Jate Poetry/Songs

[dreamcatcher]

I think a few of us are writers, and I know there are some poetry people on this board, so I figured I'd start a little place where those who write (or at least attempt to write, in my case) poetry can display their stuff. I'm just feeling extremely Jatery today (I think it's the face that TGG is coming up tonight) and I decided to jot down this Jate poem. I really like rhyming poems, but I didn't want to push the rhymes or it would've ruined what I was trying to say, so it's just freestyle. This is my attempt at summing up Jate. Please, post some of yours if you write them!!!



We stand upon slippery stones
Scattered along the beach where
The ocean kisses the sand,
Wondering what brought us there—
To this place where nothing makes sense
To this place where we seem right.
You let me in, I pushed you out,
I let you in, you pushed me out.
I put up walls to keep you from seeing.
To keep you from seeing me.
And yet you always find me.
Hidden in a garden, we plant seeds
Bathed in sunlight, buds grow.
And we know that these rainstorms
Will give new life
And wash away the past.
Worried footprints on the sand fade,
And jagged rocks begin to smooth,
As the waves crash down upon them.
And at night we sit and listen
To the fire’s gentle crackling
And as the light dances in your eyes,
Paralyzed in your warm stare,
I feel something slipping away,
And something else slipping in.
You have a way of turning rusty hearts to gold,
Of sewing up the bleeding wounds of my heart,
Of absorbing all of my fear.
Take the key and turn the lock,
Release me from this prisoned past,
Find me out along the shore,
And come to me, at last.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

*squee* :lotsalove

[adlin]

awww :lotsalove: OMG!!! Kim that's so beautiful

[dreamcatcher]

thanks Adlin. :D

[Nikiwi]

Wow! The escence of Jate right here, people!

[adlin]

not good??..I love it :lotsalove

[dreamcatcher]

The sunset fades into the sand
I want to feel you-Hand in hand

:lotsalove That was beautiful Liz! I loved it.

[littlelostsoul]

AWWWWWWWw those are soooooooooooooooooooo good!!!!! sigh.. talented people..

[icyfirebubbles]

Aww! Kim + Liz!!!!! Those were SO GOOD!!! :lotsalove

[PB&J_Jaters]

Here's a song i wrote (I think it's really bad)

When i am weak
And i can't stand on my own two feet
You take care of me
I hope you can see
can see...

Chorus-
I see it in your eyes
The love that you can't hide
So close and yet so far
Can hide who we truly are
It was meant to be
Just you and me

The night turns into day
We seem to find a way
to keep on going like it's all okay
We all smile and walk our seperate ways

Chorus-
I see it in your eyes
The love that you can't hide
So close and yet so far
Can hide who we truly are
It was meant to be
Just you and me

For once, just this one moment
Can we forget it all?
For one night, in each other's arms
I save from any harm
You'll save me and
Together we're free
Freely flying away...

Chorus-
I see it in your eyes
The love that you can't hide
So close and yet so far
Can hide who we truly are
It was meant to be
Just you and me
Just you and me
Just you and me

[dreamcatcher]

Awwwww!!! :lotsalove I loved it!!!

[buffyfan145]

Awwww!!!! All these songs and poems are soooo good!!!! :D

[^Katilyn^]

wow, these are really pretty!!!

(I'm a horrible poet so I'm not even gonna try)

[kerbear]

You guys are awesome! All of them are very well written!

[StandardBlack]

omg, those were all beautiful!!!!! :lotsalove

[jater_luvs_josh]

Omg they ROCK!!! Wow you guys are so talented! :lotsalove

[dreamcatcher]

Wow... this is an old thread! Thanks for bringing it back from the dead, guys. :)

[Freckles4eva]

Jesus and I thought I could write?!? I guess I can just do stories :p But these are amazing I swear

[Alevermor]

I wrote this while I was sitting in my math class bored to death...I hope someone enjoys it :)

Lost Love
She is unsure of which will last
She’s caught between her future and her past

One of them is a sinner
She sees so much of him in her

The other is a saint
Who she finds desirably quaint

Her heart is split in two
Not knowing who to give her love to

Every time she tries to choose
She realizes the other will lose

She’s kissed each with some intent
But her decision she still did not cement

Only time will reveal
Exactly how she feels

Will Kate choose Sawyer,
That moral destroyer

Or will she choose Jack,
The one who’s got her back

[katrina_x]

Amazing! :thud: And perfect character descriptions!

[jater_luvs_josh]

Or will she choose Jack,
The one who’s got her back
*SQUEE!!!* I love it!:D

[Count2Five]

That's great, I love it!!! :D

[Freckles4eva]

:D AWWWW I soo love that

[Alevermor]

Thanks! I didn't think people would reply, that makes me feel good :D

[Jack&Kate]

I like it. It is funny but really good

[SKaN0n56]

well, i wrote this poem even though im a Skater.but i am a little bit of a Jater too.anyway, its from kate's POV. so here it is.enjoy!:D

I say your name
and melt away inside
when you turn around.
Slowly, reluctantly,
I raise my eyes
to look at you
and all at once
the world slips away.

You're perfect
and I'm not.
You're flawless
and I'm not.
You're not a cheat
but I am.
You're not selfish
but I am.
How could I ever fall for you?

Looking at you
I know that I'm not worthy
to ever be with someone like you.
You're out of my league.
Somewhere far, far away.
I say it'll never happen
try as I may.

Then you step closer,
closing the gap.
Your eyes, they burn holes
right through my heart.
It'll never happen.
It'll never be.
Then you say something
I'd thought you'd never mean.

"I love you."

I can hardly believe it.
I can't believe it.
And this time when I look at you,
out eyes do not break
try as I may.
And all at once
the world slips away.

[Desiree_jk]

Love it! Great job:)

[razgriz]

I liked it.

[KatyIsAJater]

You know, I'm a fair writer but I can't write poem's or lyrics worth crap. Sad huh? I can write stories but I can't do something as simple as write a poem. I loved it! It was great!

[xannaxberryx]

Wow, that was really good! You did a great job on it!! :D

[PB&J_Jaters]

that was awsome!! :D:clap:

[SKaN0n56]

hey thanks for the feedback guys!ur awesome!:glomp: :lotsalove

[Freckles4eva]

Awww that was totally sweet, you did a great job :lotsalove:

[jater_luvs_josh]

:thud: :thud: That was AWESOME!!! *bookmarks*;)

[SKaN0n56]

^^awwww........thanks!*blushes*:o

[Sophie]

Wow that was amazing! Thanks for sharing! :D

[buffyfan145]

This poem is soooo good!!! Good job!!! I wish I could write like that. LOL :D

[Crispo]

Hey, lets make this ~The Jate-Poem Thread~

Post poetical words about the best ship ever!

Yes?
No?


...:type:

[Too_Lost_in_You]

That was wonderful!:clap: :clap: :clap:

[Nicky14jw]

It's great !

Mhm... I wrote a poem in German, I don't know how many of you can speak /are from german/y but I'll post it anyway ... Don't have to say something to it ;)

JATE , FATE
-ohne sie-

Jack versucht ihre Hand zu berühren,
doch sie lässt ihn niemals spüren,
dass sie ihn genauso mag,
mit der Zeit wird ihm jeder Tag,
unbezwingbar ohne sie,

Obwohl er sie jeden Tag sieht,
scheint es ihm als ob sie vor ihm flieht,
mag sie einen anderen mehr?
Er fühlt sich manchmal so leer,
und rastlos ohne sie

Als die beiden sich treffen am Strand,
wendet sie sich ab doch er nimmt ihre Hand,
endlich kommt es zum ersten Kuss ,
weitere folgen, welch ein Genuss, sie fühlen sich frei,
und glücklich zusammen

[EmotionalOne]

This is a poem written from Jack's perspective on his up and down
relationship with Kate. I am also working on one from Kate's
viewpoint. Hope that you all enjoy!

If you're lost and longing to be found
I wish you'd stop long enough to turn around
I understand your first instinct is to run away
But can you stay still and listen to what I need to say

Since day one, you caused me to completely stand still
Immediately I knew my heart had lost its free will
Fear took over me, and I knew it did you,too
Counting to five, my heart instantly started caring for you

I know you have issues with staying in one place
And I know that I am unable to make your past erase
Now we are forced into a situation in which you can't run far
I look at the beauty of you and I wish I could eradicate your scars

In this place, this insanity trap, things don't always make sense
But, this much is true, after all of the time we have spent
I will do everything in my power to ensure you are okay
And I'll patiently hold out for the time you decide to stay

Copyright© Renee January 12, 2006
Please do not remove. Thank you. =)

[dreamcatcher]

If you're lost and longing to be found
I wish you'd stop long enough to turn around
I understand your first instinct is to run away

Counting to five, my heart instantly started caring for you

I look at the beauty of you and I wish I could eradicate your scars

I will do everything in my power to ensure you are okay
And I'll patiently hold out for the time you decide to stay
:lotsalove *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

Loved it! It's so Jack and Jate. *sigh*

[EmotionalOne]

aww Kim, thank you soooo much! that means a lot to me! :hug2:

[buffyfan145]

Awww!!! That's so good!!! I love this poem!!! :D

[GandalfBot]

:cloud9: aw, that's beautiful! :clap: squeeage!

[Desiree_jk]

What a beautiful poem! Well done!

[Vicky91]

beautiful!!
i wish i could write like that!!

[StandardBlack]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh :cloud9: that was so sweet!!!! :hug:

[Peppy]

That poem is really beautiful. I love it!

[EmotionalOne]

You guys are so sweet ~ thank you so much! It really means a lot to me =)

[jater_luvs_josh]

That was so good!! SO jatey.....:lotsalove:

[lost_freak121]

Aww, that was so Jate! And you fit in all of the facts, wonderful! I'm in jate heaven right now:cloud9: I hope you'll be able to write one from Kates POV too!

[EmotionalOne]

thank you all so much!!! I am about to post the one I finished from Kate's point of view!

[EmotionalOne]

Ok, here is the one from Kate's point of view ~ Hope you guys like this one, too! Again, thanks for all the comments on the Jack one!

After a lifetime of hurt and double crosses
I've learned to just run and cut my losses
But now here I am in this unknown place
And my fears are something I'm forced to face

Through everything that's happened since the crash
I've had to confront demons and sadness from my past
But, because of you, I don't feel as scared or alone
And you represent a place that I feel I can call home

With just one look, you are able to put me at ease
And I admit. at times I am very hard to please
You have always known exactly the person I am
And falling for you wasn't exactly part of my plan

Right now I am feeling scared and slightly overwhelmed
You and me together would mean stepping out of my realm
Other influences that surround me represent what I know
So I am asking you to be patient as I learn to grow

I feel you are my fate and destiny deep in my heart
It will happen with you and I will make my new start
I just want time to heal and I know that has begun
I can't wait for us, when my first instinct is no longer to run

Copyright© Renee Jan 15 2006
Please do not remove.

[Sophie]

Awww that's adorable! :lotsalove Love it. Great job! :clap:

[jater_luvs_josh]

:eek: That was great!! I loved the last paragraph....

[Peppy]

Love it!! It's adorable :D

[Foxy<3]

That was amazing!:thud::clap:
Beautiful last line. :lotsalove

[EmotionalOne]

thank you all so so very much! makes me smile you guys like my writing =)

[jate=fate]

i LOVE it

[jate=fate]

i absolutly adore this.

[Miks]

It's awesome!!! Such a beautiful and emotional poem... I have tears in my eyes...
very nice! i loved it!!!

[Miks]

AMAZING!!!! VEEEERY GOOD!!!! I LOVED IT!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! :rolleyes:
NICE JOB

[Chris Anthony]

Wow:clap: that was such a great poem. It was beautifully written and in it you captured Kate so well, it really seemed as if she wrote that to Jack! Great job.:)

[Chris Anthony]

You must be a proffesional at poem writing. That was so well done. The way it flowed, and the words you used were so moving. It was beautiful. As I said with the Kate poem to Jack, this one was very in character and I can see Jack writing something like this to Kate. I hope you share some more of your poems with us.:)

[EmotionalOne]

awwwwwww thank you so very much ~
i am speechless .. you guys are so great!

[EmotionalOne]

again, i must say a huge thank you ...
you guys are adorable and sweet to say
such kind things! thanks again ~
writing poetry is my passion! :)

[dreamcatcher]

But, because of you, I don't feel as scared or alone
And you represent a place that I feel I can call home

So I am asking you to be patient as I learn to grow
:lotsalove aahhh...... Jate

Thanks for writing one from Kate's point of view! It was great!!! :D

[Miks]

Wow:clap: that was such a great poem. It was beautifully written and in it you captured Kate so well, it really seemed as if she wrote that to Jack! Great job.:)

I couldn't have said it better myself!!
I loved it!!!!

[EmotionalOne]

I am blushing ~ thank you all again!

[EmotionalOne]

Liz, you are mine, too ... thank you from the bottom of my heart:o

[buffyfan145]

Awwww!!! I love this one too!!! Your really talented with writing. :D

[Alevermor]

I took two years of German, and I only understood a few words, but I think I like it. lol.

I have three new ones:

Wait For Fate (Kate's perspective):

When will you realize I deeply care
I'm here for you my heart is bare

I never knew why I was living,
Until I saw you, your heart so forgiving

All my life I tried to run
But when you came, I finally saw the sun

From you I cannot hide
And on your shoulder I cried

When I kissed you it felt so right
That's when I knew our love was worth a fight

I hope you feel just like me
Knowing our love it meant to be

I will not hurry, I can wait
Because nothing can stop this certain fate


Hidden Love (Jack's perspective)

There you were behind that tree
you were there, staring at me

I saw you once and I knew
I could never be away from you

I know your secret you can trust me
your secret is as safe as can be

I didn't stop that kiss you gave
It is one thing I will always save

I told you to stay because I care
And the loss of you I could not bare

But when in his arms I saw you
I didn't know if your feelings were true

I hope you know that you are my life
I want to be with you through sadness and strife

I hide my feelings because you need my protection
But soon, my love, you will have my affection


A Love For Two

They are both so lost
What will this love cost?

She is unsure of who to choose
He is afraid that again he'll loose

She is the one with a decision
To his love, he hopes she'll give in

Heir love is so real it must come true
But only fate will tell what will come of these two.

[LovebirdsJATE]

Hey, I just noticed (well not JUST) that we have a song thread, at literal thread, colors, and all this stuff but no poems. So if you make or find a poem like Jate post it here if you want.

Without You by Sanji Rush.

When I came to you I had nothing
Then you offered me you hear and I had everything
I could feel you soul within mine
My life had meaning

You became my reason for being
You were my dawn in the morning
You were single star on a clear night
You were the scent of the roses in the garden
You made my life as fresh as the air after a spring rain

Without I feel empty
My morning without its dawn
My night without its star

My soul has no companion with out your love

Together we are everything
Apart we are nothing
Together we have meaning
Together we are one.


Tada! I have mezmoize this for class, took three hours.

[LAsay0275]

so my friend had to write a poem for her english class & its so cute i just had to post it!! lol. enjoy

I Will Always Love You

Each and every day I watch the sun set and the moon rise.

And each and every day all I think about is you.

About how your eyes glow like each star

Ans how your smile gleams like the moon.

This love I have for you is undying and strong.

The moon, like you, is beautiful

And it continuously reminds me of all your beauty.

Each day I see the twinkle in your esys,

And your sparkiling smile

And that makes my heart skip a beat.

It must be that at some point all parts of you were parts of the sky.

Your eyes the stars.

Your smile a piece of the moon.

And you heart the heavens.

My love for you is never-ending

And I could die just loving you.

:D

[KatyIsAJater]

That's so cool! I wish I could write poetry!

[jater_luvs_josh]

Aww! That's really sweet :cloud9:

[ukjaterlover!]

Thts really beautiful!

[guavaseeds]

That's really good!! I like this bit best:

Your eyes the stars.

Your smile a piece of the moon.

xx

[Morgan Celestine]

aaaawww it's so beautiful...and so jate!!!!
should it not be in the poetry section though?????

[LAsay0275]

thanx, i told my buddy who wrote it that yall thought it was good. and yea it probably should be in the poetry section but i kinda didnt no there was 1 bc im real smart like that lol.

[BluishBlack]

:thud: WOW!!!! that is so beautiful....I can sometimes write poetry & sometimes i really can't!

[ibis]

Awwww... dorkiness is worth it for a poem like that! I guarantee I'm worse lol. thanks for that Liz!

[*~Sophia~*]

I am officially the biggest dork in the world because I just got into this huge Jate sap fest after re-watching the finale a few times. So, I wrote this.

I adore your quiet laughter and our private jokes
Your eyes speak words for only me to know

We stand eye to eye and heart to heart
Anger, fear, or far apart

Worry, care, or so near
We don't speak it because it's love we fear

I love your independence, and daring charm
Your witty thoughts I am unarmed

We're both damaged and misused
So heartbroken and abused

I've touched your face and I've kissed your lips
I've felt your hand and finger tips

I've heard you breathing and saw you cry
I've seen your truth and heard you lie

I love your imperfections and past mistakes
I love your smile and warm embrace

awww, that's gorgeous well done!!

[ukjaterlover!]

Thts beautiful Liz!

[Heinzy]

brilliant work Liz!

[*Jaterificgal*]

Alright heres mine. Yours are all so good i hope you like them, these are from my writers notebook...

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Found love

Count the minutes
The lovely parallel of five
The continuous waves pound upon us
Surrounding us in its infinite foreverness.
No escape
No running.
So face it
The mistakes we made
Shall be forgotten
And finally together
We will be released.
And in these times of tragedy
We will find our way back
To a home we wish we knew before.
And though the doors
Of our hearts maybe jammed
They are never locked.
So make the agreement
And settle,
For when we are lost
Together we will be
Found.

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Another…:
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Waiting

The beach spirals
Melting into the sugar sea
The sky switches roles constantly
With thunder clouds
And a burning sun.
He
The leader
Stands beneath it all
And she lurks
Watching.
The one whom he loves
She who loves him back.
The deepest love
Dancing between them
Fear
Gentle stares
And harsh words
Are soaked in tears.
Do anything to cure this…
The desire
“I’m sorry”
A way out of the fear
Lies.
When will they admit it?
Soaking in denial
Is not forever.
It doesn’t have to be.
The haunting jungle
Brings a desperation
Driving her nuts
Driving her right into his arms
Twirling between them.
How long do they have left?
No time left for simple temptation
There’s fear in everyone’s voice
But with thoughts of her
Her image constantly behind his soft eyes
The sound of confidence remains in his
For everyday he lives
Breathes
Move
Speaks
He painfully yearns
And loves her more.

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What do you guys think? You are all seriously amazing and inspiring writers! : )

[dreamcatcher]

OMG... you guys are amazing. I love them. :thud:

[*Jaterificgal*]

Thanks! heres a short little one for the stare : )

Desperate eyes

Looking into your eyes
desperatley seaching
knowing
but this better not be it
to much left unsaid
undone inside of me
and as i approach this unknown darkness
I pray
that when released
there will be a time for us
because now I know that you are the one for me
you are the only one who can save me
I see it in your eyes

[Damaged Goods]

:thud: :love: A plan look, right :rolleyes:

[DoctorsPatient]

okay so i'm mkain this up right now as i type so forgive me if its bad!

"Complete" based on Kates feelings during "The Look"

Your eyes,
They never left mine.
Locked, forever in each othersgaze.
The world melted.
Every fear evaporated.
I knew.
Right there, that i would be safe.
You loved me.
Everything was going to be fine.
No matter what they could do to us,
as long as we had each other,
it didnt matter.
We are strong.
Together
we are ...
complete.


short, and to the point. :D

[*Jaterificgal*]

Luv it! Really great!!!! : )

[ukjaterlover!]

Its great DP!

[livin_4_foxy]

AH-:shock: -MA:shock: -ZI:shock: -IN:shock: -G


wooooooooahhhh people :eek:

those are beautiful :lotsalove!!!!

wow!

[lulinha_k]

okay so i'm mkain this up right now as i type so forgive me if its bad!

"Complete" based on Kates feelings during "The Look"

Your eyes,
They never left mine.
Locked, forever in each othersgaze.
The world melted.
Every fear evaporated.
I knew.
Right there, that i would be safe.
You loved me.
Everything was going to be fine.
No matter what they could do to us,
as long as we had each other,
it didnt matter.
We are strong.
Together
we are ...
complete.


short, and to the point. :D


:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :love:

[liz815]

ooh here's my lil try:D KATES POV

Sinking in your eyes

Caught in your gaze
and your lost in mine
entertwined in a net
and i can feel your breath, touch and care
that only you can offer me for the rest of eternity
you look right through me and i fear you see....
my past, lies and worst of all truth
the whole truth
I sink away from you
to hide what lies
behind my haunted jaded eyes
But you break down the lies untill....
i reveal that i am yours and you are mine

[JustAlice]

^ Beautiful poem Liz! :love:

I got a bit fed up last night so I wrote a Jate Poem, not very good though..:shifty:

Endlessly

When I first found you,
I didn't know,
What I was looking for,
But I looked deep,
Into your eyes,
And this is what I saw.

I can't quite put,
My feelings into words,
But some day,
I hope you'll see,
A thousand shades of the words
'I love you.'
Coming straight from me.

And all of this,
I don't deserve,
After the troubled life I've lead,
But looking deep inside you now,
I see the tears you've shed.

Because I'm like you,
And your like me,
And now I hope you see.

This love we share,
Is real enough,
To go on endlessly.

[Caroo]

Alice, Beautiful

Okay.. I had to write a poem about clouds for school, I don't like it actually.. but still.. I translated it in english for you.. It has place just before the kiss

A cloud
Her tears
Warming
my face
Scared
She shivers
Because of
my storm
The sun
Now hidden
By your
Clouds

[*HeavenInYourEyes*]

Heya guys. I'm glad I found this thread, because I love poetry and jate, and I've just been nominated for the Foyles young poet awards with a poem I wrote based on Jate. I'm not sure which one it was because I sent several off, but here's some that I've done for jate.

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Lay all your troubles down, I'm with you now
I'll hold you in my arms, hear the beating of your heart.
I'll never let you go, I'll never wander far.
I'll never leave you helpless, we'll never be apart.
Tell me your pains, tell me your fears
I'll be here if you need me, to dry away your tears.
All I ask in return is a smile
To show me that I've helped you.

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Would you be content to see me crying,
After all you've done to cause these tears to fall.
Would you be glad to see me dying,
Even after all that we've been through
Would you rather see me hurt than loving?
Do my tears mean more to you than my smile?
Did you still love me through all your shoving?
Have you ever loved someone like I loved you?
I never thought I'd miss someone
As much as I missed you.
I never knew I loved you so
You just don't have a clue.
So turn your back on love,
Face away from me
But never tell me lies
That I just might believe

[Caroo]

Some ehm... Rather Jexy poems:

Your finger's traveling my bare skin
Beggin me to let you in

I can taste you
I can feel you

Oh Jack, our bodies colliding
We'll never stop riding

Your hands tangled in my hair
I need you inside of me, i swear

Jack, please do this one more time
This is passion, not a crime...

__________________________________________________ ___

When you're body's next to mine
Oh Jack, i can feel us intertwine

When our bodyies're colliding
there's no place for hiding

Oh Jack when i feel you inside of me
There's nowhere else i'd rather be

Your hands touching my bare skin
At your touch i'm leaning in

You make me swoon, moaning your name
Oh Jack... We're not in vane...

______________________________________________

You and I
we intertwine

I tasted your lips
and you tasted mine

no fish biscuits
but passionfruit

Oh Jack, you're just too good

You're my hero, you're my star
And tonight i'm gonna do you right where you are

You won't complain
you won't say no

Cuz Jackie
You're my renewed airplanetoy

I'll make you swoon
I'll make you groan
Your ELCB'll never come down...

[Lena Anne]

Jexy poems that go with carolines lol

When we ride we ride..
Jack baby we ride.. till the day we die!

Its gettin late and im thinkin bout what we become..
Jack baby your just number one..

Just ride coz we used to say ride we ride..
Till the day we die..

Visions in my mind of every butterfly peck..
Jack your tongue exotic on my neck

When we ride we ride
Its till the day we die..
Jack baby you and me just ride!

Everything lying in that one kiss
Your body On mine I'll always miss

Cause Jack what we do..
We ride..
Just ride we ride..

Jack your hands grasp my skin..
Jack My heart needs to let you in..

Jack my finger nails tear at your back..
Jack your body I never want to lack..

Jack hold me and kiss me hard..
Jack your feelings against mine bombard..

Jack watch our heat match the sun..
Jack with you I cant even count to one

Jack i can feel you intwine our legs..
Jack if it meant having you.. I'd beg

[Caroo]

Aww! Lena! I sooo adore them :love: Had to say it again!

[Lena Anne]

No I adore yours!!! caroline your seriously the best!!!

An emotional Jex poem

When I thought I lost you..
I lost the world..

When I thought you were gone..
I thought I was gone too..

God Jack I wish you had known..
the only thing I wanted to do was to fall for you..

I Saw you in my dreams..
My mind played torturous delussions..

As I begged your touch in my sleep..
I was dying from the constant illusions..

That other mans breath..
Coursed angrily through my soul..

Your lips were pure and white against mine..
But now my heart is as black as coal..

I wish I understood..
Why fate took you away..

If I could Jack..
I get down on my knees and forever beg you to stay..

And then I saw you staring into my eyes..
Your innocence and perfect warm..

My soul felt alive once more..
And I let the heat soar..

I can feel your lips on my neck..
I felt your hands exploring my bare skin..

I can feel my walls of pretence falling down..
Dear god Jack I'm letting you in..

Please never leave me..
Promise forever you will stay..

As you kiss and carress me..
I know here we will always lay..

~ ~

That ones dedicated to you caroline!!!

[alexie]

:love: :valentines:

I love you guys! :heart:

Mmmmh Jate!

[Caroo]

OMG! Lena! That was beautiful!! :love: Thank you!! :love:
This is for you, more emotional too

I was affraid to love
Affraid to live
Between the lines drawn by my lies,
You saved me from my demise

Jack, if i'd only have one night
i know i'd give it to you
As our bodies intertwine
You're saving me from my demise

As our souls become one,
as our bodies collide
Into the night
Into our night

[martusia]

"being"
dedicated for Caro

He is a
hero

She is a
convict

He is
perfect

She is
broken

He is a
saint

She is a
sinner

He has no
faith

She has no
hope

He always have something
to fix

She always have someting
to run away

He is
She is
and

They are.
Together.

That is what people call fate.

[Carolini]

:thud: wow, that was powerful!:eek:

[Caroo]

OMG! Thx a lot!
So many poems! :love: Here's one for you:

Your spirit sets me free
As your hands're caressing me

feeling your body touch my skin
Baby, you're my everything

I just want to make love to you
Please, Say you want me too

As this night passes,
And our bodies collide
I'll be loving you
Untill the end of time

[Carolini]

OMG! Wow...I'm..speechless...you're so good:o

[martusia]

Caroo... love ya :)

"never spoken"

You know
You know perfect
What I'm trying to say
Just...
Finding the best way.

You know
You know perfect
What I'm going to say
Just...
Finding my own way.

I know
I know perfect
What You're going to say.
That

That you love me.

I will find the best way.
I will find my way.
Promise.

[Caroo]

That was beautiful :love: :thud: you inspired me, it's kinda sad..

Everything left unspoken
Are now things i need to say

I don't want to be to late
And see you fade away

My heart is where you'll remain
Oh god, i can't stand this pain

You'll be leaving me tonight
I only hope, i said things right...

[jate4eva&eva]

:bawl: thery're all so beautiful! :love:

[martusia]

"love is all we need"

when you smile
I feel
I don't need anything else

when you kiss
I feel
I'm not on this world

when you leave
I feel
I won't breathe.

when you come back
I feel
I really love you.

and I don't need anything else.

[Mevie fan]

beautiful..I can't write poems :(

[Lena Anne]

this ones for caroo and martusia

" Turned Away "

All I can remember is you turning away..
You say the worst of its over, so why dont you stay?

I know you see me crying, I know you see the tears..
Because now that you are gone, all I can feel is fear.

I'm broken theres nothing left..
My redemtion was what lay on your very breath.

But I get it imperfect and perfect dont go..
I cant believe I trusted you when you told me you loved me so.

So here I am again, feet drowning in the sand..
If I could only remember what it was like to hold your hand.

A lost love burning in my heart..
I'm slowly learning what its like for us to be apart.

So I'll do what you told me and run away..
Because long ago I lost the incentive to pray.

And as I take once last glance at you face..
I wish I knew you were thinking 'Kate's image I can never erase.'

~~

That was jangsty and sad.. :( I dont like jangsty and sad... :(

[hollisterbabe]

omggg that was soo good..i gotta write some soon!


I loved the line...

I get it Perfect and Imperfect don't go..awww

[Lena Anne]

aww thanks heres one for you!!!

" Heated passion "

Heated passion
Sorrowful cries

Void and Emptiness
When she looked in his eyes

Lifeless perfection
Longing for more

Searing caresses
Making her heart soar

Heated passion
Sorrowful cries

Both completely broken
In horrific demise

Past tragedy
Future pain

The softest of lips
Desires in vain

Heated sorrow
Passionate cries

Endless love and affection
Dancing across thier eyes

~ ~ ~ ~

I really like this one lol.. That ones for you hollisterbabe and for caroline.. THE BEST JATE POET EVA!

[hollisterbabe]

AHHHH i love it you write it so good..can you write one about kate being imperfect and jack being "perfect"

[Lena Anne]

ah sure.. I think so lol I'll give it a go..

" Imperfection "

You say you're damaged
You say I am flawless

You say you're a criminal
You say I am a hero

You say you're nothing
You say I am everything

You say you're broken
You say I am anything but

You say while you are here
You say I am over there

You say we are miles apart
You say I can never have you heart

You say you're imperfect
You say I am perfect

But Katie why cant you see
You are my imperfect perfection

[hollisterbabe]

awww yayy loves it! jate!

[Lena Anne]

" Seasons "

It was like autumn
It was a deep orange
It was a golden yellow

It was like winter
It was a inpenitrable indigo
It was a sparkling silver

It was like spring
It was a rose pink
It was an elating white

It was like summer
It was a heated red
It was a vibrant green

It was just you
You and your eyes

[purpleplaydoh22]

lol my friend made this up, i had to put it on here because its just so brilliant!

*clears throat*

guava seeds are very jate
but fish biscuts are what skate ate
why would people take that bate?
dont they know that jate is fate?
skate is something you should hate!!
SO dont let sawyer mess up jate
because skate is out of date
and skate is very second rate
There cant be skate, its just too late
Cause we all know that JATE is FATE
and fate is absolutely great!
But we might maybe have to wait...:bawl:


lol like it????

just so you know, this is an EX-skater talking!! we've got another one converted! :w00t:

[VetteAMJ]

That brought a big smile to face. :D
and too cute!! LOL

i tired to come up with a song too.. and lord i suck.. :giggle:

[LovebirdsJATE]

That was amazing, I really liked it.

[NicoleR]

awww, that was really cute. I loved it!

[Lena Anne]

THAT WAS AWESOME LOL.. I decided to write one just then lol!! haha its terrible compared to that one though!

I just wrote this song then lol it probably sucks but hey lol!!

Its based on Kate being with Sawyer and the Skiss as if she was leaning towards chosing sawyer lol

Oh and if your gonna say something about it plz be nice.. lol thats the first time I have ever written anything remotely like a song lol

" Wait For Me "

You make me feel out of my element..
You make me feel lost at sea..

You make me feel totally helpless..
The agony of my choice drifting over me..

I was lost
Then found
Dying without you around
Yeah..
Drowning in the sand
begging for the feel of your hand
Thinkin Why. Couldnt. We. Be?
And even though it may take some time
.... wait for me
Yeah Yeah.. Wait for me

You make me feel completely defenceless..
You make me fell like I dont have a leg to stand..

You make me indescribable feelings..
That now I chose him its not going how I planned..

I was lost
Then found
Dying without you around
Yeah..
Drowning in your eyes
In an unbearable demise
Thinkin Why. Couldnt. We. Be?
And Its going to take some time
.... But please wait for me..
Yeah.. Wait for me..

You wiped away my tears..
You just make me feel

And even though we're Lost
I cant help but know you're real

Because....

I was lost
Then found
Dying without you around
Yeah..
Fallin for your love
Beggin heaven above
Becuase we. Are. Meant to. Be.
I just need you to..
Wait for me..

Just wait for me..
Yeah Yeah Yeah..
Wait for me...

~ ~ ~ ~

DO NOT ASK ME WHAT MADE ME THINK OF THIS.. I am most likely just totally jate deprived.. But hey..

[NicoleR]

awww Lena, that was beautiful!

[Lena Anne]

:giggle: aww thanks nicole

x o x o

[Caroo]

OMG! Lena! These are great!

When i look into your eyes
I don't see fear
I don't see lies

Something so beautiful as you
So breakable,
and blue

I watched you run
I watched you hide
But now, our bodies did collide

I'm going with you
and run away
Whithout you,
there's no reason to stay...

[Caroo]

OMG!! These are beautiful!

When Liesbeth comes back, you'll have to ask her to post hers here too, they're awesome!

[Lena Anne]

oh my gosh thats so cute!!! I LOVE IT! Another for you caroline!

" With you "

I see the world in a shade of grey..
But with you its like rose coloured glasses..

I never understood trust..
But with you, I believe as time passes..

I got used to always being wrong..
But with you I can handle being right..

I always knew oblivious and dark..
But with you the skies shine a luminous bright..

I didnt know the meaning of emotion..
But with you now all I can do is feel..

I only knew fake and pretence..
But with you I cant help but think its real..

I could never hold a scrutinizing stare..
But with you I cant look away..

I can only imagine running..
But with you I can imagine the possibility to stay..

I didnt have a life outside my dreams..
But with you maybe they could be true..

I could never forget the kiss you lay upon my lips..
Because I'm desperatly in love with you..

[Mevie fan]

wow :thud: those are beautiful! I wish I could write like that.. here's my try (it sucks :P )


'woman and man'

those three words you whispered
I wanna scream them at loud

All those years of run
has ended now.

runner and doctor
convict and hero
woman and man..the simpliest..
woman and man..love

[martusia]

Lena, you're just... amazing! :thud: :thud: The "Seasons" is... like classical poem! Maybe you should send it for some competition? xD :thud: Love Ya :) and thanks for dedication so:

"sickness"
dedicated for Lena

I'm sick of waiting
here
alone
for you

I'm sick of waiting
here
alone
for your words

I'm sick of waiting
here
alone
for your love

I know perfect
You are here
Your words are here
Your love is here

There is nothing
I'm sick of.

[Mevie fan]

:thud:

[Caroo]

Aww! Lena! Thx!!

They're all so amazing!

Well, it's a sad one..

Sweet little lies

The dawn is breaking
You're slowly waking

Whas it too good to be true
This night, just me and you

These moments, were they all in vane..
In your heart, too much pain

As you open your eyes
I see, it were all
sweet little lies

[Lena Anne]

AH I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! that was so cute.. but sad

I just wanna add to it!! So gorgeous..

Sweet little lies..

All just sweet little lies
But it doesnt matter, I love you demise..

Every lie I'll believe is real
Every feeling I promise to conceal..

Every time you decieve to my face..
I swear my love for you wont ever erase.

Even if tonight is our last..
You sweet little lies will haunt my past..

[Caroo]

great addition!


new one:

All those words left unspoken
all those things left undone
and it hurts so much
knowing it's too late
now you're gone

We were dancing on thin ice
It broke and you fell
Now you're gone
and it's to late
But you and me,
it was meant to be
We were faith...

[Lena Anne]

omg you keep getting better I love it!

Broken

Broken in two.
Ending up here I always knew.

Shattered like broken glass.
Worse as the time does pass.

Your love I lost.
Never realising its real cost.

Your smile fading.
I miss knowing you stare
at my eyes and hair cascading.

Losing my religion, always losing.
Just because I went wrong when chosing.

It was him or you.
But I chose him becuase I couldnt bare to break you too.

[Caroo]

OMG!! You are totally the queen at this! What's your age actually?



You made me see


As you moan my name
You heal my pain

Those kisses you give
Make me willing to live

I uses to be blind
Blind to see
The passion and love
Between you and me
I used to be blind
and you made me see...

[Lena Anne]

OMG I LOVE IT!!!
I feel funny about my age lol I'm in high school.. how bout you I swear you with your writing quality you must be an english professer!!

Love of the Game..

I dont know why I do this..
I dont know how..

But its causing you pain..
And I want it to stop now..

Its not the thrill of the chase..
Its not the love of the game..

I just want to kiss you..
Take a walk down memory lane..

I want you to remember me..
Like lilies in the spring..

I dont want nightmares..
I want to dream about you
slipping on my finger that ring..

I want you to sing me a symphony..
Not cry out in pain..

I want to know that you love me..
That we didnt play this game in vain..

[martusia]

omg ^^ girls... just love ya
for you:

never wake up

I like sleeping
that's true

I love dreaming
that's true too


and

when you
look at me

when you
embrace me

when you
kiss me

when you
love me

I want to
never wake up.

[Caroo]

In high school to, i'm 14


OMG! Marta! Great! Lena! :love:


I’m drowning in your eyes
When, silent as snowfall
You say your goodbyes

Tears rolling down my face
And just in case… Just in case
If I won’t ever see you again
I need you to know
Everyday I’ll think of you
And not only now and then

[Lena Anne]

AHH marta I love you YOUR JUST WONDERFUL!!!

Heres one for you!

Dreams..

As we sink in the sand..
I beg for the feel of your hand..

As we drown in the skies..
I beg for your heroic eyes..

As we lost hope..
I beg for you to help me cope..

As we caress and kiss..
I beg your body I will never miss..

As we take one step at a time..
I beg always for your voice at my ears pine..

As we finally stop the run..
I beg for your heart like the heat of the sun..

As you declare your love for me..
I beg forever the vision you made me see..

And as I wake from the dream..
I know now things are not always what they seem.

[Lena Anne]

I got to go to bed guys :( school re-starts tomorrow and its heaps late here..

Marta and Caroline you are my gorgeous poetic girls!!!

Talk to you tomorrow sweets!!!
And I'll write a poem for you both tomorrow!

[Caroo]

Our bodies collide
Into the night
Into the night

Our hands intertwine
So define
Yeah, so define

In you, I’m tangled up
Don’t you ever
make this stop

And it won’t
‘cause in my heart
I know something this perfect
Can only be our start…

[martusia]

Caroo... amazing. Just in case :)
Bye, Lena, and thank ya :*

I made kinda jangsty one;

You should promise me

You should promise me
That time
We'll always
be together
You should promise me
That time
I won't have a reason
to run away

But you didn't
Now I feel pain
That I've run away
And there is nothing
to live for.

You should promise me.

[Caroo]

All those things left undone
Dissapear
As we become one

My dreams. And yours.
Vanished
Now it’s ours

Two bodies
And one mind

We became one,
This perfect night

[martusia]

God... Jex xD great; i'm goin' out this forum, be back at my 19 ;)

[svrwxfreak25]

Nice work everyone! :yourock:

[Caroo]

God... Jex xD great; i'm goin' out this forum, be back at my 19 ;)


Stay! i'm 14 myself, and totally normal, so a little smut won't hurt :p


another one, no smut:

Among the people
I just can see your face
And how you’ve lighten up my days

My damaged soul
A painful scratch

Afraid to fall
But you will catch

I won’t care
And I won’t run
If only you would be my sun…

[svrwxfreak25]

You guys are too great! I'd try to write one but it would be bad, I have no writing skills at all. :o

[martusia]

uh... Caroo, I mean 19 as an hour and "my" as my time district ;d
but, whatever, I'm back cuz someone screwed up.

god...
"my sun..." that makes my cry, cause it remembers me someone... :(

[Caroo]

uh... Caroo, I mean 19 as an hour and "my" as my time district ;d
but, whatever, I'm back cuz someone screwed up.

god...
"my sun..." that makes my cry, cause it remembers me someone... :(

ah, okay :p

Ow, you okay? :hug2:

All the things left unspoken
All the things left unsaid
I now regret

Because for us
time has stopped
For us
the world has end
We never got
our second chance

I wish i would've talked to you
And made you change your mind
I wish you would've stayed
Stayed to be mine...

[hollisterbabe]

omg browneyedbeauty that with you one ahhh i love it...

[Morgan Celestine]

THAT WAS AWESOME LOL.. I decided to write one just then lol!! haha its terrible compared to that one though!

I just wrote this song then lol it probably sucks but hey lol!!

Its based on Kate being with Sawyer and the Skiss as if she was leaning towards chosing sawyer lol

Oh and if your gonna say something about it plz be nice.. lol thats the first time I have ever written anything remotely like a song lol

" Wait For Me "

You make me feel out of my element..
You make me feel lost at sea..

You make me feel totally helpless..
The agony of my choice drifting over me..

I was lost
Then found
Dying without you around
Yeah..
Drowning in the sand
begging for the feel of your hand
Thinkin Why. Couldnt. We. Be?
And even though it may take some time
.... wait for me
Yeah Yeah.. Wait for me

You make me feel completely defenceless..
You make me fell like I dont have a leg to stand..

You make me indescribable feelings..
That now I chose him its not going how I planned..

I was lost
Then found
Dying without you around
Yeah..
Drowning in your eyes
In an unbearable demise
Thinkin Why. Couldnt. We. Be?
And Its going to take some time
.... But please wait for me..
Yeah.. Wait for me..

You wiped away my tears..
You just make me feel

And even though we're Lost
I cant help but know you're real

Because....

I was lost
Then found
Dying without you around
Yeah..
Fallin for your love
Beggin heaven above
Becuase we. Are. Meant to. Be.
I just need you to..
Wait for me..

Just wait for me..
Yeah Yeah Yeah..
Wait for me...

~ ~ ~ ~

DO NOT ASK ME WHAT MADE ME THINK OF THIS.. I am most likely just totally jate deprived.. But hey..
:faint: omg that was so amazing. You've got me in tears. I can't stop crying. lol (i'm an emotional wreck *shrug* :giggle:) you've really made my day ;)

[Caroo]

Those tears i cry
When you're not here

Those words i scream
now you're not near
You teached me life
you teached me love.

And i just seem to forget
every single word you said

Because now they're dead
Along with you...

[martusia]

Caroo :( yeah, now I'm good, but... eh, doesn't matter.
I love your last!
emm... I'll write somethin' later xD

[Caroo]

Just turn away
I'll watch you leave
But still, you stay
And make me believe
I mean something
Something to you
That's just what you do
By one look in your eyes
I can forget the world go by
I can forget those lies and blame
Because you came
Because you came...

[martusia]

^^ no words.

Can't you see?

Can't you see
There is no me without you?
Can't you see
I can't breathe without you?
Can't you see
I can't exist without you?
Can't you see
I can't feel without you?

You can't.


Because
You are with me.
And I won't ever be without you.

[Caroo]

OMG! Amazing!



I lied to you
Burning questions in your eyes
Burning passion in my lies

I ran away
Dissapointment in your words
But can't you see, how much it hurts

I'm sorry
For everything i put you through
I only did it because i love you

I'm scared
I'm scared to feel
But i know that i will heal

Because of you

[martusia]

OMG!

just... perfect. but... lie as in bad or lie as don't say truth in fisrt verse? xD or it's word game? ;)

"sunk"

I was thinking
of my lies
of my cons
of my sins.
of my sorries.

and
I was thinking
too much.

Because
Nothing matter now
When
We're lying here
Together.
Sunk in our love.

[Caroo]

OMG! Beautiful!
Lies as in not say the thrut verse first :)

I'll write another one later, have to go for school!

[martusia]

OMG! Beautiful!
Lies as in not say the thrut verse first :)

I'll write another one later, have to go for school!glad you like it! I go to school now too, but I'll write somethin' at and give it here after lessons!

may the jate be with you ;)

[Lena Anne]

:faint: omg that was so amazing. You've got me in tears. I can't stop crying. lol (i'm an emotional wreck *shrug* :giggle:) you've really made my day ;)

Holy crap.. I wrote that.... ^^^^

Omg thanks so much that ACTUALLY MADE MY DAY!!! Aw you cant believe how great that made me feel thankyou so much!!!!

Caroline YOUR 14 HAHA I'M 14!!! hahaha!!!!!

Marta and Caroline heres another for you gorgeous girls!

One Day..

Right now It hurts to breathe.
The thought of being trapped I could not concieve.

But its not these bars that steal my air.
Its your eyes screaming utter despair.

I never wanted to run away.
I only did it becuase you didnt beg me to stay.

And right now it hurts to feel.
Becuase for once these tears I cannot conceal.

But its not becuase of the abuse I was to endure.
Its losing you with no hope for a cure.

Its not that I couldnt let you in.
Its the fact your an angel and I'm nothing but sin.

I could never break you like he broke me.
But I cant bare the blindness, cause without you I cant see.

And now that they are taking you away.
I want you to know until I see you..
Until I feel you..
I'll wait for you until that very day.

[Caroo]

OMG! Beautiful! Thx!

Here's one for you guys:


My world was colored a shade of grey
Then you came to save my day

Before the collision of our hearts
My life was shattered in a million parts

You saved my life, you saved my soul
you made my world whole...


_________________________________


I'm shattered
As i see your face
Cold
as in a winter day
Your eyes
No life
Only the love
You used to cherish
For me...

[Caroo]

SOrry for doubleposting :) but it's an hour ago, so i thought it would be okay...

It's the way you make me feel
It feels so right
yet so sureal

It's the way you make me fly
So high
Oh so high

It's in the way you talk to me
Those things you say
They make me see

The way i am
And not what i used to be

[martusia]

yey ^^ U R great :*
today I made 8 jate poems at school, all of them are for you, Caroo and Lena :*

forgive me

I know
I'm not as perfect as you

And even
If you convince me
It's not true
I feel it is

I know
I'm not worth you.

And when
You won't find me nearby you
Forgive me
I've run away.

***

I won't forget

I think of your words
They're still in my ears
My mind secretly whispers them
I won't forget.

You know I really want
To tell you the same
Those faithfull words
I won't forget.

And when I run away
As I always do
Your voice telling me that
I won't forget

And I know you'll find me
You never give up
And this smile, this touch, these words
I won't forget

***

nevermind

you said, you love me
and I...
nevermind.

you said, you want me
and I...
nevermind.

you said, you're not sorry
and I...
nevermind.

you said, you'll be waiting for me
and I...
nevermind.

you said, you can leave me
if I don't love you
and I...
I love you, Jack.

***

simple plan

there is no hope
there is no faith
there is no words
for us.

but we'll live
but we'll love
but we'll be
but we'll be

***

a monster

cause I feel,
I'm not a monster,
I'm not Them,
cause I feel
I don't have to run away
This time.

cause I feel,
I'm not a monster,
I'm not Them,
cause I feel
I have to tell you
That I love you.

***

forever

cause we were
we are
and we'll always be.

there's nothing
we should be afraid of
nothing
we are not sure about
nothing
we have to be confused

cause we were
we are
and we'll always be.

we are together
and the world doesn't exist
together
and there is no one else
together
forever and always

cause we were
we are
and we'll always be.

***

broken

I want to scream it
every day
With all pasion
And all love.

I lie on my bed
Crying and sobing
Try not to completely
Break down.

Because I know
That how loud
I will scream
That I love you
You won't hear me
Cause you're not here
Casue I've run away.
And you're not here.

***

plane

this stupid plane
reminds me of my past
so hard and so deep
that I won't never forget.

I know, you want really hard
to fix me, to let me free
from my past,
but it's hard.

"and what if the plane crashed?"
you ask, and I still answer
"I won't let it crash"
you smile, I see,
but there is pain.

I know you'll wait for me
because you love me
and you'll always do
and I'm sorry
sorry that I can't.

my past,
the only thing
I can't run away from.

[Caroo]

Wow! Great

As you go
I fall down
low

You used to pick me up
Make my world stop
Now your world is gone
And so many
is left undone
And i regret
all those things
i haven't said
My life began
the day we met...
and it has ended
now you're death

[hollisterbabe]

Holy crap.. I wrote that.... ^^^^

Omg thanks so much that ACTUALLY MADE MY DAY!!! Aw you cant believe how great that made me feel thankyou so much!!!!

Caroline YOUR 14 HAHA I'M 14!!! hahaha!!!!!

Marta and Caroline heres another for you gorgeous girls!

One Day..

Right now It hurts to breathe.
The thought of being trapped I could not concieve.

But its not these bars that steal my air.
Its your eyes screaming utter despair.

I never wanted to run away.
I only did it becuase you didnt beg me to stay.

And right now it hurts to feel.
Becuase for once these tears I cannot conceal.

But its not becuase of the abuse I was to endure.
Its losing you with no hope for a cure.

Its not that I couldnt let you in.
Its the fact your an angel and I'm nothing but sin.

I could never break you like he broke me.
But I cant bare the blindness, cause without you I cant see.

And now that they are taking you away.
I want you to know until I see you..
Until I feel you..
I'll wait for you until that very day.

HOLY SH**..that is amazing..you are seriously the best jate poem writer ahh this line....soo kate

Its not that I couldnt let you in.
Its the fact your an angel and I'm nothing but sin.

[Carolini]

wow, you're right...it's sooooooooooo powerful:eek: wow, I'm speechless...

[Lena Anne]

:D ^^^ Omg Guys... Thankyou so much.. Really it means so much.. ^^^.. seriously my smile is so super wide.. I love you guys!:D

Okay so I had some time so here are some poems..

First one is dedicated to Caroline!!.. Love ya hun!!

" I'm not missing you "

I'm not missing you
All the things we used to do

I'm not missing the guava seeds
I'm not missing the rain drop beads

Im not missing mango and salt
I'm not missing my heart coming to a hault

I'm not missing your jelous looks
I'm not missing you reading me like open books

I'm not missing you playing god while I play devil
I'm not missing worrying about you being brought
down to my level

I'm not missing sun drenched days
I'm not missing your ability to touch me in so many ways

I'm not missing my best friend
I'm not missing your promises of a happy end

I'm not missing the trivial things
I'm not missing you being there for all that life brings

I'm not missing our loving games of eye spy
But most importantly..

When I say I dont miss you..
I lie.

~ ~ ~

This ones for a wonderful Marta

" Someway Somehow "

I run you save its what we do
Please dont force me to admit that I'm in love with you

Dont make things harder, we are just not meant to be
I'm not going to ask you to wait for me

We were never meant to sink in the sand
Just forget about anything you might of planned

We are just opposite you and I
I refuse to fall further I will not look you in the eye

If I was a saint maybe we would have a chance
If I was a saint maybe we could have one last dance

Please dont come after me when I run away
I thought you understood when I told you I could never stay

That when you wiped away that tear it was the last
Our futures are seperate but I will hold onto our past

Our fireside talks
And long meaningful walks

Your anger and jealousy
Your happiness on seeing me

And even though I'm going far away
And even though I could never stay

If it makes you feel better, if it eases the pain I'll tell you now
Jack Shephard I fell in love with you someway somehow...

~ ~ ~

This one is for hollisterbabe and carolini who really made me smile

" Diamond In Brass "

Katie why couldnt you let me in?
Why did you tell me you were nothing but sin?

Katie why couldnt you love me back?
What happened between us that your affections I lack?

Katie why couldnt you walk instead of run?
When did you fall so far from the redemption of the sun?

Katie why couldnt you just believe?
That when I told you it was okay, that I wouldnt decieve?

Katie why couldnt you let me save you?
Let me sew on some wings and help you fly too?

Katie why couldnt you just smile?
Lie on the sand and just spend a while?

Katie why couldnt you just admit you were good?
Not suffer for your past mistakes like you think you should?

Katie I just want you to know as the time does pass
Even though you would never agree, you are my Diamond among Brass.

[Caroo]

aww thx hun! beautiful

[BlueDream]

OMG, I just discovered this therad!!! I can´t believe I wasn´t here sooner! Okay, this is just for this last page, I had to comment those before reading the remaining ones!

martusia

I won't forget

I think of your words
They're still in my ears
My mind secretly whispers them
I won't forget.

You know I really want
To tell you the same
Those faithfull words
I won't forget.

And when I run away
As I always do
Your voice telling me that
I won't forget

And I know you'll find me
You never give up
And this smile, this touch, these words
I won't forget

***

Beautiful! It´s soooo beautiful:tiphat: !


Caroo

As you go
I fall down
low

You used to pick me up
Make my world stop
Now your world is gone
And so many
is left undone
And i regret
all those things
i haven't said
My life began
the day we met...
and it has ended
now you're death


:bawl: :bawl: :bawl: Amazing!!! Remainds me of the song ˝One sweet day˝by Mariah Carey. You know, the part ˝Sorry I never told you, all I wanted to say...˝And that sone makes me cry:( ...And now your song makes me cry, too...Beautiful!:faint:


And, Lena:

When I say I dont miss you..
I lie.

So cute! I have to admit it, I was a little scared where you were going with this song...you know - her not missing guava seeds;) ...But the end was....so cute!:hug2:


And now that they are taking you away.
I want you to know until I see you..
Until I feel you..
I'll wait for you until that very day.


Awwwwww. I guess this was inspired by that promo, right? Amazing! Now when I see that promo, I will think of your lines...:cloud9:

" Someway Somehow "

I run you save its what we do
Please dont force me to admit that I'm in love with you

Dont make things harder, we are just not meant to be
I'm not going to ask you to wait for me

We were never meant to sink in the sand
Just forget about anything you might of planned

We are just opposite you and I
I refuse to fall further I will not look you in the eye

If I was a saint maybe we would have a chance
If I was a saint maybe we could have one last dance

Please dont come after me when I run away
I thought you understood when I told you I could never stay

That when you wiped away that tear it was the last
Our futures are seperate but I will hold onto our past

Our fireside talks
And long meaningful walks

Your anger and jealousy
Your happiness on seeing me

And even though I'm going far away
And even though I could never stay

If it makes you feel better, if it eases the pain I'll tell you now
Jack Shephard I fell in love with you someway somehow...

:thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: :thud: ............. Okay, you officially killed me...with jateness, of course! :faint:

P.S. And somehow, the part We were never meant to sink in the sand....although it´s kinda sad, my favorite one!:bawl:

[Caroo]

i dunno that song :) write more tonight... :)

[Lena Anne]

i will try to write more.. just writing a dyojs now though lol!!!

Thanks BlueD and Caroline LOVE YOU BOTH!

[Caroo]

When it's dark
Your arms are where i will be

The magic of your eyes
Is the only thing i'll see

You'll save me from my past
And finally, i'll be able to rest

To dream this beautiful night
You gave me back my pride...

[Lena Anne]

Ah gorgeous hunny, the first line gave me an idea!!

" Your arms. "

Sometimes the stars sparkle
But sometimes thats not enough

Some say I'm pretty when I cry
Some say I act too tough

But tonight the skies are a blackish grey
But tonight I wish the troubles away

And as I lay emotionally naked in my tent
I wonder how the rest of my life will be spent

I wonder how I can survive even the next day
I wonder if my legs have the ability to stay

Sometimes the stars sparkle
But sometimes thats all they do

Some say I suit broken
Some say I'm lost without you

But tonight the skies are a void trap
But tonight I think I might finally snap

And as I lay, wondering how I had ever come to be
Everything disappears.. Apart from your arms wrapped tightly around me

[Caroo]

You came to wash away
the dust and the pain
That covers my day

But i can't stay
To watch us fade awy

You're just an interuption to my past
And those moments we share
i know they wont last

I now have to say my goodbyes
Before i strangle you with all my lies
and before you'll convince me of the opposite
by one look in your beautiful eyes

I need you to know
that these moments we had I'll cherish
And your tender kisses, i'll miss
But now, it's time for me to go
Don't make this harder
saying it isn't so...

[martusia]

God, Lena, thank you so much for the poem, maybe I'll write for it a melody :*

so, I'm back from school with 5 brand new poems:

this one is for Lena, my sweetheart :) I know it's not as perfect as yours, but maybe you'll like it :)

up a tree

You know you shouldn't
You know you couldn't

You hadn't give me a choice
When I heared your voice

Teliing me that you fall for me
That you'll be waiting for me

You didn't give me a choice, you know
You want to hear, that I won't let you go

But I can't promise you this
I know, It's the biggest chance I miss

I love you and you know that
And forgive me please, I'm sorry, Jack


and this one is for Caroo :*

ability

I can barely hear
Your voice
Telling me
What I always wanted
To hear

No angst
No pain
No jealousy

I can perfectly see
Your smile
Giving me everything
Smile I always loved
To see

So gentle
So soft
So tender

I won't run away
I can't


and this one is for Carolini, BlueDream and Rebecca:

little difference

what's
the difference between
fate and coincidence?

I didn't believe in fate
Everything was for me a
Pure coincidence

Untill I met you
And you teach me
How to love

And i started
Believing in love
Believing in fate

*****

everytime

Everytime you go
I feel empty
I feel I'm not.

Everytime you go
There is no world
There is no me.

Everytime you're back
I can live
I can be.

*****

desperation

I was screaming
I don't care about him
You didn't want to hear

I was sobing
He is no one for me
You didn't want to hear

I was crying
I didn't kiss him back
You didn't want to hear

I whispered
I love you
You turn around to me

[Caroo]

Awww! Thx! It's beautiful! This one is for you!

You stumbled
over my words
It hurts

You cried
Because of me
It's killing me
Can't you see?

I don't want to be
the one that makes you crie
I don't want to be
The reason for your lie
I don't want to be
the one that runs away
For once,
There was someone
who made me wanna stay...
It was you
who came and saved my day...

[hollisterbabe]

OMGGG love the someway somehow awwww..I got a request Brown Eyed..can you make a poem off off this line.."I'm sorry I'm not as perfect as you..I'm sorry I'm not as good.."..Kate poem...love those!

[martusia]

Rebecca, may I make it also? :)
my 'moro I'll give it here :]

Lena, I will post 'moro also a lil' bit more about "someway somehow", cuz I'm loving it more and more :)

[hollisterbabe]

sure yayyy love the poems!

[Lena Anne]

Oooo I love requests... sure hun I'll try my best..

Marta You ARE ABSOLUTLY GORGEOUS sweets!! That poem was just fabulous.

So here are a few poems first for hollisterbabe.. I hope this is what you hoped for!!

" Divine Ruin "

I'm sorry I'm not as perfect as you
Dont fall under my horrific sorrow like most others do

I hate it when they call me a beautiful disaster
Because like everything else I'll just shatter like plaster

I'm sorry I was never as good
Dont tell me not to suffer because I know I should

I hate it when you tell me my ruin is divine
Because like everything else I'll wear away the shine

I'm sorry for the sin and sand in which we sink
Dont tell me its all okay because your the
only thing in which I can think

Jack why cant you get Your good and I'm bad
Now all I feel is an unbearable amount of sad

Like you brought me up just to watch me fall
Now I have to pretend that I never cared at all

The temptation is just to much to bare
This life with you Jack Shephard I just cannot share

So hate me please, make this less hard
Pass my by like just another broken glass shard

I'm sorry I'm not as perfect as you I'm sorry I'm not as good
But being your divine ruin.. Has made me love you more than I ever should..

~ ~ ~

This one is another for a just wonderful marta.. I hope you like this one.. Its actually one of the ones that took me on the longer side to come up with!!

" Precious Rose "

Petals a deep pink
Watch me as I think

Leaves emerald green
Sorrowful site to be seen

Dark Auburn dirt
Beautiful colliding hurt

Damp raindrops fall
You and me thats all

Tiny desires gathered in lots
In so many she loves me nots

Thorns a dark nothing
Thrive to me in spring

Stem guarded by sharp pain
My eyes on you in vain

The garden in which you shine
Is somewhere in the heart of mine

The hidden beauty no one knows
Katie you're my precious rose

~ ~ ~

Of course I couldnt write one and not dedicate it to Caroline!

" Once Was a Girl "

There once was a girl
She was my whole world

She was my whole world
You see

There once was a girl
She was my whole world

But her eyes glowing with sorrow
When she told me we couldnt be

There once was a girl
She was my whole world

She was my soul
My heart
My mind

There once was a girl
She was my whole world

How could this perfect angel
Ever be so unkind

There once was girl
She was my whole world

Until that night in the rain

There was once a girl
She was my whole world

Be that girl still..
Tell me I dont love you in vain

~ ~ ~

^ ^ Wow I had no idea what I was going to write then I wrote the first line and it came out so fast I finished it in like 20 seconds lol!! ^ ^

Next one is for the best jater in the universe Blue D Love ya hun!

" Salt and Guava "

You remind me of guava and salt
Locking my heart with yours like a vault

Throwing away that brass like key
Somewhere across the indigo sea

I watch you as the sand slips away
Its like time, and its inability to stay

But somewhere in the jungle of blues
I know you hide I love you too's

I know the heart ache that you keep
But take tiny steps, we dont have to leap

Remember I'll always wait
Remember its okay to be late

Remember guava and salt
My heart with yours.. An unbreakable vault

~ ~ ~

Now are just some random poems I came up with on an extremely long day at school and not a very happy homecoming..

" I Guess "

I guess its you and I
I guess its our question why

I guess its your look of grace
I guess its our hands intertwining like lace

I guess its what we do
I guess its me and you

I guess its winter and cold
I guess its heroic bold

I guess its running and fear
I guess its just you my dear

I guess its the water and sand
I guess its what we planned

I guess its loving you too
I guess thats just me and you

~ ~ ~

" Miss Wrong "

Black and white
Pretty and grey

Treachery and forgiveness
Run and stay

Empty and whole
Dark and light

Flawless and imperfect
Bravery and fright

Everything and nothing
Unruly and tamed

Strange and Extraodinary
Ignorant and famed

Level headed and lost
Painful past and sorrowfully long

Mr right Falling for miss wrong

~ ~ ~

^ ^ This poem in case you didnt get it.. lol each line compares Jack and Kate.. different parts of their personality.. The only reason I like it is coz of the last line lol ^ ^

[Caroo]

They're beautiful :love: Thx hun, here's one for you!

The rain washes clean my soul
makes me forget the lives i stole

I don't want this rain to end
Turning into the fear and blame i can't stand

Knowing the meaning of my life is pain
Knowing my life was in vane

Would you rain down on me
To show me the things i'm too blind to see?

______________________________________

Marta:



With your eyes open
You run to your demise
Strangling yourself
with your sweet little lies

With your eyes open
You are still to blind to see
That without you
This world means nothing to me

With my eyes closed
I can see how perfect you are
Lighting up my night
As a sparkeling star

With my eyes closed
I see the beauty in you
The only thing i wish for
Is that one day, you'll see it too...

[martusia]

God! Girls, I love ya! Lena. They' re just wonderful. Jack writing pomes, lol xD I love "Once was a Girl" - it sounds like ballad, and "I guess" and "Precious Rose" for most :*
Caroo... You know I adore your poems ;] I love this one for me - it's just so... precious, thank you :*

here is now one for Lena, cuz I wrote today only one (for now, but I'll continue writing today, of course ;)) - hope you'll understand it, cause my english probably, uh, sux ;)


You're not the one

You're not the one I supposed to fall for
You're not the one I could live for

I know you'll forgive me, as you always do
You'll forgive me I fell in love with you

I know I'm your dream, I know I'm your sun
But it scares me so, that I have to run

Even if I feel I fell for you I'm not able to love
Even if you convince me, there's God above

I still don't believe, I can't believe in faith
I don't believe there's something, that faith can change

Nothing really changes, just like as me
Understand, we are just not meant to be

I'm still a sinner, you're still a saint
And my fellings, that are still too faint

You're not the one I supposed to fall for
You're not the one I could live for

______
next soon ;)

[hollisterbabe]

squeeeeeeeeeeee i loved it sooo good..i love the Kate poems thos eare the best amazing!

[Caroo]

On a bed of leafs you're lying
Waiting for your dying

Your cold body's shaking
My bare heart aching

I never loved someone like you
No one has loved me like you do

I don't want to say goodbye
I don't want to stay and see you die

But i can't run away
I'm nailed to the floor

Locked in a room
without one door

When you'll stop breathing
My heart'll stop beating

I'll die along with you
Because i've never loved someone like you

[Lena Anne]

Marta and caroline I love you both!! That was so gorgeous!!!

I will write you some later!!

[BlueDream]

BEBeauty::Salt and Guava "

You remind me of guava and salt
Locking my heart with yours like a vault

Throwing away that brass like key
Somewhere across the indigo sea

I watch you as the sand slips away
Its like time, and its inability to stay

But somewhere in the jungle of blues
I know you hide I love you too's

I know the heart ache that you keep
But take tiny steps, we dont have to leap

Remember I'll always wait
Remember its okay to be late

Remember guava and salt
My heart with yours.. An unbreakable vault


Awwwww, :heart: I !I LOVE IT!!! Thanks...My first-dedicated poem...You´re so sweet...:hug2: :hug2: :hug2: Just what I needed now...:bawl:

[Lena Anne]

Aww thanks hun love ya!!!

This poem is the longest I have written.. It has a lot of meaning.. and is dedicated to all my girls.. BlueD especially seeing she knows what its about.. But this is for marta. for caroline. for Hollisterbabe. For all of you.

Just one that I felt I needed to write becuase of some jate spoilers.. Forgive the sadness

" I Realise "

I realise you are exquisitely extreme
I realise your secrets are flooding at the seam

We dont have to make sense
I wanted you to forget about past tense

Its so unbearably thrilling but oh so wrong
You proving to him that you're so strong

And my arms feel bare without your touch
I had no meaning of sorrow, now theres so much

She loves me, she loves me nots
Illusion my hours in heaving lots

Its breathing life without air
You have a heart, you're just not willing to share

Or at least thats what you said to me
But I get it, I saw plenty enough to make me see

And just so you know I didnt scream or cry
But I couldnt hide the inexpressible pain filled 'why'

Those words you screamed hit my soul
Now my feelings for you are as black as coal

Thats what I'll say when its my turn
But deep inside intense infatuation will always burn

Its like dragging tides washing over my legs
Its knowing you never listened to my heart filled begs

So here I am staring at you through invisible glass
Not even realising how much time may pass

I can see you sobbing insufferable cries
And somewhere inside a part of me dies

It was a choice I knew you had to make
I promise to hide my loss of life you unintentionally take

Katie, why couldn't you just look my way
Say you love me, make me stay

But I stay nevertheless
Trying to avoid the pain beating at my chest

Even though you cant see I can tell you know I'm here
Is it because you're looking at him, or cause of unmittigated fear

But none of it matters, because this time was the last
Let him deal with your misery, with your past

It was my love for you that drove me wild
Now I'm hiding from it like a helpless child

So finally now I turn around
Your sobs wracking out any other sound

But I realised when I watched you cross that illicit line
I realised that you were never mine

[BlueDream]

Awwww, Lena...It´s beautiful...:hug: :glomp: :hug2: P.S. Didn´t you say you´ll stay out of these threads?;) I guess it´s impossible, right?

[martusia]

oh sh.... :( it's so sad... but I love it.

here is one my, for you Lena, and for you Caroline :*

smile loving

I love
Because I can't do it in other way

I smile
Because I don't have a reason to be sad

You love
Because you said I'm perfect for you

You smile
Because you do it always, when you see me

I love when
You smile

I smile when
You love

and I'll make a new topic in which we'll be adding new parts in ballad 'bout Jack and Kate, is this a good idea? :)

[Lena Anne]

yeah thats a great idea!!!!

Haha I'm just stayin out of the spoiler thread. these are okay. they are full of faith!!

heres a little poem.. Just a light hearted addition to the painful jate realities so many of us are coming to face!!

" Little did you Know "

Little did you know
I love you so

Little did you know
I watch you from afar

Little did you know
Beautiful is what you are

Little did you know
Love sick is how I feel

Little did you know
In black and white your colour is real

Little did you know
I dream of your lips on mine

Little did you know
I would give anything to tangle
my hands through your curls like a vine

Little did you know
What was coming that day

Little did you know
The words ' I love you ' I really did say

[martusia]

Love Ya :* that's great... I'll write poems on next lessons, cuz I've got now informatics :)

[martusia]

We can make a Jate ballad!

You add next parts with rhymes ABCB with same rhytm.
Please copy the previous parts in your post :)

Here is the beginning :)

She was a sinner
And he was a saint
They crashed on an island
With very no faith

:)
good luck! xD

[Lena Anne]

Oh yay Me first to post!! This is awesome marta! xxx

I could easily write this whole thing cause you gave an amazing beginning.. And I would just write and write lol but thats not fair!

She was a sinner
And he was a saint
They crashed on an island
With very no faith

Its all he had hoped for
Its all she had dreamed
But such freedom, such individuality
Is not what it seemed

[Lena Anne]

I didnt know whether this was a poem.. Or drabble. Or just general Jate deprivation.. Bare with me.. Lol

" Something. Everything "

There's a difference.
An unexplainable diversity between some and every.

Some is like watching tides, shift and drag.
Every is like sand falling like time, soft and irreplaceable.

No its more then a simple difference.
Although the beauty of it is the simplicity.

Some is the monumental brilliancy.
Every is the exquisite subtly in accepting it.

Some is trying to live life to its thriving potential.
Every is living it, holding it dear, loving it unconditionally.

The difference, although deciphering it may be impossible,
Adoring it is uncomplicated, is oddly sophisticated.

Some is trying not to forget precious moments.
Every is taking a walk down memory lane.

Some is finding a reason for the unsolvable problem.
Every is having it, isn't afraid of the unsolvable option.

Dissimilarity, its the key to solving such and equation.
Its losing yourself in the originality of an imperfect solution.

Some. Indication of an unspecified or unknown quantity.
Every. Indication of something extraordinary without exception

You cant help but be intrigued, you cant help but love it,
Despite the fact it could be a deception.

Because when comparing Something and Everything..

Its thinking that something spectacular is there.
But its knowing that she's the one person that trully is everything.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Oh god I read back over that and I'm like.. what the heck is it.. I think .. wait I know I was focussing on Jack's inward battle of feeling something for kate.. or feeling that she is everything..

[Jate815]

:thud: OMG Lena, you write so bloody well for your age
you should keep all of these saved so one day you can look back on them and be like awwwwwwwwwwwww Jate was adorable then too :giggle:

[martusia]

god... Lena, your great :) I'll write somethin' later :]

[Caroo]

These were all great!


I see you as a miracle
You think of yourself as a sin

I see the sparkles in your eyes
But you only see your lies

You're a sinner
But you're my saint

You're torned between the lies and blame
I still think of you the same

You're beautiful, Inside out
Sometimes you whiseper,
or you scream and shout

You always try to run...
Except when your sinking
along with the evening sun

You are everything a person can be
You are everything to me

[hollisterbabe]

awww that long one..ahhh..poor jack..i loved it

[martusia]

for you, Lena :*

"it's all about sunset"

there is day and there is night
night is black and day is white

I know that you're my sun
You think that you're no one

You are just everything to me
Am I the one you've always seek?

And there is the one thing can connect
To see, that for us we are perfect

One thing connect the day and night
One thing connect the black and white

And it's all about sunset
And it's all about sunset

[Caroo]

I can't sleep tonight
Not even with you by my side

I need to run away
Even though you're begging me to stay

Maybe i do am sleeping
And all this is a dream

I'd hope i'd never be waking
Then at least i could stay

I'd lay forever by your side
If only this wasn't a sleepless night...

[Lena Anne]

" Retracting a Statement "

It was a statement I didnt expect a reply..
Yet here I am wondering why..

' I'm not ' God those words make me tremble..
Feeling relief isnt even close.. doesnt even resemble..

When I looked up, it wasnt out of surprise..
I needed the truth not from your mouth, from your eyes..

But the fire burned blocking my view..
Since when was it like this? Just me and you?

But know it hits me, the mistake I just made..
Can I sleep in the bed that I just laid?

And as I was trying to figure out what to say..
Someone else came and took your attention away..

I wanted to tell you I've got your back..
I wanted to say that statement I officially retract.

~ ~ ~ ~

This one I love just cause I've never focussed on poems like this and I dedicate it to marta!

If I could have you..

I'd fall from every net
I'd let you win every bet

I'd tell you about my past
I'd let this perfect world last

I wouldnt worry about tomorrow
I wouldnt let my day be ruled by sorrow

I'd let you capture my every tear
I'd try and ease every fear

I'd take back ever wrong word said
I'd move from the beach to an ugly cave bed

I'd tell you I made the wrong choice
I'd tell you I was listening to the wrong voice

I'd tell you the words I said werent out of love
I'd swear it two you in front of heaven above

I'd tell you you're it, it was never him and me
I'd tell you, you never belonged in just a memory

I'd play poker with you every day
I'd swear to you that when the time comes.. I'll stay

I'd plant guavas in your heart
I'd promise we would never part

I'd let you carry the dynamite
I'd let go of all the spite

I'd explain why I am so broken
I'd repeat the I'm sorry that was spoken

I'd remind you of your eyes when we first met
I'd say you were the closest to heaven I was gonna get

I'd make a promise to never lie
I'd continue sinking, playing eye spy

I'd fall further into you arms
I'd tell you how much you affect me with your charms

I'd make sure you'd have something to remember me
If fate decided we arent meant to be

I'd promise to answer that one question you asked
I'd say yes because its with you I want time to pass

So marry me
Lets try and see

Lets take a chance
Lets have this dance

Lets spin in the rain
Lets not love in vain

Lets crash and collide
These vows we can abide

So give this a try
Dont leave me wondering why

Just forgive and forget
Memories we should try and let

I'd make every second perfect as can be
I'd make each kiss make you see

I'd be saved just because you said I was right
I wouldnt have to pretend as if you made me see light

So even though I could never tell you this
Even though I wouldnt hear the heavenly I love you too
This is my dream.. If I could just have you.

[BlueDream]

" Retracting a Statement "

It was a statement I didnt expect a reply..
Yet here I am wondering why..

' I'm not ' God those words make me tremble..
Feeling relief isnt even close.. doesnt even resemble..

When I looked up, it wasnt out of surprise..
I needed the truth not from your mouth, from your eyes..

But the fire burned blocking my view..
Since when was it like this? Just me and you?

But know it hits me, the mistake I just made..
Can I sleep in the bed that I just laid?

And as I was trying to figure out what to say..
Someone else came and took your attention away..

I wanted to tell you I've got your back..
I wanted to say that statement I officially retract.

~ ~ ~ ~


OMG, Lena...:thud: :thud: :thud: I don´t know what to say! This poem is soooo cute...and it totally reflects the ˝I´m not˝ scene....Reading it, I just pictured the faces of Jate in that scene:cloud9: ...beautiful...

P.S. I just came back from college and feel ultra positive now:w00t: ...I know you said you won´t go to the spoiler thread anymore, but I´ll say you just this: things are not so bad as they were yesterday! Nothing mayor, but small thingies that might be leading to our way...

[Lena Anne]

Aw thanks hun ...

AND OMG THANKYOU SO MUCH FOR THAT (spoiler) !!!! I just finished a super long chapter for my fic.. So now I'm all for dyojs and poems..

Love you so much for that girl!
You rock!
xxx

[Caroo]

You're the sun
lighting my face

You're aside me
walking my ways

You're a wall
Keeping me from running

You're a place i can go
for hiding

But i don't want to hide anymore
And i don't want run

Because, now i know
you'll always be my sun

[Lena Anne]

Aw caroline that was so cute i loved it!!

" Every day "

Every day in every way
Every single moment we had

Every single memory
Every thing I cherish good or bad

Every day in every way
Every time I lose hope

Every thing that we go through
Every reason you help me cope

Every day in every way
Every time I walk closer to death

Every time you look in my eyes
Every time my name is on your breath

Every day in every way I'll tell you what I'll do
Every day in every way I'll say I love you

[martusia]

"If I could tell you" is just... wonderful... just... words are unnecessary..
and for "Every day" I think I'll make a melody ;)

and here is the poem to you the one and the best Lena :*

Maybe

Maybe your eyes are too beautiful
And maybe my heart is too hopeful

Maybe I sunk in this green
Is it a crime or maybe a sin?

We met, when there was no past
No complexes, no cons, no lies

You've just put a spell on me
You left the taste on my lips

I thought you had nothing to run away from
No fear, no pain - feelings had gone

I didn't expect you'd love me too
I knew it wasn't like a love story book

I know you don't know who to choose
You can't hurt anyone - some of us have to loose

I love you, I miss you, you will see
But I'm not sure if we are meant to be

I lost my fath, I lost my hope
You are the one, that made me broke

I want to whisper I love you, I do
I know that believing to hear it from you is fool

Maybe your eyes were too beautiful
And maybe my heart was too hopeful

[Caroo]

Love is what i see
When your eyes
put a spell on me

But you and me
we're different
It's in every single way
we went

I'm no good
But i know i could

I know i could be
What you want to see

Are it just dreams
Where nothing is
what it seems

Could this all be
nothing
Nothing but a fling?

I know i'm not perfection
And i know i never will

But maybe, if you open your eyes
You won't be to blind to see
That someway, somehow
You're also falling in love with me

[Lena Anne]

:eek: :eek: :shock: :shock: Marta seriously.. seriously.. I actually said Wow when reading that .. Let me repeat.. WOW :shock: :shock: :shock: :eek: :eek:

Caroline that was so cute I loved it.

first one for you caroline then wonderful marta!

" Sit and Stare "

I looked to the sand to find you not there
Where you used to sink, where you used to stare

I prayed for a clarity only you possess
And still, even though your gone I love you no less

But I was falling for something that was never there
And instead of loving you all I did was stare

I wished for a heart that only you possess
And I refuse to realise that you love me less

And even though you were broken I was there
I'm standing where you belong, trying to find the
perfection at which you used to stare

I wanted you to be the one thing I possess
Because with you its flawless and nothing less

And its like what we had was always there
In that one first and last beautiful stare

And if thats all that I'm allowed to possess
I'll let you live life.. Loving you no less

I'll take your place in the sand, find me there..
So we can both, together, just sit and stare..

~ ~ ~

For wonderful Marta.. This is a two part poem.. Where there are two different sets too it lol first is kind of depressing second is happy!

" Broken "

I was bleeding to feel alive
I was dying to understand broken

I was numb begging for pain
I was desperate screaming your name

I was there losing faith
I was nothing grieving for space

I was sin pleading to be found
I was running from bitter betrayal

I was colliding with what was lost
I was crashing with what was left

I was grasping my open heart
I was holding scarred memories

I was trying to understand broken
I was trying to understand you

" Breathing "

I can feel you breathing even though your gone
I can feel heaven with you, its the closest I will ever get

I can feel emotion with your image in my mind
I can feel forgiveness better then any kind

I can feel gain instead of loss
I can feel myself falling into the sky

I can feel every tear fading with your image
I can feel that last kiss just wasnt enough

I can feel your eyes always on me
I can feel you breathing syncronised with mine

I can feel colour not black and white
I can feel life like never before

I can feel dreams becoming reality
I can feel the movie scenes playing out in site

I can feel what was gone in me return in glory
I can feel no longer the need to say sorry

I can feel you breathing and thats all I need
I can feel you breathing
I can feel you breathing
Always.

[*~Poosk~*]

OMG I can't believe I just discovered this thread! :shock: Awesome poems guys!! They're all so beautiful! :love:

[Lena Anne]

hey guys,

Just posted my new WIP fic in WIP .. Falling For Kate and for some reason I'm nervous as hell about it!!!!! :shock: :shock:

So I just came here to drown myself in some good old poetry and try not to think about my story!

A poem for Marta and Caroline!

" And if the World Saw Me "

If the world saw me
For who I really am

They'd say I'm as broken as glass
Not gentle as a lamb

If the world saw me
They would say 'Oh my'

Because I'm so shattered
If only they saw past my emerald eyes

If the world saw me
They would lock me away

Because having someone like me around
Would make people scared to stay

But then you say if the world really saw me
They'd beg for my face

Because if the world saw me
My smile they could never erase

But I know if the world saw me
Things would go wrong

If the world saw me
I'd be sobbing and listening to that old sad song

But you wont let it go saying if the world saw me
For who I really am

They would see the woman you love
That my father really was sam

You say that if they saw me
for the brilliance of me eyes

If they saw me like that
There wouldnt be one thing to despise

But I see the tears on your face and ask why you cry
And you say the world wont see me, becuase you would rather die

If the world really saw me now
They would smile and know how

You made me stay
Told me it was meant to be this way

I say I wish
You say you know

So if the world saw me
They could see I love you so

[martusia]

Lena, I just love your poems... They are... WOW :)
and I'm happy, you like mine, my angel :*
I'll write some poems today and upload it for 10 hours from now :)

[Lena Anne]

aw marta your just wonderful!! I'll write some more poems soon! Love you lots girl your gorgeous! xxx

[Caroo]

It's just you and me
We could never be
What the world
wants to see

You and I
We're based on a lie
Then why this is happening
Why

Why, for you i am falling
While my world is collapsing

And now i am sinking
Not in the sand
But in your eyes
Because they let vanish
my sweet little lies

[Lena Anne]

Wow... hun I love your line 'sweet little lies' its just it gives kate such an innocence!

I figured I write poems.. Never gave a REAL shot at writing a song.. SO HERES MY SECOND SONG EVER WRITTEN!

Based on a poem I wrote for Hollisterbabe..aka. rebecca!

" Divine Ruin "

I dont want the world to see me
I never wanted us to be

I never knew what love was
I was nothing but a lost cause

I'm broken
And I'm never gonna understand
I'm broken.. oh
Full of sin
But somewhere deep inside
I'm still your divine ruin
Yeah just your divine ruin

Its always times like these
Where my mind is begging for ease

When your touch is my hatred of everything good
When Its the feelings I have more then I should

So let me waste this only chance
Lets waste time while yours and my eyes dance..

I'm broken
Something unfixable by your hands
Yeah I'm just broken.. Oh
Full of sin
But somewhere deep inside
I'll always be your divine ruin
Yeah, divine ruin

And I dont want the world to see me
Cause they could never know who I am

Its divine ruin
Its lost love
Its divine ruin
Its reason on wings of a dove
Its divine ruin
Its me
Its divine ruin
Always yours you see

And even though this feeling wont last
Look beyond my unforgettable past

Fall for my ruin like I want you too
Just save me with an I love you

Becuase I'm broken
And even though I'm never gonna understand
Yeah broken..
Broken..
But somewhere deep inside
Past all the sin..
You have to admit.. There's somthing divine
Exquisitely divine about my ruin.

Ruin..
Ruin..
Oh. Oh. Divine Ruin.

[Caroo]

Beautiful :love:

Black and white
the colors my world
is painted in

Right and wrong
The definition
Of your miracle
and my sin

But in the collision of our souls
And when our bodies intertwine
I make you mine

My pain doesn't hurt
And instead of running
i finally can stay
I notice you painted my world
a little bit more grey

[Lena Anne]

WOW!

Lol another extremely jexy poem.. just coz its the reason I'm in this thread in the first place cause gorgeous caroline has a fantastic jex imagination!! lol love ya girl!

" Love to me "

I want your affection
Make me your selection

Kiss me hard and fast
Make this feeling last

Up against a wall
In a net

Your body against mine
Watch our legs intertwine

Dont make me hold on
I'm scared when I wake you'll be gone

I want you adoration
Watch the rain and its saturation

Bathing us with its plea
Kate.. Make love to me

[martusia]

Lena, i'm just making a melody for "Divine ruin" ;]
I love "Love to me" :D

[Caroo]

I tremble
you touch my bare skin
Oh, baby this isn't a sin

Make love to me
Your arms is
where i want to be

As our bodies collide
Into this night

Our hearts intertwine
Baby, this is do divine

I taste your lips
As you taste mine

Our bodies tangled up
Don't ever make this stop

We're lying here
Skin to skin
And i know for sure
We're not a sin...

[LovebirdsJATE]

Put your guava seeds in
Take your guava seeds out
Put your guava seeds in and plant them all about
Do the Jater dance as you move it all about
Thats what Jates all about yeah!

Put your black thread in
Take your black thread out
Put your blacjk thread in and sew it all about
Do the Jater dance as you move it all about
Thats what Jates all about yeah!

Put your net in
Take your net out
Put your net in and caught in it all about
Do the Jater dance as you move it all about
Thats what Jates all about yeah!

Put your toy plane in
Take your toy plane out
Put your toy plane in and fly it all about
Do the Jater dance as you move it all about
Thats what Jates all about yeah!

Put your your whole self in
Take your whole self out
Put your your self in and jex it all about
Do the Jater dance as you move it all about
Thats what Jates all about yeah!

And for those of you are really mad at sawyer sing this while bouncing a basket it ball it really does help. (or sing it about anyone for that matter...:shifty:, no skate bashing is intended.)

Put Sawyers head in
Take Sawyers head out
Put Sawyer head in and bounce it all about
Do the Jater dance as you move it all about
Thats what Jates all about yeah!

Hope this brought a Jater smile to your face!

[VetteAMJ]

:rotflol: Cute!!

[Lena Anne]

OMG Caroline Your a freaking... Wow.. no words

YAY Love ya marta..

this ones for both of you.. A sad Jack realisation..

" The one that Got away "

She was the one that got away
Said she couldnt stay

Woke up from my trance
When she parted from that dance

Because she said I can do better
I forgot how many times I cried over that letter

Before she left I wish she knew how I feel
I wish she knew to me.. It was all real

I wish she knew that she makes me weak
Makes me lose the ability to speak

But when I woke in the morning glow
I realised I would miss her so

I never understood why she had to leave
I never understood how she could decieve

She said if she could she would
She said if she was good she should

But I'll never forget the feeling of waking up to her not there
And I realised that bed I will no longer be able to share

She was the only one to make me feel that way
She was the one that got away

[Carolini]

lol...that's funny! I'll try and learn it by heart...

[LovebirdsJATE]

lol, I'm working on a new one right now...:shifty: I'll post if after another post.

[Alevermor]

I wrote this in my four hour long math class while I was tuning out my teacher...lol It's not great, but I thought I'd share :)

Your nice to look at
and we always get to chat

You make me smile
That itself is no denial

You gave me a flattering nickname
"I Never" was the name of the game

I admitted my feelings for you
Secretly of course, 'cause that's what I do

You always give me the time of day
you seem perfect for me in every way

The one thing that's holding me back?
Well,
You're just not Jack.

:)

[Lena Anne]

OMG I loved that ^^ Your just not jack... so true ^^

Another song for My wonderful Marta.. xxx This is probably my favourite that I have written.. I think its more suited to Jack's character towards Kate.. But anyways For you Marta My wonderful!

" Holding You "

Holding you is so much easier in dreams
Yeah
Cause things are so much more then what they seem
Oh
I'll just hold you while you sleep
Baby your secrets I promise to keep
Just holdin' you in my dreams
dreams
Ooo..

Baby its always been hard
Baby its always gonna hurt

Baby its always been like this
Since the first and last kiss

But I'll always remember
My dreamss...

Cause holding you is so much easier in my dreams
Makes things more then what it seems
Yeah..
I'll just hold you while you sleep
Baby watch us take that leap
Oh..
Just holdin' you in my dreams..
Holdin' you is what it seems
Ooo...

Baby theres always gonna be tears
Baby theres always gonna be fears

But baby if we had that chance
I'd give you that promised dance
.. In our dreams.. Yeah dreams

But I'll always.. Always.. Remember..
My dreamss..

Holding you in my dreams
Makes everything what I want it to seem
Yeah..
And as the world will pass us by..
I'll wipe away every tear you cry.
Ohh..
Just hold our secrets close
Dreaming about holdin' you the most

I'll just hold you while you sleep
I'll just hold you while you dream

Because holding you is so much easier..
So much easier
Yeah just so much easier

In my dreams..
oh..
In our dreams..

[Caroo]

OMG... Amazing...

Please don't go...
Stay
To let me know
You care

Please don't leave me
Cuz you're the first
and last what i want to see

Please, just stay
Without you
I'll fade away

I wouldn't be able to be
living the life you want for me

Living without you
Cuz you thought that's best

But Baby, without you
I won't last

Just stay,
Please one more night
To lay here by my side

Letting me breathe
One more day
Before you go away...

Couldn't you just stay
Because with every step you take
I"ll just... Fade away...
My world vanishing
into a shade of grey

[Lena Anne]

OMG CAROLINE.... Freaking hell about to pass out and die..

This poem I have spent quite a while working on.. Its my entire outlook on Jate and I'm quite nervous posting it cause im scared that people wont like it.. :o

Just in case you get confused..

when heart is obviously jack
spades is sawyer and her wanting to run and all the other obsticles...

I have decided to dedicate this to BlueD, Caroline and Marta.. The three jaters I hope like this the most.. ! :o

" Serenade "

Theres a song inside of my soul
It sings to me, trying to make me whole

Theres a song I cannot ignore
Sings to me making my heart soar

Begging me with its sweet serenade
Plead with me hearts or spades

The song I try to write but my words are cold
Precious words that lay untold

But I pray for its melody in my mind
Sings to me of the destiny, one of a kind

Imploring me with its glorious serenade
Pleading with me over light and shade

Theres a song past the galaxy of stars
Sings to me, tears burning past these
simple iron bars

Deep inside me theres a song
Singing to me over and over for so long

Waiting for your voice to take its symphony
Waiting for you to sing it to me

Theres a song awaking the infinite bold
It sings to me of times new and old

Begging me with its Incomparable serenade
Plead with me heart or spade

Sing to me of the dreams that you create
Sing to me of morning and late

Sing to me and make me see
Sing to me the serenade of you and me..

[Caroo]

OMG! It's beautiful!! :love: I sooooo adore it! :love: I even saved it on word :)

Would you lay here
Close to me
Look into my eyes
because it's them
i want to see

Would you just
Run with me
Because it's with you
I want to be

Would you stay here with me
Mend the pieces
in wich people broke me
Let vannish my lies
Wich i don't want to see
Would you just lay here?
Lay here with me?

[Lena Anne]

aww thankyou!!!

" Pretty Tears "

You and your pretty tears
You and your beautiful fears

You and your wonderful sorrow
You and your never tomorrow

You and your fabulous cries
You and your truthful lies

You and your adoring death
You and your cursing breath

You and your terrible soul
Dammit Kate! You make me whole!

[Caroo]

Aww!! Beautiful :love:

As i watch the sun rise
I think of you

As i listen to your lies
I still love you

To me
you're perfect
Just what the world should be

To you
You're nothing
Nothing but a sin
That isn't true

I'll watch the sun rise
And think of you

As long as it takes
To get yourself through

To come back to me
And i'll make you see

That without you
I am nothing
Nothing but a sin
it's true...

[martusia]

Lena, you're amazing :love: nothing more to add, I think :) Caroo, you too :love:

for you, Lena, one :) you're awesome ^^ :D kinda funny:
"Nothing really changed"

Nothing really changed
Since I woke up this morning
And I found there is no you
With me

Nothing really changed
Since yesterday we talk together
Trying to remember what was
And won't be

Nothing really changed
Since We kissed last night
With all our feelings
With our love.

Nothing really changed
With my feelings
And with yours.

You've just gone to make
a breakfast.

//e: "pretty tears" aww :love: umm. I'm gonna write some Jangsty song with "Nothing really changed" cuz I don't want it to be funny ;p

[Lena Anne]

haha marta that was so sweet!! in a jangst funny way.. So good caroline!!!

Heres another for you gorgeous marta!

" Everything Changed "

Everything changed with you
Everything about me changed too

Everything stoped making sense
Everything past and present tense

Everything from the colour of the sky
Everything to the way I see your eyes

Everything from the way I feel skin
Everything to my capability to let you in

Everything changed with you
Everything that makes me love you too

[Lena Anne]

This is a double post BECAUSE! simply because I'm so sick of skate.

" not make sense "

Right now nothing seems right
Its like they are doing it out of spite

Its like they dont care
Its like life they cant share

And right now I dont want things to work out
Right now I just want to scream and shout

Simply becuase my past says it all
Simply because what I do is no longer my call

If I could I would
But I cant even though I should

Becuase you make no sense at all
Because I'm no longer the cinderella at the ball

[Caroo]

My blood runs through my vains
Pounding in my head
Are those words you said

But, please
You and i we're not in vane
I know you feel in pain

But Kate
together we can make it trough
If only, you let me admit my love for you

______________________________________

As our souls collide
And our bodies unite

Your kisses linger
On my lips

Your taste
'll never go to waste

I needed to feel you
And i admit
I'm addicted
I'm so addicted to you
To the things you do
The words you say
I don't want to run
I think i'll just stay...

[Lena Anne]

Aww cute!!

" Let me love you "

Let me love you
Let me kiss you back

Let me hold you
Let me be the one to

Save you from the things
He did and said

Let me love you
Let me be the one

Let me fix that emptiness
Hold you tight in bed

Let me love you
Let me see to your heart

Let me listen
Let me give you a fresh start

Let me love you
Let yourself love me

[Caroo]

What if you stay
Just this once
Just too lay
Lay her with me
Because you know
My arms is where you want to be
My eyes is what you want to see
Let our souls collide
And let us reunite
Don't stop what could happen
This beautiful night
I know you can feel it too
I know you want me too
You're just scared
Just like me
We're both damaged
But together we'll heal
You"ll see, you'll see

[Lena Anne]

WOW AMAZING!!!

I'll post more after dinner!!!

[Caroo]

Have a nice dinner

I didn't knew...
I didn't knew what it was
to love, to live...

I couldn't see
I couldn't see the love
The love you put in me

But i'm not blind anymore
And my world isn't grey
By loving me
You colored my day...

[martusia]

girls... you're amazing :)

For you, Lena, and for you Caroo :*

"I do"

I love you, I really do
Nothing more I have to tell you

None of my lies you have to hear
Cause I just need you to be near

I know you hate me, you really do
I gave you just too much false clues

I can't live with my sweet little lies
None of them are now, but they were in past

I know I had a chance, I really did
I didn't realise you're the one I need

I love you, I really do
Not him, but you

[Lena Anne]

aww marta that was just wonderful you are amazing!!

So cute caroline

For Marta..

" I hate you "

I hate you
I always have
Always will

You never feel
You never love
You treat me like I'm
worth less then
$100 bill

I hate you
And you stupid ways
I hate you
Everything you say

You never cared
You never could
You never understood
what you should

So I just want to say
I hate you like you hate me
I know you hate me too
But with me its different
With me its because I love you

[Caroo]

Sooo beautiful!

For you both:

My knees are weak
My mouth can't speak

I've lost control
I've lost my soul

I can't go on without you
Something unable for me to do

Don't say you love me
It'll only make it harder to be

Seperated from you
Oh i love you too

In the darkest of the night
I whisper my goodbyes

Silent as snow
I say i have to go

[Lena Anne]

Oh god quiet as snow ** tear **

For both of you.. This is one of the favourites I've written so far..

" Erratic Rain "

Its inconsistent
Erratic rain

Temporary erases
All the pain

Cool salvation
Steady unsure

Its bitter perfect
continual pour

Pure saturation
Pulsating the ground

laying in bed without you
Theres no other sound

Utter sorrow
Incomplete time

Shining droplets
Covering loving crime

Breathing refuge
By opening the sky

Without your breathing
Erratic rain is the perfect lullaby

[Caroo]

Awww!!! beautiful!

Your innocent tears
Your covered fears

Hiding deep inside
Until they collide

Tears stream down your cheek
Playing hide and seek

Just like your feelings
Deep down there, inside

Let me discover them
And let me be there to
wipe your tears
Fight your fears
Into this night...
Into our night

[Lena Anne]

I love that so much.. that was so gorgeous.. hide and seek hmm another idea just sprung into my head!!!!

" Hide and Seek "

Your scared
So lets play hide and seek

Your afraid
But we dont have to speak

Your crying
But for now cry alone

Your lost
Cold to the bone

Your sad
But come to me when you ready

Your nervous
We can take it slow and steady

Your elated
Because I look past your face

Your gone
But your image I can never erase

Your here
You dont have to beg for a chance

You look away
But it doesnt matter, I'm already in a trance

And I know you have trouble sharing
But we dont have to speak

I know you must be scared
But until you can come out.. Lets play hide and seek

[Caroo]

Don't say a word
It'll only hurt

But don't go away
I'm begging you to stay

Let our pain
be left unspoken

Let our love
Be the only thing said

But just don't say a word
Because what's left unspoken
Can't ever hurt

[Lena Anne]

When I lie here in your arms
I have a sign on me.. Do no harm

When I kiss you on the cheek
I have a sign on me.. Fragile and weak

When peace escapes us on a bird
I have a sign on me.. Do not disturb

When I lose you
I have a sign on me.. Not true

When I you say you'll stay
I have a sign on me.. Go away

But when I'm with you..
I dont need a sign.. I can say I love you

[martusia]

kinda wonderful, Lena and you, Caroo, too :* :love: