+*+*- !The Skate Poetry Thread! - *+*+

[Sexy_pineapple]

Ok so we have Vids, fics, art, etc. But we have no passionate skate poetry? This is why i came up with this thread! Its dedacated to poems made by you to show your love for skate or just a poem about the skate relationship (and possbile your hate for jate)! Soooo get typing! I'll start with mine:

boring day on crap-hole island,
or so it would seem,
Then Charlie out- of- nowhere
started to scream....

A crowd gathered round,
wondering what was wrong,
But Charile was happy
and humming and song

Whats going on charlie?
Jack stupidly said,
Charlie Just smiled,
and went all red..

Its Happened! after all
Its all just so great
i saw two people kissing
it was sawyer and kate!

All but jack was happy,
he said forget my health!
and went to the sea
where he drowned himself! :):)

They all celebrated!
and forgot about jack!
after three they shouted:
HA! JATE IS KACK!!!!!!


crap poem lol! :):):):)

[Sawyer&Me]

LOL - that's really cute. I'm not good at this stuff so I'll refrain from torturing you folks with my bad poetry.

[SKaN0n56]

hey, nice idea!quick question though, what if u already posted ur skate poems? do u post it again here?:confused:

[BlueEyesAtNight]

im just gonna paste some of my cheers on here :D

might as well use what's already been written, n'est-ce pas?

here they are:

Skate! SKate! It's better then good it's great!
Skate! Skate! When your this hot, who needs fate?
Skate! Skate! We knew it when she cried!
About how she didn't say goodbye!
That we could Split our V's and Dot Our I's
AND ROCK OUR "CTORY"s


and.... my favorite:

She will, she will,
Knock him down,
Mess him up,
But like a volcano,
They'll erupt,
When it's down
We will say,
The Skaters knew it everyday!

She might, She might,
Kiss Jack soon,
Kiss Jack hard,
But like a limp noodle
They'll fall down,
'Cause when Sawyer comes back,
She will say,
"I'll stay with my man NIGHT AND DAY"

She will, She will,
Nurse him back,
Make him better,
That way they can be together,
And Jack and Ana will see that
And maybe have a heart attack.

SKate will, SKate will,
Be here soon,
Stay here long,
'Cause with SKate you can't go wrong!
But what to do with Jack and Ana?
Baby, that's why god created JANA!


and lastly...

Skate is what we want to see,
And if you don't want to agree,
Let me make my point real clear,
You probably shouldn't be in here.

Cause here we like to talk about,
That fateful day when SKate made out,
And who didn't feel the burn?
Of booze every "I Never" turn?

And what about the bunny book,
That afforded Kate a look,
At something most would kill to have,
Sawyer's face, his butt and naked..."abs"

We knew who she wanted to throttle,
When she went frantically for the bottle,
And wished that she had said good-bye,
To the one who never made her cry.

You may like your Jater Shower Scene,
But if you think we're turning green,
Know that everytime you mention "fate"
We say, yeah that's good, but chemistry is GREAT.

[Stace]

OMG I love those! You guys are awesome. :flowers: I'm can't do poetry to save my life.

[Toxic]

:rotflol:

I was gonna make a poem thread to add real poems that remind you of Skate, but this is cute too.

Once I get some creative juices, I'll add.

[AModernMyth]

Okay, I don't have a poem yet, but once I post one, it's actually going be like all serious and emotional and stuff, because I'm kind of a poetry addict. :D

[Capel]

Okay i got one, its not that good but at least it rymes, its kate's thoughts on Sawyer, post torture scene.

Complicated
you make things so complicated,
I don't understand why you always
want to be hated. I try to help but you push me away,
even though you so insensitive, your always here to stay.

Its not my best work but give me time and i can come up with a better one.

[AModernMyth]

Searching

I've been searching for you,
trying to figure you out
for a while now.

You're always putting on fake smiles
trying to convince everyone that you're the person
that you appear to be.

But I keep searching deeper,
trying to find the real you
that you keep hidden behind a mask for no one else to see.

I may not know you
like I wish I did,
but I know you so much better than anyone else here.

So can't you please just show me
who it is you really are?
All I want to do is get to know you.
____________________________

I literally just wrote this as I typed the post, so I'm sure its crappy, but whatever.

[BlueEyesAtNight]

Searching

I've been searching for you,
trying to figure you out
for a while now.

You're always putting on fake smiles
trying to convince everyone that you're the person
that you appear to be.

But I keep searching deeper,
trying to find the real you
that you keep hidden behind a mask for no one else to see.

I may not know you
like I wish I did,
but I know you so much better than anyone else here.

So can't you please just show me
who it is you really are?
All I want to do is get to know you.
____________________________

I literally just wrote this as I typed the post, so I'm sure its crappy, but whatever.


i like it just fine :D

[*Roxy*]

Nice poem Laura... I like it! :) The others are great too guys, I'm also a poetry addict, so give me some time and you'll see one from me too. ;)

[LadyDelish]

"Outlaws"

Child of the darkness,
Come, arise!
Forget all this madness and the hearts you broke in a night
The sleeping with women
The drinking with thieves
Living a life you were never meant to lead
With hoplessness and anger boiling inside
Taking you further on a suicidal ride
Is it too late for help?
Have you gone out with the tide?
But 'though you try to ignore it
There's another nearby...

A girl on the run with a memory of love and a time in the sun
Trying to forget the people she has hurt
Trying to bury the memories deep in the dirt
Wanting to start here new life yet not knowing how
Not asking for help because she is too proud
Dying inside a little more each day
She watches him because she knows he's the same...

Longing for love yet guarding your hearts
You play at hating each other 'though it was love from the start
A dark bloody past: This links you together
You're bound by it eternally, hopelessly, forever.



Let me know what you think!:) This is my first Skate poem.

[Niniel]

^Thats was really great, Sawyer'sSunshine!:)

[SawyerKateFan]

Here is a poem that I found..since I cant write a poem of my own to save my life

Soulmate
by Jayzee

I wade through a life
with no meaning,

with no desire
or aspiration,

every day redundant
of the one past.

One day the sun breaks through the cloud
that is my life,

and fills my days with
a blinding light.

You.

And everything becomes
precious and sacred,

you become my passion,
my frenzy,

my fantasy,
my ecstasy.

You are my every moment,
my every breath.

My soulmate.

[AModernMyth]

^^That was awesome! Great job.

[Jiavanna]

So can't you please just show me
who it is you really are?
All I want to do is get to know you.



Wow! I love it.... Can I use that quote in a banner, pretty please:lotsalove

[Toxic]

I swear I started writing a funny little poem but then my brain went haywire and made me produce this odd, melodramatic piece:

Early each morning, at the break of day,
When the castaways are still at ease,
There is always one person upon the bay,
And another standing by the trees.

She would watch the ocean, like many times before,
Reminiscing about a distant past.
And though his answers laid not on the shore,
He would search for them with each look he cast.

Sometimes, by chance, their eyes would meet,
And often they'd linger too long.
And though they denied it was always a treat,
The feelings were always strong.

A second or two, no longer then that,
And she'd be the first to look away.
Then he'd utter a sigh, a sound so flat,
And their game he'd continue to unwilling play.

His would take in her posture and study her air,
While she pointedly ignores his advance,
Then he'd cave and turn, thus breaking the stare,
And neither would spare another glance.

Then today, like yesterday, and like tomorrow would bring,
The others would wake and they'd each go their own way.
But unknown to the others, they'd anticipate morning;
For it was their own special time of day.

[BlueEyesAtNight]

^ awwwwwwww Tox! Skate minds! I think that was cute :D

[AModernMyth]

Wow! I love it.... Can I use that quote in a banner, pretty please:lotsalove

Sure, go right ahead! ;)

[Skater_Forever]

Took the time to finally come in here and have a look around and I must say I love all these poems. Great job everyone. Yours was really beautiful, Toxic.

[Jiavanna]

Sure, go right ahead! ;)

Thank you so much:) Here is the banner if you want to see it

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y187/jiavanna/skatebanner_Background.jpg

[Stace]

I wrote a really cheesy one... I don't know where the Jack-hating came from. :confused: :(
Seriously though... I suck. I ain't no Skatepeare...

Sawyer and Kate are the perfect match
Jack likes Kate, but Kate doesn't like Jack
and on a day, in the hatch
Kate told jack, that he was whack

Jack went to his tent, and cried
'why doesn't she like me?'
he felt like he had died
'I never should have took the key!'

Sawyer and Kate took a walk
they deicded to go for a fun swim
then Kate hit Sawyer with a very hard rock
And kissed him on a whim

When Kate thought she saw a ghost
she kissed Jack like she kissed Sawyer
but soon learned that Sawyer has the most
and Jack should get with a lawyer

And that is why Skate is great
Jack is whack
Jate is never going to be fate
and Kack is really whack

[AModernMyth]

Thank you so much:) Here is the banner if you want to see it

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y187/jiavanna/skatebanner_Background.jpg

Aww, that's awesome! I love it! :D

[lostinjosh]

these are my skate poems

cause i love to SKate through life.


Sawyer's Prayer

everytime she'd say his name

he'd die a little inside

everytime she'd pull away

showing the hurt he couldn't hide

everytime he'd kiss her slow

his heart would slowly rip

he knew he could never let go

her name, a prayer on his lips.





Exodus

hell of a lousey ending.
you play the part.
now you're bruising
my bleeding heart.
you stand your grownd,
moving farther away,
loosing what I fownd .
why couldn't you stay?
against you, and your's,
the odds will stack.
I love you Sawyer...
you better come back!


I Love S K A T E

[LadyDelish]

Wow, these are all great. Skaters are so talented!:coolguy: Here's another poem that I wrote after I watched Collision.

"Kate"

Maybe you don't hear me,
Don't know that I am near,
But something makes me want to tell you exactly how I feel.
I'm kinda glad you're not awake,
so you won't make a smart remark,
I can just tell you what I feel as I'm lying beside you in the dark.
You were gone, it seemed, forever,
I couldn't get used to not seeing you near,
I lived through my night of fear,
thinking you were alright,
I wish I could've been there with you 'cause you were the one alone in the dark.
I never got to say good-bye,
It tears me up inside,
All I can do is pray, now
For one last look into your eyes.

[SKaN0n56]

Here is a poem that I found..since I cant write a poem of my own to save my life

Soulmate
by Jayzee

I wade through a life
with no meaning,

with no desire
or aspiration,

every day redundant
of the one past.

One day the sun breaks through the cloud
that is my life,

and fills my days with
a blinding light.

You.

And everything becomes
precious and sacred,

you become my passion,
my frenzy,

my fantasy,
my ecstasy.

You are my every moment,
my every breath.

My soulmate.

OH.MY.GOD.that was BRILLIANT!!!luved every word of it.and its so deep!argh!that was awesome!great writing!:D

anyway heres one of mine. wrote it in like 30 minutes so its not that good:

I had nothing to live for.
Nothing to thrill me.
Not in this llife
or in the next.
Each day would pass by
leaving no trace of the last.
Each moment I had,
seemingly nothing in my eyes.

But then I met you
and my whole life took a change.
Nothing's the same
and I like it this way.
Each morning when the sun rises,
I can't wait to get up.
To see your face, to hear your voice
makes each moment worthwhile.

You gave me everything
that I missed out on before.
You showed me a world
I've never explored.
Your every move, your every breath
is what I wait for.
Your very name, your very heart
is what I live for.

[Cinderella85]

All but Jack was happy,
he said forget my health!
and went to the sea
where he drowned himself! :):)
:crackup: How the hell did I never see this??

[Blank sky]

I've said it in the fanart section and i'll say it here: i love being a skater because it's just packed with so much talent here. A lot of the poems here are really good........

Okay so i wrote a poem 2 months ago and i've basically been making excuses not to post it in the poetry section and now i'm doing the same in the skate thread. I'm not sure about the way i portrayed the characters and i'm not sure how skaters will react to it. It is quite a sad poem, although i did not not intend it to be. Maybe one day i'll post it.

[SKaN0n56]

i showed my friend the poem called Soulmate and she squeed :p hahah and she's not a skater or even a LOST fan.lol ;)

[Blank sky]

Wow, i'm so depressed and annoyed right now after officially watching S.O.S about 2 hours ago that I just can’t muster enough feelings to angst over whether I should post this poem or not. Given that I’ve created so much angst for myself over it, it is rather ironic. I’m still not sure about the poem -about how I’ve characterized both Kate and Sawyer, but seriously from the way I’m feeling right now I just don’t care anymore. It’s a weird reaction that I can’t even explain and I’ll probably be embarrassed later. Thank you S.O.S for wearing me down, literally … God I’m going to bed. Oh and here’s the poem that i wrote 2 months ago *shrugs*.

Unconventional

It’s always the same between you and me,
our pieces are never fixed,
we’re always staring up into the blank sky,
waiting for death or salvation.
I long for death
you long for a saviour,
a hero like in the movies,
someone to sweep you off your feet
and carry you to someplace else.
I wish I could be that hero,
I wish that everything wasn’t so bleak,
I wish that life hadn’t broken us
Into a guarded version of James and Kate,
but then you look at me and for just that
moment none of that matters.
It doesn’t matter how far I try to push
you away.
It doesn’t matter that I could never be what you want.
It doesn’t matter that every time you try to see James
I show you Sawyer,
Because even though we can’t define what we are
To one another
and we can never be perfect in the others eyes,
We’re perfect in another way -
We’re something important and
that’s all that matters.

[Krypton]

Blank Sky that's nice poem! And same goes for everyone else's. Jayzee I love your poem! hehehe

[Blank sky]

Blank Sky that's nice poem! And same goes for everyone else's. Jayzee I love your poem! hehehe

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. It takes away whatever embarrassment that i was feeling:) .

[Abigayle]

I seem to often come across poems that remind me of Skate, and they're not songs, so I can't put them in the soundtrack thread, so...

Here's two for now:

I Am Not Yours
Sarah Teasdale

I am not yours, not lost in you,
Not lost, although I long to be
Lost as a candle lit at noon,
Lost as a snowflake in the sea.

You love me, and I find you still
A spirit beautiful and bright,
Yet I am I, who long to be
Lost as a light is lost in light.

Oh plunge me deep in love - put out
My senses, leave me deaf and blind,
Swept by the tempest of your love,
A taper in a rushing wind.


and, quite possibly my favorite of all time... This one reminds me both of Skate and the triangle in general.

Fire and Ice
Robert Frost

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

[Kath]

I loved your poems... and these are one of my fav Skate poems:

A curse? Only a savage when he hurts himself curses his god hidden in space.
Irony? But can the worst of jeers be compared with the irony of the most ordinary things?
Ideas? But thousands of years have passed and ideas are always no more than ideas.
Prayers? But not many today are still deluded by an eye framed in a triangle, gazing out at the world.
Scorn? But only an idiot feels scorn for that burden which he could not take upon his weak shoulders.
Despair? Do we have to imitate the scorpion that kills itself when surrounded by burning coals?
Struggle? But can an ant thrown upon the rails fight a train approaching at full speed?
Resignation? Do we suffer less when we place our head submissively under the knife of the guillotine?
Future life? Who among men looks into the secrets of stars, who can count extinguished suns and who guesses the limit of light?
Sensuous pleasures? Yet there is something in our soul that thirsts amid the pleasure and asks for something else.
So what is there? What remains for us who know everything, for whom none of the old beliefs is enough?
What is your shield against the spear of evil, man of the end of the century?
He hung his head silently.


I love when a woman swoons in an embrace,
Hanging limp from the man's arm; and her face
Drained of color with her eyes clouded in mist
And her wet lips apart, longing to be kissed.


I love when desire and lust over her prevails
Pressing his back with both fingers and nails;
When with desperate, panting breaths she groans
Surrendering with a faint smile to the undertones.


I love a woman's hesitancy and mistrust
On admitting that she feels overcome by lust;
Defeating her fear and her ecstasy enhance,
As she seeks the lips, afraid of a word or glance.


I love-I love the moment when by my side
She lies unconscious, satiated and tired;
My mind to be elsewhere: before me unfurled
The eternal expanse of an unearthly world.

[Abigayle]

I like that last one, F.R.E.C.K.L.E.S.! Mmmm... smutty Skate poetry!

[PsychodelicS]

I love a woman's hesitancy and mistrust
On admitting that she feels overcome by lust;

really skate

I love the poems :o
all of them!

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I just wrote this, tell me what you guys think:


A woman, alone. Waiting for savior.
A man, alone. Hiding behind his behavior.
A look, together, saying so much more then phrases.
A thought, love, in it’s first fases.
A touch, maybe accidental.
A kiss, soft and gentle.
A feeling, I love you.
Skate. No longer in the blue.

[Kath]

A woman, alone. Waiting for savior.
A man, alone. Hiding behind his behavior.
A look, together, saying so much more then phrases.
A thought, love, in it’s first fases.
A touch, maybe accidental.
A kiss, soft and gentle.
A feeling, I love you.
Skate. No longer in the blue.

I think it's veery Skatey... I love the first three verses... :thud:

[PsychodelicS]

Lol TY :)

[Marystat]

Since there was 2 poetry threads for Skate I merged both..please make sure you put all Skate poetry in this thread :).

[PsychodelicS]

I updated my poetry..

http://www.lost-forum.com/showthread.php?t=41805

I'm not going to paste them all here if they're allready there :p lol

[tdick14]

awesome guys great work

[forgotten_angelz]

ok this probably isnt very good but anyway :

a fugitive, a conman
what else can i say?
both criminals of earth
both running away
she's hurting and broken
and longs to feel love
he's stubborn and lonely
like a hand to a glove
they belong with eachother
and both of them know it
but this is no good
what good can come of it
she guards her heart fiercely
and never will calm
he longs to hold her
tight within his arms
at first there was something
a spark in the fire
he made sure it grew larger
he knew her desire
but she could'nt let her heart
be broken again
by foolish little boys
and mean, nasty men
this time they both have nowhere to run
they are stuck on this island
the pain weighs a ton
its breaking there hearts
its burning inside
they can heal it together
through it into the tide
a plane and a letter
a murder a con
both scared and both running
they fell and they shone .. .

[Born_to_run_815]

Here's a random poem I just wrote-enjoy!:)

You see right through me,
That’s why I’m scared
It frightens me
That you know exactly what I am

For so long now
I’ve had to run,
I’ve never let myself,
Care for anyone

But there’s so much of you,
That’s so much of me
There’s something about you,
Its so intriguing.

We’re both so broken,
We’ve lost all faith,
We’re both angry
And full of bitter hate
But you understand me
The way no one else will
Somehow you see the good in me
The way only you will

And maybe that’s why we’re scared
Cos we different and yet the same
We understand each other,
And know each soul’s shame

And maybe one day, we’ll find a way to commit,
Our souls are joined
Our lies can’t change it