: Im never getting it am i....:eh::eh::p

Uhm...uhm...for the life of me I cant remember what it was about :o forgive me? :eyes: So...a bit of memory refreshing wouldnt hurt - what was it about? :please:

Brightlights
09-15-2008, 02:42 AM
Nille, that was awesome...:heart:

Foxy's_Lady
09-15-2008, 09:06 AM
WOW Pernille that was VERY good!!!!!Especially the last part :thud:
Well done girl :heart:

Nille815
09-15-2008, 09:27 AM
You guys are just made of awesome! :uberglomp:
Here's some cookies and flowers for you all - :flowers2::cookie::cookie:


Marina:
Well, tecnically, Rach demanded just a pregnant-Kate one, and I have something in mind - I already have it started somewhere, but couldnt find the paper yesterday, so it´ll have to wait for next week. But, I have plenty of time this week, so...how about this: I´ll write a pregnant Kate one for Rach, and I´ll write a Jaby one for you. I already have something in mind, just 2 questions: Jaby boy or Jaby girl? And...with or without Aaron?

oh sorry :o
well if you've got the time I would love a Jaby one :love: uhm.. maybe with Aaron and the the Jaby could be a little girl? :D
And I was wondering if you could perhaps give me an idea for another DYOJS I could write? I would really love a challenge of some sort - cause I wanna write some more but I don't really have a new scenario.. :sigh:

BlueDream
09-15-2008, 09:30 AM
Marina:
oh sorry :o
well if you've got the time I would love a Jaby one :love: uhm.. maybe with Aaron and the the Jaby could be a little girl? :D

Aaron and a Jaby girl it is :w00t: (to tell you the truth, I was hoping for exactly that answer :w00t:)

And I was wondering if you could perhaps give me an idea for another DYOJS I could write? I would really love a challenge of some sort - cause I wanna write some more but I don't really have a new scenario.. :sigh:

hmmmm.....well, do you feel like writing angst or fluff? S1/S2-ish Jate atmosphere or more like S3/S4-ish one?

Nille815
09-15-2008, 09:36 AM
Aaron and a Jaby girl it is :w00t: (to tell you the truth, I was hoping for exactly that answer :w00t:)

:love: can't wait to read it!

hmmmm.....well, do you feel like writing angst or fluff? S1/S2-ish Jate atmosphere or more like S3/S4-ish one?

:ponder: Well I haven't really tried my hand at some angst yet.. maybe I could try it out and see how it goes? so S3/S4-ish?

BlueDream
09-15-2008, 09:48 AM
:ponder: Well I haven't really tried my hand at some angst yet.. maybe I could try it out and see how it goes? so S3/S4-ish?

Hmmmm...I dont know... :ponder: *I´ll put it in the spoiler tags just in case you decide to go with it and other people dont want to get spoiled for the whole plot* Maybe some scenario set like...in S3... when Jack is still keeping his distance from Kate, maybe he goes on a trek alone, she follows him, he´s annoyed, they start arguing, then Kate goes about how she went back for him, *Jack yells back how he told her not to*, at the same time Kate continues to yell how she trekked the jungle and risked her life to find him,; (rain suddenly starting wouldnt be so bad either :p) and then he goes like into her face, yelling something like: Why?! Why did you do it, Kate? and they´re both screaming, and the rain is louder and louder and she burst out and yells back: BECAUSE I LOVE YOU! and then shocked Jack, crying Kate, tries to run, he stops her, stuff like that... :shrug:

Or maybe you could do with the post TTLG scene...Kate confronting Jack about his drink issues or something?

Nille815
09-15-2008, 09:58 AM
Hmmmm...I dont know... :ponder: *I´ll put it in the spoiler tags just in case you decide to go with it and other people dont want to get spoiled for the whole plot* Maybe some scenario set like...in S3... when Jack is still keeping his distance from Kate, maybe he goes on a trek alone, she follows him, he´s annoyed, they start arguing, then Kate goes about how she went back for him, *Jack yells back how he told her not to*, at the same time Kate continues to yell how she trekked the jungle and risked her life to find him,; (rain suddenly starting wouldnt be so bad either :p) and then he goes like into her face, yelling something like: Why?! Why did you do it, Kate? and they´re both screaming, and the rain is louder and louder and she burst out and yells back: BECAUSE I LOVE YOU! and then shocked Jack, crying Kate, tries to run, he stops her, stuff like that... :shrug:

Or maybe you could do with the post TTLG scene...Kate confronting Jack about his drink issues or something?

:ponder: I'll pobably not do exactly that, but you actually gave me an idea for a similar scene! Thank you :smooch: I'll get right too it (even though I need to catch up on like a ton of homework!:shifty:)

BlueDream
09-15-2008, 11:58 AM
:ponder: I'll pobably not do exactly that, but you actually gave me an idea for a similar scene! Thank you :smooch: I'll get right too it (even though I need to catch up on like a ton of homework!:shifty:)

Glad I could help :smooch: Can´t wait for it :hyper:

*Shining Fairy
09-15-2008, 01:22 PM
:o:o
Thank you Dorethy! :glomp: that was such an awesome review :w00t::w00t:
I've got my computer back.. but I don't have photoshop on it anymore.. :bawl:
Thank you thank you thank you sooo much! I LOVE YOU! :smooch: And I'll definatly write a new one.. maybe even today? (I just got home from my big brothers wedding :heart: and I'm in a very romancy mood :giggle:)
I hope we'll talk soon! :hug:
you're welcome sweetie :hug:
you know I love ALL of your work :D


Wow - Ok! Í actually wrote another one :) This is set in 2.19 S.O.S it's a continuation of the scene where they're walking in the rain and Kate admits to the whole jungle adventure with claire :D I've been to my brother's wedding this weekend so it's kinda pink-marshmellows-butterflies-fluffy.. I haven't tried my hand at some real angst yet, but maybe I'll do that the next time :) also this scenario has been done a 1000 times before, but I figured we could all use a a little Jissing in the rain during the hiatus :w00t:
Hope you enjoy it and please let me know what you thought! :smooch: constructive critisism is very welcome :D
ooooww how was the wedding...? :D




Confessions in the Rain

again the title just got me :love:
(your gonna see this :love: alot here :giggle:)


“I just didn’t want you anywhere near him, okay?” his voice almost rising to a shout over the noise of the pounding rain.
ooow I just love his protectiveness :love:


He looked at the ground for a moment, his lower lip between his teeth. He opened his mouth to speak but instead just continued to stare hard at the soggy ground beneath them. When he raised his eyes to her again, there was a sense of determination about him and the way he was looking at her made Kate lean a little closer to him. And the anger slowly disappeared as she focused on hearing what he was trying to tell her.
OK first beautifully written and yeah soo sweet :love:


“I’m sorry, I should have told you… and I do trust you it’s just-” here his strong voice faltered for a moment as if he was lost for words. He searched her face as if looking for a sign to finish what he was trying to tell her. And at that moment Kate realised just how profoundly she had missed him the last couple of weeks. He hadn’t looked at her or spoken to her as he was now, and it hurt. Without him this place wasn’t bearable, he was just across the beach but it had felt like he was miles away. She didn’t feel right not knowing where he was or if he was really okay. It was frustrating watching him with Ana-Lucia and only be granted a strained smile once in a while. She never felt safe at night not having heard his reassuring voice or not having received a warm smile from him during the day.
aawww :love: OMG how sweet
(BTW I'm like quoting almost every part of your fic :giggle:)


Whatever Jack found in her eyes made him continue, “I wanted to protect you… they took you once before and I… I can’t risk losing you” his soft voice was almost drowned out by the hammering of the rain, Kate had heard him but she wasn’t sure if he had just really admitted what he had The way he was looking at her made her heart hammer away in her chest and she was sure he could hear it. He was smiling slightly almost looking sheepish but his warm sincere eyes were focused entirely on her, holding her captive. He had done the whole protective thing before, and she knew that he cared about her, but never before had he been this open about his feelings for her
:love: I have no words


She had felt bound to Jack from day one and she was done denying the fact that she falling head over heels in love with him. She had realised that when she kissed him and it had scared her. She had run from him. And now she realised, that that had hurt him as much as it had hurt her. But the little voice in her head that usually began to scream at her to run when Jack got too close was unusually quiet.
aww :love:
I love how you've written the thing with the little voice screaming it's amazing


Instead Kate took a small step forward, closing the distance between and timidly placed her hand over his heart on his chest. Its pace matched hers and it made her smile at him.
my heartbeat matched too :giggle:


“I miss you…” she whispered feeling like there wasn’t enough words to tell him exactly how much. There was so much she wanted to say, so many things he needed to hear, but all the right words were escaping her and all she could get out was that. She had forgotten her anger and forgiven him for his. Who had done what or why didn’t matter anymore. Only they mattered. Him and her.
you just killed me
I mean woah just woah :love:
just Him and Her... god BEAUTIFUL


And before she had time to think another thought Jack closed the gap between them and closed his lips over hers.
they kissed they kissed :boogie:
and Jack started :giggle: :D


It was gentle and familiar. It was as if they had never broken their first kiss. She had longed for the feeling of his hands the last time and a satisfied sigh escaped her as she finally experienced the feeling of Jack wrapping his strong arms around her, pulling her closer to him. Her own hands roamed across his muscular chest and she ached to feel his skin against her fingertips. They parted only for the need of oxygen, and when Kate opened her eyes she nearly melted at the look in Jack’s eyes and she could feel her own lips stretching into a wide smile. Again the voice that usually told her to run was quiet and all Kate could hear was her heart telling her to hold on like never before. She wasn’t scared anymore.
I love how youve written this so beautifully descibed :love: :D


She pulled his head back down to hers and moved her lips over his. And as his warm hands found the naked skin of her back, she gasped and that allowed Jack to slip his tongue between her lips. A shiver went up her spine when their tongues finally met and she couldn’t help responding to his urging touch. His hands moved to her shoulders and slipped underneath the straps of her backpack, she got the message and untangled her arms from him so he could slip it off her shoulders. And when Kate had done the same for him she wrapped her arms around his neck and delved deeper into his mouth. She didn’t hear the rain, the camp at the beach didn’t exist and for the life of her she couldn’t remember her past. All that was clear was Jack; the feeling of his hands trailing through her hair, the sweet taste of his lips on hers, the warmth that was spreading from the centre of her chest all the way out to her toes. Jack moved his lips and breathed out her name against her neck and placed the sweetest kiss just below her ear. He’d taken her breath away and a moan of pleasure escaped her at the tingling feeling of his stubble and she whispered his name into his neck. He found her mouth again and kissed her fast and furiously, then slow and sensually. With her hands wrapped possessively around him, her body as close to his as humanly possible, she snaked her hands underneath his shirt to feel his skin and met him kiss for kiss.
two words HOT and sooo SWEET :D


Jack settled his forehead against hers and pecked her once then twice.

She had never felt this at home and never wanted to leave his protective embrace. She leaned back slightly to look him in the eyes, her left hand rising to trace over his perfect nose, soft lips and strong jaw
you know just be writhing these little things
you already have me all :cloud9: :love: :lotsalove:


“I’m sorry I ran from you” she whispered, her voice slightly choked. He only smiled and nodded at her and the emotion in his eyes assured Kate that as long as she stayed now, it didn’t matter anymore. And Kate had every intention of doing just that. She never wanted to be without him again. And when Jack captured her lips again in a toe-curling kiss it was clear that he felt the same way.
ooow :love: sweet :D



OMG Pernille you're just amazing
you just made my day no.. my week :D
beautiful sweet amazing fic just :love: :D
I LOVED it
you're so good at this :hug:
hooe to talk to you soon sweetie :glomp:

Truefate21
09-15-2008, 07:31 PM
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Uhm...uhm...for the life of me I cant remember what it was about :o forgive me? :eyes: So...a bit of memory refreshing wouldnt hurt - what was it about? :please:

:giggle::giggle: uhhhhh I dont member either!! crap! I know it was something about the Juiliet/Jack/Kate triangle.....


lol Im sure it was in a Private message or something....ill get back to you!!

Live together
09-25-2008, 02:05 PM
Could someone write something based on the new spoilers ? :help: Please.

BlueDream
09-26-2008, 07:26 AM
Could someone write something based on the new spoilers ? :help: Please.

*raises hand* I will. :hyper: I just got a great idea for the plot:w00t:, but, unfortunately, I wont be able to have it written until this time next week:o, ´cause I have college duties :(

livin_4_foxy
09-26-2008, 10:29 AM
Okay i need to catch up on my DYOJSes but I read Pernille's so I'll comment:

That was just amaaaazing:thud: It was intense and so jate and just aaah:love: really it was one of the best :clap: the way you write jate is spectacular and not OOC at all amazing work!

IrishUnicorn
09-30-2008, 10:24 AM
This is more of a drabble than anything else, but I'm just trying to get back into the routine of writing jate again. Hope you enjoy it anyway.;)



Skinny dipping had been his idea. Not that she was a prude or anything, but she did have a thing for privacy. And this beach wasn't exactly off the beaten path.

But it thrills her all the same as she slowly takes off her dress and lingerie before wading into the cold water, goosebumps immediately appearing on her bare arms.

The water's at Jack's waist as she approaches, and she's loving the way he's slowly raking his eyes all over her, like he's seeing her for the first time. She rests her hands on his chest, and his arms encircle her waist and he smirks when she trembles, but then she moves her body just so, and everything is forgotten.

sluky
10-01-2008, 07:40 AM
This is more of a drabble than anything else, but I'm just trying to get back into the routine of writing jate again. Hope you enjoy it anyway.;)



Skinny dipping had been his idea. Not that she was a prude or anything, but she did have a thing for privacy. And this beach wasn't exactly off the beaten path.

But it thrills her all the same as she slowly takes off her dress and lingerie before wading into the cold water, goosebumps immediately appearing on her bare arms.

The water's at Jack's waist as she approaches, and she's loving the way he's slowly raking his eyes all over her, like he's seeing her for the first time. She rests her hands on his chest, and his arms encircle her waist and he smirks when she trembles, but then she moves her body just so, and everything is forgotten.

thx:flowers2: I loved it!! cute,cute,cute :cloud9::heart:

BlueDream
10-06-2008, 01:47 PM
IrishUnicorn, that was sooooo good :thud: If you ever decide to turn this into a longer one-shot (:eyes:), please let us know :hyper:

p.s.

and he smirks when she trembles, but then she moves her body just so, and everything is forgotten.
^this line is just so good :thud: I was like: Goooo, Kate! :boogie: :giggle:

___

Okay, I know I said I´d write the spoilery one (it´s being written, dont worry, but it turned kinda bigger than I originally intended, so it might take me a couple of days more to bring it to an end;)), but I just got this little idea that wouldnt let me, so I decided to give it a shot.

This one´s for franci, ´cause she´s just so amazing on so many levels :glomp:

Set post the spoon scene in Catch22...

She felt a tear sliding down her cheek as she watched them having dinner and chatting casually, something he´d used to do with her before. Before all this mess that followed. One tear...two...three...and then she lost count of them. Her vision blurred as she rubbed the plate in her hands, ignoring that it was probably cristal clean by now. Suddenly, it fell down from her hands, but she didnt care to pick it up. She had to do something to keep her mind busy, to ignore the stabbing pain in her heart, so she reached for the next thing close, picking up the glass; knowing it´s glass just from the feel of it, ´cause her vision was blurred by the tears that were now sliding openly down her face. She heard Juliet laughing, and the pain in her heart became so hard that she reflexively squeezed her fists together; her eyes opening in shock as the fierce pain, this time a pysical one, shot through her body. The pain of pieces of glass driving into her palm...

*****

He watched as she grimaced in what seemed to be pain, though he couldn’t tell for sure from this distance, and squeezed her hand to her chest.

˝Jack, did you hear a word of what I just sai..? ˝Juliet started, but he was already on his feet.

˝Juliet, sorry, but I have to…˝he started, but he didn’t have to say more.

She followed his gaze. Of course. She enjoyed his company and she was starting to feel something more for him, but deep down she knew that his heart was already taken. She´d known it from the beginning. So she forced on the smile and nodded simply. ˝Sure. See you later. ˝

˝Yeah, see you. ˝he replied absent-mindedly; then headed towards her.


*******

˝Hey. ˝

He slowly approached her, noticing her flinching at the sound of his voice.

˝Hey, are you…are you crying? ˝he asked, suddenly concerned.

˝I´m fine. ˝she mumbled quietly as she looked away, trying to wipe away the tears with the back of her sleeve, the motion not missing his eyes. His eyebrows frowned in confusion for why she was doing it with her left hand when she was right-handed; but then his eyes caught the unnatural position of her right hand, that she was pressing tightly to her chest.

˝Kate, what…˝he started, but then noticed the red stain on her shirt, growing more and more. ˝Kate, you´re bleeding. ˝he said, squatting down next to her, reaching for her arm. ˝

˝It´s nothing. ˝she brushed him off. She didn’t want him to see her in this state.

˝Kate. ˝he said firmly, ignoring her protests and taking her hand in his.

He winced as he saw that the cloth she wrapped it in was completely covered in blood. ˝Hey, how did this happen? ˝he asked gently, pressing his thumbs to try to stop the bleeding until he found other solution. She replied nothing, just shook her head, still sobbing and looking sideways. Jack sighed and looked around. He had to get some clean cloth and alcohol; but he couldn’t just leave her alone, especially since the cut was still bleeding. He had no luck though: the beach was completely deserted, most of the people having already gone to sleep.

While he was debating what to do, he heard footsteps behind, and soon a calm voice as Juliet came out of the bushes.

˝I, uhm…I just came to see if everything´s all right? ˝she said as she stepped into the clearing.

Jack felt Kate´s hand twitch at the sound of Juliet´s words as she buried her head between her knees. He looked back at the camp, the place where he had just had dinner with Juliet a couple of minutes ago clearly visible, and suddenly it all made sense. He shook his head and looked at her sadly. Guess he wasn’t the only one hurting.

˝Oh my God, Kate, are you okay? ˝Juliet asked as her eyes fell on Kate´s hand.

˝Yeah, she´s…she´s fine. ˝Jack decided to take this one on himself. ˝She cut her hand on the glass. Listen…could you go to my tent and get me some clean cloth and some alcohol? The cut´s quite deep and I´ll probably have to stitch it up. ˝he said, and Juliet nodded.

˝Of course. ˝

˝It´s in the metal case under the pillow. ˝he said, the marshall´s case now serving as a great place to hold his medical supplies. ˝The code is S-N-B-H-4-1-0. ˝ Juliet raised an eyebrow. ˝Sawyer. ˝ he explained, and she laughed.

When Juliet left, he turned to Kate again. ˝This might hurt, but I have to do it. ˝he said as he carefully unwrapped the bandage, then put her hand in the sea. She jerked at the contact, but he kept her steady, allowing the salt water to clean the wound naturally. He glanced at her, and saw that she wasn’t crying anymore. He smiled a bit. ˝Feeling better? ˝

She smiled back. ˝Yeah, I´m…I´m okay now. ˝she replied. Letting it all out, crying it out…it really helped, it felt liberating. She even managed a smile of gratitude when Juliet came back carrying Jack´s medical box and a couple of pieces of a white cloth.

˝Here, I brought you the whole box, in case you need something else. ˝she said as she placed the box on the sand.

˝Thanks, Juliet. ˝Jack replied, reaching for the box and pulling out the stuff he found necessary, one hand still holding the pressure on Kate´s wound.

˝You okay? ˝Juliet asked, and Kate smiled, this time genuinely.

˝Yeah, thanks. ˝

Juliet nodded. ˝Okay, I´ll…I´ll leave you two alone. ˝she said, and with one last glance at them, disappeared in the bushes.

Jack pulled out a small bottle and opened it.

˝This might sting a bit. ˝he warned before pouring alcohol on her wound. Her hand jerked reflexively, but he held it in place, his fingers gently tapping the cloth across the open cut. Once he was sure he applied the liquid all over the cut, he laid her hand back on her knee, reaching inside the box and pulling out a small sewing kit. He then remembered something, and looked at her, flashing her a grin: ˝Any color preference? ˝

She looked up, her lips stretching into a smile too as the moment of their first meeting came floating in her mind. ˝Nope. Standard black is perfectly fine. ˝

Jack smiled as he took her hand in his again. ˝Back to where it all began, huh? ˝

They both looked up and their eyes met, the words suddenly getting a deeper meaning than he originally intended to. They held the gaze for a while, neither of them being strong enough to look away first. Jack slowly opened his mouth to say something, but another voice coming from the background was faster, ´causing both Jack and Kate to wake up from the trance they were in.

˝Heeey, Kate, Jack…what´s up? ˝Hurley said cheerfully as he stepped on the sand, grinning at them. But, the grin was suddenly replaced by nausea as his eyes fell down on Kate´s hand. ˝Whoa, dude…is that like…blood? ˝

Jack and Kate held back a giggle.

˝Yeah, Kate cut herself, and I have to stitch it. ˝Jack replied, then , knowing Hurley´s aversion to everything that had a word ´blood´ in it, added: ˝Wanna help me sew it up? ˝He knew it was a bit mean, but he finally had a reason to be near her, and, although he was still hurting, it felt so good to just sit like that in her company, and he didn’t want to share even a second of it with anyone else.

˝Oh, I…uhm…no, I…I have to go…somewhere to do…something. Yeah. So, uhm…see ya. ˝Hurley mumbled.

Both Jack and Kate laughed.

˝He´s one of a kind. ˝Jack said, shaking his head, smile still playing on his lips.

˝Yeah, he really is. ˝Kate replied affectionately.

They stayed silent for a while, watching Hurley leave; then Jack remembered why there were here in the first place, and cleared his throat. ˝Uhm…I think we better start with this. ˝

˝Oh, y-yeah. ˝Kate replied, his fingers so gentle on her hand that she had forgotten for a moment that her hand was still bleeding.

He gently spread her palm and used a wet piece of cloth to wipe away the blood that was still pouring out of the wound; then decided it was time to start with the real work. He noticed her eyes flickering towards the needle with a hint of panic in them, and he chuckled slightly.

˝Scared of needles, Kate? ˝he asked, his grin bordering on mocking.

˝No. ˝she replied quickly. A bit too quickly.

He smiled, finding this side of her adorable. Suddenly, he had an idea. ˝Tell me something, Kate. ˝he said as his fingers steadied her hand. ˝Exactly how often were you at ER when you were a kid? ˝he asked with a chuckle. He brought the needle at her palm and she flinched as she felt it piercing her skin, but his question soon threw her off balance, making her forget the pain for a moment. She looked up at him, confused, so he explained: ˝I mean…curious, restless, loves taking risk hike and climbing the top trees…˝ he finished, pulling the needle out; then repeating the process again. ˝Your parents must have had their hands very busy with you. ˝

She smiled, blushing a bit. ˝Well…I guess you could say I was a bit of a wild child. ˝she replied, smiling.

˝Kneels full of bruises…˝he started, glad that his distracting strategy was apparently working.

˝... every-day cuts...˝she added, blushing slightly.

˝Probably a broken leg…or arm, I assume. ˝he went on, his eyes alternating between watching the stitching proceeding and holding her gaze, watching her as she revived some of her childhood memories.

˝Leg and arm, actually. ˝she stated, and he raised her eyebrows at her. ˝I had a thing for flying when I was 6. And my best friend´s obsession were airplanes. ˝she said with a sad chuckle. ˝Add paper wings and the top of a stable to it and…˝she explained, making him laugh.

˝Wow, I´m impressed. ˝he said with a grin, applying the needle for one last time.

˝Well, I wasn’t so impressed after it all. Two weeks in the hospital; then another three at forced bed rest. ˝she said, not quite getting this sudden interest in her childhood, but happy that they were finally communicating, so she didn’t mind. ˝Let´s just say I wasn’t so interested in flying after that. ˝she joked.

She watched him smile and felt that familiar feeling inside of her stomach, the one she often got when around him. She couldn’t help but smile too.

˝I can understand why. ˝he grinned, tying up the bandage around her hand and securing it with a rope. He looked up and, bringing her hand back to rest on her knee, smiled and said: There you go. Done. ˝

She looked down at her hand; then up at him again. Her wound was stitched up. But…she barely felt a thing. ˝How…how did you do that? ˝she asked in genuine astonishment, causing him to laugh.

˝A doctor never reveals his secrets. ˝he replied, smiling.

She brushed her left hand across the bandage; then looked up at him again, her eyes piercing his. ˝Thank you. ˝

He smiled and nodded. ˝You´re welcome. Now, you need to keep that dry for a couple of days, not press or over-burden it, and it should heal quickly. And, of course, no tree climbing. ˝he said, packing up the sewing kit. ˝Or doing the dishes, since apparently you can turn that too into a risky operation. ˝he added, grinning.

She smiled, blushing a bit. ˝No tree-climbing or dishes-doing – got it. ˝she said as she watched him getting up. Her smile soon turned into a sad one when she realized that this was probably the time when he would have to go away. Jack thought the same thing.

˝So, uhm…I should go get this back. ˝he said, a bit awkwardly. He wanted to stay there, wanted to stay near her; but there was still a part of him that found it difficult.

˝Yeah, okay. ˝she said and smiled uncertainly.

He smiled too; then turned around, heading to his tent.

******

She was sitting on the beach, her knees drawn to her chest; her hand cradled securely in her lap. It was late, the only sounds that could be heard coming from the waves crushing against the shore or the leaves rustling in the background. She was staring at the ocean, her eyes fixed on the now barely visible line that separated the sea from the sky. She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn’t even hear him coming.

˝This seat taken? ˝he asked softly, not wanting to scare her.

She looked up and smiled at him, watching him go down next to her, his shoulders accidentally brushing against hers in the process.

˝So…what are you doing up so late, Kate? ˝he asked.

˝I guess I could ask you the same thing, Jack. ˝she replied playfully, looking at him from the corner of her eyes.

He chuckled. Always with the mysteries. ˝I couldn’t sleep. Hurley´s snoring quite loud, occasionally muttering something about ´chicken´ and ´cluckity´ and stuff. ˝

She laughed. ˝I couldn’t sleep either. So I thought I might come here and watch the ocean instead. It´s calming. ˝she said.

He kept his eyes on her. Her ability to spend hours just staring at the ocean always amazed him, especially when he knew that she usually couldn’t stay at one place too long. He followed her gaze, watching the waves rising up then dropping again, following the only them known rhythm. He had to admit it, it really had a calming effect. No one spoke for a while, both of them gazing at the deep blue in front of them, listening to the sounds of the nature and just enjoying the mutual silence.

˝Jack? ˝Kate suddenly spoke. It was barely a whisper, but he heard it. She paused for a minute, her gaze still fixed firmly in front. ˝Do you…do you believe we´ll ever be…us again? ˝she asked sadly.

He turned his head to look at her. She was still staring in front, but he knew her enough that she didn’t care about the ocean anymore. She was waiting for his answer, and scared of it at the same time.

He returned his gaze towards the ocean too, crossing his arms on his knees. Will they ever be ´them´ again? It was a difficult question. His mind flashed to the way he´d felt when he finally saw her again, all messy and confused, behind that damned glass; to the jolt his heart had given as he saw her standing in that doorway when she came back for him, to how it felt to have her hands on his again in that game room; to how…natural it seemed, for that brief period tonight, to watch her flirt with him. He realized he already knew the answer to it.

He slowly turned to look at her. She looked so…peaceful; and yet so tormented at the same time. Her curls were fluttering silently in the wind, and the whole scene reminded him to that moment only a couple of days after he´d met her. We should all be able to start over. He smiled. ˝Yeah, I believe we will. ˝he said softly, and she looked at him, emerald eyes digging into chocolate ones. ˝It´ll just take time. ˝he added quietly, his eyes pleading her to understand.

She nodded. Time. She had that. ˝Okay. ˝she said.

˝Okay. ˝he repeated.

And with that said, they both returned their gazes towards the ocean again, happy because tomorrow would be a new day...

franci
10-06-2008, 02:24 PM
This one´s for franci, ´cause she´s just so amazing on so many levels :glomp:

aw thank you babe! :smooch: and you're pretty awesome yourself you know that right?!

Set post the spoon scene in Catch22...

She felt a tear sliding down her cheek as she watched them having dinner and chatting casually, something he´d used to do with her before. Before all this mess that followed. One tear...two...three...and then she lost count of them.

aw you know..it always amazes me to think that she was crying.I mean..Jack was just eating dinner with Juliet..and Kate was CRYING.it's pretty impressive..

He then remembered something, and looked at her, flashing her a grin: ˝Any color preference? ˝

She looked up, her lips stretching into a smile too as the moment of their first meeting came floating in her mind. ˝Nope. Standard black is perfectly fine. ˝

Jack smiled as he took her hand in his again. ˝Back to where it all began, huh? ˝

aw well,you know how much i adore this kind of references..especially on THAT scene... :heart:

˝Do you…do you believe we´ll ever be…us again?

this is something SO jatey..I could totally see one of them saying this.probably Jack now,considering he's the one who left...


˝It´ll just take time. ˝

hehe...jate teach how to be patient uh?


thanks so much huni! great dyojs :cloud9:

standard black
10-06-2008, 03:16 PM
lol I love the code.

S-N-B-H 4-10:giggle: nice detail

Arctic Fox
10-06-2008, 04:49 PM
BlueDream, that was amaaazing! :faint:



She felt a tear sliding down her cheek as she watched them having dinner and chatting casually, something he´d used to do with her before. Before all this mess that followed. One tear...two...three...and then she lost count of them. Her vision blurred as she rubbed the plate in her hands, ignoring that it was probably cristal clean by now. Suddenly, it fell down from her hands, but she didnt care to pick it up. She had to do something to keep her mind busy, to ignore the stabbing pain in her heart, so she reached for the next thing close, picking up the glass; knowing it´s glass just from the feel of it, ´cause her vision was blurred by the tears that were now sliding openly down her face. She heard Juliet laughing, and the pain in her heart became so hard that she reflexively squeezed her fists together; her eyes opening in shock as the fierce pain, this time a pysical one, shot through her body. The pain of pieces of glass driving into her palm...

*****

:bawl: That was so beautifully written, and so emotional!

He watched as she grimaced in what seemed to be pain, though he couldn’t tell for sure from this distance, and squeezed her hand to her chest.

˝Jack, did you hear a word of what I just sai..? ˝Juliet started, but he was already on his feet.

I love Jack :love:

˝Hey, are you…are you crying? ˝he asked, suddenly concerned.

˝I´m fine. ˝she mumbled quietly as she looked away, trying to wipe away the tears with the back of her sleeve, the motion not missing his eyes. His eyebrows frowned in confusion for why she was doing it with her left hand when she was right-handed; but then his eyes caught the unnatural position of her right hand, that she was pressing tightly to her chest.

˝Kate, what…˝he started, but then noticed the red stain on her shirt, growing more and more. ˝Kate, you´re bleeding. ˝he said, squatting down next to her, reaching for her arm. ˝

˝It´s nothing. ˝she brushed him off. She didn’t want him to see her in this state.

˝Kate. ˝he said firmly, ignoring her protests and taking her hand in his.

I could totally see this scene when I was reading it :love:

˝It´s in the metal case under the pillow. ˝he said, the marshall´s case now serving as a great place to hold his medical supplies. ˝The code is S-N-B-H-4-1-0. ˝ Juliet raised an eyebrow. ˝Sawyer. ˝ he explained, and she laughed.

I smiled so much when I read that :D Nice touch ^^

˝This might sting a bit. ˝he warned before pouring alcohol on her wound. Her hand jerked reflexively, but he held it in place, his fingers gently tapping the cloth across the open cut. Once he was sure he applied the liquid all over the cut, he laid her hand back on her knee, reaching inside the box and pulling out a small sewing kit. He then remembered something, and looked at her, flashing her a grin: ˝Any color preference? ˝

She looked up, her lips stretching into a smile too as the moment of their first meeting came floating in her mind. ˝Nope. Standard black is perfectly fine. ˝

:love:

Jack smiled as he took her hand in his again. ˝Back to where it all began, huh? ˝

They both looked up and their eyes met, the words suddenly getting a deeper meaning than he originally intended to. They held the gaze for a while, neither of them being strong enough to look away first. Jack slowly opened his mouth to say something, but another voice coming from the background was faster, ´causing both Jack and Kate to wake up from the trance they were in.

˝Heeey, Kate, Jack…what´s up? ˝

Hurley! :shifty: :shifty:

˝Yeah, Kate cut herself, and I have to stitch it. ˝Jack replied, then , knowing Hurley´s aversion to everything that had a word ´blood´ in it, added: ˝Wanna help me sew it up? ˝He knew it was a bit mean, but he finally had a reason to be near her, and, although he was still hurting, it felt so good to just sit like that in her company, and he didn’t want to share even a second of it with anyone else.

Go Jack :cool:

˝I can understand why. ˝he grinned, tying up the bandage around her hand and securing it with a rope. He looked up and, bringing her hand back to rest on her knee, smiled and said: There you go. Done. ˝

She looked down at her hand; then up at him again. Her wound was stitched up. But…she barely felt a thing. ˝How…how did you do that? ˝she asked in genuine astonishment, causing him to laugh.

˝A doctor never reveals his secrets. ˝he replied, smiling.

:D

˝Jack? ˝Kate suddenly spoke. It was barely a whisper, but he heard it. She paused for a minute, her gaze still fixed firmly in front. ˝Do you…do you believe we´ll ever be…us again? ˝she asked sadly.

He turned his head to look at her. She was still staring in front, but he knew her enough that she didn’t care about the ocean anymore. She was waiting for his answer, and scared of it at the same time.

He returned his gaze towards the ocean too, crossing his arms on his knees. Will they ever be ´them´ again? It was a difficult question. His mind flashed to the way he´d felt when he finally saw her again, all messy and confused, behind that damned glass; to the jolt his heart had given as he saw her standing in that doorway when she came back for him, to how it felt to have her hands on his again in that game room; to how…natural it seemed, for that brief period tonight, to watch her flirt with him. He realized he already knew the answer to it.

He slowly turned to look at her. She looked so…peaceful; and yet so tormented at the same time. Her curls were fluttering silently in the wind, and the whole scene reminded him to that moment only a couple of days after he´d met her. We should all be able to start over. He smiled. ˝Yeah, I believe we will. ˝he said softly, and she looked at him, emerald eyes digging into chocolate ones. ˝It´ll just take time. ˝he added quietly, his eyes pleading her to understand.

She nodded. Time. She had that. ˝Okay. ˝she said.

˝Okay. ˝he repeated.

And with that said, they both returned their gazes towards the ocean again, happy because tomorrow would be a new day...

Beautiful ending! Amazing scene, just amazing! :love:
Great job :glomp:

Truefate21
10-06-2008, 10:06 PM
MARINA!!!

:thud: SO GORGEOUS....

˝Jack? ˝Kate suddenly spoke. It was barely a whisper, but he heard it. She paused for a minute, her gaze still fixed firmly in front. ˝Do you…do you believe we´ll ever be…us again? ˝she asked sadly.

awwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! :love: :faint: :faint: :love: so cute!!!!

The code is S-N-B-H-4-1-0.

hehehe :crackup: Im sure that is the code!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES!! CANNOT WAAAIT FOR THE LONG ONE!! POST IT SOON!! :w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t:

*Shining Fairy
10-10-2008, 12:46 PM
:thud: Marina you just killed me...
beautiful :love: just beautiful :hug:

Kirwani
10-11-2008, 12:34 PM
i ADORED reading that! :love:

livin_4_foxy
10-11-2008, 03:43 PM
Marnia that was amazingly beautiful thats all i have to say:thud::love:
+ i luved the code:rotflol:

BlueDream
10-12-2008, 09:48 AM
Awwwwwwww, guys, thank you SO much for all the wonderful comments - you´re the best! :grouphug: Glad you also liked the ˝code˝ :giggle: I just couldnt resist :o :giggle: I should have the spoilery one up by Tuesday, Wednesday the most ;)

livin_4_foxy
10-13-2008, 01:48 PM
I have suggestions for DYOJses if anyone needs inspiration:

A reeeeeeaally fluffy one. Thats just over the top fluffyness and flirting and the use of last names.:love::heart:

Jate going on there very first date off island before eggtown or SNBH. Before they get together. It can be really cute cause they fcan talk about the island and get to know eachother and have there second kiss:love:
(^i was thinking of making that a short fic but... i dont have time. :rolleyes: stupid rl)

Kate jelous of juliet. I just still love those. And Jack does the whole "Are you jelous?" thing to Kate. :love:

so i've given you options people

and im totally in need of dyojses because i miss jate sooooo sooo much:( (plus ive read every single fic/dyojs there is of jate..no joke:shifty:)

BlueDream
10-13-2008, 02:25 PM
Kate jelous of juliet. I just still love those. And Jack does the whole "Are you jelous?" thing to Kate. :love:

*snatches this one* :giggle: I just got the idea :hyper: Do you mind if it´s in the hatch? I started re-watching S2 with my friend recently, so I´m totally in the hatch mood lately :giggle: But...it might take a while, ´cause I have at least 1 requested before that :o But, if it´ll make you feel better, I´ll have the long one up tomorrow :w00t: That´s a promise ;)

EDIT: Oh and, I agree - someone please pretty please write the Jate date one? :please: :eyes:

livin_4_foxy
10-13-2008, 02:58 PM
*snatches this one* :giggle: I just got the idea :hyper: Do you mind if it´s in the hatch? I started re-watching S2 with my friend recently, so I´m totally in the hatch mood lately :giggle: But...it might take a while, ´cause I have at least 1 requested before that :o But, if it´ll make you feel better, I´ll have the long one up tomorrow :w00t: That´s a promise ;)

EDIT: Oh and, I agree - someone please pretty please write the Jate date one? :please: :eyes:

Ohhhh oh:) thatd be awesome! i miss the hatch too. oh im excited now:hyper:
marina your the best!:D

and i think i'll try to do a jate date one. but urggg stupid work . :no:

BlueDream
10-14-2008, 02:38 AM
^glad you´re gonna do it :hyper:

Okay, as promised, here is the ˝long˝ one. I have to put a warning first, ´cause some parts of it are based on spoilers we got for S5. Most of the dyojs is just my imagination, but the general setting and some tidbits are part of the spoilers; so I´m gonna put it all in spoiler tags, just in case. So, if you don´t want to know anything about S5, resist and don´t read this. :strong: If you do, hope you´ll like it. :) It´s written for Pauline - hope I managed to do it justice ;) The song is If tomorrow never comes by Ronan Keating :bawl:

Oh and, the timeline is a bit...messy:shifty:, ´cause there are 3 timelines intertwining: the present (written in past tense), the past (written in present (:giggle:) as a part of Kate´s dream of what really happened) and Kate´s nightmare (written in present, but in italics). That´s one of the main reasons why it took me so long, because it was hard to organize all of that.


If Tomorrow Never Comes...


He was sitting in an armchair next to the big, sulky-looking bed. His face looked tired; his usually sparkly eyes were now closed, as if they too wanted to escape this place of despair and fear into some better, happier world.

The escape, even if only a mental one, was impossible to reach though, thanks to the loud noises coming from the outside. The sounds of the cars passing, the horns of some nervous drivers as they turned around the corner, the excited chattering of the prostitutes waiting under the cover of the night, the cussing of the diner owner as he tried to drive them away...

Jack opened his eyes and sighed sadly. He wanted to offer her more than this, but he couldn’t risk. Staying at his or her place overnight or renting a room in one of the fancy hotels both of them could afford now was out of question – those would be the first places those people would look at. No, they couldn’t risk.

Sometimes late at night/ I lie awake and watch her sleeping...

A small shifting coming from the bed next to him shook him out of his thoughts. He looked down at the figure lying on it, her tiny body looking even more fragile under the dim light coming from the street lamp outside.

She was lying on her front, her face turned in his direction, soft curls spread across the pillow. She looked troubled, even in sleep. He could see the small frowns decorating her forehead and the dark bags beneath her eyes, reminders of the calamities that had found her a couple of days ago and changed what till then had been a pretty ordinary life. He watched her body rising up and down as she breathed rhythmically, and his eyes didn’t feel lifeless anymore. On the contrary, a tiny sparkle was starting to shine in them; a sparkle they always had when she was on the receiving side of his gaze. A sparkle of a man in love.

He watched her sleeping for a few minutes; then got up and approached the bed. He lifted the covers and placed them gently over her body, his lips stretching into a smile as he watched her snuggling in. His gaze drifted towards her face and the smile faded quickly, replaced by a painful grimace. Even under the faint light coming from the outside, he could still see the traces of tears that had carved themselves into her cheeks, and his heart broke for her once again, ´cause he knew that she had cried herself to sleep this night too. He reached his hand, pausing for a while; then applied it gently on her cheek, his fingers almost flinching as they came in contact with the familiar skin under them. He watched her reply to his touch, her head reflexively snuggling closer, and he let out a sad sigh. ...so I turn out the lights and lay there in the dark... Brushing his fingers one last time across her cheek, he slowly got up and returned to his armchair again, wincing as the bandage on his shoulder moved, pain shooting through his body. He could still feel the sharp pain of the bullet piercing his skin, luckily just grazing his shoulder. He shifted in the chair until he found a more comfortable position; regretting for a moment his insisting that she was the one to sleep on the bed; then smiled and closed his eyes, the lyrics from the radio reaching his conscious.

And the thought crosses my mind/ If I never wake up in the morning...

He opened his eyes, finding it quite ironic that of all the songs out there precisely this one was playing. His eyes fell on the sleeping figure and his face turned serious again. If he hadn’t bent down that precise second, that bullet would’ve shot him in the heart. And if that had happened, he’d have been dead; there was no doubt about that.

And if my time on earth were through/ And she must face the world without me...

But strangely, it didn’t make him think of himself or of what he would have lost. On the contrary, all that was on his mind was her and how would she cope with that. He knew she was strong, stronger than most women he knew, but he doubted she could stand losing him too, especially now when she had already lost Aaron, when she didn’t know where her son was or what had happened to him.

As he sat there quietly, he wondered where the boy could be, if he was scared, missing his mummy, calling for her, or…maybe even him… and he felt a small tear sliding down his cheek. The last thing his conscious registrated before he drifted off to sleep was a promise he made. A promise that he would get the boy back…

Is the love I gave her in the past/ Gonna be enough to last/ If tomorrow never comes...

********

It’s dark, she’s sleeping in her bed. Suddenly, she hears the sound of the phone ringing. She groans, putting her head under the pillow. She’s determined to ignore it, she’s tired, so tired, all she wants to do is to sleep. But it keeps ringing, the dull sound piercing her brain. She groans again, annoyed. She opens her eyes slowly, squinting at the alarm clock nearby. Her eyebrows frown. 4:30. (Who could it be this early?) She taps her hand blindly until she reaches the phone, then picks up the receiver, pressing it to her ear as she digs her head back into the pillow.

˝´ello? ˝she mumbles sleepily.

˝Katherine Austen?˝ says the voice on the other side.

She stiffens. Something in the tone of the voice makes her go nervous. ˝Y-yeah. Who is that? ˝she asks, dreading the reply.

˝My name’s Timothy Robbing, Miss. I’m calling from Saint Angels… (No, no…) This number was listed as an emergency contact. ˝

The voice sounds cold and distant as it lists on and on the words that have no meaning to her. ˝…shooting…severe injuries…(No, no...)…the doctors did all they could…(No, no, this isn’t true, this isn’t happening…)...I’m really sorry, Miss Austen. ˝

Next scene… she’s walking down the dark corridor, everything’s dark, even the walls. The only sound is coming from her heels as they land on the cold tiles. Someone opens the door for her and she enters the room. She’s in the morgue, and she watches as a man pulls open the table and lifts the sheet. (No!) She wants to scream, but she can’t, the terror too strong, too real. She approaches the body…(no, not the body. Him. She approaches him.) His eyes are closed; he looks like he’s sleeping. She runs her hand across his face, flinching at how cold it feels. She can feel the stubble beneath her fingers, and she sobs as she remembers how they joked about whether he should keep it or not. She feels someone’s hands on her shoulders, telling her it’s time to go; and another man starts pulling on the sheet. (No, no!) She’s screaming now, struggling to get free. (No, they can’t take him away!) She feels her knees going weak, and she catches one last glimpse of his face before it’s covered, and the next moment she’s falling on the ground, greeting the cold floor as she curls up and cries and cries and cries…

(~ I’m Kate./Jack….. Fear is sort of an odd thing….. Three days ago we all died. We should all be able to start over...… That’s me, hardcore… Well this is a first. You standing still... middle of the day doing nothing. Amazing...... You’ll like it, I swear….. I didn’t do it for him…..and I have to know that you've got my back……You hooked it. Try keeping your left arm straight……….It's okay. It's alright………..You're not coming! You're staying. Alright?.......... The hatch can wait until morning... if you'd like me to walk you back to the beach………..I’m not……. Did they hurt you?.......... Kate, dammit, run!........ The first day on the beach, the day of the crash...the story that I told you. If you're safe, tell me…………I need you to make me a promise, Kate…………But I will come back here for you………Because I love you. ~)

Her head shoots up. She did it again. She killed the man she loved. She lets the tears running down her face as she remembers the events from the day before…

...................

… The screen flips….we´re on a street now. It’s crowded, people rushing up and down. She’s in the car, flicking nervously the cell phone in her hands, her eyes wandering all over the street, looking for something. Or someone. Suddenly, she spots him. He’s looking better, much better than the last time she saw him. He’s clean, shaved, wearing his black suit and white shirt. She watches him as he crosses the street, and can´t help herself but notice how handsome he looks like. He’s getting closer, she can see his face now…

˝Hey.˝ he says silently as he squats down next to the car.

She looks up at him, a knot forming in her throat. She still finds it shocking – how, after all this time, all those feelings for him are still there, never having lost their intensity. The thing she wants the most is to snuggle herself closer to him, to feel his strong arms wrapped around her body, to feel safe, comforted again, if only for a minute. But then she remembers that she’s supposed to still be angry at him, so she shakes those thoughts away and manages to choke out a small ˝Hey˝.

Next thing, she’s listening to him as he tells her everything he knows, how what he told her on the day of their last meeting, that he did it all to protect her and Aaron, is true; how he might know who is behind kidnapping Aaron and how he will do everything in his power to find him, but that they will have to go in hiding because those people are after them as well.

˝Trust me, Kate. ˝he says pleadingly, his hand closing above hers.

... She’s looking at his hand covering hers, it feels so familiar; then finally nods, first slowly, then more determinedly; a small tear sliding down her cheek. She looks up in the rear mirror and suddenly freezes as she watches black BMW approaching them suspiciously. ˝Jack, get in. Get in now! ˝she yells and Jack looks at her confused, but then the sound of the tires screeching catches his attention and he swiftly gets up, running around the car then quickly slipping inside; her hitting the speed as soon as his feet touch the ground, making him slam back into the car seat. They speed away, her firmly keeping her eyes on the road, her brows frowned in concentration. But as the adrenaline fills her body, she realizes that she isn’t as lost as before. She’s in her survival mode again and it feels familiar. But the feeling unfortunately isn’t the only familiar thing; ´cause suddenly other sounds appear too. The sounds of shooting. She’s trying her best to maneuver the car and avoid the bullets at the same time. Suddenly, she hears Jack cursing in pain, and as she looks at him, blood drenching his shirt, another scene from her past flashes in front of her eyes…. She’s shaking him, his shirt’s soaked with blood too, there’s blood coming from his nose…Tom? Tom! Tom? Oh God, Tom. No, no, no, no, no, Tom. Please... please wake up…..

Is the love I gave her in the past/ gonna be enough to last….

...´Because I love you.´ The words are still echoing in her head, as the scene changes again. She’s in the hallway now, his hands cupping her face as he gently leans in, pressing his lips onto hers. She can still feel the warmth of his breath against her face, and then the scene switches again. He’s holding open the ring, beautiful diamond shining up at her; she’s crying, happy tears sliding down her face… ´Yes, of course I will, yes!´ They hug and then the scenes changes again: she’s in the jungle and he’s screaming at her to leave. ´When you get safe, you radio me and you tell me that story…. Kate, dammit, run!´ She is sobbing even louder now: he’d sacrificed for her then; and now he sacrificed himself for her again, she lost him, she lost them both. The scene switches again: she’s in church, the church is crowded. She looks around; people are looking at her strangely, sympathetically. She looks down: she’s in black. Suddenly, she hears a melody and turns to the altar, his face is looking at her from the poster just above the…just above the casket. Suddenly, the casket starts going down – she starts screaming: Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!

*******

She was shaking. No, someone was shaking her.

˝Kate, Kate, wake up! ˝Jack said, trying to bring her back to her senses. She’d scared the hell out of him, as she started trashing around in the bed and screaming so loudly he was sure the whole motel would soon be awake.

Hey eyes shot open, and she blinked a couple of times, startled. Jack was leaning above her, his hands on her shoulders, shaking her gently. ˝Jack? ˝she asked carefully, not wanting to get her hopes up.

He let out a sigh of relief. She really had him seriously worried for a moment. ˝It’s okay, it’s alright, you just had a bad dream. ˝he tried to explain, but he wasn’t sure she heard a word of what he was saying.

She was sweating, tears were flowing down her eyes and he could feel her whole body tremble under his fingers.

˝They shot you, there was blood, they called me from the hospital, I saw your body, you were dead….I caused you to die, just like I did to Tom. ˝she continued rambling, her eyes wide in shock. ˝And then I was in church, there was a casket, and they started putting you down and I couldn’t… I couldn’t…˝she started, but she couldn’t finish. She couldn’t find the words to express the horror of that thought; the thought of him ceasing to exist.

Jack looked at her breaking down in front of him and he felt like breaking down too. He could deal with almost everything, but to witness her cry and sob like that was one of the most painful experiences of his life. He reached down and pulled her up in sitting position, his hands still on her shoulders. ˝Sssssssh, it’s okay, it was just a dream. ˝he said softly. He looked up, his eyes finding hers. ˝Kate, it was just a dream. I’m here. I’m here and I’m going nowhere. ˝he said, his eyes digging into hers, and she nodded, tears streaming down her eyes.

She took a couple of deep breaths as she tried to calm herself down, him holding her and making soothing circles across her shoulders until she finally stopped sobbing. He pulled away for a bit, his eyes finding hers again. ˝Kate, we´re gonna bring Aaron back. We´re gonna find him and bring him back, okay? I promise. ˝he said.

She nodded, bringing her hands up to wipe up the tears. She closed her eyes, trying to erase the nightmare from her memory, to focus on something else. It was then that she heard the lyrics coming from the radio behind:

So tell that someone that you love/ just what you´re thinking of/ if tomorrow never comes.

She smiled through tears, took out a deep breath; then opened her eyes and looked up at him.

˝Jack? ˝

˝Yeah? ˝

˝I love you. ˝she said through tears.

He looked at her too, surprised at first; then she saw his whole face lightening up in relief as his lips stretched into a smile.

˝I love you too.˝ he mumbled against her lips, leaning his forehead against hers as he closed his eyes, the feeling of having her hear him again, of being that close to her again so great he couldn’t find the words to describe it even if his life depended on it. He heard her chuckling softly before placing a small kiss in the side of his neck, then pulling him in for a hug. He returned the hug wholeheartedly, holding her tightly in his arms, his face sinking into her hair, inhaling the familiar scent again.

˝We´re gonna bring our boy back, Kate. We´re gonna bring him back. ˝he whispered in her ear, feeling her nod slightly and tightening the hug. He kissed the spot right below her ear once, then returned his head into her hair. Everything would be all right.

___

EDIT: Wow, it doesn´t look nearly as long here as it is in Word :eh: - there, it´s 5 pages.:shifty:

sluky
10-14-2008, 04:19 AM
MARINA :flowers2::hug:
OMG :shock: that end:

˝I love you. ˝she said through tears.
˝I love you too.˝ he mumbled against her lips
I got tears in my eyes :faint::heart:

Ella.
10-14-2008, 10:02 AM
Marina that was absolutely :faint: :thud:
Seriously im gobsmacked.:nod: Your an Amazing writer.
Well done hunni.;) Keep it up :D

Arctic Fox
10-14-2008, 03:14 PM
That was amaaaazing! :faint:

I'd review it but I don't know if the spoiler tags will stay on or not :shifty: But seriously, that was just awesome! If that happened in the show I'd be a very happy bunny! :D I loved the ending, just so perfect! :love: You're such an awesome writer; fantastic job! :D :glomp:

standard black
10-14-2008, 03:54 PM
:faint:




:shifty:thats as constructive as my "critic" will get lol great job as usual:w00t:

livin_4_foxy
10-14-2008, 08:38 PM
I'm half way done the "First date" one except its turning into a one shot:o:p But i need some help on it:p i cant find what they should talk about on there date. :giggle:

Marina :faint::faint: gorgeous.. aahhh seriously. :love: i loved it, it was really heart renching.
What happened to the hatch one though? :)

Live together
10-15-2008, 11:47 AM
Marina, it was incredible. :thud: :thud: I liked a lot the idea of dreams. And you had the same impression as me by reading the spoilers: I'm sure that there will be a link between Jack/Kate/Tom in the car scene . ;)


It´s written for Pauline - hope I managed to do it justice ;) The song is If tomorrow never comes by Ronan Keating :bawl:

Thanks. :glomp: :smooch: Right now I'm rooting for Ronan/Jate.

Oh, I was going to to forget something:

She opens her eyes slowly, squinting at the alarm clock nearby. Her eyebrows frown. 4:30.

4:30 ? :shock: Come on that was the occasion to put 4:10 there. I tought you were smarter. :p



Again, thank you so much!

StandardBlack
10-15-2008, 02:53 PM
4:30 ? :shock: Come on that was the occasion to put 4:10 there. I tought you were smarter. :p


Ha! 4:10 needs to be considered holy Jate Time.

Truefate21
10-16-2008, 12:46 AM
MARINA!! OK The car interaction scene I am sooo intrigued to figure out what is goin on there and you did help a bit!! I hope jack does not get shot AT ALL I dont like that idea lol

EXCELLENT EXCELLENT DYOJS GIRL VERY VERY GOOD!!:w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t:

livin_4_foxy
10-16-2008, 04:40 PM
HOOOOOOOLD IT
jack gets SHOOTTT?!?!:shock: *runs to the spoiler thread*

BlueDream
10-16-2008, 05:24 PM
HOOOOOOOLD IT
jack gets SHOOTTT?!?!:shock: *runs to the spoiler thread*

Yazzi, stop with the panicking :no: :giggle: No, Jack doesnt get shot. Dont you think the spoilers thread would´ve been a bit more active if we´d actually got the spoiler with Jack being shot? :p :giggle: I just had to put the spoiler tags because of some minor details. As I said in the spoilers thread, I posted you a list of all S5 jate spoilers we got so far, so - read it and you´ll know which parts were based on spoilers;)

livin_4_foxy
10-16-2008, 06:08 PM
Yazzi, stop with the panicking :no: :giggle: No, Jack doesnt get shot. Dont you think the spoilers thread would´ve been a bit more active if we´d actually got the spoiler with Jack being shot? :p :giggle: I just had to put the spoiler tags because of some minor details. As I said in the spoilers thread, I posted you a list of all S5 jate spoilers we got so far, so - read it and you´ll know which parts were based on spoilers;)

thats what i was thinking after i posted it but then i was like ahh whatever i won't edit it out .. maybe someone will tell me something:p but thank you:D

Truefate21
10-17-2008, 01:26 AM
Sorrry to cause commotion Yazzi LOL I was just saying I would hate for that to happen to jack ANYTIME in the remaining seasons lol :giggle::giggle:

gunerken
10-17-2008, 02:45 AM
I havent been in this thread for a loong loong time but i just saw you guys were talking about Marina's dyojs in the spoiler thread and wanted to read this one :D


Marina huni- That was one hellova dyojs!!!! :clap:
I still got tears in my eyes... :bawl: :heart: :thud:
That was soo unbelievably beautiful :love:

livin_4_foxy
10-18-2008, 09:42 AM
haha it's okay nadia, no damage done;)

Okaaaay well.. anyone have a FLUFFYYYY dyojs. its the weekend:hyper: so maybe you guys have time.

well you probably all are gonna kill me cause all i do is ask for dyojses. well im working on the "first date" one so don't be mad. :D

BlueDream
10-18-2008, 09:59 AM
haha it's okay nadia, no damage done;)

Okaaaay well.. anyone have a FLUFFYYYY dyojs. its the weekend:hyper: so maybe you guys have time.

well you probably all are gonna kill me cause all i do is ask for dyojses. well im working on the "first date" one so don't be mad. :D

will it be finished soon, Yazzi? :eyes: I´m dyiiiiiiing for a dyojs :bawl:

livin_4_foxy
10-18-2008, 10:07 AM
will it be finished soon, Yazzi? :eyes: I´m dyiiiiiiing for a dyojs :bawl:

ummm by tomorrow maybe?
latest monday.
its just im really busy today and tomorrow i have loads of work. but i dont have to brainstorm i know everything and im half done.

i miss heinzy:(:( i just realized we NEVER see her here anymore.

Nille815
10-18-2008, 04:06 PM
Marina - :thud: You're the DYOJS Queen.. You're just made of awesome! They were both amazing :w00t: YOU ROCK!

:uberglomp: Thank you all soooo much for your awesome comments! Now this one I wrote this afternoon - I was plannng for some angst, but I apparantly suck at that :blank: so It's a little angsty but also a little fluffy... Anyway I don't really know what to think of this one, but none the less I hope you'll enjoy it! :D It's set somewhere near the end of season 2 - Jack and Kate are still not talking together and yeah that's prety much all you need to know :giggle: I was watching TOW and that and Anna gave me inspiration.

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Someone was calling her name; to her it was just a low mumble, like it came from miles away. She tried to open her eyes to locate the sound, but her eyelids were too heavy, in fact every part of her felt heavy, like something was pinning her to the ground. A dull ache started to form at the back of her head, and a sharp pained in her left ankle warned her that something was terribly wrong. The voice grew more insisting, and it dawned on her that it sounded very familiar. She desperately wanted to obey the pleading voice but everything felt so fussy and heavy.

“Kate? Can you hear me? You need to open your eyes.” She registered the feeling of a warm hand on her cheek and a familiar tingle down her spine. It was Jack. It was his hand on her cheek and it was his insisting voice. She instantly calmed and found the strength to open her eyes. At first everything was a blurry green, but a pair of warm, brown eyes slowly came into focus.

“Jack?” Her voice sounded rough and frail to her own ears, she reached out and grabbed hold of his shoulder. The world spun around her as she tried to get up from the jungle floor.

“It’s me… Hey just take it easy. Okay? It’s all right.” His voice was firm but soft, almost a whisper, as if not to frighten her. He wound his arm around her waist and helped her sit up all the while calming her with his words. Kate blinked away the remaining blurriness, but everything still felt fussy and the jungle didn’t seem to stop doing cartwheels around her. She leaned heavily against Jack’s arm, closed her eyes and took a couple of deep breaths to stop the spinning feeling.

“It’s okay. I’ve got you… What happened?” Kate opened her eyes again and found that thankfully the jungle remained in place. As she slowly regained her balance, Jack let go of her and reached into his backpack for his medical supplies. What had happened? She asked herself; right now it was all a blur. Jack examined her head and found no blood, but a little bump. He held up a finger in front of her eyes and asked her to follow his movements. She had a lone scratch on her left cheek, but nothing serious and her eyes responded normally. Her head was apparently fine, but she was obviously very disoriented.

“I was picking mangos… There was a loud noise, I stumbled… My foot-” she trailed of at the sting of pain when Jack as gently as possible grabbed her foot and untied her shoelaces. “I missed a step and I fell to the ground… Thank god I wasn’t that high up” she ended with a pained laugh. Jack pulled her sock of and gently examined her foot.

“It’s not broken, you just sprained it.” A sigh of relief escaped her at that, what was she supposed to do with a broken ankle here? “Must be your lucky day, this is the last one I have” Jack told her with a smirk as he pulled a bandage out of his backpack. She made a grimace at that, but couldn’t help her smile, when he gave a chuckle in response. As Jack slowly and gently wrapped the bandage around her ankle, it dawned on her that this was the first real conversation they’d had in about two weeks. They had almost bended backwards in their efforts to avoid each other, him more than her. He was probably still angry at her and yet here he was. Taking care of her. That was just so like him, no matter what was going on between them, he was always there for her when she needed him. It was probably the doctor in him, but it still warmed her heart. It was like nothing had happened, as if they were back to normal. The thought made her smile at him, and as if he sensed her gaze, he raised his head to look at her.

“What?” he questioned, a small smirk tugging at the corners of his lips. He finished with the bandage and pulled a water bottle from his pack along with a bottle of aspirin. He gave her the pills and she gratefully swallowed them down with a long pull of the bottle. Her head was killing her.

“Nothing, I just… thank you” she replied as she handed him back the bottle. He nodded at her and silence enveloped them as Jack gathered his things and zipped up his backpack. That beautiful grin from before disappeared and Kate feared that their little moment of truce was over. He rose to his feet and swung his backpack over his shoulder, he searched the little clearing they were in and when he spotted her backpack resting against the tree she had fallen from, he picked it up and swung it over his other shoulder.

“You don’t have to do that” Kate told him as Jack came to stand before her again. He reached a hand down to her while asking her if she could stand. She nodded at him and accepted his hand. He gently pulled her to her feet, and a hiss escaped her when she tried to stand on her left foot. She lost her balance for a moment, but Jack was there to steady her.

“You’ll be fine; just take it easy and keep of your feet for a couple of days.” He told her as he wrapped his arm around her waist. “Your head seems fine, but if you have any dizzy spells or if something feels wrong, just send someone to get me… You’ll be okay.” he reassured her. He was all back in doctor mode now. Kate felt her heart plummet to the ground, for a moment there she thought that maybe, just maybe they were getting somewhere. Being this close to him just felt too good. She revelled in his presence like a drowning man would in air. And she desperately wanted to hold on to that feeling of normalcy between them. With Jack she felt safe, trusted and sometimes… even loved. They had a special bond, a connection. And she wanted it back more than anything. She had hurt him and she knew that “I’m sorry’s” didn’t work anymore. But she had to find a way somehow to make amends.

“You think we’ll be okay?” she wanted to sound strong and confident, but all she heard was a vulnerable plea. They locked gazes for what felt like an eternity. Kate could see her own frustration, confusion and longing mirrored in his eyes. She was sorry for running from him, but that kiss had surprised and scared the hell out of her. She was only now beginning to realise the depth of her feelings for him, and something told her Jack felt the same way. He pulled his eyes from her and looked ahead instead. Again the moment seemed over.

“Think you can make it back to the beach?” He asked her, his voice matching her sombre tone from before. She nodded and gulped down the lump that had formed in her throat. She was trying to reach out to him and of course he had to shoot her down. She had probably misread everything; of course he didn’t feel the same way, he was only angry at her for kissing him in the first place and for her always screwing up. Kate closed her eyes and willed the angry tears not to spill over.

She let out a surprised gasp when she felt Jack press a soft kiss to her temple. She looked at him in wonder, and to her embarrassment felt a lone tear make its way down her cheek. Jack raised his free hand and wiped it away with his thumb. There was a timid smile on his face and a sincere, warm look in his eyes.

“Yeah… We’ll be okay.” He whispered. Kate smiled in response and for the first time in a long while she felt hope blossom inside her. Jack tightened his hold on her, and slowly they made their way back to the beach. Taking it one step at a time. Together.
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Tell me what you think? :shifty:

Oh and I'll soon be posting a FF DYOJS :)

BlueDream
10-18-2008, 04:37 PM
:thud: :thud: :thud:

*uberglomps you for posting a dyojs* :uberglomp: I love writing, but sometimes there are times when I just miss reading dyojses. :love: I´ll review it fully tomorrow, ´cause I´m bordering on sleep now :tired:, but I read it twice now and now I´m going to bed, hopefully to dream about Jack taking care of Kate :cloud9: http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg230/checkpointn/smilies/baby.gif

And tnx for the nice words :shy: :glomp:

MissGiggles
10-18-2008, 05:22 PM
“Kate? Can you hear me? You need to open your eyes.” She registered the feeling of a warm hand on her cheek and a familiar tingle down her spine. It was Jack. It was his hand on her cheek and it was his insisting voice. She instantly calmed and found the strength to open her eyes. At first everything was a blurry green, but a pair of warm, brown eyes slowly came into focus.

Love how she knows its his touch....so sweet:D

He was probably still angry at her and yet here he was. Taking care of her. That was just so like him, no matter what was going on between them, he was always there for her when she needed him. It was probably the doctor in him, but it still warmed her heart. It was like nothing had happened, as if they were back to normal. The thought made her smile at him

He always takes care of her....awwwww it warms my heart too..that part made me smile:)

She lost her balance for a moment, but Jack was there to steady her.

:dance2:if you slip and fall of track,ill carry you on my back:dance2:whistle::....too cute:love:

Kate felt her heart plummet to the ground, for a moment there she thought that maybe, just maybe they were getting somewhere. Being this close to him just felt too good. She revelled in his presence like a drowning man would in air. And she desperately wanted to hold on to that feeling of normalcy between them. With Jack she felt safe, trusted and sometimes… even loved. They had a special bond, a connection. And she wanted it back more than anything.

beautifully writing....:flowers::tiphat::tiphat:

She let out a surprised gasp when she felt Jack press a soft kiss to her temple. She looked at him in wonder, and to her embarrassment felt a lone tear make its way down her cheek. Jack raised his free hand and wiped it away with his thumb. There was a timid smile on his face and a sincere, warm look in his eyes.

AWWWWWW Sqqqquuuuuueeeee!...Thats just too adorable:hug::cloud9:

“Yeah… We’ll be okay.” He whispered. Kate smiled in response and for the first time in a long while she felt hope blossom inside her. Jack tightened his hold on her, and slowly they made their way back to the beach. Taking it one step at a time. Together.

They'll be okay....awwwww:boogie:....Us jater's gotta remember that....they'll be ok in the end because unlike other ships they get threw things together:cloud9::cloud9::lotsalove:lotsalove


Great Job,I Loved It....Brilliant:clap::clap::bowdown::bowdown:

Foxy's_Lady
10-18-2008, 06:11 PM
Beautiful hun:love:
Love your writting:heart:

Truefate21
10-18-2008, 09:57 PM
PERNILLE GORGEOUS DYOJS...SO SO BEAUTIFUL I loved it..very very nice so beautiful :)

BlueDream
10-19-2008, 04:00 AM
I´m back :) No Jate dreams (damn subconscious :shakefist:), but, oh well, I still feel great when remembering your dyojs :cloud9:

Before I go on with the reviewing, I would just wanna say THANK YOU ALL for the great comments about my S5 one :grouphug: Glad you all liked it and sorry for the Jack-gets-shot commotion :giggle: :o Oh and, :rotflol: to the time-should-have-been-4:10 comment - you´re too cute :giggle: I cant have SNBH references in every dyojs, can I? It would make it too easy for you guys to find them :raspberry :giggle:

Okay, back to reviewing...

Someone was calling her name; to her it was just a low mumble, like it came from miles away. She tried to open her eyes to locate the sound, but her eyelids were too heavy, in fact every part of her felt heavy, like something was pinning her to the ground. A dull ache started to form at the back of her head, and a sharp pained in her left ankle warned her that something was terribly wrong. The voice grew more insisting, and it dawned on her that it sounded very familiar. She desperately wanted to obey the pleading voice but everything felt so fussy and heavy.

:thud: So amazingly written! :bowdown: It was like you were experiencing it while writing :thud: you sure someone hadnt knocked you out on your head lately? :giggle:

Okay, at first I thought about quoting the whole first part together, but I just needed to separated this little part:

She registered the feeling of a warm hand on her cheek and a familiar tingle down her spine. It was Jack.

....´cause it was sooooooooooooo cute :love: the thought of Kate recognizing it was Jack from the way her body reacted to his touch is just so sweet and cute and...Jatey. :love: :heart:

“Jack?” Her voice sounded rough and frail to her own ears, she reached out and grabbed hold of his shoulder. The world spun around her as she tried to get up from the jungle floor.

“It’s me… Hey just take it easy. Okay? It’s all right.” His voice was firm but soft, almost a whisper, as if not to frighten her. He wound his arm around her waist and helped her sit up all the while calming her with his words. Kate blinked away the remaining blurriness, but everything still felt fussy and the jungle didn’t seem to stop doing cartwheels around her. She leaned heavily against Jack’s arm, closed her eyes and took a couple of deep breaths to stop the spinning feeling.

awwwwww, it´s like reviving the TOW scene all over again :cloud9: I just love how she instantly stopped struggling upon hearing his voice and how gentle he was with her :love:

“Must be your lucky day, this is the last one I have” Jack told her with a smirk as he pulled a bandage out of his backpack. She made a grimace at that, but couldn’t help her smile, when he gave a chuckle in response.

:giggle: they´re so cute around each other :love:

As Jack slowly and gently wrapped the bandage around her ankle, it dawned on her that this was the first real conversation they’d had in about two weeks. They had almost bended backwards in their efforts to avoid each other, him more than her. He was probably still angry at her and yet here he was. Taking care of her. That was just so like him, no matter what was going on between them, he was always there for her when she needed him.

:thud: :heart: :thud:

He gently pulled her to her feet, and a hiss escaped her when she tried to stand on her left foot. She lost her balance for a moment, but Jack was there to steady her.

squeeeeeeee :love: (I have a thing for the scenes in fics with him catching her before falling :o )

“You think we’ll be okay?” she wanted to sound strong and confident, but all she heard was a vulnerable plea. They locked gazes for what felt like an eternity. Kate could see her own frustration, confusion and longing mirrored in his eyes. She was sorry for running from him, but that kiss had surprised and scared the hell out of her. She was only now beginning to realise the depth of her feelings for him, and something told her Jack felt the same way.

:thud: :bawl:

He pulled his eyes from her and looked ahead instead. Again the moment seemed over.

“Think you can make it back to the beach?” He asked her, his voice matching her sombre tone from before. She nodded and gulped down the lump that had formed in her throat. She was trying to reach out to him and of course he had to shoot her down. She had probably misread everything; of course he didn’t feel the same way, he was only angry at her for kissing him in the first place and for her always screwing up. Kate closed her eyes and willed the angry tears not to spill over.

:bowdown: I have to admit, you almost tricked me here :no: I expected him to smile/caress/kiss her and assure her they would be okay, but then he changed the subject and pulled away, and I looked down and saw that there were only 2 small paragraphs left till the end of the fic, so I thought you would finish angst and I was already trying to think of a ways to talk you into writing a sequel:o, when this came:

She let out a surprised gasp when she felt Jack press a soft kiss to her temple.

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :love:

She looked at him in wonder, and to her embarrassment felt a lone tear make its way down her cheek. Jack raised his free hand and wiped it away with his thumb.

:love: :love: :love: (I also have a thing for him wiping away the tears from her face :o) :giggle:

“Yeah… We’ll be okay.” He whispered. Kate smiled in response and for the first time in a long while she felt hope blossom inside her. Jack tightened his hold on her, and slowly they made their way back to the beach. Taking it one step at a time. Together.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :heart:

New one? :eyes: Soon? :eyes: :eyes: Pwease? :eyes: :eyes: :eyes:

trivia
10-19-2008, 06:08 AM
Ah Marina, I loved your Dyojs! :thud: (btw, do we know how to pronounce it yet?! :rolleyes::giggle:)

You are becoming the angst dyojs queen! :shock: Mostly you write more fluffy stuff! This was very good though :bowdown:, but just very different than most of your writings.

Pernille, that was sweet! :thud:
I love some season 2-ish stuff, it wasn't that complicated yet! :sigh:

livin_4_foxy
10-19-2008, 06:25 PM
Pernille- i loved that:love: :) It was so cute and good and aww!

(I also have a thing for him wiping away the tears from her face)

ooooohhhh man me too:love: i always imagine that happening:cloud9:

ETA:

I'm doooooone. but i also made it into a one shot:
http://lost-forum.com/showthread.php?p=2825414#post2825414

Read and review!

Nille815
10-21-2008, 08:55 AM
Thank you guys! :uberglomp: You're the best bunch of people anyone could find :heart:


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :heart:

New one? :eyes: Soon? :eyes: :eyes: Pwease? :eyes: :eyes: :eyes:

Thanks Marina for that awesome review! :hug: I do have a new one in the works :D, but it's on hold for a while 'cause I started my very own fanfic :D

livin_4_foxy
10-21-2008, 05:50 PM
This is dedicated to multiple people:

First of all Marina- becasue your just amazing, and you write dyojs so amazing and full of talent i just wanna jump on you:hug:

Pascale- beacause I miss you so much! And your my cojb!:glomp:

Caroo & Lana- becasue I miss you both, and your just crazy amazing jaters.:smooch:

Lostbeth-because i love this girl. and shes my cable. i mean the least i can do is dedicate this to her, 'nuff said:smooch:


The First Date



Notes: Claire is alive and yes that means no evil baby Aaron

Jack paced up and down his living room floor. Last night had been nice, all of the Oceanic survivors and there family and friends had gone to Hurley's house for a "Yay We Survived!" Party. It had been pretty fun meeting everyones family and loved ones, eating good food and enjoying themselves. But of course the reason Jack went was because he knew Kate was going to be there, and she had been, they had talked and flirted all evening and when they weren't talking they had given eachother meaningful looks. As a joke Kate had given Jack her phone number just incase he needed it, and Hurley had suggested that Jack ask Kate out for a date. Last night Jack had laughed Hurley's suggestion off, but now that he kept thinking about it, it didn't sound too bad.

So Jack was in his living room staring at Kates number "90-410-225" wondering if he should call and ask Kate if she would want to 'go out on a date' with him. He blushed at the idea, and felt like he was in middle school over again.

"Your being silly, this is Kate!" he told himself, "She'd love to go out with you. And you know you both would have a great time. Why are you even scared?"

With that he dialed Kate's number.
It rang twice and she picked up:

"Hello?"

Jack took a breath "Hey Kate, It's Jack"

"Oh hey!" she sounded like she was smiling.

"So umm.. how are you?"

"Pretty good, how about you?"

"I'm good."

"Jack, I doubt your calling me just to ask me how I'm feeling.." said Kate jokingly, "do you need anything?"

"Yeah actually, I was wondering if you wanted to go out for dinner tomorrow night?" Jack spoke fast and blushed.

This caught Kate off-guard "Oh wow, you mean like a date?"

"Yeah like a date, if you want to I mean if you d-"

Kate cut him off "Jack that'd be great, really."

"Really?" Jack couldn't help but smile, "Can I pick you up around 8? Oh and its not fancy."

"Yeah that'd be good."

"Okay, well see you tomorrow then?"

"Yes, oh and Jack?"

"Yes?"

"I think it's funny how you called me after only one day." Kate laughed into the phone.

"Am I being to eager for you Kate?" Jack played along.

"No I think it's rather cute." Kate replied smugly.

They both laughed for a while said there goodbyes and hung up with big smiles on there faces.

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It was 7:50 and Jack was driving towards Kate's apartment, he was feeling slightly nervous and anxious about their date. Which he thought was funny since he had seen Kate every single day and she had slept in a tent a few metres away from his, but this was different, it was more formal and he wanted it to go perfectly.

10 minutes later Jack rang the doorbell to Kate's house.
Kate opened the door a few seconds later.

"You look, wow... Really, wow.. " Stuttered Jack. Kate was wearing a purple dressy top with darkwash jeans and a hint of mascara, she looked as gorgeous as ever.

Kate blushed "I thought doctors were supposed to be smart." joked Kate.

"You look really gorgeous." said Jack touching Kate's arm lightly, with a shy grin on his face.

"Thank you, you clean up pretty well yourself." said Kate, her heart was fluttering like mad.

"So are you ready to go?" smiled Jack.

Kate nodded and they walked out to Jack's car. Jack held the door for Kate and then went into the drivers seat.

For a few minutes they sat in silence, but then Kate got comfortable.

"Let's see what type of music Jack Sheppard likes." grinned Kate looking through his CD's.

"Beatles; hmm sure thats a given, Rolling Stones; another given, White Stripes... BRITTNEY SPEARS?" with that Kate burst out laughing.

Jack laughed for a while, "It wasn't mine, Kate really!"

"Sureee Jack. I really don't know what type of man I'm going out on a date with." this made them both smile, "I would have never thought of you as a Britney Fan!"

"It's not mine!" protested Jack, "It was Sarah's she just never took it back."

"Sarah?" Kate stopped laughing, "Was that your..." she trailed off.

"Ex-wife.. yes." Jack answered seriously.

"Oh, Jack I'm sorry." Kate looked down for a moment, "You've never told me much about her... Do you miss her?"

"Its okay," Jack turned his body to look at Kate, "No, I don't miss her. Not now." Jack smiled a knowing smile.

Warmth filled Kate the second time this evening, he was so sweet and good-looking and so nice it still shocked her that they were officially going out on a date.

"Joe Purdy, oh I love him." Kate smiled happily and put it in, they listed to the song Wash Away.

They arrived at the restaurant and Jack gave the car to the valet.

He instinclivley put his arms around Kates waist and then blushed "Sorry, um do you mind?"

"Not at all." Kate smiled back.

Ten minutes later they had both sat down and ordered.

"It still feels weird being able to go out to a restaurant after all this picking fruit hunting bear buisness" smiled Kate

"I know, I miss just waking up and walking outside and everyone would be in a circle talking about the lastest reason to trek into the jungle." chuckled Jack.

"Yeah, and you'd be giving them all speeches about living together dying alone." teased Kate.

"Well someones obviously jelous of my slogan, anyways I've heard you use it once or twice."

"Oh don't be so full of yourself you Mr. hardcore spinal surgeon turned leader." said Kate cocking her eyebrow as if challenging him.

"If I'm not mistaken, you find this hardcore spinal surgeon turned leader attractive." winked Jack challenging her right back.

"Oh yes and how do you know that?"

"I just know Kate," Jack smiled trying to act like a show off, "first you kissed me, then you came back for me. You can't deny that."

Kate blushed for a few seconds then retailiated, "Well who was the one who said would come back for me, and wanted me in his surgery, and said he wasn't going to leave me."

Jack opened his mouth and then closed it, he was defeated. Kate let out a triumphant HA! and smiled at him. They both talked about Hurley's party for a while until the food came.

"Your clearly not a vegeterian" Kate pointed towards Jack's serloin steak.

"And you are." Jack pointed at Kate's tofu plate.

"I told you that remember, when I went to hunt bore with Locke."

"You don't tell me alot of things about you though," Jack smiled mysteriously, "How bout you start now?"

For the next hour Kate told Jack about her Souther childhood, her mom, Tom and her dad. She decided to leave out the whole fugitive part, she figured it was more of a 2nd date issue. And Jack didn't ask about it. They talked about their favorite colors, music, tv shows and movies Kate occasionally made fun of his taste and Jack sometimes laughed at her cluelessness about TV shows.

Soon they were done eating and the conversation went down to a comfortable silence. They both thanked the waitor and walked to the car.

As Jack opened the car door for Kate, she kissed him firmly on the lips.

"I...I.. What was that for?" Jack said unaible to hide the huge grin spreading on his face.

"That was saying thank you, for tonight it was really great." smiled Kate genuinley.

"I have a surprise," Jack smirked, "the nights not over yet."

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They drove for about 30 minutes with Kate constantly asking Jack where they were going, and Jack constantly answering "You'll see" and laughing. Of course Kate's heart was racing, she knew Jack had something amazing planned.

Finally, Jack stopped the car and told Kate to get out and close her eyes. Kate did what she was told efficiently, and Jack took her sholders firmly and walked her a few metres.

"You can open them now" said Jack softly.

Kate opened her eyes and gasped. They were at a beach no one was there, but there were pillows scattered around an elegant picnic blanket laid and a small fire burning beside it. Two candles were already lit, there was a bottle of wine in a cooler and some fruit was on the picnic blanket. Since it was night time the moon was casting dim romantic light on the beach and the waves were settling, overall it looked beautiful.

"You like it?" smiled Jack.

"Jack..this is amazing.. I can't believe you'd do this!" exclaimed Kate, for some reason she was overwhelmed with the urge to cry. Kate hugged Jack tightly.

They both sat at the fire in silence for a few minutes.

"Guava?" Jack offered.

"I can't believe you even remembered our fruit" Kate whispered quietly, taking the guava and peeling it.

"Of course I did, whats a picnic without guava?"

Kate smiled and fed a piece of guava to Jack. He laughed but ate it. They went on laughing and eating guava for a while until silence came over them again. They both stared at the fire.

"This reminds me of our fireside talks we'd always have." commented Kate, she turned her head and realized how close it was to Jack.

"I remember those," Jack smiled slowly "I always regretted not saying things."

"Like what sort of things?" Kate was interested in finding out.

Jack turned to her so there eyes locked and their arms were close together.

"I always regretted not saying you have gorgeous eyes and that I think your beautiful."

Jack said those words in such a moving gentle way that Kate immediatly felt elated, she couldn't believe that all the time on the island he felt something back. After a minute Kate smiled:

"And I always regretted not kissing you." with that she touched Jack's lips lightly with hers and he responeded almost immediatly, their kiss was full of passion and caring, it wasn't hard and lustfull it was more like insync and passionate just like they had done it a million times before.

When they both pulled back for air, Jack put her arms around Kate. She stayed in his arms for a long time both of them just taking in the moment, and that they finally had got what they wanted, eachother.

BlueDream
10-22-2008, 08:49 AM
First of all Marina- becasue your just amazing, and you write dyojs so amazing and full of talent i just wanna jump on you:hug:

*has no idea if she´s supposed to be flattered or terribly freaked out :eh:* kidding :giggle: Tnx for the nice words, hun :smooch:

Notes: Claire is alive and yes that means no evil baby Aaron

Evil baby? :( I thought we loved Aaron :eyes: :bawl:

But of course the reason Jack went was because he knew Kate was going to be there, and she had been, they had talked and flirted all evening and when they weren't talking they had given eachother meaningful looks.

Damn you :shakefist: - now I wanna see the party-flirting Jate :crazy:

So Jack was in his living room staring at Kates number "90-410-225"

would it be too embaressing if I admit that I just spent 10 minutes staring at these numbers trying to decode them? :o I get the 410 as the 4.10 SNBH reference, but the rest is above my logic. If the numbers were placed differently maybe... :ponder:, with 22 09, then it might be a reference to Sep 22, the day of the crash; and 5 could rapresent the counting to 5...

I´m waaaaay overanalyzing it, aint I? :o :giggle:

"Jack, I doubt your calling me just to ask me how I'm feeling.." said Kate jokingly,

:giggle:

"I think it's funny how you called me after only one day." Kate laughed into the phone.

"Am I being to eager for you Kate?" Jack played along.

"No I think it's rather cute." Kate replied smugly.

hehe, that was cute :love: :giggle:

"You look, wow... Really, wow.. " Stuttered Jack. Kate was wearing a purple dressy top with darkwash jeans and a hint of mascara, she looked as gorgeous as ever.

Kate blushed "I thought doctors were supposed to be smart." joked Kate.

:giggle: awwww, I missed S1/S2-ish flirty Jate :love:

:rotflol: to Britney´s CD :giggle: And awwwwwwww to him guiding her to the restaurant with his arm around her waist :love:

"Oh don't be so full of yourself you Mr. hardcore spinal surgeon turned leader." said Kate cocking her eyebrow as if challenging him.

"If I'm not mistaken, you find this hardcore spinal surgeon turned leader attractive." winked Jack challenging her right back.

"Oh yes and how do you know that?"

"I just know Kate," Jack smiled trying to act like a show off, "first you kissed me, then you came back for me. You can't deny that."

:giggle:

Kate opened her eyes and gasped.

I SO knew he would bring her to the beach! :w00t: :boogie:

They were at a beach no one was there, but there were pillows scattered around an elegant picnic blanket laid and a small fire burning beside it. Two candles were already lit, there was a bottle of wine in a cooler and some fruit was on the picnic blanket. Since it was night time the moon was casting dim romantic light on the beach and the waves were settling, overall it looked beautiful.

:cloud9:

"I remember those," Jack smiled slowly "I always regretted not saying things."

awwwww, that was so cute :heart: and :love: for the guavas.

"And I always regretted not kissing you." with that she touched Jack's lips lightly with hers and he responeded almost immediatly, their kiss was full of passion and caring, it wasn't hard and lustfull it was more like insync and passionate just like they had done it a million times before.

perfect :heart:

She stayed in his arms for a long time both of them just taking in the moment, and that they finally had got what they wanted, eachother.

that was beautiful :thud:

you forgot one thing though: and they jexxed happily ever after :D

livin_4_foxy
10-23-2008, 05:28 PM
*has no idea if she´s supposed to be flattered or terribly freaked out :eh:* kidding :giggle: Tnx for the nice words, hun :smooch:
of course you should be flattered :p no problem:hug:


Evil baby? :( I thought we loved Aaron :eyes: :bawl:
meh we do:) , but if you think of it jate could still be together and married happily if aaron wasn't there to mess it all up (in a way, but hes a sweetie and i do love him)


Damn you :shakefist: - now I wanna see the party-flirting Jate :crazy:
thats another dyojs;)

would it be too embaressing if I admit that I just spent 10 minutes staring at these numbers trying to decode them? :o I get the 410 as the 4.10 SNBH reference, but the rest is above my logic. If the numbers were placed differently maybe... :ponder:, with 22 09, then it might be a reference to Sep 22, the day of the crash; and 5 could rapresent the counting to 5...

I´m waaaaay overanalyzing it, aint I? :o :giggle:

nope thats not embarassing at all and you were totally right:) i put 9 for september, 410 for SNBH, 5 for jack's tatoo and counting to five, and 22 for jate day:D




:giggle:

hehe, that was cute :love: :giggle:

:giggle: awwww, I missed S1/S2-ish flirty Jate :love:

:rotflol: to Britney´s CD :giggle: And awwwwwwww to him guiding her to the restaurant with his arm around her waist :love:

:giggle:

thank you:smooch: and haha i missed s1/2 flirty fluffy jate too:(

I SO knew he would bring her to the beach! :w00t: :boogie:
i was hoping that it wasnt that obvious

that was beautiful :thud:

you forgot one thing though: and they jexxed happily ever after :D
thanks! and that was implied;)

BlueDream
10-24-2008, 04:34 AM
nope thats not embarassing at all and you were totally right:) i put 9 for september, 410 for SNBH, 5 for jack's tatoo and counting to five, and 22 for jate day:D

wow, i´m good :thud: :bow: I really thought I was just a blubbering mess :o :giggle:

and haha i missed s1/2 flirty fluffy jate too:(

well...in that case, you´re gonna like what comes next ;)

This is written for Manda (ArcticFox) :hug: You said you prefered something on-island, and even though originally I was more for angst-fluff; I got a comedy bug:giggle:, so it turned out as humor-fluff.:p




Season two…

Jack and Kate got together, but they haven’t jexxed yet. One night, the Losties had a party, alcohol included, and Kate had a couple of drinks too much. :giggle: This is a story of the morning after…


Kate wakes up, groaning. Her head is pounding. It feels like thousands of hammers are slamming down on her, over and over again. She wants to die.

Jack (sitting by the entrance of her tent, looking at her, amused): Votka´s not so fun the morning after, huh?

Kate grunts, opening her eyes slowly. The light blinds her, and she lets herself fall down on the bed again, burying her face in the pillows. ˝Hey.˝ she mumbles quietly.

Jack (amused): Hey back.

Kate groans, mumbling something indistinct.

Jack: What?

Kate (her head sensitive to any noise): Talk…more…quietly…I…beg you.

Jack chuckles; then approaches her.

Jack (offering her a glass): Here.

Kate (slowly turns around, blinking): What´s…that?

Jack (chuckling): Oh, just some grossy slimy yuckiesh thingie that I bet tastes like hell. (more gently now) But Sun swears it helps with hangovers.

Kate takes the glass from him, starts drinking it, her face grimacing in disgust; but she forces herself to finish it; then hands him back the glass.

Kate: Urgh, I´ll never drink again.

Jack chuckles, putting the glass down; then goes to pull down the tarp of her tent, so that the inside is darker, to make it easier to her.

Kate: Thanks.

She slowly gets herself up in seating position, her head still pounding, but at least the room isn’t spinning anymore. And she can clearly see only one Jack now. Dang!, she thinks. She kinda liked the two of them. The more the merrier. She starts looking around the tent…first, she catches a glimpse of her shirt on the floor…a couple of inches away, her jeans are discarded… then…

Kate: Oh God!

Jack chuckles, following her gaze.

Jack (shrugging his shoulders, grinning): Hey, I didn’t have anything with that.

Kate (horrified): Did we…uhm…you know? (blushes completely)

Jack (amused): No, Kate, we didn’t. (more serious) I don’t tend to use women when they´re drunk and out of their senses. (seeing that she´s still looking at her clothes on the ground confused) For some reason, you just thought it would be fun to do a striptease in front of me last night.

Her eyes go wide as glimpses of her little show come back to her mind. Jack chuckles; then, seeing that she´s still a bit disorientated, adds:

Jack: You were in no state to find the right tent (chuckles at the memory, Kate looks at him deathly; he straightens up), so I walked you back and helped you in.

Kate: Oh. (then, seeing the traces that visibly suggested that he slept inside on the floor, asks; her eyebrows frowning in confusion): Why did you stay then?

Jack (gently): ´Cause you asked me to.

She looks up at him, he smiles tenderly, she smiles too. Then, another glimpse of memory returns to her.

Kate (embarrassed): Oh, God, did I even beg you at some point?

Jack smiles. Considering that a ´Yes´, Kate ducks herself under the covers again, wanting to disappear. After a while, she finally sits up again, terrified as another thought crosses her mind.

Kate (avoiding his gaze): Besides…besides that, I...I didn’t say anything stupid, did I?

Jack chuckles.

Jack: You mean...besides… proposing me? (his lips stretch into a grin)

Kate (going pale): W-what?

Jack (amused by her reaction): Relax. I’m kidding. (She shoots him a deathly glare; Jack, matter-of-factly) But you did say that you wanna have my babies.

Kate looks at him, eyes wide with shock, her cheeks flushing as she starts to remember more details.

Jack: Let´s see…how was it again? (*pretending to try to remember something*) Oh yeah, Superboy if it´s a boy; and VonderGirl if it’s a girl, written with (making a V sign with his fingers)´V´ so we could call her ˝V˝.

She looks up at him in horror, her face crimson now. He watches her amused; then his face turns to confused as she gets up and starts heading towards the entrance.

Jack (catching her just as she´s about to step out of the tent): Whoa, whoa, where are you going?

Kate (snappy): To drown myself. I wanna die right now, and I figured sea´s the closest way.

Jack laughs, pulling her backwards; a bit too fast, she looses her balance, causing them both to fall down, her landing on top of him. (The upper parts of their bodies are inside of her tent, only their legs are peeking outside) They look up; everything´s silent for a moment; then they both burst out laughing, remembering the last time they were in a similar situation.

Jack (laughing): We really need to stop meeting in this position. (chuckling) It´s not good for my back.

Kate laughs: Yeah.

They both calm down after a while; sounds of laugh quieting as they realize just how close they are.

Jack (cupping her face between his hands): Hey.

Her eyes meet his; they´re looking at each other for a few moments; then, Jack slowly leans forward for a kiss, his lips gently on hers, his fingers intertwining with her curls and she closes her eyes, enjoying the sensation.

The scene switches to outside of the tent as we watch Hurley and Charlie strolling along.

Hurley (to Charlie, pointing to Jate´s intertwined legs peeking outside of the tent): What do you think Jack and Kate are up to?

Charlie (nonchalantly): Oh, probably working on a (louder so Jate could hear) …SuperBoy. (they hear Kate´s embarrassed sigh from the inside; Charlie, his voice mocking) Or is it a VonderGirl, (Charlie makes a V sign) with a V?

˝Please shoot me now˝, Kate says as she buries her head in Jack chest. He smiles, kissing the top of her head. They hear Charlie and Hurley walking away, laughing.

Jack: Don´t worry. Charlie and Hurley´s teasing is nothing. (Kate lets out a relieved sigh; oblivious that Jack´s mocking her, until...; Jack, amused, proudly:) Sawyer has it all taped.

Kate´s head shoots up. :shock:

___

:D

(p.s. Don’t ask how Sawyer has a camera :o – consider it one of many mysteries on Lost :p)

EDIT: Oh and, I forgot to say, I got an inspiration for this after watching a movie with Jude Law, Cameron Diaz and Kate Winslet called Holiday :love:

Arctic Fox
10-24-2008, 05:28 AM
This is written for Manda (ArcticFox) :hug: You said you prefered something on-island, and even though originally I was more for angst-fluff; I got a comedy bug:giggle:, so it turned out as humor-fluff.:p

Thankyou so, so, so much for this sweetie! :hug:

Season two…

Jack and Kate got together, but they haven’t jexxed yet. One night, the Losties had a party, alcohol included, and Kate had a couple of drinks too much. :giggle: This is a story of the morning after…

Sounds good already :D :giggle:

Kate wakes up, groaning. Her head is pounding. It feels like thousands of hammers are slamming down on her, over and over again. She wants to die.

Jack (sitting by the entrance of her tent, looking at her, amused): Votka´s not so fun the morning after, huh?

Kate grunts, opening her eyes slowly. The light blinds her, and she lets herself fall down on the bed again, burying her face in the pillows. ˝Hey.˝ she mumbles quietly.

Jack (amused): Hey back.

Kate groans, mumbling something indistinct.

Jack: What?

Kate (her head sensitive to any noise): Talk…more…quietly…I…beg you.

Jack chuckles; then approaches her.

Jack (offering her a glass): Here.

Kate (slowly turns around, blinking): What´s…that?

Jack (chuckling): Oh, just some grossy slimy yuckiesh thingie that I bet tastes like hell. (more gently now) But Sun swears it helps with hangovers.

:giggle:
I loved Jack's line there, how he joked and made a reference to something else between them, but he was so caring :love:

Kate takes the glass from him, starts drinking it, her face grimacing in disgust; but she forces herself to finish it; then hands him back the glass.

Kate: Urgh, I´ll never drink again.

Jack chuckles, putting the glass down; then goes to pull down the tarp of her tent, so that the inside is darker, to make it easier to her.

Kate: Thanks.

She slowly gets herself up in seating position, her head still pounding, but at least the room isn’t spinning anymore. And she can clearly see only one Jack now. Dang!, she thinks. She kinda liked the two of them. The more the merrier. She starts looking around the tent…first, she catches a glimpse of her shirt on the floor…a couple of inches away, her jeans are discarded… then…

Kate: Oh God!

Aww, poor Kate! :giggle:

Jack chuckles, following her gaze.

Jack (shrugging his shoulders, grinning): Hey, I didn’t have anything with that.

Kate (horrified): Did we…uhm…you know? (blushes completely)

Jack (amused): No, Kate, we didn’t. (more serious) I don’t tend to use women when they´re drunk and out of their senses. (seeing that she´s still looking at her clothes on the ground confused) For some reason, you just thought it would be fun to do a striptease in front of me last night.

Aw, I love Jack :w00t:
:giggle:

Her eyes go wide as glimpses of her little show come back to her mind. Jack chuckles; then, seeing that she´s still a bit disorientated, adds:

Jack: You were in no state to find the right tent (chuckles at the memory, Kate looks at him deathly; he straightens up), so I walked you back and helped you in.

Kate: Oh. (then, seeing the traces that visibly suggested that he slept inside on the floor, asks; her eyebrows frowning in confusion): Why did you stay then?

Jack (gently): ´Cause you asked me to.

:love: :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

She looks up at him, he smiles tenderly, she smiles too. Then, another glimpse of memory returns to her.

Kate (embarrassed): Oh, God, did I even beg you at some point?

Jack smiles. Considering that a ´Yes´, Kate ducks herself under the covers again, wanting to disappear. After a while, she finally sits up again, terrified as another thought crosses her mind.

Kate (avoiding his gaze): Besides…besides that, I...I didn’t say anything stupid, did I?

Jack chuckles.

Jack: You mean...besides… proposing me? (his lips stretch into a grin)

Kate (going pale): W-what?

Jack (amused by her reaction): Relax. I’m kidding. (She shoots him a deathly glare; Jack, matter-of-factly) But you did say that you wanna have my babies.

:rotflol:

Kate looks at him, eyes wide with shock, her cheeks flushing as she starts to remember more details.

Jack: Let´s see…how was it again? (*pretending to try to remember something*) Oh yeah, Superboy if it´s a boy; and VonderGirl if it’s a girl, written with (making a V sign with his fingers)´V´ so we could call her ˝V˝.

She looks up at him in horror, her face crimson now. He watches her amused; then his face turns to confused as she gets up and starts heading towards the entrance.

Jack (catching her just as she´s about to step out of the tent): Whoa, whoa, where are you going?

Kate (snappy): To drown myself. I wanna die right now, and I figured sea´s the closest way.

Jack laughs, pulling her backwards; a bit too fast, she looses her balance, causing them both to fall down, her landing on top of him. (The upper parts of their bodies are inside of her tent, only their legs are peeking outside) They look up; everything´s silent for a moment; then they both burst out laughing, remembering the last time they were in a similar situation.

Ah, memories :love: :D

Jack (laughing): We really need to stop meeting in this position. (chuckling) It´s not good for my back.

I'm sure he doesn't mind that much :giggle:

Kate laughs: Yeah.

They both calm down after a while; sounds of laugh quieting as they realize just how close they are.

Jack (cupping her face between his hands): Hey.

Her eyes meet his; they´re looking at each other for a few moments; then, Jack slowly leans forward for a kiss, his lips gently on hers, his fingers intertwining with her curls and she closes her eyes, enjoying the sensation.

The scene switches to outside of the tent as we watch Hurley and Charlie strolling along.

Hurley (to Charlie, pointing to Jate´s intertwined legs peeking outside of the tent): What do you think Jack and Kate are up to?

Charlie (nonchalantly): Oh, probably working on a (louder so Jate could hear) …SuperBoy. (they hear Kate´s embarrassed sigh from the inside; Charlie, his voice mocking) Or is it a VonderGirl, (Charlie makes a V sign) with a V?

:rotflol:
The fact you've got Charlie and Hurley in here makes this even more awesome if that's possible :D:D

˝Please shoot me now˝, Kate says as she buries her head in Jack chest. He smiles, kissing the top of her head. They hear Charlie and Hurley walking away, laughing.

Jack: Don´t worry. Charlie and Hurley´s teasing is nothing. (Kate lets out a relieved sigh; oblivious that Jack´s mocking her, until...; Jack, amused, proudly:) Sawyer has it all taped.

Kate´s head shoots up. :shock:

:rotflol: Poor Kate! :p :giggle:
That ending made me giggle so much :D

I can't tell you how amazing that was, and how much I smiled when I was reading it! Really, thankyou so so much, I'm really touched you wrote it for me :love:

*draws a V sign in the air* :D Thankyou!! :glomp: :hug2:

Hatsumomo
10-24-2008, 09:28 AM
I'm just finally getting to comment on Yazzi's dyojs! XD

IT WAS GREAT, YAZZI! :glomp:

This is dedicated to multiple people:

....

Caroo & Lana- becasue I miss you both, and your just crazy amazing jaters.:smooch:



Awwww :love: :glomp: I miss you too!

These were my favorite parts: :D

Last night had been nice, all of the Oceanic survivors and there family and friends had gone to Hurley's house for a "Yay We Survived!" Party.

:rotflol:


They both laughed for a while said there goodbyes and hung up with big smiles on there faces.

Aww :love: They're so cute :giggle:


"Beatles; hmm sure thats a given, Rolling Stones; another given, White Stripes... BRITTNEY SPEARS?" with that Kate burst out laughing.

Jack laughed for a while, "It wasn't mine, Kate really!"

:rotflol:


"It still feels weird being able to go out to a restaurant after all this picking fruit hunting bear buisness" smiled Kate

"I know, I miss just waking up and walking outside and everyone would be in a circle talking about the lastest reason to trek into the jungle." chuckled Jack.

I miss this too after the long hiatus, Jack! :p

"Yeah, and you'd be giving them all speeches about living together dying alone." teased Kate.

"Well someones obviously jelous of my slogan, anyways I've heard you use it once or twice."

This part made me giggle :giggle:


"I just know Kate," Jack smiled trying to act like a show off, "first you kissed me, then you came back for me. You can't deny that."


:love:


Kate opened her eyes and gasped. They were at a beach no one was there, but there were pillows scattered around an elegant picnic blanket laid and a small fire burning beside it. Two candles were already lit, there was a bottle of wine in a cooler and some fruit was on the picnic blanket. Since it was night time the moon was casting dim romantic light on the beach and the waves were settling, overall it looked beautiful.

:eek: I want someone to take me on this date! :rotflol: So romantic :love:


"Guava?" Jack offered.

"I can't believe you even remembered our fruit" Kate whispered quietly, taking the guava and peeling it.

"Of course I did, whats a picnic without guava?"

:love::love::love:


"I always regretted not saying you have gorgeous eyes and that I think your beautiful."

Awww :heart:


When they both pulled back for air, Jack put her arms around Kate. She stayed in his arms for a long time both of them just taking in the moment, and that they finally had got what they wanted, eachother.

:bawl: It's so... beautiful! :love::love::p

So... yeah, I basically loved the whole thing. :D
:hug2:

Flave
10-27-2008, 05:33 AM
I finally have some free time to read some stories, and since i promised Nille to read her second Jate scene... here i go!

*after reading it...*

Nille, i loved it! You said you tried some angst, but it's just too cute :giggle:!

And she desperately wanted to hold on to that feeling of normalcy between them. With Jack she felt safe, trusted and sometimes… even loved. They had a special bond, a connection. And she wanted it back more than anything. She had hurt him and she knew that “I’m sorry’s” didn’t work anymore. But she had to find a way somehow to make amends.

:eyes: Awww!

She let out a surprised gasp when she felt Jack press a soft kiss to her temple. She looked at him in wonder, and to her embarrassment felt a lone tear make its way down her cheek. Jack raised his free hand and wiped it away with his thumb. There was a timid smile on his face and a sincere, warm look in his eyes.

“Yeah… We’ll be okay.” He whispered. Kate smiled in response and for the first time in a long while she felt hope blossom inside her. Jack tightened his hold on her, and slowly they made their way back to the beach. Taking it one step at a time. Together.

:heart: Too cute for words!


Please keep the stories coming, they're awesome! Keep the cutenes, also. I love it :giggle:!

BlueDream
10-31-2008, 03:30 PM
Thanks, Manda, glad you liked it :smooch: :glomp:

EDIT: Got the idea, even though it´s has more to do with fluff and making out than actual Halloween :o :giggle:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v316/beachmouse/Smilies/nasty11.gif Trick-or-treat http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v316/beachmouse/Smilies/TrickOrTreat0.gif


˝Trick-or-treat? ˝she said as she stepped on the sand, coming behind him.

He turned to greet her, his face stretching into a smile as he watched her approaching. ˝Excuse me? ˝

˝Well, according to Hurley´s Fun-things-to-do calendar, ˝she said as she squatted down next to him, ˝today´s Halloween, so...trick-or-treat? ˝she asked again and offered him her hand, palm faced up; titling her head sideways and dimpling him.

Jack chuckled, shaking his head. She looked cute when she did that. ˝Well, Happy Halloween then. ˝he said, smiling at her. ˝Unfortunately, I don’t have any treat, so...˝he said, shrugging.

˝No, I don’t think that´s true, Jack. ˝she said, making him look up, confused. ˝You see…rumor is that you´re the owner of the last survived-from-hatch Apollo bar. ˝

Jack let out a laugh. Of course – it was about chocolate. During the past couple of weeks, they´d been hanging out even more than usual; a thing that enabled him to get to know more about her, like her favorite singer, movie and, of course, that she was a chocolate freak. He chuckled. ˝Romor, huh? ˝

Kate nodded cutely. ˝Yep.˝ She bit down on her lower lip, looking at him under her eyelashes. ˝So…how about that candy, Jack? ˝

Jack had to hold back the laugh – obviously, she though she was irresistible with that kind of look. She was right, of course; but he wanted to have some fun before. ˝So…I have to either give you my last candy, or spend the rest of the day in fear of your revenge? ˝he said teasingly.

She frowned her forehead for a bit as if to pretend she was thinking; then looked up at him again and replied happily. ˝Yep, that’s about right. ˝

Jack chuckled. ˝Well, in that case, I pick…trick. ˝he said, laughing as he saw the look of shock on her face. She definitely hadn’t expected that.

˝Jack, trust me, when it comes to tricks, you don’t want to challenge me. ˝she said matter-of-factly; and he smiled again. She looked really cute.

˝Well, thanks for the warning, Kate, but I´m actually feeling quite brave today, so I´m gonna take my chances. ˝he said, still grinning.

He watched her get up and shake the sand off of her jeans; then she turned to glare at him. ˝Fine then…you asked for it. ˝she said warningly before storming off down the beach; him still having a grin plastered on his face as he watched her leave…

...........

*approximately 8-10 hours later, it´s already dark*

Jack let out a satisfying moan as the cold water embraced his body. He´d been busy the whole day, the change of weather causing almost everyone to have either soar throat or their nose running or their skin burning with fever; and he had also volunteered to help Sayid and Sawyer with chopping the woods, so when he was finally done with all the work, he decided to take a little swim in the nearby lake, to help him get rid of the stress and tiredness. Despite his original nonchalant reaction to her warning, he had spent most of the day being on the guard, in case she really decided on embarrassing him in one way or another. But, as the day went by, nothing was happening, so he convinced himself that she had either forgotten about it all or had been too busy to deal with the pranks for him. Exhausted and in need for some relaxation, he had left the beach and come to the lake that was some 30, 40 minutes away from the camp, hoping that the cold water would provide a calming effect his body was yearning for. He had taken off his shirt and jeans; and then, after a quick glance around to be sure he was alone, taken off his boxers too, knowing that there usually wasn’t anyone so far away, especially in the night.

So now he was swimming peacefully in the lake, his mind free of any worry…until he heard a whistle coming from the shore, startling him so much that he almost drowned.

˝Hey there, cowboy! ˝she said, waving with something, and he nearly choked as he realized it was his clothes. No, she wouldn’t…

˝K-Kate, what are you d-doing? ˝he asked, terrified; although he´d already known the answer.

˝I guess you won’t be needing these anymore. ˝he heard her saying. ˝Unless…you wanna reconsider your answer from this morning. ˝she said, grinning; and he cursed silently under his breath. How could have he been so stupid and let his guards down? He knew her well enough by now to know that she wasn’t the one to give up. ˝So, Jack…what is it gonna be...chocolate…or clothes? ˝

He was about to give up; when suddenly popped on his mind. ˝How ´bout you give me back my clothes and I won´t tell Sawyer that you´ve been secretly stealing from his stash for the past 2 weeks? ˝he said and grinned broadly as he saw the change on her face.

He titled his head and smiled sweetly at her; watching the wheels turn in her head until she finally came to the realization that she was cornered. Her eyes had a power to kill as she glared at him and muttered ˝I hate you.˝ between her teeth.

She threw him his clothes and turned around until he finished putting it on.

˝If it makes you feel any better, ˝he started as he came to stand in front of her, ˝the idea was brilliant. Really sneaky. ˝he said, grinning; and she couldn’t help but smile too.

˝Thanks. ˝she said. ˝Shame it didn’t work though. ˝she added disappointingly; and he smiled, patting her on the shoulder, with a comforting ˝Maybe next year. ˝

˝Yeah. ˝she replied meekly, shrugging it off.

He bent down to tie his shoes and she caught herself staring at him; something that, unfortunately for her, didn’t seem to miss his eyes too.

˝What? ˝she asked irritated, as he straightened up, smirk playing on his face.

˝Nothing, nothing. ˝he replied, ˝Just wondering who´s checking out whothis time. ˝he added, grinning.

˝Oh, please! I wasn’t checking you out. ˝she hurried, but even as she was pronouncing the words, she could feel her cheeks blushing, making her even more irritated than she´d been before. How could it happen that everything turns around full circle in such a short time? When she came here to find him, she was sure the win was hers. She saw him rolling his eyes and she swallowed down the cry of frustration. Sometimes, he could be so, so…aaaarrgggh.

Desperate to regain at least some amount of control of the situation, she forced herself to straighten up, hoping her voice sounded honest enough as she said: ˝I wasn’t checking you out…because….because you don’t have that effect on me. ˝she said, not able to meet his eyes.

Jack watched her amused. ˝Oh, really? ˝he said, stepping forwards and closing the distance between them in a second. She was leaning against a tree, and his hands went on her hips, capturing her in-between.

˝So, you say you wouldn’t be affected even in slightest if I, let´s say…did this? ˝he said as he reached his hand towards one of the curls that would always find its way out, no matter how hard Kate tried to keep it in control. She watched him as he carefully wrapped his fingers around the curl and tucked it softly behind her ear; her eyes still open; her being determined not to let her guard down, not to let it show exactly how much this simple gesture was affecting her, to the point that she was already starting to melt into a pool of mush. ˝Or…this? ˝he continued, his voice lower and lower, as he brought both of his hands up, gently cupping her face. As her eyes flickered up and down between his eyes and lips, she desperately fought with the need to simply…give in, to close her eyes and surrender to him; but as his eyes turned the darker shade of brown, and his face started to lean in, she knew she was fighting the lost battle, so she finally let go, closing her eyes as his lips landed on hers, soft and tender; his hands still cupping her face, holding her delicately, as if afraid she would break down in his arms. She felt him starting to pull away and a sigh left her mouth as his lips detached from hers; but he didn’t go much away, his forehead resting against hers, both of them recovering from what they’d just shared.

He breathed in and out, his eyes closed; just enjoying this moment; the feeling of having her soft and warm body so close to his. If someone had told him this morning that, 10 hours later, he would be kissing Kate, he would have proclaimed that person ready for mental institution. And yet, here he was. He tried to remember how this all started, and his lips stretched into a grin as their little Halloween talk returned to his mind.

˝You know… I´m starting to enjoy this whole trick-or-treat thing. ˝he said, smiling. ˝Can come in handy when you need to prove or get something. ˝he continued with a smirk. ˝So, Kate…what´s it gonna be… trick… ˝he said, leaning forward, his lips inches away from her earlobe, but not touching it, his breath warm on her skin, her head spinning; ˝…or treat…˝he whispered hoarsely, lowering his face until his lips were on her collarbone; then plunging into her skin, gently sucking the spot where her neck meets her shoulder, making her clutch the hems of his shirt more tightly, unsure in her own balance in that moment. He smiled against her skin, enjoying the effect he obviously had on her; then placed a little kiss on his collarbone before moving his lips once again, this time only inches away from her own. He noticed she had her eyes closed, her breathing uneven as she focused all of her attention on anticipation of the kiss. Slowly, he leaned in a bit more, his nose brushing against hers now, him taking a time to enjoy this newly found intimacy, before he whispered again, this time barely audible: ˝Tric…˝he said and started to pull away…

˝Don’t even dare. ˝she warned him dangerously as she grabbed the collars of his shirt and pulled him back on her, her lips crushing against his, making him lose all control he had until that moment. He returned the kiss eagerly, their tongues feverishly dueling for control as they staggered on the ground, the need to be with each other, to love each other, stronger than anything any of them felt before. And as the waterfall continued to rustle in the background, and the moonlight rays shone above them, they finally gave in into the love they were feeling for each other....

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Next morning...


She was awoken by a feeling of someone’s fingers brushing tenderly across her cheeks; but she decided to ignore it, convinced it was another one of her dreams about waking up with Jack by her side and optioning to keep her eyes firmly closed, not wanting the feeling to disappear. But soon the fingers were replaced by someone´s lips, gently kissing the corner of her mouth and resting there for a moment, before landing fully on her lips; gently parting them and sneaking in a soft kiss. She decided it felt too real to be a dream, so she forced herself to open her eyes, his smiley face greeting her as she finally adjusted to the light.

˝Hey. ˝he said softly, and leaned down to give her another small kiss.

She looked around, confused; then smiled as the memories of last night returned to her mind. ˝Hey. ˝she said shyly and Jack found himself falling in love with her even more as he watched tiny shades of pink appearing on her cheeks. Her curls were spread across the grass, her eyes still glossy from sleep, and he had to wonder how something could be so beautiful.

˝I have something for you. ˝he said sweetly. She raised an eyebrow, intrigued; and she watched him reach behind and, once his hand returned, inside of it was a red&black-papered chocolate bar. ˝Thought you deserved it after everything you´d went through to get it. ˝he said chuckling, and she hit him on the shoulder playfully, her lips stretching into a smile at his thoughtfulness. She watched him unwrap the paper; then break off a small piece, bringing it to her mouth; teasing her at first, then letting it fall down and then finally closing his lips over hers as. And as she wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him on her, there was one thing she was absolutely sure of: that was the best chocolate she´d ever had in her life.

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p.s. Sorry if there are any grammar errors, I´ve had an exhausting day and I´m completely :tired:

HAPPY HALLOWEEN, JATERS! http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk53/wawuschel_album/Smilies/smilie_hal_089.gif

Nille815
10-31-2008, 03:45 PM
MARINA :thud:
that was just so.. so.. WOW! :shock:
it was tooooo cute and so amazingly written.. :heart:
I LOVED IT! :love:

˝Don’t even dare. ˝she warned him dangerously as she grabbed the collars of his shirt and pulled him back on her, her lips crushing against his, making him lose all control he had until that moment. He returned the kiss eagerly, their tongues feverishly dueling for control as they staggered on the ground, the need to be with each other, to love each other, stronger than anything any of them felt before. And as the waterfall continued to rustle in the background, and the moonlight rays shone above them, they finally gave in into the love they were feeling for each other....

I have no words for how amazing this part is! :heart:
:bowdown:

Ella.
10-31-2008, 04:13 PM
Marina I agree with Pernille. :nod: that was abolutely amazing writing. :faint: :thud: I loved it. Please write more your a fantastic writer hunni. :)

BlueDream
11-14-2008, 12:23 PM
Tnx, Nille and Ella :flowers2: Love ya, girls :glomp:

So...anyone willing to write a dyojs? :eyes: It´s been a while since we had any :( and I´m facing a weekend from hell (college stuff), so I would really really appreciate if someone could write something :eyes: :eyes:

Nille815
11-14-2008, 12:35 PM
Tnx, Nille and Ella :flowers2: Love ya, girls :glomp:

So...anyone willing to write a dyojs? :eyes: It´s been a while since we had any :( and I´m facing a weekend from hell (college stuff), so I would really really appreciate if someone could write something :eyes: :eyes:

:glomp:

I'm not making any promises, but I would love to write you one :) I finally have some time to write and I have an idea for a little cute one :D

Backpack
11-14-2008, 01:44 PM
Tnx, Nille and Ella :flowers2: Love ya, girls :glomp:

So...anyone willing to write a dyojs? :eyes: It´s been a while since we had any :( and I´m facing a weekend from hell (college stuff), so I would really really appreciate if someone could write something :eyes: :eyes:

I'm here for you! :hug2: Happy to try to help get you through those college weekends... I remember them well!

I wrote a fanfic a few months ago that fits into the storyline after Jate's rescued but before they get back to California. I'd rate it a PG-13, to be safe, and if it's too long, I apologize: it's my first. I was going for the jangsty theme. I hope you enjoy it! :)

Coming Back Home

The party for the Oceanic Six was overwhelmingly boring even if it was in Hawaii, Jack thought, as he held onto his champagne like it was his only lifeline while he blanked out on the two corporate suits talking to him about Oceanic’s new passenger safety initiatives. Somewhere behind him, Sun sat in a chair staring blankly into nowhere, while Hurley’s laughter and his parents chatter could be heard a room away. Sayid and Nadia sat in a corner, absorbed with each other and oblivious to a fact that a party was even going on around them. For a long time, the person he hoped most to see was no where in sight. Minutes later, finally, from the corner of his eye he saw Kate slip out the backdoor of the ballroom.

He knew she was having a hard time readjusting to being thrown back into society - hell, he was too. Finding the appropriate moment to excuse himself, he followed her outside.

The first thing that hit him was the silence of the outdoors, except for the distant sound of waves crashing along the shore. For a moment, it felt like he had never left the island. The slight movement of Kate’s elegant violet dress disappearing down the path to the overlook caught his eye. She had taken his breath away when he had first seen her in the dress; with a plunging neckline and soft fabric, he hadn’t been able to keep his mind on anything but her the whole evening. It made her green eyes flash and hugged her body like a glove. He had never seen her so elegant and at the same time, so out of her element.

“Hey,” he said softly, coming up behind her as she stood on the stone and grass overlook. The moon was out and he could see the ocean in the distance. The scent of jasmine and bougainvillea flowers floated on the sea breeze. “You okay?”

Kate turned to him, not surprised to see him. She gave him a half-hearted smile, but it didn’t hide the solitary tear rolling down her cheek. “I’ve been better,” she admitted.

“Are you thinking about our trip to California tomorrow?” he asked.

“Kind of,” she said, her eyes leaving his.

“Please tell me.”

She took a ragged breath, and crossed her bare arms in front of her. How could she refuse hiding her fears when he looked at her that way? “I’m afraid of what’s going to happen when we go back, Jack,” she admitted, her green eyes glistening. “I know they’re going to arrest me – this Oceanic Six celebrity status will only last so long before the U.S. Marshalls or the District Attorneys coming knocking on my door. What will happen to Aaron?” She paused, the tears flowing freely now. “What if I’m convicted, locked up, and I never see you again?”

It scared him like hell to see her so upset. It scared him more to think that what she just described could actually happen. “We won’t let that happen,” he said, trying to sound convinced of his own words. “You’re famous now: a hero mother and plane crash survivor. We’ll appeal to every court, and if you are arrested, I’ll have the best lawyers in the land represent you.” His voice softened. “And Aaron will never be alone. I’m here – for both of you.”

He hugged her, distressed at how fragile she felt in his arms. It was the first time she had seemed vulnerable, and that worried him even as his heartbeat raced beneath her head that rested on his chest.

After a moment, she pulled away and his arms felt empty. “I’ll never know freedom, will I, Jack? I’ll never be able to be worthy of you and all of this that you’re offering me.”

Jack bristled, mostly at the defeatist tone in her voice. She had never spoken like this before. “Worthy of me?” he repeated, finding an edge in his voice. “Where the hell did you get a stupid idea like that? You are an amazing woman, Kate, handcuffs on your wrists or not. I don’t want to help you out of sympathy, I’m helping you because I love you.”

The breeze picked up her soft hair and blew it in her face, hiding her eyes for a moment. “I know you love me,” she said softly, “but you shouldn’t.” She turned her face away from his and looked out at the vast ocean in the distance. She felt too secluded: too cornered in this garden with Jack’s intense gaze on her. “Now that we’re back, you have a chance at a normal life,” she whispered. “You can meet someone who won’t have the baggage I have, or have a fugitive title to her name.” What had gotten into her, she wondered? When had she become so self-sacrificing and did she even know what she’s doing?

“How can you say that, Kate?” Jack said, unable to keep the anger from his voice. After everything they had shared, hearing her try to cut him loose burned like a hole in his heart. “I don’t want anyone else.”

“You can say that now,” she said calmly, turning back to him as he stepped closer. She eyed him warily, noticing the way he looked ready to pounce like a tiger trapped in a corner. “But we need to make a clean break of it now. I can’t keep dragging you along, through court appearances and time in jail. I know Aaron will be safe with you,” her voice broke, “but you’re not safe with me. I don’t want to hurt you.”

“That’s my decision to make.”

“And mine, too,” she retorted.

His eyes narrowed as he took a step closer to her. Instinctively, she stepped back. She was never one to be easily intimidated, but the heat she saw in his eyes and the intensity of his expression gave her pause.

“Are you doing this because of Sawyer?”

His venomous words hit her like a slap in the face and anger coursed through her. Jealousy now? she thought incredulously. After she was trying to do the most self-sacrificing thing she had ever done in her life? Before she realized it, she brought her hand up and slapped him. The sharp sound echoed through the little lonely garden. “How dare you?” she said, angry tears in her eyes. “I’m thinking of you, Jack. Trying to do what’s right for you and you bring up Sawyer now?” His expression was unreadable, but he didn’t move away from her. She felt as if the world around her was getting smaller and smaller.

When he said nothing, she said; “If I wanted Sawyer I wouldn’t have looked for you when you told me not to, when the Others had you captive. If I wanted him I would have stayed with him in the little house in Locke’s camp when he asked me to. If I wanted him I would’ve followed him back to the beach anyway and not followed you to the radio tower. If I wanted him, I would’ve jumped off that helicopter with him.” The words came tumbling out before she could stop them all.

His strong hands came up and held her upper arms firmly in place – if she wanted to move, she would have a hard time. As it was, her heart knew that she was exactly where she wanted her to be. He pulled her closer so she looked up into his eyes. When she saw the beginning of tears in his eyes, she was surprised. “Why did you, then?” he asked, his voice raspy with emotion.

“Why what?” She honestly couldn’t remember: couldn’t think of anything except the way he looked right now and how much she wanted him.

“Why did you leave the island? Sacrifice the freedom you had there? Leave Sawyer behind? All of it!”

If he didn’t understand now, he never would. She knew what he wanted her to say, and even if she felt it with every fiber of her being, the words stopped in her throat. Her confessions of love had only hurt people in her life: she couldn’t do that to Jack. So instead, she held onto the anger in her voice in an attempt to push him away. “If you don’t understand, I can’t explain it to you.”

His mouth came crashing down to hers before she could even take a breath. Immediately, what little breath she had was lost on a sigh of surrender as Jack’s mouth plundered hers. Franticly, desperately, she clung to him and returned the kiss with her own. She had to show him; had to let him see and feel everything she couldn’t bring herself to say.

His hands wove through her hair as her fingers dug into his back, trying increase the wonderful feeling of his chest against her breasts. The cool satin of her dress left her feeling exposed, and she wished Jack wasn’t wearing both a jacket and a shirt; she wanted to touch all of him. She had never felt so desired, so loved in her entire life. If only, she thought desperately, if only he would take her right here, right now. She had wanted him for so long now and they had both waited for this to happen.

Abruptly, she felt Jack pull away and already, she missed him. When she opened her eyes, she was at least gratified to see he was clearly as shaken with lust as she was. Her wide green eyes focused on him, waiting.

“I understand, Kate,” he said finally. “I couldn’t have left without you, either.” He put his hands in his pockets, and looked down for a moment, trying to even his breathing again. “You’re the only person that makes it possible for me to come back and try to find a life here again.” His eyes came up to hers again and she realized she was holding her breath. “I’ve known for a long time how empty my life would be without you, Kate, and I can’t bear to think that I could lose you.” He smiled a little. “I never wanted anyone but you and I never will.”

Her heart felt like it had burst open like a thousand fireworks as she moved towards him. Sighing his name, she came into his arms and without hesitation, gently kissed him with more emotion than she had ever felt before.

She felt his mouth curve into a smile as he kissed her back. Intensity built as she pushed the jacket off his broad shoulders and pulled him closer to her, his white shirt gathered in her fisted hands. Any thoughts of being noble for his sake, or mistakes she had made in the past, floated away on the ocean breeze. All she could focus on now were the intensity of the love she felt for him and the desire that flared deep within. Within moments, a passion greater than she had ever known came over her as Jack deepened the kiss and his hands began to roam.

As they sank to their knees and their clothes fell anxiously to the grass and stone of the garden, a silent chant of one word ran through any thoughts she could grasp: finally.

*****

A long time later, Kate lifted her head from Jack’s chest as they lay on the grass, feeling more contentment than she had ever known. She loved the feel of their skin together; the beat of his heart beneath her cheek. Her eyes came up to meet his and he knew he had received everything he could ever hope for when he heard a quietly and reverently spoken: “I love you, Jack. I always have.”

Nille815
11-14-2008, 03:30 PM
Backpack - :thud: That was so amazing :love: Please, pretty pwease write some more - your writing is beautiful :)

Tnx, Nille and Ella :flowers2: Love ya, girls :glomp:

So...anyone willing to write a dyojs? :eyes: It´s been a while since we had any :( and I´m facing a weekend from hell (college stuff), so I would really really appreciate if someone could write something :eyes: :eyes:

I wrote one too :giggle: it's fluffy, sugarcoated and I hope you like it :D

It's set in season 4 and it's a flasforward to the happier times between Jack and Kate - I might have gone overboard with the mushiness :giggle: But I'm in a mushy mood at the moment - so deal with it :giggle:

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Leaning against the doorjamb to their bedroom, Jack felt he could watch her forever. Moonlight was streaming in through the windows, bathing her beautiful face in a soft light. She was lying on her side with one hand tucked underneath her cheek and the other stretched out on his side of the bed. She was sound asleep, her chest rising with each peaceful breath, with a slight smile on her face, as if she was dreaming.

She had never been more beautiful.

An almost overwhelming sense of peace washed over him and an automatic smile graced his face. There was no greater feeling than coming home to her, to his family. Knowing that Kate would be here, waiting for him, loving him, was what got him through another day. And for the first time in probably years, he simply felt happy.

A sigh escaped him as he made his way inside and quietly shut the door. He changed to a t-shirt and sweats before slowly settling under the covers, he didn’t want to wake her, but every fibre of his being was aching for her to do just that. He settled on his side, facing her and he noticed that a stray chocolate curl had come lose. He reached out to tuck it back behind her ear and he couldn’t help leaning closer and sneaking in a little kiss.

As he pulled back he watched mesmerised, as her eyelids fluttered open revealing her gorgeous green eyes and she greeted him with a beautiful smile. Her hand reached for him and wound around his neck as she pulled him close again and welcomed him home with a sweet kiss. His hand reached up to cup the side of her face, his thumb brushing up and down her cheek and a satisfied sigh escaped her as they pulled apart.

“Hey.” She whispered, her voice still a little muddled from sleep, as she nuzzled her nose against his in an Eskimo kiss.

“Hey,” he answered her, pecking the side of her mouth, ”I didn’t mean to wake you” he mumbled against her lips, sighing as he felt her arms wound around him, snuggling closer.

“I’m glad you did” she whispered, as she slipped a leg between his and captured his lips again, engaging him in a slow, sensual kiss. He responded eagerly, wrapping his arms around her, bringing them as close together as humanly possible. When he was entwined with her this way, everything else just disappeared. All the worry and stress from a long and terrible day at the hospital just vanished at the feeling of her lips on his, her hands on his back and the way she whispered his name in the soft darkness. Nothing else mattered but her.

“I missed you today” she told him breathlessly as they broke apart.

“I missed you too” he responded as he rolled to settle on his back, pulling her with him. She snuggled against his side and rested her head on his chest. She threw her leg over his and found his hand, lacing her fingers through his on top of his stomach. Jack closed his eyes in content, brushing his thumb in soothing circles over her hand, and she placed a tiny kiss over his heart in response.

Silence enveloped them and as Kate’s breathing evened out, a beautiful sense of home washed over him like it always did when she was this close. And a sleepy but happy sigh escaped him as he slowly felt the exhaustion overcome him. But before he was completely lost to the world around him, her voice reached out to him with those three beautiful words that never ceased to amaze him.

“I love you,” she lovingly whispered, already asleep before the words left her parted lips.

“Love you too,” he whispered in reply, kissing the top of her head.

No. There was certainly no greater feeling than this.

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What do you think? :shifty::o

BlueDream
11-14-2008, 03:37 PM
Wow...TWO dyojs AND only in 3 hours after I asked for some - Jaters are really the best people ever! :uberglomp: Thank you guys for writing and posting - I really missed reading dyojses. I´m gonna read them now - kinda like bedtime stories :love:, but leave the reviews for tomorrow, ´cause it´s been a looooong day and I´m already bordering on sleep :tired:

p.s. If I don´t dream about Jate after all of this.... :no: :p

standard black
11-14-2008, 03:45 PM
Nille815 :thud:

okay now go update make it real :whip::p

and Omg Backpack :shock: that was awsome! :woot:

Backpack
11-14-2008, 03:49 PM
Backpack - :thud: That was so amazing :love: Please, pretty pwease write some more - your writing is beautiful :)



Thanks, sweetie! :hug: I'm an aspiring author (of fiction, usually not Jate-related :) ) and I really appreciate feedback. I'm happy to write another story, as soon as I get another idea. ;)

Your story was awesome, too! It was so romantic and sweet. Jate in a bedroom...

*the mind wanders*

:eyebrows:

guffi11
11-14-2008, 04:46 PM
Nille815
It was amazing!:cloud9::heart:

Truefate21
11-15-2008, 12:49 AM
Backpack!! :thud: :thud: :thud: GORGEOUS!! awww so very very cute!!! and wow welllll written! Hell yeah they deserve each other :love: :love:

Pernille that was....:thud: :love: :thud: sooooo mussy and sooo sweet and adorable I looove your djoys!

You jaters are the best! :uberglomp:

Arctic Fox
11-15-2008, 04:37 AM
Marina, have I ever told you how amazing your DYOJS are? I have? Oh :shifty: Well, I'm telling you again because that last one was just brilliant; probably my favourite of all the ones I've read of yours!

Backpack, that was absolutely amazing! I loved it, seriously, very well written :faint:

Pernille, I loved it! I love everything you write, and that was so sweet! Sigh, I hope we get a scene like that next season! :love:

Great stuff everyone! :D :glomp:

*Shining Fairy
11-15-2008, 09:32 AM
Pernille .... :cloud9: :lotsalove: :love: :valentines: :hyper: :dance2: :thud: :bowdown: :flowers2: :boogie: :banana: :cool: :D :w00t: :ahoy: :jawdrop: :heart: :boom: :flail: :rockout: :faint: :licking: :meditate: :headspin: :giggle:
OMG HOW CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :love:
sorry for the smiley attack.. :giggle:

glory19
11-15-2008, 01:55 PM
“I love you,” she lovingly whispered, already asleep before the words left her parted lips.

“Love you too,” he whispered in reply, kissing the top of her head.

No. There was certainly no greater feeling than this.

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What do you think? :shifty::o

wowie mc wow wow pernizzle. You've sure outdone yourself with this one and i can only let my filthy mind formulate the possibilities/ expansions :giggle:

:thud: :thud: LOVE IT THOUGH!!

standard black
11-17-2008, 04:41 PM
I've been sitting on this for months, and the fic. keeps begging to be written, so finally its out, maybe i can get a decent night sleep now lol

Kate awoke to the sound of the phone ringing. She didn’t need to look at her clock to know it was early. She buried her head in the pillow, letting it ring; the only people she heard from at this hour were Jack when he was to stoned to realize what time it was and that scary whispering noise, which thankfully, usually meant she was dreaming. The phone went silent and she sighed, turning over and burying her head under a pillow. She had a moment of peace before it started ringing again. It was Jack she realized, somewhat angrily. She turned, staring at the phone; scolding herself as she saw her hand involuntarily reaching to answer, compelled to talk to him, even though she knew that as usual, he would be stoned, and it would only break her hear to listen to his slurred words and rambled nonsense about returning to the island.

She clicked the talk button none the less, putting the phone to her with an irritated sigh, feeling her walls go up, trying to prevent at least some of the damage that was sure to be done by listening to his voice.

“Kate?” his voice was a hushed and ragged whisper, and she swallowed hard as she realized he wasn’t slurring. This was the first time he’d called her sober in over a month.

“Yeah Jack, I’m here,” she said, forcing her voice to be calm, “Do you know what time it is, I—“ She started, going on the offensive instantly.

“I know, look there isn’t time for that,” he said, his voice still hushed and he sounded like he was panting. She frowned as she listened harder, hearing voices in the background, “Do you remember the duffel bag I had you pack, back when we were together?” he continued on hurriedly.

She frowned, “Jack what’s going-“she was interrupted again by the faint echo of a gunshot and her face went pale. “Jack what was that?” she asked as she shot up in bed, instantly worried and alert, feeling her throat tighten in fear.

“Widmore made his move I don’t know why, and I really don’t have time,” Bang! “to explain, but you need to leave, “Bang! Bang! Kate felt her world spinning, her throat tightening as she listened to the panic in his voice, “Get Aaron and get to the safe house,” he ordered, sounding so much like his old self she had to suppress a shiver.

“Jack what’s going on?” she said just as harshly, fighting and losing to remain in control of her emotions, to hide the pure terror she felt listening to what was happening.

Jack paused a second, his ragged breathing hitching every few breaths as if pained, and her eyes widened as every nerve and muscle in her body fought to remain completely still, trying to pick up any hints from the other end of the phone, “Kate,” his voice plead, and she could see his face in her mind, contorted in grief as he plead with her, “I know you have no reason to trust me but, please, just this once. Just this one last time,” he whispered, his voice cracking as the words he was trying not to speak came through louder then the others; just this once time, because its looking like there probably won’t be a me around to ask anything more from you again. Her lip trembled in fear, but she stood from the bed none the less, ready to act, “Jack where are you?” she asked, panic rising in her voice and her chest, as she through things off the shelves in her closet looking for the gun.

“It doesn’t,” Bang! She jumped; a small scream escaping her body as she heard the dull thud of a body hitting the ground. The line went quiet, save a few gunshots that echoed through the air, coming through her phone faintly.

She felt her knees give out and she dropped to the ground, “Jack…Jack? Jack!” she said, her voice starting as a whisper and ending as a full out cry of panic and fear. Her free arm wrapped its self around her middle, a weak attempt to keep herself from being sick, her mind racing.

Suddenly breathing started again and relief flooded her temporarily as his voice came back onto the phone ,“Kate get Aaron and get safe,” he finished, his breathing more labored and pained then before, and the line went dead.

Her breathing hitched before stopping, feeling tears well in her eyes and angrily she threw the phone across the room, feeling it slam into the wall with a thud and she winced, knowing that Aaron was probably up as a result. She turned back to the closet, grabbing the duffel bag from its corner, allowing her survival instincts to take over, and she stuffed the gun in the bag. Looking up she was startled to meet her sons expectant eyes, as he clutched his orca whale stuffed animal, holding it close to him.

“Where are we going mommy?” he asked, his innocent and angelic voice bringing her back from the edge of insanity thoughts of Jack’s fate had driven her towards.

She swallowed, wondering if he’d seen the gun, “We’re going on vacation baby,” she said, giving him a slightly teary eyed smile. “Let’s go,” she said, taking his hand and heading to the car.

Truefate21
11-17-2008, 10:04 PM
THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!!

:thud: OMG YOU ALMOST BROKE MY HEART...I was like dont do it...dont do it.......thank god he came back on the line....:boom:

VERY VERY VERY GOOD i hope something like this does happen...kinda

Backpack
11-18-2008, 09:53 AM
That story was awesome! I was tense, sad, anxious, everything all at once! I like what you did with the story and the angst behind it. :plotting: I hope Jack is the reason she and Aaron take off like you & the preview mention.

Great job! :coolguy:

Nille815
11-18-2008, 01:15 PM
:grouphug: Thanks for the comments guys! You're all awesome :heart:
and standard black - that was amazing! :w00t:

BlueDream
11-22-2008, 06:10 AM
*uberglomps this place* :uberglomp:

Girls, sorry I´m here only now, I know I said I would comment the day after and I really feel bad:o, especially since you guys were so amazing and posted the dyojses in such a short time, but I had this one project for college and I had to focus primarly on that, so I had to stay away from LF for a while :sigh:

Backpack, such a great dyojs! :w00t:

The first thing that hit him was the silence of the outdoors, except for the distant sound of waves crashing along the shore. For a moment, it felt like he had never left the island. The slight movement of Kate’s elegant violet dress disappearing down the path to the overlook caught his eye. She had taken his breath away when he had first seen her in the dress; with a plunging neckline and soft fabric, he hadn’t been able to keep his mind on anything but her the whole evening. It made her green eyes flash and hugged her body like a glove. He had never seen her so elegant and at the same time, so out of her element.

“Hey,” he said softly, coming up behind her as she stood on the stone and grass overlook. The moon was out and he could see the ocean in the distance. The scent of jasmine and bougainvillea flowers floated on the sea breeze. “You okay?”

Kate turned to him, not surprised to see him. She gave him a half-hearted smile, but it didn’t hide the solitary tear rolling down her cheek. “I’ve been better,” she admitted.